2025屆高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：志愿者的努力與尋找援手之路+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)志愿者的努力與尋找援手之路1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Onabrightsunnyday,IstartedmyfirstdayofvolunteeringattheL.A．FoodBank.Myreasontovolunteeratthefoodbankwastosatisfymyneedtohelpothersandleaveachange.Thiswasmyopportunitytomakeapositiveimpactintheworldalongwithotherswhoenjoyvolunteering.AsIenteredthefoodbank,therewerelotsofpeoplethere.Theywaitedinlinestocheckinwithcoordinators(協(xié)調(diào)員).Everybodyvolunteeringbeganheadingquicklytotheirassigneddutiesaftercheckingin.IstartedtogetexcitedwhenIrealizedmyopportunitytoencounterandworkwithadiversegroupofpeople.Thisexperienceallowedmetomakeconnectionswithpeopleofdifferentbackgrounds.4續(xù)寫原文Coordinatorsassignedmetorepackagedonatedfooditems.WhenIpackedthedonatedfoodintoabag,Imustmakesureeachbaghadtocontainthecorrectamountoffood.Ialsomustplacefoodintobagsquicklybeforethetablewouldgetovercrowded.Mytaskalsorequiredalotoffocuswhentryingtoworkquicklywithmyhands.However,Ithoughtallthehardworkandeffortwouldbeworthit.5續(xù)寫原文Weworkedtogetherasateamtoensurethatourtaskwasgoingeffectively.Whiledoingmytask,somevolunteersaroundmesighed,“Therearestillmanyboxesoffoodthatneedtobeunloadedthoughwetriedourbesttoworkatafast-pace.”Ifeltlikeweallhadacommongoalofhelpingothers,buttheproblemwasthatthereweren’tenoughvolunteers.Infact,weneededmorepeopletodealwiththefood,whichcouldn’tbekeptfortoolong.Withoutenoughvolunteers,muchfoodwouldgobad.However,wherecouldwefindmorevolunteers?Idecidedtohaveatrytopersuadesomepeopletohelpdealwiththefood.6段首句Paragraph1：Afterabusymorning,Idecidedtoeatsomethinginarestaurant.Paragraph2：Iwalkedtowardsthemandwantedthemtojoinus.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9在陽光明媚的一天，“我”開啟了在洛杉磯食品銀行的首次志愿工作。在食品銀行，“我”被分配重新包裝捐贈食品，大家齊心協(xié)力卻發(fā)現(xiàn)志愿者人手不足，大量食物面臨變質(zhì)風(fēng)險?！拔摇睕Q心尋找更多志愿者，忙碌一上午后在餐廳有了新發(fā)現(xiàn)，或許能解決燃眉之急。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Afterabusymorning,Idecidedtoeatsomethinginarestaurant.忙碌一上午后，我走進(jìn)一家餐廳準(zhǔn)備吃點(diǎn)東西。坐在餐桌前，享受著片刻的放松。不經(jīng)意間，我注意到旁邊一桌坐著幾個年輕人，他們正熱烈地交談著，臉上洋溢著青春的活力。我靈機(jī)一動，心想他們或許就是我們急需的志愿者。但當(dāng)我準(zhǔn)備上前邀請時，心里不禁有些忐忑。畢竟和陌生人搭話，還請求他們幫忙，萬一被拒絕了怎么辦？可一想到食品銀行堆積如山的食物和即將到來的變質(zhì)危機(jī)，我還是鼓起了勇氣。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Iwalkedtowardsthemandwantedthemtojoinus.我走向他們，臉上掛著友善的笑容，先做了簡單的自我介紹，接著詳細(xì)地講述了食品銀行的現(xiàn)狀。我告訴他們，大量捐贈的食物因?yàn)橹驹刚呷耸植粔?，面臨著變質(zhì)浪費(fèi)的風(fēng)險，而他們的加入可以改變這一局面。出乎我意料的是，他們聽后眼睛里閃爍著興奮的光芒，還接連問了好多問題，對志愿工作表現(xiàn)出濃厚的興趣。他們相互討論了一會兒后，竟然一致同意跟我去食品銀行幫忙。他們的熱情瞬間感染了我，有了這些新伙伴的加入，我堅信我們一定能避免食物浪費(fèi)，為那些需要幫助的人送去溫暖。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Afterabusymorning,Ienteredarestauranttograbsomethingtoeat.Sittingatthetable,Iwasenjoyingamomentofrelaxation.Suddenly,Inoticedagroupofyoungpeoplesittingattheadjacenttable.Theywerechattinganimatedly,withtheglowofyouthontheirfaces.Anideapoppedintomymind.Maybetheycouldbethevolunteersweurgentlyneeded.However,whenIwasabouttoapproachthem,Ifeltabitnervous.Afterall,itwasnoteasytotalktostrangersandaskfortheirhelp.Whatiftheyrefused?Butthinkingofthemountainsoffoodinthefoodbankandtheimpendingspoilagecrisis,Isummonedupmycourage.14范文呈現(xiàn)Iwalkedtowardsthemwithafriendlysmile.First,Iintroducedmyselfbriefly,andthenIdescribedthesituationatthefoodbankindetail.Itoldthemthatduetotheshortageofvolunteers,alargeamountofdonatedfoodwasatriskofspoiling,andtheirparticipationcouldchangethesituation.Tomysurprise,theireyessparkledwithexcitementafterhearingthis.Theyaskedaseriesofquestions,showinggreatinterestinthevolunteerwork.Afterashortdiscussionamongthemselves,theyunanimouslyagreedtogotothefoodbankwithme.Theirenthusiasmimmediatelyinfectedme.Withthesenewvolunteersjoining,Ifirmlybelievedthatwecouldpreventfoodwasteandbringwarmthtothoseinneed.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Afterastrenuousmorning,Isteppedintoarestaurant,intentongrabbingabite.Seatedatthetable,relishingabriefrespite,myattentionwasabruptlydrawntoagroupofyoungindividualsattheneighboringtable.Engagedinanimatedconversation,theirfacesradiatedyouthfulexuberance.Athought,likeaboltoflightning,flashedthroughmymind:perhapstheycouldbethemuch-neededreinforcementsforthefoodbank.However,asIreadiedmyselftoapproachthem,awaveofnervousnesswashedoverme.Afterall,initiatingaconversationwithstrangersandsolicitingtheirassistancewasnoeasyfeat.Whatiftheydeclined?Nevertheless,theimageofthemountainouspilesoffoodatthefoodbank,teeteringonthebrinkofspoilage,steeledmyresolve,andIsummonedthecouragetoproceed.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Iadvancedtowardsthem,wearingawarmsmile.First,Iofferedaconciseself-introduction,followedbyadetailedaccountofthediresituationatthefoodbank.Iexplainedthatduetothescarcityofvolunteers,asubstantialquantityofdonatedprovisionswasperilouslyclosetospoiling,andtheirinvolvementcouldbetheturningpoint.Tomyastonishment,theireyeslitupwithenthusiasmuponhearingthis.Theypepperedmewithaflurryofquestions,evincingprofoundinterestinthevolunteerendeavor.Afterabriefhuddleamongthemselves,theyreachedaunanimousdecisiontoaccompanymetothefoodbank.Theirinfectiouszealimmediatelypermeatedtheair,