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高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)從謊言到坦誠:中西方友誼的考驗(yàn)1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文FrankhadjustadaptedtohisnewlifeinChina.Amongthemanyexcitingexperiences,hestruckupaclosefriendshipwithLiMing,alocalstudent.OneSaturday,LiMinginvitedFranktotrytraditionalChinesefood,steameddumplings,forlunch.Eagertoexperiencethelocalculture,Frankdelightedlyacceptedtheinvitation.ThemomentFrankarrived,LiMing,alongwithhismother,Mrs.Zhougreetedhimwarmlyatthedoor.Insidethehouse,acutecatwasplaying,addingatouchoflivelinesstothealreadyjoyousoccasion.Thentheygatheredinthekitchentomakesteameddumplingstogether.LiMingpreparedthefilling,whileMrs.ZhoutaughtFrankhowtomakedumplingwrappers.Mrs.ZhougentlyinstructedFrank,“Thedoughshouldnotbetoowetorsticky,androllingthedumplingwrappersrequiresmostcaretoensurethesamethickness.”Everythinggoingsmoothly,thesteameddumplingswereready.4續(xù)寫原文Suddenly,anunexpectedincidentoccurredwhenFrankofferedtosetthetableinthediningroom.AsFrankputaplateonthetable,hishandslipped.Withaloudcrash,theplatefellontothefloor,scatteringdippingsauceeverywhere.Inpanic,Frankstoodrootedtothespotwithhismindcompletelyblank.Mrs.Zhourushedoutofthekitchen.WithMrs.Zhou’scaringeyesfixedonhim,Frankwastooashamedtotellthetruth.Seeingthecatnearby,Frankstammered,“Itwasthecat.”Mrs.Zhousmiledgently,“Ithappens.Thecatisalwaysenergeticandnaughty.”LiMinglaughed,“Nevermind.”Mrs.Zhouquicklycleanedupthemesswithherson.Thesteameddumplingsweredelicious.LiMingandhismotherweretryingtheirbesttomakeFrankfeelathome.However,itwashardforFranktoreallyenjoythefood,becauseheliedtohisgoodfriend’smotherandhisfriend!Finally,Franksaidgoodbyetothefriendlyfamilyandleftwithhissecret.5段首句Paragraph1:Onthebusbackhome,Frank’sheartoverflowedwithmixedfeelings.Paragraph2:Thefollowingmorning,FrankknockedonthedoorofLiMing’shouse.6Part2題目分析7續(xù)寫原文分析8初來中國的弗蘭克,與當(dāng)?shù)貙W(xué)生李明建立了深厚友誼。一次周六,李明邀請弗蘭克品嘗中國傳統(tǒng)美食——蒸餃。在李明家,他們一起包餃子,其樂融融。然而,弗蘭克在擺餐具時(shí)不慎摔碎盤子,因害怕,他謊稱是貓所為。事后,弗蘭克內(nèi)心充滿愧疚,這次經(jīng)歷成為他與朋友間關(guān)系的一次考驗(yàn)。點(diǎn)1:位于續(xù)寫第一段段首,流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語;點(diǎn)2:位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾,流暢銜接第二段段首句;點(diǎn)3:位于續(xù)寫第二段段首,續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語;點(diǎn)4:文章結(jié)尾升華,給予讀者正能量,揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)9續(xù)寫思路分析Para1:Onthebusbackhome,Frank’sheartoverflowedwithmixedfeelings.在回家的公交車上,弗蘭克的內(nèi)心五味雜陳。愧疚如影隨形,他不斷回想著自己的謊言。李明和周女士那溫暖的笑容仿佛在責(zé)備他的不誠實(shí)。他深知,自己的行為破壞了朋友間的信任。原本愉快的午餐經(jīng)歷,此刻卻因謊言變得沉重。他意識到,必須要彌補(bǔ)過錯,否則這份愧疚將永遠(yuǎn)折磨自己。一路上,他都在思考如何向李明一家坦白。10續(xù)寫思路分析Para2:Thefollowingmorning,FrankknockedonthedoorofLiMing’shouse.第二天清晨,弗蘭克來到李明家門前,敲響了門。周女士打開門,弗蘭克神色嚴(yán)肅,深吸一口氣后說道:“周女士,我非常抱歉。昨天是我撒了謊,摔碎盤子的人是我,不是小貓?!敝芘柯牶螅壑虚W過一絲驚訝,但很快便露出了理解的笑容。這時(shí),李明也走了出來,弗蘭克看向他,眼中滿是歉意。李明拍了拍弗蘭克的肩膀,說道:“沒關(guān)系,弗蘭克,重要的是你能勇敢承認(rèn)錯誤?!备ヌm克懸著的心終于落了地,他明白,這份友誼在坦誠中變得更加堅(jiān)固。11Part3范文呈現(xiàn)12范文呈現(xiàn)Onthebusbackhome,Frank’sheartwasfilledwithamixofemotions.Guiltwaseatinghimup.Hecouldn'tstopthinkingabouttheliehehadtold.ThewarmsmilesofLiMingandhismotherkeptappearinginhismind,makinghimfeelevenmoreashamed.Heknewthathehadbetrayedtheirtrust.Theonce-pleasantexperienceofhavingChinesefoodnowseemedspoiledbecauseofhisdishonesty.Herealizedthathehadtomakeamends,orthisguiltwouldalwayshaunthim.Duringthewholejourney,hewasthinkingabouthowtoconfesstoLiMing'sfamily.13范文呈現(xiàn)Thefollowingmorning,FrankknockedonthedoorofLiMing’shouse.WhenMrs.Zhouopenedthedoor,Franklookedatherwithaseriousexpression.Hetookadeepbreathandsaid,"Mrs.Zhou,I'mextremelysorry.Iliedyesterday.Itwasmewhodroppedtheplate,notthecat."Mrs.Zhoulookedabitsurprisedatfirst,butthenasmileofunderstandingappearedonherface.Justthen,LiMingcameout.Franklookedathimwitheyesfullofapology.LiMingpattedFrankontheshoulderandsaid,"Itdoesn'tmatter,Frank.Theimportantthingisthatyouhadthecouragetoadmityourmistake."Frankfinallyfeltrelieved.Heknewthattheirfriendshiphadbecomestrongerthroughhonesty.14升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Onthebusjourneyhome,Frank'sheartwasamaelstromofemotions.Overwhelmingguiltgnawedathisconsciencerelentlessly.ThewarmvisagesofLiMingandhismother,withtheiraffectionatesmiles,keptsurfacinginhismind,intensifyinghisself-reproach.Hewasacutelyawarethathehadbreachedtheirtrust.WhathadinitiallybeenadelightfulexperienceofsavoringChinesecuisinenowseemedmarredbyhisactofdishonesty.Heunderstoodthatamendswereimperative;otherwise,thisguiltwouldshadowhimindefinitely.Throughouttheentiretrip,hismindwaspreoccupiedwithformulatingawaytoconfesstoLiMing'sfamily.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Thefollowingmorning,FrankfoundhimselfstandingbeforeLiMing'sdoor,hishandhesitantlyraisedtoknock.WhenMrs.Zhouswungthedooropen,Frankfixedherwithasolemngaze.Takingadeep,fortifyingbreath,hesaid,"Mrs.Zhou,Icarryaheavyheart.Ideceivedyouyesterday.Theonewhodroppedtheplatewasnoneotherthanme,notthecat."Mrs.Zhou'seyeswidenedinmomentarysurprise,butwerequicklyreplacedbyalookofunderstandingandcompassion.Justthen,LiMingemergedfromwithin.Frankmethiseyes,hisownbrimmingwithremorse.LiMing,withawarmgesture,pattedFrankontheshoulderandsaid,"Frank,it'sallinthepast.Whattrulymattersisyourcourag
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