2022中考熱點(diǎn)話題作文 專題09 加強(qiáng)手機(jī)進(jìn)校園管理（解析版）

PAGEPAGE162022中考熱點(diǎn)話題作文專題09加強(qiáng)手機(jī)進(jìn)校園管理一、講稿1．2021年1月15日，中國教育部辦公廳發(fā)布了《關(guān)于加強(qiáng)中小學(xué)生手機(jī)管理工作的通知》，明確規(guī)定：學(xué)生不得將手機(jī)帶進(jìn)校園，確有需要的須經(jīng)學(xué)生家長同意，書面提出申請，進(jìn)校后將手機(jī)交由學(xué)校統(tǒng)一保管。假如你是國際學(xué)校某班班長李華，班上有部分同學(xué)覺得此規(guī)定太嚴(yán)格，請你準(zhǔn)備一篇發(fā)言稿簡要解釋教育部的這一規(guī)定。內(nèi)容包括：●手機(jī)進(jìn)校園的諸多不利影響；●為促進(jìn)學(xué)生身心健康發(fā)展。要求：（1）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；（2）詞數(shù)80左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Dearclassmates,Thesedays,you’vetalkedalotaboutthenoticebyMinistryofEducationofChina(中國教育部).Herearemyideasaboutit.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thenoticeseemskindofstrictbutit’sbetterforourfuture.Thankyouforlistening!【答案】例文Dearclassmates,Thesedays,you’vetalkedalotaboutthenoticebyMinistryofEducationofChina(中國教育部).Herearemyideasaboutit.Therearemanydisadvantagesifstudentsbringmobilephonestoschool.First,itwillcauselotsofproblemsatschool.Teachersandstudentsmaybeinfluencedbythenoisesfromphones,evenwhentheyarehavingclassordoinghomework.Second,it’snotgoodforstudents’healthandmind.Somestudentsspendtoomuchtimeplayingthephonesandsomeevenstayuplate,sotheycan’tlistentoteachersinclassorfinishtheirhomeworkontime.It’salsobadforoureyesifwestareatphonesforalongtime.Thenoticeseemskindofstrictbutit’sbetterforourfuture.Thankyouforlistening!【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目是寫一篇發(fā)言稿，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。要求根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，寫一篇發(fā)言稿簡要解釋教育部關(guān)于學(xué)生不得將手機(jī)帶進(jìn)校園，確有需要的須經(jīng)學(xué)生家長同意，書面提出申請，進(jìn)校后將手機(jī)交由學(xué)校統(tǒng)一保管這一規(guī)定，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來解釋原因，使文章更加客觀；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主；解釋教育部的規(guī)定時，理由應(yīng)描寫細(xì)致、合情合理、貼合實(shí)際；發(fā)言稿需要敘述完整，保證條理清晰。二、材料作文2．面對現(xiàn)在越來越多的中小學(xué)生帶手機(jī)進(jìn)校園,今年春季教育部發(fā)布了一項(xiàng)通知,表示了禁止中小學(xué)生帶手機(jī)進(jìn)校園。請你根據(jù)同學(xué)們的不同觀點(diǎn)，寫一篇文章，談?wù)勛约旱目捶āＲc(diǎn)提示：主要觀點(diǎn)贊成1.便于和父母聯(lián)系2.能用手機(jī)查詢信息3.適當(dāng)放松，能聽音樂……反對1.玩手機(jī)不利于學(xué)習(xí)2.使用手機(jī)對眼睛不好。3.考試用手機(jī)作弊……你的觀點(diǎn)及建議……要求：1.文中必須包括上表的內(nèi)容，可展開思路，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名和其他真實(shí)信息；3.詞數(shù)不少于80（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。參考詞匯：beconvenient,connectwith,information,bebadfor,cheatintheexams...Nowadays,smartphonesarepopularamongstudents.Shouldwebeallowedtousesmartphonesatschoolornot?Ourstudentshavedifferentopinions._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Nowadays,smartphonesarepopularamongstudents.Shouldwebeallowedtousesmartphonesatschoolornot?Ourstudentshavedifferentopinions.Somestudentsthinktheycanusesmartphonesatschool.First,it’sconvenientforthemtocalltheirparents,teachersorfriendswhentheyhaveproblems.Second,theycansearchforwhattheyneedonsmartphones.Forexample,theycanlookupnewwordsandlookthroughnews.Third,theycanlistentomusictorelaxthemselvesonsmartphones.However,somestudentsdisagree.Theythinkusingsmartphonesatschoolisawasteoftime.Also,manystudentsspendtoomuchtimeongames,whichisbadfortheireyes.What'sworse,somestudentsmaycheatinexamswiththesmartphones.Inmyopinion.studentscan’tusesmartphonesatschool.Studentsshouldspendmoretimedoingsportsorhavingfunwithfriends.Theyshouldalsopaymoreattentiontotheirstudy.Iftheydothese,they’llbehappierandhealthier.【詳解】題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)表格提示針對“禁止中小學(xué)生帶手機(jī)進(jìn)校園”這一通知寫一篇短文，談?wù)勍瑢W(xué)們對此的不同觀點(diǎn)及自己的看法，要求要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作指導(dǎo)：此作文以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主。此作文可以用四段式格式，第一段是題目已給出的。第二段主要寫學(xué)生贊成帶手機(jī)進(jìn)校園的理由。第三段主要寫學(xué)生不贊成帶手機(jī)進(jìn)校園的理由。最后一段用于描述自己的觀點(diǎn)，要明確是贊成帶手機(jī)進(jìn)校園還是不贊成。不可以模棱兩可，并且要寫出贊成或者不贊成的原因。最后結(jié)尾處進(jìn)行一下總結(jié)。3．最近教育部發(fā)文要求加強(qiáng)校園手機(jī)管理，獲得社會各界的廣泛支持。你們學(xué)校為此組織了一次英語征文活動。請你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英文短文投稿。1.表示支持;2.分析校園手機(jī)的危害（至少兩個方面）;3.倡議同學(xué)們不帶手機(jī)到校園。注意∶1.詞數(shù)80-100;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱;4.開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Recentlythegovernmenthasaskedtheschoolstostrengthenthemobilephonemanagementamongprimaryandmiddleschoolstudents._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Recentlythegovernmenthasaskedtheschoolstostrengthenthemobilephonemanagementamongprimaryandmiddleschoolstudents.Istronglysupportit.Thereareseveraldisadvantagesabouttakingmobilephonestoschool.Firstly,studentsmaynotgivefullattentiontotheirstudiesiftheyattendclasseswithmobilephones.Theycan’thelpthinkingabouttheirphonesanddependingonthephonesforsomeanswers.Secondly,studentsmayspendmoretimeontheirmobilephonesinsteadofcommunicatingwiththeirclassmatesafterclass.Thirdly,it’sbadfortheireyesiftheyplaymobilephonesforalongtime.Inaword,takingmobilephonestoschoolhasmanybadsides.So,everyone,tomakeusgrowupmorehealthily,neverbringmobilephonestoschool.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。就“加強(qiáng)校園手機(jī)管理”這一做法寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時。分為四段式：文章開頭已給出；第二段表達(dá)自己支持的觀點(diǎn)；第三段分析校園手機(jī)的危害；第四段倡議同學(xué)們不帶手機(jī)到校園。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯誤。4．在今年的1月份，國家教育部印發(fā)了《關(guān)于加強(qiáng)中小學(xué)生手機(jī)管理工作的通知》，原則上禁止中小學(xué)生帶手機(jī)進(jìn)校園，這則通知引發(fā)了社會的廣泛關(guān)注。作為一名中學(xué)生，你是怎么看待這件事的？請你寫一篇英語短文，說說你的看法。內(nèi)容包括：1.談?wù)勏拗茖W(xué)生帶手機(jī)進(jìn)校園的必要性；2.給喜歡玩手機(jī)的同學(xué)提出一些建議(至少兩點(diǎn))；3.號召同學(xué)們積極響應(yīng)國家教育部的通知。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文，作文中不得出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和考生的真實(shí)姓名。2.語句連貫，詞數(shù)80左右。作文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。TheMinistryofEducationgaveanoticethatallprimaryandmiddleschoolstudents,inprinciple,willnotbeallowedtobringtheirmobilephonestoschool.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheMinistryofEducationgaveanoticethatallprimaryandmiddleschoolstudents,inprinciple,willnotbeallowedtobringtheirmobilephonestoschool.Ithinkitisnecessarytolimitstudents’mobilephonesuseatschool.Bringingmobilephonestoschoolwillnotonlydistractthestudents’attentionfromtheirstudiesbutalsodoharmtotheireyesight.Forthosestudentswhoareaddictedtomobilephones,Isuggestthattheycanspendmoretimedoingsomethingmoreinteresting,suchasdoingsportsorreadinganinterestingbook.Besides,theycanalsodosomethingforthepeoplearoundthem.Thingslikehelpingparentscleantheroomorcookathome,orjustbeingwiththeirfamily.Asthesayinggoes,“Norules,nostandards.”Ihopeeverystudentcanfollowtheregulationsstrictly.【詳解】1.題干解讀：此篇寫作談?wù)撓拗浦行W(xué)生帶手機(jī)進(jìn)校園的必要性，給喜歡玩手機(jī)的同學(xué)提出一些建議，在寫作時應(yīng)承接短文開頭。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱和第三人稱進(jìn)行論述，時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，語言表達(dá)符合英語習(xí)慣，避免漢語式英語，準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)、主謂一致，句型等，句意敘述完整且條理清晰，語句通順，語義連貫。5．隨著智能手機(jī)在學(xué)生群體中的普及，手機(jī)的濫用已經(jīng)帶來了一系列的問題。為保護(hù)學(xué)生視力、確保學(xué)生專心學(xué)習(xí)、防止學(xué)生沉迷于網(wǎng)絡(luò)和網(wǎng)游，近日，教育部重申“禁止中小學(xué)生帶手機(jī)進(jìn)校園”，但仍有不少學(xué)生不理解。請你就此禁令，結(jié)合自己的觀點(diǎn)，給校報英語欄目寫一篇短文，內(nèi)容包括：1.上課玩游戲或與他人聊天；2.用手機(jī)在考試中作弊；3.不良信息對學(xué)生影響大；4.長時間玩手機(jī)影響視力；注意：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右；開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.參考詞匯：與…...聊天chatwithsb.作弊cheat(v.)Inordertoprotectstudents’eyesight,makesuretheyfocusonstudyandpreventthemfrombecomingaddictedtotheinternetandonlinegames,Ministrybanssmartphonesinallschools.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Inordertoprotectstudents’eyesight,makesuretheyfocusonstudyandpreventthemfrombecomingaddictedtotheinternetandonlinegames,Ministrybanssmartphonesinallschools.Asweallknow,itisnotgoodforusifwehavephoneswithusatschool.Firstofall,someofususuallyplaygamesorchatwithothersinsteadoflisteningtoteacherscarefullyinclass.What’sworse,someofusevenusephonestocheatinexams,it’sreallybadforourselves.Besides,thebadinformationfromthephoneshasareallybadinfluenceonusbecausewecan’ttellrightfromwrong.Aboveall,spendingtoomuchtimeonphonesisverybadforoureyes.Inaword,weshouldn’tbringourphonestoschoolsothatwecanputourheartintoourstudy.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本篇要求就教育部重申“禁止中小學(xué)生帶手機(jī)進(jìn)校園”的禁令，談?wù)勈謾C(jī)的危害：上課玩游戲或與他人聊天；用手機(jī)在考試中作弊；不良信息對學(xué)生影響大；長時間玩手機(jī)影響視力等；并闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文用一般現(xiàn)在時寫作。書寫時要緊扣主題，運(yùn)用所提供的材料和詞匯陳述手機(jī)的濫用帶來了一系列的問題并談?wù)勛约旱挠^點(diǎn)；做到中心突出，內(nèi)容完整連貫；適當(dāng)使用并列句和復(fù)合句以豐富文章句式。6．今年元月，教育部發(fā)出關(guān)于加強(qiáng)中小學(xué)生手機(jī)管理工作的通知。通知要求學(xué)生不得將個人手機(jī)帶入校園。此消息一經(jīng)發(fā)布，便引起同學(xué)們的熱議，有的同學(xué)贊成，有的反對。你對此持有什么觀點(diǎn)？請根據(jù)提示，用英語寫一篇短文談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?.寫作要點(diǎn)提示：1)表明你對禁止學(xué)生個人手機(jī)進(jìn)校園的觀點(diǎn)——你是贊同還是不贊同(只限選擇一種觀點(diǎn)）；2）圍繞你的觀點(diǎn)詳細(xì)陳述三條理由來說服同學(xué)們接受你的觀點(diǎn)；3）針對你的觀點(diǎn)簡要談?wù)勀愕钠谕蚪ㄗh。2.注意事項(xiàng)：1）字?jǐn)?shù)：90詞左右；2）短文內(nèi)容應(yīng)包含提示的要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Asweknow,theworlddevelopsmorequicklythanbefore.Manystudentshavetheirownmobilephones.Ithinkstudentsshouldn’tbringtheirmobilephonestoschool.Firstly,it’sharmfultoeyesighttooftenlookdownatmobilephones.Secondly,theself-controlabilityofmiddleschoolstudentsispoor.Takingmobilephonestoschooliseasytoaffecttheirstudyandleadtopoorgrades.Atlast,ifmiddleschoolstudentsspendtoomuchtimeonmobilephones,theywillspendlesstimeonsports.Thiswillleadtotheirpoorphysicalquality.Asastudent,thetaskistolearnknowledge.Middleschoolstudentsshouldnotspendtoomuchtimeonmobilephones.Let’strynottobringmobilephonestoschool.【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于議論文寫作，在寫作時首先表明自己的觀點(diǎn)——中學(xué)生不應(yīng)當(dāng)將手機(jī)帶入校園，然后陳述三條理由來論證自己的觀點(diǎn)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱為主來論述內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。在論述內(nèi)容時，力求觀點(diǎn)明確，論據(jù)充分，有說服力，保證條理清晰，行文連貫。7．現(xiàn)如今，手機(jī)成為了人們生活中不可或缺的一部分。中學(xué)生在學(xué)校使用手機(jī)已經(jīng)非常普遍。手機(jī)給學(xué)生的生活帶來方便的同時，也給他們帶來了很多問題。他們把大量的時間花在玩手機(jī)上，不僅影響了學(xué)習(xí)，而且視力急劇下降。有一位家長建議學(xué)校禁止學(xué)生使用智能手機(jī)，你是否同意其違議，請列出至少三條理由。要求包括以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.學(xué)生使用手機(jī)現(xiàn)象。2.你是否支持學(xué)校禁止使用智能機(jī)，列出理由。3.呼吁大家合理使用智能機(jī)。要求：80詞左右。參考詞匯：smartphone智能手機(jī)；beaddictedto上癮；rebellious逆反的Shouldstudentsbeallowedtousesmartphones?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Shouldstudentsbeallowedtousesmartphones?Nowsmartphonesaresocommonamongmiddleschoolstudents.Theyaresousefulandinterestingthatmanystudentsareaddictedtothem.Althoughsmartphonesmayhaveabadinfluenceonstudents,Idon'tthinkparentsshouldstoptheirchildrenfromusingthem.Ifstudentsareforcedtostopusingthem,theymaybecomerebelliousandsecretlyusethemmore.Instead,parentscanfindsomewiserwaystohelptheirchildrenusesmartphonesproperly.Forexample,studentscanusesmartphonestosharelearningexperiencewiththeirclassmates.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以建議學(xué)校禁止學(xué)生使用智能手機(jī)，你是否同意其違議，請列出至少三條理由。要求包括以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：1.學(xué)生使用手機(jī)現(xiàn)象。2.你是否支持學(xué)校禁止使用智能機(jī)，列出理由。3.呼吁大家合理使用智能機(jī)。首先要認(rèn)真審題，根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容，列出寫作要點(diǎn)及每個要點(diǎn)中可能要用到的表達(dá)；然后緊扣要點(diǎn)，動筆寫作。2.例文點(diǎn)評：文章在陳述客觀事實(shí)時用一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱主要為第一和第三人稱。本文緊扣題目要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容完整，表述準(zhǔn)確，語言的表述符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：sousefulandinteresting；haveabadinfluence；stop…fromdoingsth.；sharelearningexperiencewith等。句型：1.Theyaresousefulandinterestingthatmanystudentsareaddictedtothem.2.Ifstudentsareforcedtostopusingthem,theymaybecomerebelliousandsecretlyusethemmore.3.Althoughsmartphonesmayhaveabadinfluenceonstudents,Idon'tthinkparentsshouldstoptheirchildrenfromusingthem.【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內(nèi)容符合題目要求，并且內(nèi)容充實(shí)、完整，表達(dá)清楚、明了。作者從三個方面講述了自己的看法，這幾個方面都非常符合實(shí)際，所提建議很合理。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，文章以一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)、第一人稱為主，語法規(guī)范、準(zhǔn)確，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。文章里還使用了一些較好的短語和句型。8．如今，手機(jī)到處可見，許多同學(xué)都擁有手機(jī)。但是，學(xué)生在學(xué)校使用手機(jī)是否合適？請你根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)提示寫一篇英語短文，并表達(dá)自己的看法。帶手機(jī)不帶手機(jī)1、放學(xué)后方便與家長聯(lián)絡(luò)。2、可以聽音樂放松自己。1、會拿手機(jī)在課堂上拍照片或者視頻。2、會拿手機(jī)玩游戲。3、會拿手機(jī)搜索作業(yè)的答案。注意：（1）參考詞匯：沉迷于（beaddictedto）。（2）清晰表明自己的觀點(diǎn)，要提及所有的要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，補(bǔ)充相關(guān)內(nèi)容。（3）詞數(shù)：80左右（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。（4）不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。Nowmobilephonescanbeseeneverywhere.Manystudentsownmobilephones.Isitgoodforstudentstousemobilephonesatschool?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】參考范文：Nowmobilephonescanbeseeneverywhere.Manystudentsownmobilephones.Isitgoodforstudentstousemobilephonesatschool?Somestudentssayyesbecausetheycancontacttheirparentsafterschool.Besides,theycanlistentomusictorelaxthemselvesthroughmobilephones.Whileotherstudentsdisagreetothisforthefollowingreasons.Firstly,studentswithmobilephoneswilltakephotosormakevideosinclass.Somewillevenplaygamesinclasssothattheycan’tlistentotheteachers.What’smore,somestudentsuseappsonmobilephonestofindtheanswerstotheirhomeworkquestionsandjustcopythemdown.Personally,Idon’tthinkitgoodforstudentstousemobilephonesatschoolsincetherearemoredisadvantagesthanadvantagesofusingthematschool.Wecanonlyusethemwhenwefinishourstudytasks.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。對于“在學(xué)校使用手機(jī)是否合適”寫一篇短文。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文采用一般現(xiàn)在時。分為三段式：第一段已給出；第二段根據(jù)所給的提示信息介紹不同學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)；最后一段介紹自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫作時保持主謂一致性，做到無語法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯誤。三、書信作文9．今年3月份起全國中小學(xué)生手機(jī)禁令正式生效。假設(shè)你是李明，以前經(jīng)常帶手機(jī)到學(xué)校去，現(xiàn)在沒有手機(jī)的校園生活里，你的感受如何呢？請你就此給英國的筆友Tony寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：1.不能帶手機(jī)到學(xué)校之后，你感覺如何？有什么不習(xí)慣的地方？2.你準(zhǔn)備如何去克服這些“不習(xí)慣”？（兩點(diǎn)）3.詢問對方的學(xué)校有沒有類似規(guī)定？作文要求：1.不得照抄原文；不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學(xué)校的真實(shí)名稱和學(xué)生的真實(shí)姓名。2.語句連貫，詞數(shù)80個左右。作文的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不必抄寫在試卷上，也不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearTony,I’msogladtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeaboutthenewpolicythatfromtakingmyphonetoschool._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiMing【答案】參考范文：DearTony.I’msogladtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeaboutthenewpolicythatstopsmefromtakingmyphonetoschool.I’mreallyworried/upsetaboutthat.Ican’tlistentomusicwithmyphonewhiledoinghomeworkafterschoolasusual,whichhelpsmeblockoutoutsidesound.What’smore,IhavenogamestoplayduringthebreaksandIgotbored.However,IknowIhavetogetusedtoit.Iwillfindaquietplacelikethelibrarytodomyhomework.Moreover,Ithinkitwouldbegoodformetodosomethingwithmyclassmatesduringbreaks,suchasplayingbasketball,sothatwecanbeclosertooneanother.IdohopeIcangetusedtotheschoollifewithoutphones.Whataboutyou?Doesyourschoolhavesimilarpoliciesonstudents’phones?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiMing【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于記敘文寫作，但寫作時要按書信格式寫。在寫作時應(yīng)承接短文開頭；內(nèi)容是根據(jù)所給的提示材料，給英國的筆友Tony寫一封回信，介紹一下如果不帶手機(jī)，你的感受如何。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第一人稱來敘述作文內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主；首先介紹不帶手機(jī)到學(xué)校后有什么感覺，有什么不習(xí)慣的地方；其次介紹如何去克服這些“不習(xí)慣”；最后是詢問對方的學(xué)校有沒有類似的規(guī)定。四、話題作文10．現(xiàn)在，許多學(xué)校禁止學(xué)生把手機(jī)帶進(jìn)校園，包括寄宿學(xué)校。對此大家看法不一，有些人認(rèn)為，此舉不妥，手機(jī)方便和父母保持聯(lián)系，也可以上網(wǎng)搜一些學(xué)習(xí)信息，很方便。但是，有些人持贊同態(tài)度，手機(jī)上信息太多，游戲太多，影響學(xué)習(xí)。對此，請你發(fā)表自己的看法。詞數(shù)90詞左右。Shouldstudentsbeallowedtousesmartphonesatschool?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Shouldstudentsbeallowedtousesmartphonesatschool?Thesedays,moreandmorestudentshavetheirownsmartphones.Shouldstudentsbeallowedtousesmartphonesatschool?Somepeoplebelievethatstudentscantaketheirphonestoschool.Theythinkparentscangetintouchwiththeirchildrenatanytime.Andstudentscandousefulthingsbyphones.It’sveryconvenient.However,somepeopledisagreethat.Theysaysmartphonescanmakestudentspaylittleattentiontotheirstudy.Theysaysomestudentsoftenplaycomputergamesonthat.Inmyopinion,it’sOKtohavesmartphonesatschool,butschoolmusthaverulesabouthowtousethemcorrectly.Smartphonescanbegreathelpiftheyareusedproperly.【詳解】1.題干解讀：現(xiàn)在，許多學(xué)校禁止學(xué)生把手機(jī)帶進(jìn)校園，包括寄宿制學(xué)校。在大家看法不一的情況下，請發(fā)表一下自己的看法。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文是發(fā)表自己的看法的文章，所以本文的時態(tài)主要以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱主要使用第三人稱；陳述贊同使用手機(jī)的理由反對使用手機(jī)的理由，最后發(fā)表自己對在學(xué)校使用手機(jī)的看法；保證內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰條理。11．手機(jī)在我們的生活中扮演著重要的角色。針對學(xué)?！安辉试S學(xué)生帶手機(jī)進(jìn)入校園”這一規(guī)定，不少學(xué)生持反對意見，你是支持還是反對呢？請針對此項(xiàng)校規(guī)談?wù)勀愕目捶?。要求?.語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，短文連貫通順，卷面書寫整潔；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；3.詞數(shù)100詞左右。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Nowourschoolhasanewrulethatstudentsmustn’tbringphonestoschool.Manystudentsareagainstit.ButIhaveadifferentidea.Mobilephonesplayanimportantroleinourdailylife.Buteverycoinhastwosides.Firstly,manystudentsusetheirphonestochatorplaygamesallthetimeandeveninclass.Asaresult,theycan’tfocusonstudy,whichmayhaveabadinfluenceonotherstudents.What’smore,toomuchtimeonscreensdoesharmtotheeyes.Moreandmorestudentshavepooreyesight.Thirdly,ifstudentsreallyhavesomethingimportantandwanttocalltheirparents,theycanasktheirteachersforhelp.They’realwaystheretohelp,sothereisnoneedtobringphonestoschool.Allinall,weshouldfocusonourstudiesatschoolandshouldn’tbringmobilephonestoschool.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文主要是對于學(xué)?！安辉试S學(xué)生帶手機(jī)進(jìn)入校園”這一規(guī)定表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，或者支持，或者反對，并說明反對或者支持的原因。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要是表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)，用一般現(xiàn)在時。第一段描述校規(guī)并且表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)；第二段主要描述自己支持或者反對的原因，本段內(nèi)容在寫作時要注意運(yùn)用連接詞，使各個理由之間顯得更有層次，更有邏輯，也可以運(yùn)用各種句式；第三段總結(jié)自己的觀點(diǎn)。12．Writing.（作文）：Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic"Myviewsonmobilephones"，（以"手機(jī)之我見"為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格．）提示：隨著時代的發(fā)展，手機(jī)的普及率越來越高，然而，也有越來越多的人反對中學(xué)生攜帶手機(jī)進(jìn)入校園，請你結(jié)合自己的生活和學(xué)習(xí)，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ甎sethefollowingpointsasareference．（以下問題僅供參考）1．Isitagoodideatoownamobilephoneforamiddleschoolstudent？2．Whydoyouthinkso？（giveatleastthreereasons）（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分．）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MyviewsonmobilephonesDifferentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsonwhetherit’sagoodideatousemobilephones.Whenitcomestome,it’sunnecessarytodoso.Firstofall,Itdoesnogoodtoourstudy.Sincemobilephoneshavealotfunctions,wecanbeeasilydistractedfromourstudy.Second,It’sharmfultoourhealth.Forexample,likealltheelectronicproducts,mobilephoneshaveradiationwhichmaycauseseriousdiseases.Finally,payingformobilephonescanbeexpensive.Nowadays,manypeopleliketoshowoffthemselvesbytakingoutthelatestphones.Andthiscanbeagreatwasteofmoney.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iholdtheopinionthatit’snotagoodideatousemobilephones.【詳解】題干解讀：根據(jù)文中給出的提示可知，這是一篇開放性的文章，作者可以寫同意的觀點(diǎn)也可以寫反對的觀點(diǎn)，只要說說自己的看法，合理即可。并且文中給出參考問題，中學(xué)生是不是應(yīng)該有自己的手機(jī)；為什么你