2025屆高考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)：從替補(bǔ)到賽場(chǎng)的逐夢(mèng)之旅課件

高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)從替補(bǔ)到賽場(chǎng)的逐夢(mèng)之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Haveyoueverheardoftheposition“sometimesbackupcatcher(替補(bǔ)接球手)?”Ihadn’teither.Untilthisspring.Sincechildhood,Ihavealwayslikedwatchingbaseballmatch.Iespeciallylovedthethrillofwatchingthecatchersgrabthatgame-winninggrandslam(大滿貫球)atthefinalmoment.Isometimespicturedmyselfasthecatcher,withbodymovingasswiftasaleopardtotheoutfieldandwitheyesassharpasaneagle’s,readytocatchtheballfromthepitcher(投球手)withthegloveandsecurethosedecisivepoints.Thisspring,myparentsbroughtmetotheCentervilleYouthBaseballtryouts(選拔).Whenitwasmyturn,Iranoutontothefield.MyparentsweresurprisedathowquicklyIreturned.“How’dyoudo?”Dadasked.“Idon’tknow,”Isaid.“I’mnotsureI’llmaketheteam.”“Let’swaitandsee.”Momsaid.4續(xù)寫原文Aftertryouts,CoachBullyardannounced,“Positionsarepostedintheclubhouse.”Parentsandkidsstampededtochecktheresults.Dadstaredatthelineuplistforalongtime.Icouldn’tgetmyselftolook.“So,didImaketheteam?”Iaskedhimfinally.“Youdid,”Dadreplied.“Itsays‘MikeDavis:sometimesbackupcatcher.’”Whatdoesthatmean?Itdidn’tsoundgreat.Wehadthreepracticesbeforethefirstgame.Thefirstday,IsatonthebenchbesidemyfriendEmily,andCoachpointedtotheoutfield.“MikeDavisandEmilyHall—outthere.Andpractice!”EmilyandIheadedfortheoutfield.5續(xù)寫原文Duringourfirstpractice,everythingseemedtobeinamess.Atthesecondpractice,Ishowedsomeimprovement,butstillmissedseveralcatches.Ievenslippedandfellasitstartedtorain.IheardEmilychuckle.CoachBullyardnoticedthis,andcameclosetome,comforting,“It’simportantforacatchertocatcheveryball,especiallythegrand-slamball.Ifyoudoyourbest,you’llseetheresultinthegame.Athome,IaskedmyolderbrotherJames.“DoyouthinkCoachwilleverputmeinagameasacatcher?”Jameswrotedownandcalculatedsomenumbers.Finally,hesaid“Thelikelihoodthatyou’llplayinagamebeforetheendoftheseasonisasslimasfindinganeedleinahaystack.”Helookedatme.“Inotherwords,itprobablywon’thappen.”6段首句Paragraph1：Thatnightinbed,IthoughtaboutmyolderbrotherJames’words.Paragraph2：Inthelastfewminutesofthefinalgame,thecoachdecidedtomakesubstitutionofplayers(換人).7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了“我”自幼熱愛(ài)棒球，尤其著迷于接球手的精彩表現(xiàn)。今年春天，“我”參加了棒球選拔并入選，成為“有時(shí)替補(bǔ)接球手”。前三次訓(xùn)練狀況百出，“我”失誤不斷，還遭朋友嘲笑?；丶液蟾绺缰毖浴拔摇北举惣旧蠄?chǎng)機(jī)會(huì)渺茫。但“我”沒(méi)有氣餒，而是在最后一場(chǎng)比賽中迎來(lái)了機(jī)會(huì)。點(diǎn)1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Thatnightinbed,IthoughtaboutmyolderbrotherJames’words.那天晚上躺在床上，我反復(fù)琢磨著哥哥詹姆斯的話。他說(shuō)我本賽季上場(chǎng)的可能性微乎其微，這話像一塊沉甸甸的石頭壓在我的心頭。但我又想起教練鼓勵(lì)我要盡力接球的場(chǎng)景，我不甘心就這樣放棄。我在黑暗中握緊拳頭，告訴自己，哪怕只有一絲希望，我也要全力以赴。于是，接下來(lái)的日子里，我每天早早起床，到后院練習(xí)接球，不放過(guò)任何一個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)，不斷調(diào)整自己的姿勢(shì)和動(dòng)作，汗水濕透了我的衣衫，但我從未有過(guò)一絲退縮的念頭。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Inthelastfewminutesofthefinalgame,thecoachdecidedtomakesubstitutionofplayers(換人).在最后一場(chǎng)比賽的最后幾分鐘，教練決定換人。我的心瞬間提到了嗓子眼，緊張得幾乎無(wú)法呼吸。當(dāng)教練大聲喊出我的名字時(shí)，我簡(jiǎn)直不敢相信自己的耳朵。我迅速起身，拿起手套，飛奔到賽場(chǎng)上。此時(shí)，全場(chǎng)觀眾的目光都聚焦在我身上。我深吸一口氣，告訴自己要冷靜。投球手投出了關(guān)鍵的一球，我全神貫注，像一只敏捷的獵豹般沖了出去，穩(wěn)穩(wěn)地接住了球。那一刻，全場(chǎng)爆發(fā)出雷鳴般的掌聲，我成功了，我用自己的努力證明了一切。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Thatnightinbed,IthoughtaboutmyolderbrotherJames’words.Hisstatementthatmychancesofplayingthisseasonwereextremelyslimweighedheavilyonmymind.However,Ialsorecalledthemomentwhenthecoachencouragedmetocatcheveryballwithallmyefforts.Ijustcouldn'tgiveuplikethis.Clenchingmyfistsinthedark,Itoldmyselfthateveniftherewasonlyaglimmerofhope,Iwouldsparenoeffort.Therefore,inthefollowingdays,Igotupearlyeverymorningandwenttothebackyardtopracticecatching.Ipaidattentiontoeverydetail,constantlyadjustedmypostureandmovements.Sweatsoakedmyclothes,butIneverhadtheslightestthoughtofbackingdown.14范文呈現(xiàn)Inthelastfewminutesofthefinalgame,thecoachdecidedtomakesubstitutionofplayers.Myheartleapedintomythroat,andIwassonervousthatIcouldhardlybreathe.Whenthecoachshoutedmyname,Icouldhardlybelievemyears.Iquicklygotup,grabbedmyglove,andrushedontothefield.Atthismoment,theeyesoftheentireaudiencewerefixedonme.Takingadeepbreath,Itoldmyselftostaycalm.Thepitcherthrewacrucialball.Ifocusedallmyattentionandrushedoutlikeaswiftleopard,catchingtheballfirmly.Atthatmoment,thunderousapplauseeruptedfromtheaudience.Ihadmadeit.Ihadprovenmyselfwithmyhardwork.15升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Thatnightinbed,IruminatedonmyolderbrotherJames’words.Hisassertionthatmyoddsoftakingthefieldthisseasonwereasscarceashen'steethcastashadowovermythoughts.Nevertheless,thememoryofthecoach'sencouragement,urgingmetostriveforeverycatch,rekindledafirewithinme.Isimplyrefusedtoyield.Clenchingmyfistsinthedarkness,Iresolvedthat,nomatterhowfaintthehope,Iwouldleavenostoneunturned.Thus,inthedaysthatfollowed,Iarosebeforedawneachmorning,retreatingtothebackyardforsolitarypractice.Everynuanceoftechniquewasscrutinized,mystanceandmovementsrefinedwithunwaveringdedication.Sweatdrenchedmygarments,yetthethoughtofsurrenderneveroncecrossedmymind.16升級(jí)版范文呈現(xiàn)Inthelastfewminutesofthefinalgame,thecoachdecidedtomakesubstitutionofplayers.Myheartraced,poundingsofiercelyitseemedtochokeme,andIwasrenderedalmostbreathlesswithanxiety.Whenthecoachbellowedmyname,disbeliefclouded