Unit-2-單元話題滿分范文必背(人教版2019)

Unit2單元話題滿分范文必背(名校最新真題)1．（2022·新疆·阿克蘇市實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)高一期末）假定你是李華，你們學(xué)校將舉辦以“ProtectWildAnimals”為主題英語(yǔ)演講比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英語(yǔ)演講稿。1.野生動(dòng)物的現(xiàn)狀（過(guò)度獵捕）；2.保護(hù)建議（建保護(hù)區(qū)、提高保護(hù)意識(shí)等）；3.美好愿景。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：自然保護(hù)區(qū)naturereserve

意識(shí)awarenessGoodmorning,everyone!I’mverygladtogiveaspeechtoday.Thetopicofmyspeechis…________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!【答案】Goodmorning,everyone!I'mverygladtogiveaspeechtoday.ThetopicofmyspeechisProtectWildAnimals.Asweallknow,animalsalsoplayapartinkeepingthebalanceofnature.Unfortunatelytheyarebeingover–hunted,andsomeofthemaredyingout.Soitisurgenttotakesomemeasurestoprotectthem.First,wemustbuildnaturereserves.Second,weshouldraiseourawarenessofenvironmentalprotection.Toharmanimalsistoharmourselves.Therefore,let'staketheresponsibilityanddowhatwecantoprotectthem.Ihopeinthefuturewecanliveharmoniouslyandhappilytogetherwithanimals.Thankyou!【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一篇演講稿，演講內(nèi)容包括：野生動(dòng)物的現(xiàn)狀（過(guò)度獵捕）；保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物建議（建保護(hù)區(qū)、提高保護(hù)意識(shí)等）；美好愿景。詞數(shù)80左右?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應(yīng)用文——演講稿。要點(diǎn)：1.野生動(dòng)物的現(xiàn)狀（過(guò)度獵捕）；2.保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物建議（建保護(hù)區(qū)、提高保護(hù)意識(shí)等）；3.美好愿景。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分。第二步：列提綱一、框架1、演講稿一開始就開宗明義，說(shuō)明演講的主題，然后談?dòng)捎谶^(guò)度獵捕野生動(dòng)物的現(xiàn)狀，接著給出至少兩個(gè)保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的建議，最后展望美好的愿景。2、詳細(xì)談保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的建議：1）建野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)區(qū)；2）提高人們的保護(hù)意識(shí)；3）出臺(tái)更嚴(yán)厲的法律來(lái)制裁獵捕野生動(dòng)物的行為。(題目要求至少給兩個(gè)建議，這個(gè)是備選)3、希望人和動(dòng)物和諧共處，相互依存。二、段落主題句ThetopicofmyspeechisProtectWildAnimals.Itisknowntoallofusthatanimalsplayapartinkeepingthebalanceofnature.But,someofthemaredyingout.Weshouldtakesomemeasurestoprotectthem.Ihopeinthefuturewecanliveharmoniouslyandhappilytogetherwithanimals.第三步：展開用說(shuō)明法將主題句展開。第四步：潤(rùn)色修改【點(diǎn)睛】范文格式正確，完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)，覆蓋所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，應(yīng)用了很多的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯：狀語(yǔ)從句：Asweallknow,animalsalsoplayapartinkeepingthebalanceofnature.，賓語(yǔ)從句：Ihopeinthefuturewecanliveharmoniouslyandhappilytogetherwithanimals.，形式主語(yǔ)：Soitisurgenttotakesomemeasurestoprotectthem.，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞：Toharmanimalsistoharmourselves.等，這篇范文的另一亮點(diǎn)是：句子間的承接詞，F(xiàn)irst，Second，Therefore，它們的使用使整篇文章的層次分明，條理清晰，結(jié)構(gòu)流暢。祈使句let'staketheresponsibilityanddowhatwecantoprotectthem.的使用符合演講稿的特點(diǎn)，能夠渲染氣氛，使語(yǔ)言更有力。句子theyarebeingover–hunted,andsomeofthemaredyingout.中現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)的使用突出了野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)的迫切性，也給文章增色，完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的。2．（2021·全國(guó)·高一單元測(cè)試）最近，不少動(dòng)物園都發(fā)生了動(dòng)物襲擊游客的事件。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)你就這一問(wèn)題給某英文報(bào)社寫一封建議信。要點(diǎn)如下：1.沒(méi)有受到威脅，大多數(shù)動(dòng)物不會(huì)主動(dòng)攻擊人；2.不要喂食或激怒動(dòng)物；3.……注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：激怒irritateDearSirorMadam，I’mwritingtoappealtothevisitorsinthezootobehavethemselvesthere.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearSirorMadam,I’mwritingtoappealtothevisitorsinthezootobehavethemselvesthere.Recently,thereareoftenreportsinthenewspaperthatvisitorsgothurtbytheanimalsinthezoo.Asweallknow,mostanimalswon’tattackpeopleunlesstheyfeelthreatened.Inmostcases,visitorsarehurtbyanimalswhenvisitorsaremakingsomeimproperbehaviour.It’sobviouslywrongthatvisitorsimitatetheseanimals,gettooclosetothemorfeedthemwithoutpermission.Thereforevisitorssometimesshouldberesponsiblefortheseincidentsbecausetheydon’tknowhowtogetonwithanimals.Idohopevisitorscankeepinmindthattheyshouldobeytheruleswhileinthezoo.Yourssincerely,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)是應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封書信?！驹斀狻康?步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求寫一封建議信：最近，不少動(dòng)物園都發(fā)生了動(dòng)物襲擊游客的事件。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)你就這一問(wèn)題給某英文報(bào)社寫一封建議信。要點(diǎn)如下：1.沒(méi)有受到威脅，大多數(shù)動(dòng)物不會(huì)主動(dòng)攻擊人；2.不要喂食或激怒動(dòng)物；3.……。時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：irritate（激怒），attack（襲擊），threatened（受到威脅的），improper（不適當(dāng)?shù)模?，imitate（模仿），feed（喂食），permission（允許）及responsible（有責(zé)任的）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意該要的詞數(shù)要求、主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。本文內(nèi)容完整，層次分明，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確。另外全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。【點(diǎn)睛】范文語(yǔ)言地道，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。作者在范文中使用了較多高級(jí)詞匯和句式，高級(jí)詞匯有withoutpermission（未經(jīng)允許），beresponsiblefor（對(duì)……有責(zé)任），keepinmind(牢記)，obeytherules（遵守秩序）以及getonwith（與……相處），而且還使用了非限定性定語(yǔ)從句“Asweallknow,mostanimalswon’tattackpeopleunlesstheyfeelthreatened.”，同位語(yǔ)從句“Recently,thereareoftenreportsinthenewspaperthatvisitorsgothurtbytheanimalsinthezoo.”，賓語(yǔ)從句“Idohopevisitorscankeepinmindthattheyshouldobeytheruleswhileinthezoo.”，狀語(yǔ)從句“Thereforevisitorssometimesshouldberesponsiblefortheseincidentsbecausetheydon’tknowhowtogetonwithanimals.”，形式主語(yǔ)“It’sobviouslywrongthatvisitorsimitatetheseanimals,gettooclosetothemorfeedthemwithoutpermission.”，全文沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然流暢。3．（2021·全國(guó)·高一課時(shí)練習(xí)）以“ProtectWildAnimals”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。要求內(nèi)容包括下列要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使文章完整通順。1.意義：野生動(dòng)物與人類的生活息息相關(guān)2.現(xiàn)狀：野生動(dòng)物正在被過(guò)度捕殺3.后果：a.生態(tài)平衡被破壞

b.人類受到大自然的懲罰4.建議：a.嚴(yán)懲盜獵者

b.提高環(huán)保意識(shí)

c.建立自然保護(hù)區(qū)參考詞匯：自然保護(hù)區(qū)naturereserve；生態(tài)平衡thebalanceofnatureProtectWildAnimals______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ProtectWildAnimalsWildanimalsareman’sclosefriends.Theynotonlyprovideuswithfunbutalsoplayakeyroleinkeepingthebalanceofnature.Unfortunately,theyarebeingover-hunted,andsomespeciesaredyingout.Ifitgoesonlikethis,manistobepunished.Tostayawayfromtheseeminglyfarawaydisaster,manhastodosomething.First,effectivelawsmustbepassedtogivetheillegalhuntersproperpunishment.Second,people’sawarenessofenvironmentprotectionshouldberaisedtoahigherlevel.Third,wemustsetupnaturereservestoprovidetheanimalswithcomfort-ablehabitats.【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于說(shuō)明文，要求考生以“ProtectWildAnimals”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，內(nèi)容包括1.意義：野生動(dòng)物與人類的生活息息相關(guān)；2.現(xiàn)狀：野生動(dòng)物正在被過(guò)度捕殺；3.后果：a.生態(tài)平衡被破壞；b.人類受到大自然的懲罰；4.建議：a.嚴(yán)懲盜獵者；

b.提高環(huán)保意識(shí)；c.建立自然保護(hù)區(qū)?！驹斀狻吭~匯積累提供：provide→supply有效的：effective→valid滅絕：dieout→becomeextinct遠(yuǎn)離：stayawayfrom→keepawayfrom句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Wildanimalsareman’sclosefriends.Theynotonlyprovideuswithfunbutalsoplayakeyroleinkeepingthebalanceofnature.拓展句：Wildanimalsareman’sclosefriends,whonotonlyprovideuswithfunbutalsoplayakeyroleinkeepingthebalanceofnature.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Theynotonlyprovideuswithfunbutalsoplayakeyroleinkeepingthebalanceofnature.(運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ))[高分句型2]Ifitgoesonlikethis,manistobepunished.(運(yùn)用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句)4．（2021·浙江·高一課時(shí)練習(xí)）假定你是李華，你所在的學(xué)校正在舉辦“保護(hù)動(dòng)物宣傳周”活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你以保護(hù)野生動(dòng)植物為主題，寫一篇演講稿，題目自擬，內(nèi)容包括：1.目前存在的問(wèn)題；2.保護(hù)野生動(dòng)植物的意義；3.作為中學(xué)生，保護(hù)野生動(dòng)植物的方法。要求：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右2.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。DearClassTodayI’llgiveaspeechwiththetopicof_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thanksforyourlistening.【答案】DearclassTodayI’llgiveaspeechwiththetopicof“Animalsneedourprotection”.Asweallknow,wildanimalshavebeenkilledfortheirfur,feathersandmeatorjustforfun.Asaresultmanyspecieshavebeenextinctforever.Actuallywildanimalsplayanimportantpartinthebalanceofnatureandbiologicaldiversity.Wehumanscan’tsurvivewithoutwildlife.Destroyingonespeciesofanimalscanbringaboutmanyproblems.Forexample,whenfarmerskilllargenumbersofhawks,storesofcornsandgrainswillbedestroyedbyrats.Luckilyit’snottoolateforustohelpsavewildanimals.Whatwestudentscandoischangeourwayoflife.Weshouldn’tbuyanimals’furorotheranimalproductsbecausewhenthebuyingstops,thekillingcantoo.Besides,weshouldraisepublicawarenessofprotectingwildlife.Weshouldliveinharmonywithnature.Thanksforyourlistening.【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生以保護(hù)野生動(dòng)植物為主題，寫一篇演講稿?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應(yīng)用文時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，少量現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式第一段寫目前存在的問(wèn)題；第二段寫保護(hù)野生動(dòng)植物的意義；第三段寫保護(hù)野生動(dòng)植物的方法。要求：1.目前存在的問(wèn)題；2.保護(hù)野生動(dòng)植物的意義；3.作為中學(xué)生，保護(hù)野生動(dòng)植物的方法。第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)詞組）giveaspeech,withthetopicof“Animalsneedourprotection”,forfun,playanimportantpartin,can’tsurvivewithoutwildlife,bringabout,largenumbersof,toolateforustodo,changeourwayoflife,raisepublicawarenessof,protectwildlife,inharmonywith.第三步：連詞成句1.I’llgiveaspeechwiththetopicof“Animalsneedourprotection”.2.Wildanimalshavebeenkilledfortheirfur,feathersandmeatorjustforfun.3.Manyspecieshavebeenextinctforever.4.Wildanimalsplayanimportantpartinthebalanceofnatureandbiologicaldiversity.5.Wehumanscan’tsurvivewithoutwildlife.6.Destroyingonespeciesofanimalscanbringaboutmanyproblems.7.Whenfarmerskilllargenumbersofhawks,storesofcornsandgrainswillbedestroyedbyrats.8.It’snottoolateforustohelpsavewildanimals.9.Whatwestudentscandoischangeourwayoflife.10.Weshouldraisepublicawarenessofprotectingwildlife.11.Weshouldliveinharmonywithnature.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）1.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：Forexample,Besides2.表因果關(guān)系：because,Asaresult3.表銜接關(guān)系：Asweallknow,Actually,Luckily【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Forexample,whenfarmerskilllargenumbersofhawks,storesofcornsandgrainswillbedestroyedbyrats.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）[高分句型2]Whatwestudentscandoischangeourwayoflife.（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句）5．（2021·山東省實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)高一階段練習(xí)）為提高瀕危野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)意識(shí)，昨天你和你校部分學(xué)生參觀了野生動(dòng)物園。請(qǐng)寫一篇英語(yǔ)日記記錄此次活動(dòng)。內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)目的；2.活動(dòng)過(guò)程；3.感想與評(píng)價(jià)。要求：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thursday

December23rd,2021

Windy________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thursday

December23rd,2021

WindyInordertodevelopasenseofprotectingwildanimals,yesterdaysomestudentsofourschoolvisitedthewildlifepark.Wefirstenjoyedawonderfulvideoaboutsafetyrulesandpicutresofvariouswildanimals.Later,weenteredthewildareabybustoseewildanimals,suchaslionsandtigers.Formostofus,itwasthefirsttimewehadbeensoclosetowildanimals.Itwasreallythrilling.Throughthisactivity,we’velearnedmoreaboutwildanimalsandraisedawarenessofpreservingendangeredanimals.Isincerelyhopetoliveonthisearthwithdiversecreatures.【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。要求考生用英語(yǔ)日記記錄一下參觀野生動(dòng)物園的經(jīng)歷?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累為了：inorderto→inaneffortto通過(guò)：through→bywayof提高意識(shí)：raiseawareness→enhanceawareness多樣化的：diverse→avarietyof2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Formostofus,itwasthefirsttimewehadbeensoclosetowildanimals.拓展句：Formostofus,itwasthefirsttimetobesoclosetowildanimals.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Formostofus,itwasthefirsttimewehadbeensoclosetowildanimals.（運(yùn)用了it作形式主語(yǔ)，that引導(dǎo)主語(yǔ)從句以及形容詞短語(yǔ)）[高分句型2]Throughthisactivity,we’velearnedmoreaboutwildanimalsandraisedawarenessofpreservingendangeredanimals.（運(yùn)用介詞短語(yǔ)和動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)相結(jié)合）6．（2022·江西·臨川一中實(shí)驗(yàn)學(xué)校高一期末）假如你是李明,請(qǐng)給報(bào)社寫一封關(guān)于拯救老虎的信,要點(diǎn)如下:1.老虎的現(xiàn)狀(比如目前數(shù)量日趨減少等);2.問(wèn)題出現(xiàn)的原因(比如人為、環(huán)境等因素);3.應(yīng)采取的措施。注意:1.書信必須包括所有要點(diǎn)，適度增添細(xì)節(jié);2.詞數(shù)100個(gè)左右。Deareditor，____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMing【答案】Deareditor，I'mastudentofSeniorOneinamiddleschool.I'mwritingtoyoubecauseIwanthumanstosavetheendangeredtigers.Itissaidthatthereareonlyabout400tigersleftinourcountry.Asisknowntousall,tigersareprotectedanimals.However,somepeoplekilltheminordertomakemoney.Besides,toomanytreeshavebeencutdown,destroyingtheirhabitats.Therefore,Iholdtheviewpointthatthegovernmentshouldtakenecessarymeasuresandpasslawstoprotecttigersandpunishthehunters.Idohopewealltryourbesttomakeourearthpleasantandpeaceful,notonlyforthewildlifebutalsoforourhumanbeings.Yours,LiMing【分析】本題屬于提綱類作文。【詳解】提綱要點(diǎn)已給出：假如你是李明,請(qǐng)給報(bào)社寫一封關(guān)于拯救老虎的信,要點(diǎn)包括：1.老虎的現(xiàn)狀(比如目前數(shù)量日趨減少等);2.問(wèn)題出現(xiàn)的原因(比如人為、環(huán)境等因素);3.應(yīng)采取的措施。寫作時(shí)要注意要點(diǎn)齊全，內(nèi)容完整充實(shí)，不要直接翻譯，適度增添細(xì)節(jié)?！军c(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整，充實(shí)，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)用得當(dāng)。文中采用了多種句型句式，如Itissaidthat….，notonly…butalso….，Iholdtheviewpointthat…，Idohope…等；恰當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z(yǔ)，如：takenecessarymeasures，tryourbest，tomakeourearthpleasantandpeaceful等，以及連接性詞匯和結(jié)構(gòu)，如Asisknowntousall,However,Besides,Therefore等的使用，使文章條理清晰，連接緊湊。7．（2022·福建·高一課時(shí)練習(xí)）假設(shè)你是一名記者，采訪某動(dòng)物園負(fù)責(zé)人有關(guān)國(guó)寶大熊貓的情況。下面是你采訪動(dòng)物園負(fù)責(zé)人的談話要點(diǎn)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)談話要點(diǎn)為《中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)》寫一篇專題報(bào)道。內(nèi)容如下：1.大熊貓是世界上的稀有動(dòng)物，人們非常喜歡它；2.由于生態(tài)遭到破壞，加上氣候變暖，大熊貓?jiān)絹?lái)越少3.現(xiàn)在中國(guó)大熊貓的數(shù)量每年都在增加，其中一些已被送到國(guó)外供人們觀賞；4.中國(guó)最大的熊貓自然公園在四川，那里有一個(gè)野生動(dòng)物研究中心?？茖W(xué)家們希望有一天大熊貓重新生活在曠野中。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thepandaisoneoftherarestanimals.Peopleintheworldlikeitverymuch.ThereusedtobemanypandasinChinalongago.Asthebalanceofnatureisdestroyedandtheweatherisgettingwarmerandwarmer,thepopulationofpandashasreducedsharply.Butatpresent,thenumberofpandasinChinaisincreasingduetotheprotectivemeasureswehavetakeninthepastdecades.Therearenowsomanypandasthatsomearebeingsenttoothercountriessothatpeopletherecanenjoythem.Nowadays,thebiggestnatureparkforpandasinChinaisinSichuan.Thereisaresearchcentreforwildlifethere.Scientistshopethatonedaytheywillhaveenoughpandastobesetfreeandletthemliveinthewildagain.【分析】這是一篇新聞報(bào)道。題干中較詳細(xì)的列出了四點(diǎn)寫作要點(diǎn)，同學(xué)們稍加發(fā)揮即可。【詳解】第1步：審題。確定時(shí)態(tài)和人稱。由于這是一篇介紹大熊貓現(xiàn)狀的新聞報(bào)道，所以人稱以第三人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。第2步：確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），提煉寫作要點(diǎn)。如：oneoftherarestanimals(最稀有的動(dòng)物之一)，thebalanceofnature（自然平衡），sharply（極速地），theprotectivemeasures(保護(hù)措施)，natureparkforpandas（熊貓自然公園）等。第3步：對(duì)寫作要點(diǎn)遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的?！军c(diǎn)睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，段落清晰，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。全文還使用了不少高級(jí)詞匯與句式。例如：第一段第三句使用了therebe句型；第一段第四句使用了as引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；第一段第六句使用了結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句。第一段第五句中介詞短語(yǔ)dueto用來(lái)引導(dǎo)原因，使用的也很巧妙。第二段第三句還使用了賓語(yǔ)從句。全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。且全文語(yǔ)句間過(guò)渡自然，為文章增色添彩。8．（2022·浙江·慈溪中學(xué)高一期末）假定你是李華，是校英文報(bào)的記者。你校在10月4日“世界動(dòng)物日”那天組織了一系列相關(guān)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你就此寫一篇新聞報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)目的；2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容；3.活動(dòng)反響。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。ANIMALPROTECTIONACTIVITIESHELD______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ANIMALPROTECTIONACTIVITIESHELDToraiseourawarenessofprotectinganimals,ourschoolhelddiverseactivitiesonOctober4th,“WorldAnimalDay”.Aphotoexhibitionattractedanumberofstudents,showingusmanyanimalsarebecomingendangeredspeciesforvariousreasonslikeillegalhuntingandpollution.Moreinspiringwasaspeechcontestwhereparticipantseagerlytalkedabouthowweindividualscouldmakeadifference.Theactivitiesturnedoutagreatsuccess.Asonestudentputit,“It’sreallydistressingtoseetheanimalsdyingoutatsuchanalarmingrate.It’stimeweshouldsparenoefforttoprotectthem.”【分析】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。你校在10月4日“世界動(dòng)物日”那天組織了一系列相關(guān)活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)考生就此寫一篇新聞報(bào)道介紹活動(dòng)目的，內(nèi)容及反響?！驹斀狻?.詞匯積累喚起：raise→arouse各種各樣的：diverse/various→kindsof比賽：contest

→competition令人擔(dān)憂的：alarming→worrying2.句式拓展簡(jiǎn)單句變復(fù)合句原句：Toraiseourawarenessofprotectinganimals,ourschoolhelddiverseactivitiesonOctober4th,“WorldAnimalDay”.拓展句：Toraiseourawarenessofprotectinganimals,ourschoolhelddiverseactivitieswhosethemeis“WorldAnimalDay”onOctober4th.【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Moreinspiringwasaspeechcontestwhereparticipantseagerlytalkedabouthowweindividualscouldmakeadifference.(運(yùn)用了where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句和how引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句)[高分句型2]It’stimeweshouldsparenoefforttoprotectthem.（it’stime句型使用了虛擬語(yǔ)氣）9．（2021·甘肅·蘭州一中高一期末）眾所周知，許多野生動(dòng)物面臨滅絕。請(qǐng)寫一篇有關(guān)保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的文章。主要內(nèi)容：1.野生動(dòng)物瀕臨滅絕的原因；2.拯救措施。注意：1.詞數(shù)100字左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.書寫工整。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Manywildanimalsareindangerofdyingout,becausetheenvironmenttheyarelivinginhaschangedgreatly.Forexample,withthedevelopmentofcities,theseriouspollutionaffectstheirlivingareas,whichhavebecomenarrowerandnarrower.Manyofthewildanimals,nowarefacingfoodcrisis.Atthesametime,maniskillingoffspeciesjustfortheirfur,skin,horns,teethandmeat.Toprotectwildanimals,First,peopleshouldraisetheprotectionawareness.Second,measuresofthefollowingshouldbetaken:pollutionstandardsaremadetokeepdownpoisonsintheair;killingwildanimalsisprohibited;nationalparksshouldbesetupaswildlife’reserves.Onlywhenwetakesomemeasurescanwildanimalsbepreserved.【分析】本文書面表達(dá)屬于說(shuō)明文，要求寫一篇保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的文章。【詳解】第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文是一篇說(shuō)明文：眾所周知，許多野生動(dòng)物面臨滅絕。請(qǐng)寫一篇有關(guān)保護(hù)野生動(dòng)物的文章。主要內(nèi)容：1.野生動(dòng)物瀕臨滅絕的原因；2.拯救措施。第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求確定關(guān)鍵詞，如：indangerofdyingout（面臨滅絕）；withthedevelopmentof（隨著---的發(fā)展）；becomenarrowerandnarrower.（變得越來(lái)越窄）等。第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)語(yǔ)態(tài)問(wèn)題。第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過(guò)渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。【點(diǎn)睛】本文內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。另外全文中沒(méi)有中國(guó)式英語(yǔ)的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語(yǔ)的能力。同時(shí)文中使用高級(jí)句子。Manywildanimalsareindangerofdyingout,becausetheenvironmenttheyarelivinginhaschangedgreatly.句中使用原因狀語(yǔ)從句和定語(yǔ)從句；withthedevelopmentofcities,theseriouspollutionaffectstheirlivingareas,whichhavebecomenarrowerandnarrower.句中which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；Toprotectwildanimals,First,peopleshouldraisetheprotectionawareness.動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)；Onlywhenwetakesomemeasurescanwildanimalsbepreserved.句中使用部分倒裝。10．（20