專題05：材料作文-2023年中考英語作文考前強化特訓（四川成都）

專題05：材料作文-2023年中考英語作文考前強化特訓（四川成都）學校:___________姓名：___________班級：___________考號一、材料作文1．在今年世界地球日(4月22日)的學?；顒又?，合唱團演唱了一首節(jié)奏舒緩、飽含深情的英文歌曲。請根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇樂評，向更多人推薦這首歌。WordBank:◆heal[v.]tomakesth.healthyagain◆monologue[n.]alongspeechinaplay,movie,song,etc.spokenbyoneactor◆generation[n.]allthepeoplewhowerebornataboutthesametime◆sorrow[n.]afeelingofgreatsadness◆entire[adj.]includingeverything,everyone,oreverypart;[SYN]whole要求：1.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實的姓名和校名；2.樂評須包含以上所給信息；3.寫出推薦理由并適當闡述，至少三條；3.注意文章邏輯，語句通順，有恰當?shù)倪^渡和銜接；4.詞數(shù)：110詞左右。提示詞匯：世界地球日WorldEarthDay

合唱團SchoolChorus

推薦[v.]recommend____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．許多初中生害怕錯過社交媒體上發(fā)生的事情，每天都會忍不住瀏覽社交媒體，這種現(xiàn)象叫做FOMO(FearofMissingOut錯失恐懼癥)。請你根據(jù)此現(xiàn)象，以“HowtoDealWithFOMO”為題寫一篇報道。HowtoDealWithFOMOinYourLife現(xiàn)象許多初中生害怕錯過社交媒體上發(fā)生的事情，每天都會忍不住瀏覽社交媒體。原因①學習壓力大；②缺乏關(guān)愛；③對社交媒體的依賴建議①參加社團活動；②向老師或同學尋求幫助；③與家人多交流；④多讀紙質(zhì)書；⑤多進行戶外運動提示詞：社交媒體socialmedia要求：1.文章必須包括以上所有內(nèi)容并撰寫合理的結(jié)尾。語句通順，層次清晰，意思連貫；2.不能出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名和學校等相關(guān)信息；3.100詞左右。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假如你是李欣，你校正在開展“用英語講述你最喜歡的中國（電影、歌曲、發(fā)明……等）”為主題的視頻展評活動，請根據(jù)以下提示撰寫視頻文稿。1.介紹你最喜歡的……的種類、名稱等基本信息；2.說明你喜歡……的原因及你在欣賞（使用等）時的感受；3.對你視頻觀眾提出倡導及建議。注意：1.文稿須全面反映提示信息；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名及學校名稱；3.詞數(shù)80～100，開頭已給出，且不計入總詞數(shù)。Hello,everyone.I’mLiXin._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．每年的6月6日是全國愛眼日，請你結(jié)合學校英語社的愛眼宣傳海報，寫一篇文章，結(jié)合學生近視現(xiàn)狀，分析近視的原因，介紹良好習慣并推薦專家建議，號召同學們養(yǎng)成良好的用眼習慣，保護好視力。注意：1.你的文章應包含以上所有信息；2.不能出現(xiàn)真實校名和姓名；3.詞數(shù)：100詞左右，標題已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：myopia(n.)近視：nearsighted(adj.)近視的；regular(adj.)定期的ForaMoreBeautifulWorldinYourEyes____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．現(xiàn)在有很多學校給班級提供了一塊菜地，培養(yǎng)學生們吃苦耐勞的精神。請你結(jié)合下圖，寫一篇短文，并談談勞動帶給家長和學生的變化。參考詞匯：勞動labor

校園農(nóng)場schoolfarm要求：1.短文應包含以上所有信息和圖片中的相關(guān)要點；2.短文應格式正確，語句通順，句式多樣；3.詞數(shù)100詞左右。首句已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Thesedays,manyschoolsprovideeachclasswithapieceoffieldtoplantvegetablestohelpmorestudentsgethard-workingspirit._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．前幾天你見到了小學時候的好朋友。三年未見，他的變化很大。假設(shè)外教要求你寫一篇關(guān)于朋友的文章，請你以“MyFriendHasChanged”為題，根據(jù)以下提示完成這篇文章。過去的情況1、個頭矮小，學習不努力2、喜歡玩游戲3、淘氣，取笑別人現(xiàn)在的情況1、……2、……我的感受……要求：1、表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2、詞數(shù)：100詞左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞）。MyFriendHasChangedLastweek,Imetmybestfriendinprimaryschool.Hehaschangedalot.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．假如你是林華，請根據(jù)以下表格中的信息以“MyChangesinLearningEnglish”寫一篇英語短文，介紹一下你進初中兩年多來在英語學習方面的變化及經(jīng)驗并簡要地談談你對某兩個學習方法的看法。剛進七年級時現(xiàn)在打瞌睡，聽課不認真認真記筆記不喜歡聽磁帶，發(fā)音不準盡可能多聽害羞，害怕講英語主動找同伴英語對話一個人學習小組合作…………提示：l.文章應包含表格中的所有信息；不得出現(xiàn)自己的真實姓名和學校；2.字數(shù)100詞左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．根據(jù)國家最新調(diào)查數(shù)據(jù)，中國中小學生2020年總體近視率為52.7%。保護視力，刻不容緩。請根據(jù)下圖，結(jié)合你的生活經(jīng)驗，寫一篇短文。Theresultsofthesurveyonstudents’myoplarateinChinain2020要求：1.短文應包括以上所有信息；2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實學校和姓名；3.詞數(shù)：100詞左右。開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)。4.參考詞匯：myopiarate近視率；視力sight；近視的short-sightedAccordingtoasurveybytheChinesegovernmentin2020,themyopiarateofChinesestudentshasbeenupto52.7%.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．你校英文校刊就“美育進中考”這一新聞開辟專欄，展開討論。請以“Shouldhighschoolentranceexaminationincludemusicandart?”為題寫一篇短文，并向該欄目投稿。要求：1.請先在答題卡上填寫表中空格。2.寫作內(nèi)容需要包含圖中所含信息，要轉(zhuǎn)述，不能完全照抄。3.表達你的觀點以及2點理由。（與圖中理由需要不同）注意：1.文章不得出現(xiàn)真真實校名和姓名；2.詞數(shù)120左右。參考詞匯：all-roundadj.全面的__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．在英語課堂上，英語老師要求學生分組討論“ShouldTeenagersGooutwithFriendsonWeekends?”，請按下面的討論記錄。View:理由：1.放松自己2.一起鍛煉3.參加志愿者活動View:理由：1.學習、完成家庭作業(yè)2.做家務3.陪伴家人注意:1.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱；2.要求包括所有提示要點，可適當發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)：100詞左右。ShouldTeenagersGooutwithFriendsonWeekends?_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考答案：1．例文OnApril22,ourSchoolChorussangasong,HealtheWorld,tocelebratetheWorldEarthDay.Thesongcameoutin1991andwassungbyMichaelJackson.Itencouragespeopletoprotectourworld.IfeelsomovedthatIwanttowriteamusicreviewtorecommendit.First,Michaelsingsthesongwithfulllove,whichtrulytouchesme.Besides,thelyricsareeasytounderstand,andeachsentencemakesusthinkalot.Last,thesongisworthspreadingbecauseithelpscallonpeopletotakeactionnow.Ihopeyou’lllovethesongandwecanhelpmakeourworldabetterplace.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，要求根據(jù)歌詞內(nèi)容和歌曲的信息寫一篇樂評，從而推薦該歌曲。2.寫作指導：本文以第三人稱書寫，時態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時。第一段介紹作者創(chuàng)作歌曲的事，第二段介紹推薦原因，第三段總結(jié)?？梢試@主題準確使用一定的語法、詞匯、短語和句型等；語言的表述要符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；層次要分明、條理要清晰。2．例文：HowtoDealWithFOMOManyjuniorhighschoolstudentsareafraidofmissingoutonwhat’shappeningonsocialmediaandcan’thelpbutbrowsesocialmediaeveryday.Thereasonwhysomanyteenagersaresofondofsurfingthesocialmediaisthattheyaresufferingfromthestressfromthestudy.Anotherreasonisthattheyneedtobecaredfor.Besides,theyrelytoomuchonsocialmedia.HowdothestudentsdealwithFOMO?First,wecanjointheclubs,suchasfootballclubandswimmingclub.Second,weshouldasktheteachersorclassmatesforhelp.Third,wecantalkwithfamilymemberswhenwearelonely.Fourth,domoreoutdoorexercise.Besides,readingmorepaperbooksisalsoagoodidea.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏表格中已給出的要點，用“HowtoDealWithFOMO”為題，介紹“錯失恐懼癥”這一現(xiàn)象，出現(xiàn)的原因及自己的建議。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹錯失恐懼癥這一現(xiàn)象；第二步，介紹出現(xiàn)這一現(xiàn)象的原因；第三步，具體介紹應對錯失恐懼癥的建議。[亮點詞匯]①juniorhighschool初中②beafraidof害怕③befondof喜歡④sufferfrom承受⑤dealwith應對，處理[高分句型]①Thereasonwhysomanyteenagersaresofondofsurfingthesocialmediaisthattheyaresufferingfromthestressfromthestudy.（why引導定語從句；that引導表語從句）②Third,wecantalkwithfamilymemberswhenwearelonely.（when引導時間狀語從句）3．例文：Hello,everyone.I’mLiXin.MyfavouritesongisLookupatthestarswhichissungbyZhangJie,oneofthemostpopularsingersinChina.It’sapopsongthatisfullofpositiveenergy.Ilikethissongbestfortworeasons.First,thesongsoundsverylivelythatitcanmakemehappy.Second,thelyricsofthesongareinspiring.It’spossibleforeveryonetomeetdifficultyinlife.Wheneverthathappens,Iwilllistentothatsong.Itcheersmeupandencouragesmetomoveon.Finally,Ihopeyouwillenjoythisvideoandgivemorevaluablecommentsonit.That’sall.Thanksforwatching.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)主要為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作提示題目已經(jīng)給出，要圍繞寫作提示進行寫作，并可以適當發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接文章開頭，并開篇點題，指出自己最喜歡的中國電影、歌曲、發(fā)明等的基本信息；第二步，說明喜歡它的原因及自己的感受；第三步，最后進行總結(jié)，并對視頻觀眾提出建議和倡導。[亮點詞匯]①befullof充滿②cheersb.up使某人振作起來③encouragesb.todosth.鼓勵某人做某事④moveon繼續(xù)前進[高分句型]①It’sapopsongthatisfullofpositiveenergy.（that引導的定語從句）②Wheneverthathappens,Iwilllistentothatsong.（whenever引導的時間狀語從句）4．參考范文ForaMoreBeautifulWorldinYourEyesJune6isNationalEyeCareDay.Asurveyshowsabadsituation:about38%offourthgradersarenearsighted,about68%foreighthgradersandabout81%forthoseinhighschool.Badhabitscausemyopia.Usingphonesinbedhurtseyes.Lyingonthesofawhilereadingisalsoharmful.Weshoulddevelopgoodhabitsforachange.Let’sdoeyeexercisesoftenandhaveregulareyesighttests.Weshouldfollowthe20/20/20rule:After20minutesofcomputeruse,weshouldlookatsomethinggreen20feetawayfor20seconds.It’stimetotakeactionforamorebeautifulworldinoureyes.(詞數(shù)108）【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)海報中的“信息提示”分析當前的學生近視現(xiàn)狀，及原因，并給出建議，可適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹調(diào)查的結(jié)果；第二步，分析學生近視的原因；第三步，就“保護視力”提出建議；第四步，呼吁大家行動。[亮點詞匯]①onthesofa在沙發(fā)上②developgoodhabits養(yǎng)成好習慣③doeyeexercises做眼保健操④takeaction采取行動[高分句型]①Lyingonthesofawhilereadingisalsoharmful.(動名詞作主語)②It’stimetotakeactionforamorebeautifulworldinoureyes.(it固定句型；動詞不定式作主語)5．例文

Thesedays,manyschoolsprovideeachclasswithapieceoffieldtoplantvegetablestohelpmorestudentsgethard-workingspirit.

Inthepast,parentspaidmoreattentiontotheirchildren’sgrades,butnowtheyoftenencouragetheirchildrentodohousework.Asforthestudents,theyusedtostudyhardeveryday,andtherewasnotimeforthemtodeveloptheirhobbiesorrelax.Butnowstudentshavelesshomework,andtheycantakeuptheirhobbies,exerciseandsoonintheirsparetimeorweekends.Nowstudentshaveanextralaborclass.Throughthis,studentscanmastermanyusefullifeskills.Inaddition,theycanalsoexperiencethehardworkoffarmers.Athome,helpingparentsdohouseworkcanreducetheburdenofparents.

Inaword,laborisbeneficialandhonorable,anditisofgreatbenefittoourgrowth.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般過去時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇作文，介紹勞動帶給家長和學生的變化。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹父母和學生以前以及現(xiàn)在的變化；第二步，具體介紹通過勞動學生可以獲得什么；第三步，最后表達你的看法。[亮點詞匯]①payattentionto注意②encouragesbtodosth鼓勵某人做某事③inaddition此外[高分句型]①Butnowstudentshavelesshomework,andtheycantakeuptheirhobbies,exerciseandsoonintheirsparetimeorweekends.（and連接兩個并列結(jié)構(gòu)）②helpingparentsdohouseworkcanreducetheburdenofparents.（動名詞作主語）6．Onepossibleversion:MyFriendHasChangedLastweek,Imetmybestfriendinprimaryschool.Hehaschangedalot.Atthattime,hewasshortandhedidn’tworkhardatstudies.Heoftenwentouttoplaygameswithotherchildren.Heusedtobeanaughtyboyandliketomakefunofothers.Laterhedeterminedtochange.Now,heistallandspendsmostofhistimereadingbooks.Asaresult,hebecomesatopstudentinhisschool.Helikesplayingbasketballverymuch.Heisn’tnaughtyanymore.Heoftenhelpshisparentswiththehousework.Thismakeshisparentsveryhappy.Seeingmyfriend’schanges,Ifeltproudandhappy.Ilearnfromhimthatonceyoumakeupyourmind,youcanachieveyourgoals.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時和一般過去時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏“信息提示”中的我的感受，適當添加細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹朋友過去的情況；第二步，介紹朋友現(xiàn)在的情況；第三步，介紹自己的感受。[亮點詞匯]①usedtobe曾經(jīng)是②makefunof取笑③not...anymore不再[高分句型]Ilearnfromhimthatonceyoumakeupyourmind,youcanachieveyourgoals.（that引導的賓語從句）7．例文：MyChangesinLearningEnglishWeallknowitisveryimportantforusstudentstodevelopgoodstudyhabits.Ihavebeeninjuniorhighschoolfortwoyears.IhavechangedalotinlearningEnglish.WhenIfirstwasintheseventhgrade,Ididn’tlistentotheteachercarefullyandalwaysdidthingsthathadnothingtodowiththeclass.MyEnglishpronunciationwasnotcorrectandmyclassmatesalwayslaughedatme.SoIwasveryafraidtospeakEnglishinpublic.Ialwaysstudiedalone,becauseIwasafraidtoaskmyclassmatesquestions.NowIhavedevelopedsomegoodhabitssuchaslisteningtoEnglishasmuchaspossible,takingnotescarefullyinclass,keepingEnglishdiariesandsoon.IalsomakedialogueswithmyclassmatesinEnglish.IoftenimprovemyEnglishthroughgroupstudy.Inaword,developinggoodhabitsisveryimportanttoEnglishlearning.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)結(jié)合“一般現(xiàn)在時”、“一般過去時”和“現(xiàn)在完成時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意剛進七年級時的情況和現(xiàn)在的情況的對比，在包含所有要點的基礎(chǔ)上適當增加細節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出主題“在英語學習上有很多變化”；第二步，通過今昔對比來突出自己的變化；第三步，收尾。[亮點詞匯]①juniorhighschool初中②laughat嘲笑③beafraidtodosth.害怕做某事④inaword總而言之[高分句型]①WhenIfirstwasintheseventhgrade,Ididn’tlistentotheteachercarefullyandalwaysdidthingsthathadnothingtodowiththeclass.（when引導時間狀語從句；and連接并列謂語結(jié)構(gòu)；that引導定語從句）②Ialwaysstudiedalone,becauseIwasafraidtoaskmyclassmatesquestions.（because引導原因狀語從句）8．例文AccordingtoasurveybytheChinesegovernmentin2020,themyopiarateofChinesestudentshasbeenupto52.7%Manyfactorsleadtothemyopiaproblem.Withthepopularityofdigitalproducts,anincreasingnumberofstudentsfixtheireyesonthescreenatleast4hourseveryday.Moreoveracademicburdenforcesstudentstooverusetheireyeswhichworsensthesituation.Weshouldtakeactiontodealwiththeproblem.First,thegovernmentshouldupdatetherelevantrulestoreduceschooltimeensuringthestudentstouseeyesless.Second,westudentsshouldsaynototoomuchuseofelectronicdevices.Sinceeyesarethewindowofoursoul,weshouldtakemeasurestoprotectthem.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題是一篇材料作文，結(jié)合題干提示，介紹2020年中學生近視率的結(jié)果，分析導致近視的原因，以及給出相應保護視力的建議。2.寫作指導：本文時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱用第一人稱和第三人稱。寫作時，首先開篇點題說中國中小學生2020年總體近視率為52.7%；其次分析導致近視的因素，并提出相應的建議保護視力；最后呼吁大家行動起來保護好自己的視力。注意行文連貫、邏輯清晰、無拼寫和語法使用錯誤。9．1.for；2.against范文：Shouldhighschoolentranceexaminationincludemusicandart?Recentlywehavediscussedwhether