作文 07 海南卷 - 三年(2019-2021)中考英語滿分作文解析

作文07海南卷2021年真題在線為迎接英國某中學(xué)文化交流團(tuán)到海南博物館參加即將舉辦的中國國畫展，博物館在海南某英文報(bào)上發(fā)布了一則志愿者招聘廣告。假定你是紅星中學(xué)的李華，想成為其中一員，請(qǐng)根據(jù)廣告內(nèi)容和要求寫一封自薦信。要求：1.要點(diǎn)齊全，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.行文連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名；4.80詞左右（文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua.astudentfromHongXingMiddleSchool.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua考題解析【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為書信作文，要注意書信標(biāo)準(zhǔn)格式。題目已給出要點(diǎn)提示，學(xué)生應(yīng)按照要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行寫作，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)應(yīng)用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)根據(jù)所述內(nèi)容正確使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)、過去時(shí)或?qū)頃r(shí)。文章應(yīng)包含全部要點(diǎn)，并可進(jìn)行適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫、語法時(shí)態(tài)使用錯(cuò)誤。滿分范文DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua,astudentfromHongXingMiddleSchool.Iwanttobeamemberofthevolunteers.Firstofall,I’vebeenlearningEnglishfor8years.IspeakfluentEnglishsoIhavenodifficultyinexpressingmyselfclearlyinEnglish.Besides,Istartedtolearnpaintingattheageof4,andIhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings.IwillbeabletotellstudentsfromEnglandaboutChinesepaintingsandculture.Finally,I’moutgoingandgoodwithpeople.AndI’llbetotallyfreeinAugust.I’msureIamtherightpersonyouarelookingfor.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua2020年真題在線周末是我們生活中重要的一部分，合理利用周末時(shí)間對(duì)青少年至關(guān)重要。某校英語雜志社就“如何讓周末生活更有意義”開展征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖，以“HowtoMakeOurweekendsmoremeaningful”為題，用英語寫一篇短文投稿。要求：1.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范。2.所有提示須全部用上，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名。4.80詞左右（文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。HowtomakeOurWeekendsMoreMeaningfulLifeonweekendsisanimportantpartofourdailylife.Howcanwemakeourweekendsmoremeaningful?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inshort,let’smakegooduseofourweekends!考題解析【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，寫作時(shí)要按說明文格式寫。在寫作時(shí)介紹周末的生活是我們?nèi)粘Ｉ畹闹匾糠?；第二段介紹我們?nèi)绾巫屩苣┥罡幸饬x；最后一段總結(jié)要充分利用周末。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文采用三段式；用第一、三人稱來敘述內(nèi)容；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，在介紹讓周末生活更有意義的建議時(shí)，敘述完整且條理清晰。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代詞，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語：firstofall；spendtimedoingsth；forexample；wouldliketo；communicatewith；takepartin；makegooduseof。句型：Herebe句型；It's+形容詞+todosth。【點(diǎn)睛】滿分范文HowtoMakeOurWeekendsMoreMeaningfulLifeonweekendsisanimportantpartofourdailylife.Howcanwemakeourweekendsmoremeaningful?Herearesomeofmysuggestions.Firstofall,theweekendisagreattimeforfamilytogettogether.It'sgoodtohelpourparentsdosomehousework.Thatcanhelpusunderstandeachotherbetterandshowourloveforthem.Secondly,weshouldspendtimedevelopingourinterestsandhobbiesattheweekend.Forexample,IwouldliketochoosesomebookstoreadandcommunicatewithothersafterreadingThirdly,wecantakepartinvolunteeringactivities,likevisitingtheoldpeople'shomeordoingsomecleaninginpublicplaces.Lastbutnotleast,tomakeourselveshealthier,takingexerciseisagoodchoice.Inshort,let'smakegooduseofourweekends2019年真題在線據(jù)悉，我國青少年的近視率居全球第一，70%的學(xué)生有視力方面的問題．為引起廣大青少年的重視，某英語報(bào)刊正在開展以"SavingOurEyesight"為題的征文活動(dòng)．請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文投稿，分析造成青少年近視的原因并提出保護(hù)視力的合理建議．要求：1．語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范．2．所有提示須全部用上，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名．4.80詞左右（文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）．SavingOurEyesightAsthesayinggoes,"Eyesarethewindowtothesoul（心靈）"However,70%ofushavepooreyesight.Whathascausedthisproblem?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,let’stakecareofoureyessothatwecanseeourbrightfuture.考題解析【詳解】這是一篇話題作文。要求以"SavingOurEyesight"為題，寫一篇關(guān)于保護(hù)眼睛的文章，分析造成青少年近視的原因并提出保護(hù)視力的合理建議。寫作時(shí)所有提示須全部用上，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。作文的首尾都已經(jīng)給出，中間可以用兩段來進(jìn)行寫作，首先分析造成青少年近視的原因：比如在床上閱讀或者眼睛離書太近。此外，觀看手機(jī)或電視太長時(shí)間，少運(yùn)動(dòng)也會(huì)導(dǎo)致視力下降。然后介紹保護(hù)視力的合理建議：姿勢端正。注意休息，放松我們的眼睛，吃些對(duì)眼睛有益的食物，如胡蘿卜或魚。注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)的使用，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。恰當(dāng)使用介詞，做到行文流暢，條例清晰。滿分范文SavingOurEyesightAsthesayinggoes,“Eyesarethewindowtothesoul（心靈）.”However,70%ofushavepooreyesight.Whathascausedthisproblem?Themainre