作文 07 海南卷 - 三年(2019-2021)中考英語滿分作文解析

作文07海南卷2021年真題在線為迎接英國某中學文化交流團到海南博物館參加即將舉辦的中國國畫展，博物館在海南某英文報上發(fā)布了一則志愿者招聘廣告。假定你是紅星中學的李華，想成為其中一員，請根據(jù)廣告內(nèi)容和要求寫一封自薦信。要求：1.要點齊全，適當發(fā)揮；2.行文連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名；4.80詞左右（文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua.astudentfromHongXingMiddleSchool.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua考題解析【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為書信作文，要注意書信標準格式。題目已給出要點提示，學生應(yīng)按照要點進行寫作，不要遺漏要點。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時應(yīng)用第一人稱，時態(tài)根據(jù)所述內(nèi)容正確使用現(xiàn)在時、過去時或?qū)頃r。文章應(yīng)包含全部要點，并可進行適當發(fā)揮，不要出現(xiàn)單詞拼寫、語法時態(tài)使用錯誤。滿分范文DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua,astudentfromHongXingMiddleSchool.Iwanttobeamemberofthevolunteers.Firstofall,I’vebeenlearningEnglishfor8years.IspeakfluentEnglishsoIhavenodifficultyinexpressingmyselfclearlyinEnglish.Besides,Istartedtolearnpaintingattheageof4,andIhaveagoodknowledgeofChinesepaintings.IwillbeabletotellstudentsfromEnglandaboutChinesepaintingsandculture.Finally,I’moutgoingandgoodwithpeople.AndI’llbetotallyfreeinAugust.I’msureIamtherightpersonyouarelookingfor.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua2020年真題在線周末是我們生活中重要的一部分，合理利用周末時間對青少年至關(guān)重要。某校英語雜志社就“如何讓周末生活更有意義”開展征文活動。請你根據(jù)下面的思維導(dǎo)圖，以“HowtoMakeOurweekendsmoremeaningful”為題，用英語寫一篇短文投稿。要求：1.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范。2.所有提示須全部用上，并作適當發(fā)揮。3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名。4.80詞左右（文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。HowtomakeOurWeekendsMoreMeaningfulLifeonweekendsisanimportantpartofourdailylife.Howcanwemakeourweekendsmoremeaningful?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inshort,let’smakegooduseofourweekends!考題解析【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作，寫作時要按說明文格式寫。在寫作時介紹周末的生活是我們?nèi)粘Ｉ畹闹匾糠?；第二段介紹我們?nèi)绾巫屩苣┥罡幸饬x；最后一段總結(jié)要充分利用周末。2.例文點評：例文采用三段式；用第一、三人稱來敘述內(nèi)容；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，在介紹讓周末生活更有意義的建議時，敘述完整且條理清晰。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注意敘述順序，符合邏輯關(guān)系。3.高分亮點：短語：firstofall；spendtimedoingsth；forexample；wouldliketo；communicatewith；takepartin；makegooduseof。句型：Herebe句型；It's+形容詞+todosth?！军c睛】滿分范文HowtoMakeOurWeekendsMoreMeaningfulLifeonweekendsisanimportantpartofourdailylife.Howcanwemakeourweekendsmoremeaningful?Herearesomeofmysuggestions.Firstofall,theweekendisagreattimeforfamilytogettogether.It'sgoodtohelpourparentsdosomehousework.Thatcanhelpusunderstandeachotherbetterandshowourloveforthem.Secondly,weshouldspendtimedevelopingourinterestsandhobbiesattheweekend.Forexample,IwouldliketochoosesomebookstoreadandcommunicatewithothersafterreadingThirdly,wecantakepartinvolunteeringactivities,likevisitingtheoldpeople'shomeordoingsomecleaninginpublicplaces.Lastbutnotleast,tomakeourselveshealthier,takingexerciseisagoodchoice.Inshort,let'smakegooduseofourweekends2019年真題在線據(jù)悉，我國青少年的近視率居全球第一，70%的學生有視力方面的問題．為引起廣大青少年的重視，某英語報刊正在開展以"SavingOurEyesight"為題的征文活動．請根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文投稿，分析造成青少年近視的原因并提出保護視力的合理建議．要求：1．語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范．2．所有提示須全部用上，并作適當發(fā)揮．3．文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名．4.80詞左右（文章開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）．SavingOurEyesightAsthesayinggoes,"Eyesarethewindowtothesoul（心靈）"However,70%ofushavepooreyesight.Whathascausedthisproblem?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,let’stakecareofoureyessothatwecanseeourbrightfuture.考題解析【詳解】這是一篇話題作文。要求以"SavingOurEyesight"為題，寫一篇關(guān)于保護眼睛的文章，分析造成青少年近視的原因并提出保護視力的合理建議。寫作時所有提示須全部用上，并作適當發(fā)揮。作文的首尾都已經(jīng)給出，中間可以用兩段來進行寫作，首先分析造成青少年近視的原因：比如在床上閱讀或者眼睛離書太近。此外，觀看手機或電視太長時間，少運動也會導(dǎo)致視力下降。然后介紹保護視力的合理建議：姿勢端正。注意休息，放松我們的眼睛，吃些對眼睛有益的食物，如胡蘿卜或魚。注意人稱和時態(tài)的使用，時態(tài)應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。恰當使用介詞，做到行文流暢，條例清晰。滿分范文SavingOurEyesightAsthesayinggoes,“Eyesarethewindowtothesoul（心靈）.”However,70%ofushavepooreyesight.Whathascausedthisproblem?Themainre