作文 22 陜西卷 - 三年(2019-2021)中考英語(yǔ)滿分作文解析

作文09陜西卷2021年真題在線人們常說：“服務(wù)他人，快樂自己?！蹦銣?zhǔn)備利用即將到來的暑假去社區(qū)做一些服務(wù)工作。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下表格提示內(nèi)容，給你們學(xué)校的英文報(bào)寫一篇短文，介紹你的計(jì)劃。PlacesActivitiesCommunitycenterhelptheold,singsongs,tellstories,…Communityhospital(s)handouttheleaflets（宣傳冊(cè)）onCOVID-19,…Communitypark(s)pickuprubbish,waterflowers,………要求：1.參考表格提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文章不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）Asweallknow,“Servingotherscanbringushappiness.”Summerholidayiscoming,I’ll____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’msureI’llhaveameaningfulholidaythissummer.考題解析【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文。介紹自己的暑假計(jì)劃。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文主要采用一般將來時(shí)。根據(jù)所給的提示要點(diǎn)，介紹自己暑假即將要進(jìn)行的一些社區(qū)服務(wù)工作。寫作時(shí)保持主謂一致性，邏輯性要強(qiáng)，無語(yǔ)法和標(biāo)點(diǎn)錯(cuò)誤。滿分范文Asweallknow,“Servingotherscanbringushappiness.”Summerholidayiscoming.I’lldosomeserviceinmycommunitytomakeitbetter.First,I’llgotoourcommunitycentertohelpandcheeruptheoldpeople.Forexample,Icansingsongsortellthemsomeinterestingstories.Second,I’mgoingtohandouttheleafletsonCOVID-19atourcommunityhospitalorotherplaces.Next,I’malsoplanningtopickupandsortrubbishwithmyfriendsinourcommunitypark.What’smore,I’llhelpthekidswiththeirlessonsandlookafterthemaswell.I’msureI’llhaveameaningfulholidaythissummer.2020年真題在線某英文網(wǎng)站開展關(guān)于“美麗校園,健康生活”的征稿活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下圖示內(nèi)容積極投稿,倡導(dǎo)同學(xué)們“愛護(hù)校園環(huán)境,健康快樂生活”。keeptheschoolcleandosportslookafteryourselfother1.參考提示內(nèi)容,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;2.語(yǔ)句通順,意思連貫,書寫工整;3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息(姓名、校名和地名等);4.詞數(shù):不少于70詞。(開頭和結(jié)尾已給出,但不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。)_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考題解析【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于說明文寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)根據(jù)圖片內(nèi)容提示講述學(xué)生健康校園生活的一些建議。2.例文點(diǎn)評(píng)：例文主要用第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作，主要采用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫作。介紹自學(xué)生健康校園生活的一些建議分成四點(diǎn)來寫，敘述完整且條理清晰。3.高分亮點(diǎn)：短語(yǔ)：needto;makeit;sharewith;forexample;dosomesports；andsoon；lookafter；suchas；getonwellwith。句型：because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句；it做形式主語(yǔ)的句子；if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。滿分范文Studentsneedtohaveahealthyschoollife.Whatcanwedotomakeit?HereI’vegotsomeideastosharewithyou.First,it’simportanttokeepourschoolclean.Forexample,wecancleanthedesksandflooreveryday,becausegoodenvironmentishelpfultoourstudyandhealth.Second,it’sgoodtodosomesportslikerunning,playingbasketballandsoon.Third,we’dbetterlookafterourselveswell,suchaswashinghandsintimeandwearingmaskswhenitisnecessary.Finally,ifwealwaysgetonwellwitheachotherandkeephappy,we’llenjoyahappyandhealthyschoollife.2019年真題在線即將畢業(yè)的你，將如何處理初中階段的各種書籍和筆記呢?假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給學(xué)校英文報(bào)寫一封電子郵件，分享你處理這些書籍和筆記的計(jì)劃與理由。提示詞：put…intodifferentkindsgive…tohaveabooksale…要求：1.參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮：2.語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整：3.文章不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息（姓名，校名和地名等）4.詞數(shù)：不少于70個(gè)詞，（開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。）DearEditorMynameisLiHua，I'mgoingtograduatesoon，I'dliketosharesomeideasabouthowtodealwithmybooksandnotebooksThesearemyideas，Ihopetheycanhelp.Yours，LiHua考題解析【詳解】即將畢業(yè)的你，將如何處理初中階段的各種書籍和筆記呢?假如你是李華，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給學(xué)校英文報(bào)寫一封電子郵件，分享你處理這些書籍和筆記的計(jì)劃與理由?？忌紫纫J(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示認(rèn)真審題，確定文章的中心。注意文章文體、人稱和時(shí)態(tài)。運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)亩陶Z(yǔ)表達(dá)中心思想，增加作文的可讀性。完成提示詞時(shí)也要符合事實(shí)。溫馨提醒：考生必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等?！军c(diǎn)睛】這篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。滿分范文DearEditorMynameisLiHua，I'mgoingtograduatesoon，I'dliketosharesomeideasabouthowtodealwithmybooksandnotebooksFirstofall,Iwillputallmybooksintodifferentkinds.Secondly,I'mgoingtogivemytextbooktomycousin.Inthisway,hecanstudyathomeduringthesummervacation.Besides,Iwanttoholdabooksalesothatchildrencanbuypicturebooksatalowprice.Again,Idecidedtokeepmynotes.Theybringmema