專題09 書面表達-2023年中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題特快專遞（廣州專用）

2023廣州市中考英語逆襲沖刺名校模擬真題速遞第二期專題09書面表達一、電子郵件1．（2022·廣東廣州·廣州大學附屬中學?？级＃┘僭O你是李華，你的外國朋友Jack想學習漢語，希望你能給他一些建議，請以下列提示信息，寫一封電子郵件。1.漢語使用范圍廣，占全球1/4，漢語難學，但要有信心2.大膽交流，不要怕犯錯；多聽中文歌曲，多讀中文報紙雜志3.其他建議……（請你補充）注意：1.詞數(shù)：不低于80（文章的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）2.不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息。DearJack,It’ssoexcitingtoknowthatyouareinterestedinlearningChinese.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua【答案】例文DearJack,It’ssoexcitingtoknowthatyouareinterestedinlearningChinese.Chineseisthemostwidelyusedlanguageintheword,andalmost25%ofthepopulationintheworldspeakit.Althoughitisnoteasytolearnitwellinashorttime,trytobeconfidentallthetime.Herearesomesuggestions.First,itisagoodideatolistentoChinesesongs.Second,readingChinesenewspaperandchattingwithyourChinesefriendsinChinesearealsoeffectiveways.Aboveall,don’tbe

afraidofmakingmistakes.Trytospeakitbravely.IhopeyoucanhavefuninlearningChinese.Inmyopinion,Ithinkpracticeisthemostimportant.Practicemakesperfect.TrytopractisemoreandyoucanspeakChinesebetterandbetter.Yours,LiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于郵件寫作，寫作時要按郵件格式寫，主要是根據(jù)提示內容給他一些學習漢語的建議，可適當增加細節(jié)。2.寫作指導：本文時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時為主，中心內容按照提示要求分層次來寫，需要敘述完整，保證條理清晰。在最后還需要給出來除表格提示之外的自己的建議。二、材料作文2．（2022·廣東廣州·?？既＃W校英語報舉行“未來之城”征文活動。請你用英文寫一篇短文投稿，介紹你心目中的未來城市，并分享你在未來之城生活的想法。短文需包括下圖所以提示內容。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于80詞；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實的姓名、地點和所在的學校名詞。OurCityoftheFutureWhatwillourcitybelikein2050?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

OurCityoftheFuture

Whatwillourcitybelikein2050?Ithinkitwillbequitedifferentfromnow.Thelivingenvironmentwillbegreatlyimprovedinthefollowingways.

Thehouseswillbebothgreenandsmart.Everythingwillbemadebyenvironmental-friendlymaterials.What’smore,thehousewillbeconnectedtotheshopsandhospitalssothatyoucanorderallkindsofserviceswithoutgoingout.Mostofthetimepeoplewillworkathomeandtheywillhavefewerworkinghoursbecauseofnewtechnologies.Ifyouwanttogotravelling,therewillbenotrafficjamatall.Youcantakedifferentkindsoftransportations,suchastheflyingbuses:andthedriverlesscars.ThemostexcitingthingforstudentswillbethewidelyuseofE-booksandVRtechnologyatschool.Asaresult,therewillbepaperlessexamsandmorefuninlearning.

Ourcityin2050willbefullofhopeandweshouldworkhardtorealizeit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般將來時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示介紹你心目中的未來城市，并分享你在未來之城生活的想法。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹未來城市的房子；第二步，介紹未來城市的工作和交通情況；第三步，最后介紹未來的學校。[亮點詞匯]①What’smore而且②suchas比如③Asaresult結果④befullof充滿[高分句型]①thehousewillbeconnectedtotheshopsandhospitalssothatyoucanorderallkindsofserviceswithoutgoingout.（sothat引導的目的狀語從句）②Ifyouwanttogotravelling,therewillbenotrafficjamatall.（if引導的條件狀語從句）3．（2022·廣東廣州·?？级＃┠愀鶕?jù)如表提示，用英語寫一篇短文向?？陡?，闡述書寫的重要性。你的觀點在電腦普及時代，書寫依然重要你的理由(1)書寫是中國傳統(tǒng)文化的一個重要組成部分，所以練習書寫有助于傳承文化；(2)每個人的字跡都有個人意義，例如手寫信更能表達情感；(3)……(再自擬至少一個理由加以闡述)[參考詞匯]handwriting書法；字跡；書寫(不可數(shù)名詞)；inherit傳承(及物動詞)TheimportanceofhandwritingNowadaysmanyChinesestudentsnolongerpaymuchattentiontotheirhandwriting.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:TheimportanceofhandwritingNowadaysmanyChinesestudentsnolongerpaymuchattentiontohandwriting.Theybelievetheirkeyboardscandothework.However,Ithinkthathandwritingisstillimportant.Firstofall,handwritingisanimportantpartintraditionalChineseculture.It’simportanttopassonthetraditionalculturetopracticewritingChinesecharacters.GoodhandwritingcanmakeusproudasaChineseandmakeusloveourcountryfurther.Next,there’sacertainmeaninginone’shandwriting.Forexample,somewaysofwritingcanshowfeelingsinwritingletters.Also,writingChinesecharacterscarefullycanhelpyouformahabitoflearningChinesewell.Atlast,agoodhandwritingcanhelpyougetgoodgradesinexamsfromyourexcellentlookofpapers.Allinall,it’severyone’sdutytowritecharacterswellandtakeactiontobegoodatwriting.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文，為材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，考生應注意不要遺漏，適當增加細節(jié)完整表述內容。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明自己的觀點；第二步，介紹自己認為書寫仍然重要的理由。[亮點詞匯]①firstofall首先②passon傳遞③atlast最后[高分句型]①Ithinkthathandwritingisstillimportant（that引導賓語從句）②It’simportanttopassonthetraditionalculturetopracticewritingChinesecharacters（動詞不定式作主語）4．（2022·廣東廣州·?？级＃┌倌旯艠?，是歲月的見證，更是文化傳承的載體。近日，你所在的學校發(fā)現(xiàn)一棵有著三百余年歷史的古樹，飽經(jīng)滄桑，部分樹干已枯萎。作為學校英語校刊的負責人，你向全校師生發(fā)出一封英文倡議書，請根據(jù)下面表格的提示內容，呼吁大家采取行動保護古樹?，F(xiàn)狀樹齡大，易受天氣影響、易患?。蝗祟惢顒?，如人類遷徙、砍伐等。意義古樹是重要的自然資源，也是歷史和文化的標志。保護措施1.合理澆灌，保持土壤濕潤；2.請你補充；3.請你補充。注意：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右（文章開頭已給出，不計入詞數(shù)）；2.內容必須包括表格的所有要點；3.不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。參考詞匯：遷徙migrate

資源resourceDearstudentsandteachers,TodayI’mgoingtotalkabouttheprotectionofancienttrees.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Dearstudentsandteachers,TodayI’mgoingtotalkabouttheprotectionofancienttrees.Thisisanancienttreewithahistoryofmorethan300years.Aftermanyvicissitudes,partofitstrunkhaswithered.Therearetworeasons.Ontheonehand,thisancienttreeisold.Itissusceptibletotheweather.Itiseasytogetsick.Ontheotherhand,duetohumanactivities,suchashumanmigration,logging,etc.Ancienttreesareofgreatsignificance.Itisanimportantnaturalresourceandasymbolofhistoryandculture.Ithinkweshouldprotectitnow.First,waterreasonablytokeepthesoilmoist.Second,carryoutthepreventionandcontrolofdiseasesandpestsofancienttrees.Third,strengthenpublicityandeducationtoraisetheawarenessofthewholepeopletoprotect.Finally,Ihopeallofuscantakeactiontoprotectancienttrees.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：本題給出了部分提示，考生應注意不要遺漏表格中“現(xiàn)狀，意義”要點，適當添加細節(jié)，并對“保護措施”部分進行補充，突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表面寫作意圖，指出古樹的悠久歷史；第二步，具體闡述寫作內容，重點講述造成古樹現(xiàn)狀的原因，古樹的意義以及對古樹要采取的保護措施；第三步，總結，呼吁同學們積極的保護古樹。[亮點詞匯]①ontheonehand一方面②ontheotherhand另一方面③asymbolof…一種……的象征④takeaction采取行動[高分句型]①Thisisanancienttreewithahistoryofmorethan300years.(with+名詞短語，作后置定語)②Ontheotherhand,duetohumanactivities,suchashumanmigration,logging,etc.(用suchas舉例)5．（2023春·廣東廣州·九年級廣州市駿景中學?？家荒＃┱埜鶕?jù)表格所給的信息，寫出Mary的夢想之路并談談你的夢想，寫一篇80詞左右的短文，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Mary的夢想之路1.出生于一個貧窮的家庭。2.有寫作方面的才能。3.18歲有機會上大學。4.英語成績不好，但不灰心，一直努力。5.最后實現(xiàn)了夢想，成為了作家。我的夢想……我將如何實現(xiàn)夢想1.努力學習2.……Marywasbornin_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Marywasborninapoorfamily.Shelikeswritingbecauseshehasatalentforit.Shehadachancetogotocollegeat18.ShedidnotgetgoodgradesinEnglish,butsheneverlostheartandkepttryingtogetintoagooduniversity.Withhermother’sencouragement,shefinallyrealizedherdreamandbecameawriter.Mydreamistobeateacher.Ihopetohelpthechildreninthepoorareas.I’mgoingtostudyhardtogetintocollege.Iplantolearnhowtogetalongwithchildren.IbelieveIwillbeagoodteacher.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文。②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時和一般將來時”；③提示：根據(jù)提示材料分別介紹Mary的夢想和我的夢想。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹Mary的夢想之路。第二步，介紹我的夢想。第三步，介紹實現(xiàn)夢想的方法。[亮點詞匯]①haveatalentfor對……有天賦②keepdoingsth持續(xù)做某事③getalongwith與……和睦相處[高分句型]①Shelikeswritingbecauseshehasatalentforit.（because引導原因狀語從句）②Mydreamistobeateacher（動詞不定式作表語）6．（2022·廣東廣州·廣東廣雅中學?？级＃﹦趧咏逃囵B(yǎng)全面發(fā)展的人。假如你是學生會的主席LiHua，你將在校園廣播EnglishToday中號召全校同學加入勞動實踐活動。請根據(jù)以下思維導圖，寫一篇英語演講稿。注意:1.短文應包含所有要點，可以適當發(fā)揮，使文章連貫；2.詞數(shù)80左右，不包含所給的單詞；3.不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。Dearschoolmates,Doyouthinklaboreducationisanecessaryskillforeveryone?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ChairmanoftheStudentUnionLiHua【答案】例文：Dearschoolmates,Doyouthinklaboreducationisanecessaryskillforeveryone?Wecanfindtheonlythingweneedtodoathomeisstudying.Weevendon’tneedtodoanyhousework.Thisisbecauseofourlackofthissense.Weareusedtobeinglazyinourfreetime.Infact,doingsomehouseworkorotherlaborpracticeisreallygoodforus.Itcanhelpusbuildstrongerbodiesandmakeushealthier.What’smore,wewillalsobeindependentthroughlaborpractice.So,wecanbenefitalotfromit.Whynotdoit?Atlast,whatIwanttosayisthatweshouldofferhelptoourparentsactively.Maybetheyaretiredfromwork,buttheystillhavetolookafterus.Wecanhelpthemdohousework.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldtakepartinsomecourseslikethis.Wearesupposedtoknowhowhardourparentswork.Besides,whenwearefree,wecantakepartinsportsactivities.Let’stakepartinlaboreducationtogether!ChairmanoftheStudentUnionLiHua【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于材料作文寫作，要求按照所給的要點提示寫一篇演講稿，介紹勞動教育的意義。注意寫作時要點要齊全，同時也可進行合理而又緊扣主題的發(fā)揮。2.寫作指導：本文應該用第一、三人稱來敘述；時態(tài)采用一般現(xiàn)在時；文章開頭已給出，寫作時，注意承接上文，根據(jù)要點提示具體介紹勞動教育的原因，意義以及建議；文中一定要包含題干中列出的所有要點；可以運用一些短語和常用句型為文章增添色彩；注意單詞書寫的準確度，語法運用的準確度，上下文注意連接的流暢度，以及邏輯合理。7．（2022·廣東廣州·執(zhí)信中學校考三模）在過去五年，廣州持續(xù)推進黑臭水體治理、污水廠建設、碧道建設等工作，水污染防治取得歷史性成就，被評為“國家黑臭水體治理示范城市”。假如你是中學生李華，在端午期間收到外國網(wǎng)友Max的郵件,他對有龍舟民俗的獵德河（TheLiedeRiver）很感興趣，請你根據(jù)以下表格提示，介紹獵德河的今昔變化。狀況原因看法過去臟、臭工廠污染、傾倒垃圾請你補充現(xiàn)在水清岸綠，可舉辦龍舟比賽政府、居民的努力注意:1.詞數(shù):80字左右（文章開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）2.不得透露學校、姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。DearMax,GreatchangeshavetakenplacetotheLiedeRiverwhichliesinmyhometown,Guangzhou.I’mgladtotellyousomethingaboutit._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearMax,GreatchangeshavetakenplacetotheLiedeRiverwhichliesinmyhometown,Guangzhou.I’mgladtotellyousomethingaboutit.Inthepast,thewaterintheriverwasverydirtybecauseofthefactorypollutionandtherubbishfromthefactories.Manylivingthingsintheriverdied.Peoplecouldnotlivehappily.Sothegovernmenttookmeasurestostopthefactoriesfrompouringthedirtywaterintotheriver.Peoplealsorealizedthedanger.Theyworkedtogethertodosomethingfortheenvironment.Nowthewaterintheriverisveryclear.Therearemanytreesaroundthebankoftheriver.Theyareverybeautiful.Evensomebirdsflytherefreely.Canyoubelieve?Wecanhaveadragonboatracehere.Wouldyoucometomyhometown?I’msureyouwilllikeit.Atlast,Iwanttosayit’severyone’sdutytoprotecttheenvironment.Ifeveryonedoessomethingforit,thewholeworldwillbeamorebeautifulplace.Hopetocomehere.

Yours,LiHua【詳解】題干解讀：該文是一封郵件，寫作時按照已給郵件格式補充完整。寫作時應承接短文開頭；按漢語提示用英語敘述獵德河的今昔對比及發(fā)生變化的原因；最后陳述自己對環(huán)保的一點看法。寫作指導：本文應該用第三人稱來敘述內容；時態(tài)采用一般過去時敘述過去，一般現(xiàn)在時敘述現(xiàn)在的狀況；描述今昔對比變化要敘述原因，以此引出作者的觀點；可適當補充內容，使文章更流暢。三、書信作文8．（2023春·廣東廣州·九年級?？家荒＃┏跞龑W生Sandy面臨中考，面對父母和老師的期望，以及每天堆積如山的作業(yè)感到非?？鄲馈Ｗ蛱焖驗榭戳艘恍r的電視和媽媽吵架，最后摔門而去。于是她寫信給老師傾訴煩惱，請你根據(jù)下列提示，以老師Nancy的身份用英語給她寫一封回信。要求：不少于100詞。提示：1.如何舒緩目前的壓力；2.如何安排好每天的學習和休息；3.如何處理與父母的關系。DearSandy,Iamreallygladthatyoucanshareyourproblemsandfeelingswithme._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Nancy【答案】例文DearSandy,Iamreallygladthatyoucanshareyourproblemsandfeelingswithme.Hereismyadvice.First,it’sagoodchoicetotakeupahobbytohelpyourelaxandreduceyourpressure.Second,youcanmakeplansforyoureverydaylife.Afteryoustudyforabouttwohours,youcantakeawalkoutsideandtrytorelax.Besides,don’tstayuplate.It’snotgoodforyourhealth.Third,neverarguewithyourparents.Youshouldlearntounderstandthemandspendsometimecommunicatingwiththem.Discussyourproblemswiththemandtellthemyourideas.Theywillhelpyoufindbetterwaystosolvethem.Inaword,youwillhaveahappierlifewithlesspressureaslongasyoustudyhardandoftentalkwithyourparents.Yours,Nancy【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為書信作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)綜合使用“一般現(xiàn)在時”和“一般將來時”；③提示：寫作要點已給出，要結合提示問題，針對Sandy的問題給出建議，適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖。借用“給出建議”來引出重點介紹的內容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內容。從“如何舒緩目前的壓力、如何安排好每天的學習和休息、如何處理與父母的關系”三個方面重點介紹；第三步，書寫結語。表達“希望對方有一個更快樂、壓力更小的生活”的愿望。[亮點詞匯]①share...with...和……分享……②takeupahobby養(yǎng)成一種興趣愛好③makeplansfor為……制定計劃④stayuplate熬夜[高分句型]①Youshouldlearntounderstandthemandspendsometimecommunicatingwiththem.（and連接并列結構）②Inaword,youwillhaveahappierlifewithlesspressureaslongasyoustudyhardandoftentalkwithyourparents.（aslongas引導的條件狀語從句）9．（2023·廣州·九年級一模）中國傳統(tǒng)文化深受世界各國人們的喜愛，而廣東則以嶺南文化而出名，假如你是李華，你們學校將要舉辦嶺南文化節(jié)（LingnanCulturalFestival）活動，你美國的筆友Mike想了解本次活動的細節(jié)。請你給他回信，內容包括：（1）時間：下周六上午；地點：學校操場；參加人員：全體師生；（2）介紹嶺南文化節(jié)的活動（至少兩項），注意事項（至少一點）；（3）邀請他通過網(wǎng)絡觀看和體驗本次活動。作文要求：（1）不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出現(xiàn)學校的真實名稱和考生的真實姓名。（2）語句連貫，字數(shù)80詞以上，作文的開頭和結尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)也不必抄寫在答題卡上。DearMike,Howareyou?I’mgladtohearfromyou.It’sknownthatGuangdongisabirthplaceofLingnanCultureinChina._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyou’llenjoythefestivalonline.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文It’sknownthatGuangdongisabirthplaceofLingnanCultureinChina.OurschoolisgoingtoholdtheLingnanCultureFestivalonJun.12,2022,whichwillbeheldontheplaygroundoftheschool.Allteachersandstudentswilltakepartintheactivity,andsomesocialgroupswillbeinvitedtoperformfolkcustoms.Therearetwomajorprogramstoholdthisculturalfestival:“musicappreciation”and“Cantoneseoperaappreciation”.ItisworthnotingthatafterthewonderfulCantoneseoperaperformance,theactorswillturnovertothestagewearingoperacosturmes.Weshouldpayattentiontosafetywhenparticipatinginactivities.Youcanwatchandexperiencethisactivitythrough5Gnetwork.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，需寫為書信格式；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時；③提示：寫作主題已給出，寫作時主要包含提示要點寫清楚舉辦信息，在介紹活動時注意圍繞文化主題自己展開描寫，寫作時注意不需抄寫開頭和結尾內容。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹文化節(jié)舉辦的時間、地點和參加人員；第二步，具體描寫文化節(jié)上的活動和注意事項；第三步，邀請Mike通過網(wǎng)絡觀看。[亮點詞匯]①takepartin參加②participatein參加③payattentionto注意[高分句型]①OurschoolisgoingtoholdtheLingnanCultureFestivalonJun.12,2022,whichwillbeheldontheplaygroundoftheschool.（定語從句）②ItisworthnotingthatafterthewonderfulCantoneseoperaperformance,theactorswillturnovertothestagewearingoperacosturmes.（主語從句+時間狀語從句）四、日記10．（2023春·廣東廣州·九年級?？家荒＃┍贝笮Ｓ牙钊A回到母校做了一次題為《為了理想，努力奮斗吧！》的演講，作為九年級學生，即將初中畢業(yè)的你，聽了校友的演講后受到了極大的鼓舞。請寫一篇英文日記，為自己制定些學習計劃，包括以下要點：1.遠離手機和電腦游戲，全身心放在學習上；2.學習計劃（請補充2點）；3.業(yè)余活動（請補充1點）；4.聽了演講后，你的收獲和感受。注意：1.不得透露學校，學生姓名等任何個人信息，否則不予評分。2.字數(shù)不少于80字。October10th

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