讀后續(xù)寫+花瓶、頭發(fā)與手足情：意外中的愛+講義 高二上學(xué)期12月冬季聯(lián)考英語試卷

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。MyyoungerbrotherandIwerehomewatchingcartoonswhilemyfathersleptandmymotherwasoutshopping.Ileftmybrotherinthelivingroomandwenttogetsomethingtodrink.AsIwaspullingsomeorangejuice,Iheardsomethingbreak.FirstsIlookedintoseeifmyfatherhadwokenupandhehadn’t.ThenIquicklyrantoseewhathadhappened.WhenIwentintothelivingroom.Iwasshocked.Mybrotherhadbrokenmymother’sfavoritevase.“Whatdidyoudo?”Iasked.“Ibrokeit!”Mybrotheranswered,“Itwasanaccident.”Knowingthathewasshockedandfrightened,andnotwantinghimtogetintrouble,Ididwhatanyfriendwoulddo.Itriedtohelphim.Iquicklyranandgotsomeglue.Ididn’tknowwhattimemymotherwasgoingtobebackorwhenmyfatherwasgoingtowakeup,soItriedtohurry.Ianxiouslygatheredupallofthebrokenpiecesandstartedtogluethemtogether.IttookmeanhourbutfinallyIfixedthevase.Thencametherealdisaster.“Oh,myGod!Oh,myGod!”Iscreamed.IhadfixedthevasebutIhadaccidentallygluedmyhairtoit!WhilemybrotherlookedatmelikeIwassomekindoffool,Icarriedthevase—withmyhairattachedtoit—intothebathroom.Ilookedinthemirror.“Mybeautifulhair,”Icried.Realizingthattherewasnowaytopullmyhairfromthevase,Igrabbedapairofscissors.Witheverysinglestrand(縷)ofhairthatIcut,Icriedagain.Myhairwasruined,andthevaselookedasifawigwasattachedtoit!AsIwasleavingthebathroomwithmyridiculousnewhairdo,Iheardthekeyturninthefrontdoor.注意：續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。Mymotherwasback!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WhileIwaslyingonmybed,IrealizedwhatIhaddonewasanactoffriendship.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、文章大意作者和弟弟在家，父母分別在睡覺和外出購物。作者去拿飲料時聽到東西破碎的聲音，發(fā)現(xiàn)弟弟打碎了媽媽最愛的花瓶。出于不想讓弟弟受罰的心理，作者用膠水試圖修復(fù)花瓶，結(jié)果卻不小心把自己的頭發(fā)粘在了花瓶上。作者試圖把頭發(fā)從花瓶上弄下來但無果，最后只好用剪刀剪掉頭發(fā)，這時媽媽回來了。二、故事山分析開場：作者和弟弟在家，父母不在身邊，營造了一個相對自由但也容易引發(fā)意外的場景。上升：弟弟打碎花瓶，這是事件的開端，引發(fā)了后續(xù)一系列的動作。高潮：作者用膠水粘花瓶卻把頭發(fā)粘住，然后不得不剪掉頭發(fā)，情節(jié)在此達(dá)到緊張的頂點。下降：媽媽回來，緊張的氛圍即將得到緩解。結(jié)局：未給出，留給續(xù)寫。三、伏筆及續(xù)寫回應(yīng)伏筆：弟弟打碎花瓶時父親在睡覺，這為作者有時間去處理花瓶事件埋下伏筆。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：在作者處理花瓶問題的過程中，父親都沒有醒來，使得情節(jié)得以順利發(fā)展。伏筆：作者不知道媽媽什么時候回來，增加了事件處理的緊張感。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：媽媽突然回來，讓作者陷入了更加尷尬的境地。伏筆：作者為了不讓弟弟受罰決定幫忙，體現(xiàn)了對弟弟的保護(hù)。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：在后續(xù)情節(jié)中，這種保護(hù)弟弟的心理得到了強(qiáng)化，盡管自己遭遇了頭發(fā)被剪的尷尬，但出發(fā)點是對弟弟的愛護(hù)。伏筆：作者選擇用膠水粘花瓶，暗示可能會出現(xiàn)意外。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：意外發(fā)生，頭發(fā)被粘住，推動情節(jié)發(fā)展到高潮。伏筆：作者聽到鑰匙轉(zhuǎn)動的聲音，預(yù)示著媽媽即將出現(xiàn)，制造緊張氛圍。續(xù)寫回應(yīng)：媽媽回來看到作者和花瓶的樣子，引發(fā)后續(xù)的情節(jié)發(fā)展。四、續(xù)寫要點第一段：媽媽的反應(yīng)：媽媽看到作者和花瓶先是驚訝，然后可能會因為作者保護(hù)弟弟的初衷而感到欣慰，同時也會安慰作者關(guān)于頭發(fā)的事情。作者的感受：作者從緊張和尷尬中逐漸放松，感受到媽媽的理解。第二段：作者對友誼的思考：作者躺在床上，深刻意識到自己對弟弟的保護(hù)是出于深厚的情誼，這種情誼超越了物質(zhì)和外表。未來的行動：作者決定以后在面對類似情況時，依然會選擇保護(hù)弟弟，并且會更加機(jī)智地處理問題。五、情感線文章開始時作者是輕松地在拿飲料，聽到花瓶破碎聲后變得緊張和擔(dān)憂，擔(dān)心弟弟會受罰。在處理花瓶過程中，作者變得焦慮，尤其是頭發(fā)被粘住時更加慌亂。媽媽回來后，作者感到極度的尷尬和不安。最后躺在床上，作者從對頭發(fā)被毀的難過轉(zhuǎn)變?yōu)閷ψ约罕Ｗo(hù)弟弟行為的欣慰，意識到親情和友誼的珍貴。六、故事線作者和弟弟在家，父母分別在睡覺和外出。弟弟打碎媽媽最愛的花瓶。作者用膠水試圖修復(fù)花瓶，卻把頭發(fā)粘住。作者無奈剪掉頭發(fā)，這時媽媽回來。媽媽看到作者和花瓶的情景。作者躺在床上思考自己的行為，意識到對弟弟的情誼。七、主旨升華句（英文）Truefriendshipisshownnotintimesofease,butinthefaceoftrouble.（真正的友誼不是在安逸時體現(xiàn)，而是在面對麻煩時顯現(xiàn)。）Familybondsarethetiesthatbindus,makingusdoselflessacts.（親情是將我們聯(lián)系在一起的紐帶，讓我們做出無私的行為。）Sometimes,sacrificeinthenameoffriendshipisthemostpreciousgift.（有時，以友誼之名做出的犧牲是最珍貴的禮物。）Theloveforourfamilymembersoftendrivesustomakeunexpectedsacrifices.（對家人的愛常常驅(qū)使我們做出意想不到的犧牲。）Inthejourneyoflife,actsoffriendshipwithinthefamilyarelikelighthouses,guidingus.（在人生旅途中，家庭中的友誼之舉就像燈塔，指引著我們。）八、寫作示范第一篇Mymotherwasback!

Shestaredatmeandthevasewithamixofshockandconfusion.Istoodthere,rootedtothespot,waitingforhertoexplode.Butinstead,sheburstoutlaughing.Shesaid,“Yousillychild,whydidyoudothis?”Itoldherabouttryingtoprotectmybrother.Shethenhuggedmeandsaid,“Yourkindnessismorepreciousthanthevase.”Ifeltawaveofreliefwashoverme.WhileIwaslyingonmybed,IrealizedwhatIhaddonewasanactoffriendship.

Ithoughtabouthowmuchmybrothermeanttome.Althoughmyhairwasamessnow,itwasasmallpricetopayforprotectinghim.ImadeavowtomyselfthatIwouldalwaysbethereformybrother,nomatterwhatsillysituationswemightgetinto.Becausethat'swhattruefriendshipandfamilyareallabout.第二篇Mymotherwasback!

Themomentshesawmewiththevaseattachedtomyhair,hereyeswidened.Iquicklyexplainedthewholestory.Tomysurprise,shedidn'tscoldme.Instead,shegentlyremovedthevasefrommyhead,saying,“Yourintentiontoprotectyourbrotherissweet,butnexttime,cometomefirst.”Inodded,feelinggratefulforherunderstanding.WhileIwaslyingonmybed,IrealizedwhatIhaddonewasanactoffriendship.

Iunderstoodthatthebondbetweenmybrotherandmewasunbreakable.Myactwasdrivenbyloveandadesiretokeephimoutoftrouble.Irealizedthatsometimes,ouractionsfortheoneswelovemayleadtounexpectedconsequences,buttheloveitselfiswhattrulymatters.Iclosedmyeyes,contentwithmydecisiontoprotectmybrother.【答案】Mymotherwasback!Mybrotherrushedtohisroomandquicklypretendedtobeasleep,leavingmetodealwithMumallbymyself.BeforeIcouldexplain,mymothershoutedangrilyatmeand