模板09 日記-備戰(zhàn)2022年中考英語書面表達(dá)滿分作文萬能模板

09日記1.體裁解讀日記常用來記述一天中所發(fā)生的重要的或有趣的事情，也可以用來敘述自己當(dāng)天觸景而發(fā)的感受等。日記的主要體裁通常是記敘文或簡(jiǎn)單的議論文。2.寫作攻略英文日記通常由書端和正文兩部分組成。書端是專門記載寫日記的日期及天氣狀況的。正文的格式與其他文章相近，一般縮進(jìn)4個(gè)字母，也可以頂格寫。由于日記所寫的事件都是發(fā)生過的事情，所以日記通常用一般過去時(shí)。因?yàn)槿沼浂酁橛洈⒆约旱挠H身經(jīng)歷或抒發(fā)自己的感想，所以一般用第一人稱。寫日記的時(shí)候一般遵循以下步驟：第一步：介紹事件：第二步：具體闡述事情經(jīng)過，補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)；第三步：表達(dá)感想或總結(jié)該事件的意義。寫日記要注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1.日記的第一行要寫清日期、星期和天氣狀況。日期和星期寫在正文的左上角，月份與星期可以縮寫。天氣狀況寫在正文的右上角。如果是游記，還可以寫明地點(diǎn)。2.日記通常使用過去時(shí)記錄所發(fā)生的事件。若為議論、抒情或描述景物和人，為了生動(dòng)，也可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。3.日記的正文可以是敘事、描寫、說明或議論等形式，且通常用第一人稱。4.日記雖然是記錄事件，但應(yīng)該適當(dāng)加一些個(gè)人感悟，寫出亮點(diǎn)。典例賞析：（2021·廣東廣州·中考真題）今天，跳繩世界冠軍李華給大家上了一節(jié)云體育課。請(qǐng)寫一則英文日記，記錄這特別的一課。日記需包括以下要點(diǎn)：1.授課者：李華，14歲，紅星中學(xué)學(xué)生；2.上課內(nèi)容：跳繩講解和示范等；3.你的收獲和感受。注意:1.參考詞匯：跳繩(ropeskipping)、冠軍(champion)；2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右（日記的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）；3.不得透露學(xué)校、姓名等任何個(gè)人信息，否則不予評(píng)分。Monday,May31stDearDiary,Today,wehadaspecialonlinePElesson.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________例文：Monday,May31stDearDiary,Today,wehadaspecialonlinePElesson.TheteacherwastheworldchampionofropeskippingnamedLiHua.Heis14yearsold,andheisalsothestudentofHongxingMiddleSchool.Intheclass,heexplainedthewayofropeskippingandshowedushowtodoitwell.Wewereinterestedinthesports.Heansweredsomequestionedandtoldhisexperiencetous.Ilearnedthatthebestwaytodosomethingbestisbypracticingitalot.Practicemakesperfect.Whataninterestinglessonwehad!【詳解】1.題干解讀：該題目屬于日記寫作。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)承接短文開頭；講述授課者的個(gè)人信息，上課的內(nèi)容，最后講述個(gè)人的收獲和感受。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)該用第三人稱來敘述；時(shí)態(tài)采用一般過去時(shí)為主，講述授課人的信息和課堂內(nèi)容需要敘述完整，保證條理清晰。介紹今天是什么日子，引出事件DayoftheweekDateWeather介紹今天是什么日子，引出事件Todayis___________.Ididsomemeaningfulthings___________.詳細(xì)描寫了今天所做的事情Inthemorning,I___________（事件一）.Intheafternoon,I___________（事件二）.Afterthat,I___________（事件三）.詳細(xì)描寫了今天所做的事情表達(dá)感想Whatawarmandmeaningfulday!Iwillneverforgetthememorableday!/AlthoughIwasverytired,Ifeltveryhappybecause___________.表達(dá)感想【模板范文】SundayMay10thFineTodayisMother'sDay.Ididsomemeaningfulthingstoshowmylovetomymother.Inthemorning,Iboughtmymothersomeflowerswithmypocketmoney.Intheafternoon,Iwentshoppingandthencookedadeliciousdinnerformyfamily.Afterthat,Igavemotherthecardmadebymyselfandsaid"HappyMother'sDay"toher.ItoldherIwouldstudyhardandneverletherdown.Hearingthis,mymotherwasmovedtotears.Whatawarmandmeaningfulday!Iwillneverforgetthememorableday!亮點(diǎn)詞匯搭配1.表示天氣fineadj.晴朗的 cloudyadj.多云的snowyadj.下雪的 rainyadj.下雨的windyadj.有風(fēng)的 hailn.冰雹2.抒發(fā)感想movedadj.感動(dòng)的 enjoyoneself玩得高興memorableadj.值得紀(jì)念的 meaningfuladj.有意義的worryabout擔(dān)憂 deliciousadj.美味的3.其他finishv.完成 classmaten.同學(xué)voluntaryadj.志愿的，義務(wù)的 althoughconj.雖然經(jīng)典句子背誦：開頭句1.Itwasafine/niceday.天氣晴朗。2.Todayis...今天是……3.Iwenttotheparkto...我去公園……4.Wedecidedtogooutforapicnictoday.我們決定今天出去野餐。5.MyclassmatesandIwenttotheparktodosomevoluntarywork.我和我們班的同學(xué)去公園做義務(wù)勞動(dòng)。中間句1.Firstweweredividedintothreegroupsandthenbeganworking.我們首先分成了三個(gè)組，然后開始工作。2.ThetaskforGroupTwowascollectingthelitterandcleaningbenches.第二組的同學(xué)收集垃圾和清理長凳。3.GroupThreewipedalltheequipmentinthepark.第三組的同學(xué)擦洗公園里所有的設(shè)施。結(jié)尾句1.Ihadagoodtimetoday./Ienjoyedmyselftoday.我今天玩得很高興。2.Iwillneverforgetit.我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記這件事。3.Whatawarmandmeaningfulday!這是多么溫馨而又富有意義的一天！4.Iwillneverforgetthememorableday!我永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)忘記這難忘的一天！5.Althougheveryonewasverytired,wefeltveryhappybecausewehaddoneameaningfuljob.雖然大家都很累，但我們很開心，因?yàn)槲覀冏隽艘患幸饬x的工作。（2021·湖南常德·中考真題）假設(shè)你是第二節(jié)（回答問題）材料中的Alan,請(qǐng)寫一篇80詞以上的英文日記，描述對(duì)話中所發(fā)生的事情。注意：1.要點(diǎn)包括時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事情的經(jīng)過和啟示等；2.不得出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和校名等真實(shí)信息；3.請(qǐng)按以下格式在答題卡相應(yīng)位置作答。June20th,2021____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________例文：June20th,2021Onmywaytoschoolthismorning,Isawatrafficaccident.Aboywasridingabicycle,listeningtomusic.Atacrossingroad,thetrafficlightswereabouttoturnredwhenacarappeared.Becausethedriverwasonthephone,hedidn’tnoticethetrafficlightsanddidn’tstopontime.Theboywhowasridingabikefelloffhisbikeandhurthisknee.Whataterribleaccident!Ithinkwemustbecarefulonourwaytoschool,don’tcatchup,don’tlistentomusic,especiallywhencrossingtheroad.【詳解】題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)第二節(jié)材料中的Alan的敘述，描寫目睹的事情情況，包括時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、事情的經(jīng)過和啟示等，可以適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。

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寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要緊扣材料內(nèi)容，用第一人稱和第三人稱相結(jié)合來寫作，時(shí)態(tài)以過去時(shí)為主，要做到要點(diǎn)齊全，無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。（2019·天津·中考真題）假如你是晨光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，平時(shí)堅(jiān)持用英語寫日記。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，描述你星期三放學(xué)乘地鐵回家路上看到的事情，并表達(dá)自己的想法。(l)一個(gè)男孩不舒服，開始嘔吐，一位穿著漂亮的女士幫著擦拭地面，男孩表達(dá)感謝。(2)地鐵到站，有人擠向座位，有人下不去車，有人因此爭(zhēng)吵。(3)你認(rèn)為…．參考詞匯：開始嘔吐begintovomit擠向座位pushtowardstheseat爭(zhēng)吵haveaquarrel要求：(1)詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。(2)日記格式和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)(3)要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮WednesdayWhenItooktheundergroundbackhomefromschool,Inoticed____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】WednesdayWhenItooktheundergroundbackhomeafterschool.Inoticedaboywhofeltnotverywellandwhosefacewaspale.Iwaswonderingwhat'swrongwithhimwhenhesuddenlybegantovomit.Seeingthisscene,aladywhoworebeautifuldressnotonlygaveahelpinghandbutalsocleanedthefloorwithouthesitate.Andthentheboyexpressedgratitudewithalowbow.Astimepassedby,thesubwayarrived.Someonepushedtowardtheseatwhileotherscan'tgetoff，thereforetheyhadaquarrelangrily.Frommyperspective,Iwishweallcanhelpeachotherwhensomeoneisintroublejustlikethebeautifulladyandbepoliteallthetime.Onlyinthiswaycanourworldbecomebetterandbetter.【詳解】這是一篇日記，根據(jù)材料中的相關(guān)信息用英語寫一篇日記。所提供的材料中列舉了你星期三放學(xué)乘地鐵回家路上看到的事情，主要從(l)一個(gè)男孩不舒服，開始嘔吐，一位穿著漂亮的女士幫著擦拭地面，男孩表達(dá)感謝。(2)地鐵到站，有人擠向座位，有人下不去車，有人因此爭(zhēng)吵。(3)你認(rèn)為…。寫出自己的想法。這幾個(gè)方面去寫。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意作文中必須包含材料上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性?！靖叻志湫鸵弧縄noticedaboywhofeltnotverywellandwhosefacewaspale.我注意到一個(gè)男孩感覺不太好，臉色蒼白。句子whofeltnotverywell是由who引導(dǎo)的定語從句?！靖叻志湫投縎eeingthisscene,aladywhoworebeautifuldressnotonlygaveahelpinghandbutalsocleanedthefloorwithouthesitate.看到這一幕，一位穿著漂亮衣服的女士不僅伸出援助之手，而且毫不猶豫地打掃了地板。句子whoworebeautifuldress是由who引導(dǎo)的定語從句。該句話還運(yùn)用了notonly…butalso…：不但……而且……。【高分句型三】Onlyinthiswaycanourworldbecomebetterandbetter.只有這樣，我們的世界才能變得越來越好。這句話是由only引起的倒裝句。（2019·湖北咸寧市·中考真題）運(yùn)動(dòng)塑造健康，團(tuán)結(jié)凝聚力量。5月10日，學(xué)校舉辦了春季運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)。你和班上的許多同學(xué)參加了比賽項(xiàng)目，戰(zhàn)績(jī)顯著。其他同學(xué)觀看了比賽，并為選手們加油喝彩。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面四幅圖片的提示，寫一篇日記，介紹運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)概況及班上同學(xué)參加的情況，并抒發(fā)自己的活動(dòng)感受。寫作要求：1．文章中勿出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名；2．文章須包含圖片所提供的主要信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。行文連貫，條理清晰；3．詞數(shù)80~100個(gè)，文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。參考詞匯：teamworkFriday,May11th,2019SunnyItwassunnyyesterday.Ourschoolheldaspringsportsmeet.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________例文:Friday.May1lth,2019SunnyItwassunnyyesterday.Ourschoolheldaspringsportsmeet.Therewere4eventsforbothboysandgirls.Theywerethelongjump,thehighjump,thel00-meterraceandthe400-meterrelayrace.Everyoneinourclassfeltveryexcitedbecausewegotawonderfulresult.Sixteenofustookpartintheactivityandwegot4firstprizes,2secondprizesand3thirdprizes.MyclassmatesYuanYingandFangDanwonthegirls'longjumpandthehighjumpwithoutdifficulty.SodidIintheboys'100-meterrace.Intheboys'relayrace,threeboysandIranveryfast,comingoutontop.Inthemeantime,allotherclassmateswatchedthematches,tookphotosandcheereduson.Fromthissportsmeet,knowthatsportscankeepushealthy.Weshoulddosportseveryday.Meanwhile,teamworkplaysanimportantroleintherelayrace.Asthesayinggoes,onetreecan'tmakeaforest.Soitmadeuslearntohelpeachotherinourdailylife.【詳解】這是一篇看圖作文，根據(jù)圖片中的相關(guān)內(nèi)容介紹一下運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)概況及班上同學(xué)參加的情況，并抒發(fā)自己的活動(dòng)感受。所提供的卡片中列舉了跳遠(yuǎn)、跳高、400米接力和100米接力。主要從同學(xué)們的參加情況和自己的活動(dòng)感受這個(gè)方面去寫。時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)，人稱為第一人稱。注意日記中必須包含圖片上的所有信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作時(shí)，避免使用漢語式的英語，盡量使用我們熟悉的句子或短語。語法要正確，表達(dá)要符合英語習(xí)慣，注意時(shí)態(tài)、時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系，表達(dá)具有條理性。【高分句型一】Everyoneinourclassfeltveryexcitedbecausewegotawonderfulresult.我們班的每個(gè)人都很興奮，因?yàn)槲覀內(nèi)〉昧艘粋€(gè)很好的成績(jī)。句子becausewegotawonderfulresult.是由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句。【高分句型二】MyclassmatesYuanYingandFangDanwonthegirls'longjumpandthehighjumpwithoutdifficulty.SodidIintheboys'100-meterrace.我的同學(xué)袁穎和方丹輕松地獲得了女子跳遠(yuǎn)和跳高的冠軍。我也參加了男子100米賽跑。SodidIintheboys'100-meterrace.是由so引起的倒裝句。【2018年浙江寧波市中考】今年5月11日，你校組織了一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，部分學(xué)生選擇去了紅星農(nóng)場(chǎng)（見導(dǎo)圖一），其余學(xué)生選擇去了科技博物館（見導(dǎo)圖二）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)你所選擇的實(shí)踐活動(dòng)寫一篇英語日記，記錄當(dāng)天的經(jīng)歷和感受。導(dǎo)圖一導(dǎo)圖二注意：(1)日記必須包括你所選擇導(dǎo)圖的所有要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；(3)詞數(shù)：80-100。日記格式及首句己給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Friday,May11thTodayIhadaschooltrip.【答案】Possibleversion1:Friday.May11thTodayIhadaschooltrip.Theweatherwasfine.MyclassmatesandIsetofftoHongxingFarmbybusearlyinthemorning.Theminutewearrived,wetookawalkaroundthefarm.Thenwefedthechickens.WhenIthrewsomefoodtothem,theyranovertomewithexcitementandsomeofthemevenwalkedintotheirfriends.Themostexcitingthingwasthatwepickedstrawberriesafterlunch.Whilewewerepicking,weatealot.Howsweettheywere!Ihadawonderfultimetoday!Idohopetogothereagaininthenearfuture!(98words)Possibleversion2:Friday,May11thTodayIhadaschooltrip.Theweatherwasfine.MyclassmatesandIsetofftotheScienceMuseumbysubwayat7:00.Assoonaswereachedthemuseum,wewereamazedtoseelotsofpicturesaboutscience.Thenwewatchedavideoaboutdifferentinventionsandtheirinventors.It'sunbelievablethattechnologyhasprogressedinsucharapidway.Intheafternoon,weplayedchesswithsomespecialrobots.Itwassurprisingtofindthatnobodycouldbeatthem.Beforeleaving,weboughtsomegiftsforourfriends.Ihadawonderfultimetoday!Idohopetogothereagain!（99words）體即可。【2018年湖北省孝感】本周一是端午節(jié)，你校外教Tony對(duì)中國文化很感興趣，你陪他去槐蔭公園觀看了龍舟比賽。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇日記。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.現(xiàn)場(chǎng)情況。人多擁擠，16支龍舟隊(duì)競(jìng)爭(zhēng)激烈，人們歡呼，隊(duì)員們閉隊(duì)合作，最終“勇氣隊(duì)”獲勝。2.賽后活動(dòng)：我給Tony介紹端午節(jié)，下午帶他參加有關(guān)端午節(jié)的其它活動(dòng)，如……3.感想：Tony……，我……寫作要求：1.短文內(nèi)容必須包括所有要點(diǎn)、語句通順，條理清晰；2.省略號(hào)處須作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮(1-2句即可)；3.100詞左右，短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。June18thTodayistheDragonBoatFestival.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】TodayistheDragonBoatFestivalForthereasonthatTonyhasastronginterestinChinesetraditionalculture.IinvitedhimtocometowatchthedragonboatraceswhichwasheldinHuaiyinParkthismorningWhenwearrived,itwascrowded.Therewere16colorfuldragonboatsfloatingintheriver.Duringtherace,thedragonboatteamscompetedwitheachother,whilepeopleoneachbankcheeredup.BothTonyandIfelttheexcitingatmosphere.Atlast,theCourageTeamwon.Afterthecompetition,IintroducedtheDragonBoatFestivaltoTonyandwelcomedhimtomanyotheractivitiesaboutthefestival.Wewenttolearnhowtomakezongziandadmireapictureexhibition.Attheendoftheday,tiredaswewere,wefeltexcited.TonythoughourtraditionalChineseculturewassoamazingandIamproudofmygreatmotherland.寫作亮點(diǎn)：本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，語言簡(jiǎn)練、要點(diǎn)齊全。文中invitesb.todo,duringtherace,competewith,cheereup,atlast,both…and…;attheendoftheday,beproudof等詞匯的恰當(dāng)使用，使上下文意連接緊密；本文還采用了豐富的句型，比如：運(yùn)用了therebe句型；定語從句、賓語從句、時(shí)間狀語從句等復(fù)合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，這是一篇不錯(cuò)的范文。Writing1（2021·黑龍江香坊·三模）今天是6月2日，天氣晴。假如你是劉京，剛剛結(jié)束了你校組織的校外勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)（workpracticeactivity）。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容，完成今天的日記。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.這是本學(xué)期的第一次校外活動(dòng)。2.活動(dòng)介紹：（1）參加人員：一、二班的全體師生；（2）活動(dòng)時(shí)間：周一到周三；（3）活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：在星光農(nóng)場(chǎng)參加勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐。3.說說此次活動(dòng)給你帶來了哪些收獲。寫作要求：1.不得使用真實(shí)的姓名和學(xué)校名。2.可適當(dāng)加人細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)，行文連貫。3.字跡工整、語言精練，表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、條理清晰。4.至少80詞。June2,WednesdaySunny______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【范文】June2,WednesdaySunnyThiswasthefirstworkpracticeactivitythisterm.Alltheteachersandstudentsofclasses1and2tookpartintheactivityfromMondaytoWednesday.WetookpartinlaborpracticeatXingguangfarm.Wefedchickensandpigsandhelpedmilkonthefarm.Wealsohelpedfarmerspickapplesonthefarm.Theywereverygratefultous.Weweretiredbuthappy.Itwasanunforgettableexperience.Thisactivitybroughtmegreatfun.Welearnedalotfromit.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是日記，以你校組織的校外勞動(dòng)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，根據(jù)所給要求提示，要求要點(diǎn)覆蓋全面，可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)充；注意寫作時(shí)要點(diǎn)齊全，同時(shí)也要緊扣主題。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文用到的一般過去時(shí)態(tài)，人稱用第一人稱。寫作中注意常用句式，注意動(dòng)詞的過去式。全文要點(diǎn)明確，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，語法運(yùn)用準(zhǔn)確，上下文注意連接的流暢度。Writing2（2021·寧夏·銀川市興慶區(qū)教師發(fā)展中心二模）假如你和你的同學(xué)在5月8日(星期天)到敬老院慰問了老人，請(qǐng)你把活動(dòng)的情況用英語寫一篇日記。日記的格式及開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。日記的內(nèi)容還應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)：1.來回的時(shí)間及方式；2.活動(dòng)內(nèi)容：掃地，洗衣，……；3.活動(dòng)感受：很累但很愉快；要照顧尊重老人。參考詞匯：respectvt.尊重注意：1.80詞左右；2.所給的要點(diǎn)提示必須都用上，并作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。May8,2012SundayTodaymyclassmatesandIwenttotheOldPeople’sHome.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________例文：May8,2012SundayTodaymyclassmatesandIwenttotheOldPeople’sHome.Itwasverysunnytoday,sowegottherebybike.Wehelpedtheoldpeoplesweepthefloor,washedtheirclothes,cookedthemealandsoon.What’smore,theoldpeopletheretoldussomeinterestingstoriesandwesanganddancedforthem.At4intheafternoonwecamehomehappily.Weweretiredbuthappybecausewecandosomethinghelpfulforthepeoplewhoreallyneedhelp.Fromthisexperience,Iknowthatweshouldcareaboutandrespectoldpeople.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文要求就自己今天去敬老院的事情寫一篇日記，日記的格式已經(jīng)給出，題中也給出相關(guān)的細(xì)節(jié)信息，在寫作時(shí)所有的要點(diǎn)都要用上，也可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使文章更加飽滿。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：本文是一篇日記，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，人稱用第一人稱。文章要把活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、交通方式、活動(dòng)內(nèi)容以及活動(dòng)感受都要包含在內(nèi)。在寫作過程中，運(yùn)用不同的句式使文章邏輯清晰、層次清楚。Writing3（2021·天津?yàn)I海新·二模）在成長過程中，我們經(jīng)常會(huì)面臨來自老師的提醒、責(zé)備或批評(píng)。有的同學(xué)不理解，有的甚至?xí)龀鲞^激的反應(yīng)。5月13日，是星期四，在你們班發(fā)生了一件事，這件事讓你印象深刻。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)用英語寫一篇日記。（1）在英語課上，李明不聽講而是看小說。（2）老師幾次提醒他要認(rèn)真聽課，他依舊如此，老師把他書拿走。（3）李明什么也沒說，突然站起來沖出教室。（4）老師攔住了他，讓他冷靜下來并把他帶回教室。（5）課后老師與他進(jìn)行了溝通，他認(rèn)識(shí)到了自己的錯(cuò)誤并鼓起勇氣向老師道歉。（6）你認(rèn)為……參考詞匯：提醒remind攔下stop鼓起勇氣pickupone’scourage要求：（1）詞數(shù)：80～100個(gè)。（2）開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全，行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。Thursday,May13th,2021FineIstillrememberthedaywhenIhadanEnglishclass.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________例文：Thursday,May13th,2021FineIstillrememberthedaywhenIhadanEnglishclass.LiMingreadanovelinsteadoflisteningtotheteacherintheEnglishclass.OurEnglishteacherremindedhimseveraltimestolistentohercarefully,buthestilldidso,theteacherhadtotakeawayhisbook.Tomysurprise,LiMingstoodupsuddenlyandrushedoutoftheclassroomwithoutanywords.Ourteacherstoppedhim,andtookhimbacktotheclassroom.Afterclass,ourteacherhadatalkwithhim,herealizedhismistake.Finally,hepickeduphiscourageandsaidsorrytoourEnglishteacher.Inmyopinion,itisimportanttostaycalmwhenourteacherspointoutourmistakes,becauseit’sgoodforourdevelopment.【詳解】1.

題干解讀：題目要求根據(jù)提示詞語和要點(diǎn)，寫出班里發(fā)生的事情，要寫具體事情的經(jīng)過以及最后的結(jié)果并表明自己的觀點(diǎn)，寫作時(shí)要運(yùn)用正確的英語表達(dá)，要選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯和短語。

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寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)要與已給出的開頭融合起來，用第三人稱來寫作，時(shí)態(tài)以一般過去時(shí)為主，要做到要點(diǎn)齊全，無單詞拼寫和語法錯(cuò)誤。Writing4（2021·天津南開·二模）假設(shè)你是玲玲，平時(shí)堅(jiān)持用英語寫日記。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，記述你的朋友小麗參加達(dá)人秀節(jié)目的事情，并表達(dá)自己的想法。（1）小麗喜愛唱歌。上周日參加了達(dá)人秀節(jié)目，但是慘遭淘汰。（2）小麗十分難過，無心學(xué)習(xí)，并打算放棄這個(gè)愛好。（3）作為好朋友，你很擔(dān)心小麗。（4）你告訴小麗要享受參加節(jié)目的樂趣，不必太在意結(jié)果。（5）你認(rèn)為中學(xué)生應(yīng)該……參考詞匯：talentshow達(dá)人秀節(jié)目eliminatev.淘汰要求：（1）詞數(shù)∶80～100個(gè)。（2）日記格式和開頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。（3）要點(diǎn)齊全。行文連貫,可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。WednesdayFineMyfriendXiaoLilikessingingverymuch.LastSundayshe________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[例文]WednesdayFineMyfriendXiaoLilikessingingverymuch.LastSundaysheattendedatalentshowbutwaseliminated.Shewasfeelingdownandnotinterestedinstudybecauseofthis.Asherbestfriend,Iwasworriedaboutherverymuch.Itoldhertoenjoytheshowanddon’ttaketheresulttooseriously.Itmaynotbegoodforusteenagerstobecomefamousovernight.Inaddition,therearemanywaystosuccess,andonlybyworkinghardcanweachieveourgoals.Asateenager,weshouldsparenoeffortstostudyanddevelopourinterestsatthesametime,which,withoutdoubt,willenrichourfuturelife.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本題為日記作文，要求根據(jù)題目所給要點(diǎn)，對(duì)小麗參加達(dá)人秀節(jié)目被淘汰導(dǎo)致悶悶不樂的事情繼續(xù)敘述并發(fā)表自己的看法。題目要點(diǎn)要齊全，并可適當(dāng)進(jìn)行拓展。2.寫作指導(dǎo)：寫作時(shí)應(yīng)用第一、三人稱，敘述過去發(fā)生的事情時(shí)應(yīng)用過去時(shí)，其他部分可用現(xiàn)在時(shí)。作文應(yīng)邏輯清晰、層次分明、要點(diǎn)齊全，注意不同時(shí)態(tài)的準(zhǔn)確使用，單詞拼寫要正確。Writing5（2021·湖南·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）假設(shè)你是李華，假期你與家人去潛水，在圣地印尼四王島(RajaAmpat)度假，那里風(fēng)景優(yōu)美，海水清澈，你與家人非常放松、愜意。在最后一天的潛水活動(dòng)中，你看到了各種各樣的海洋生物，還在海底發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些塑料垃圾，這引起了你的深思。請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫一篇日記，記錄你在假期最后一天的見聞、感受和思考。要求:1、不少于80詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);2、文中不出現(xiàn)個(gè)人真實(shí)信息;3、不要逐字翻譯，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。提示詞:去潛水godivingDearDiary.ThisisthelastdayofourvacationRajaAmpat.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________例文DearDiary.ThisisthelastdayofourvacationRajaAmpat.Thisisabeautifulplaceandthewaterisveryclear.Weallfeltveryhappyandrelaxedinthepastfewdays.Buttoday,wewentdivingintheseawherewenotonlysawallkindsofseacreatures,butalsosawsomeplasticrubbish.Theserubbishwilldamagethemarineenvironment.Theclearwaterwillbecomemuddyinmanyyears.Wewillneverseesuchbeautifulscenery.SoIwanttocalloneveryonetoprotecttheenvironmenttogether.Itisalsoourcommonhome.【詳解】題干解讀：閱讀題干可知，要求寫一篇日記關(guān)于記錄在假期最后一天的見聞、感受和思考的作文，主要圍繞海底垃圾、環(huán)境污染進(jìn)行論述。最后檢查文章要點(diǎn)是否齊全，語法是否正確。寫作指導(dǎo)：本文應(yīng)以一般過去時(shí)和第一人稱為主，采取兩段式寫作，第一段對(duì)于發(fā)現(xiàn)垃圾提出思考，對(duì)環(huán)境保護(hù)和對(duì)海洋污染危害進(jìn)行描述；第二段號(hào)召大家保護(hù)環(huán)境。Writing6（2021·天津西青·二模）假如你是北京市紅光中學(xué)的學(xué)生李明，平時(shí)堅(jiān)持用英語寫日記。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，記述你周末到楊柳青游覽的經(jīng)歷，并表達(dá)自己的想法和感受。1.上午參觀了年畫博物館，看到了怎樣制作年畫，并購買了一些年畫。2.接著導(dǎo)游帶我參觀了石家大院，欣賞了相聲。3.下午坐船游覽了運(yùn)河，并沿途拍照。4.品嘗了各種小吃，并和當(dāng)?shù)厝诉M(jìn)行了交流，發(fā)現(xiàn)當(dāng)?shù)厝撕苌屏加押谩?.我……參考詞匯：運(yùn)河canal；年畫yearlypainting；石家大院ShijiaYard；小吃snacks；相聲crosstalk要求：(1)詞數(shù):80?100個(gè)。(2)日記格式和開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。(3)要點(diǎn)齊全,行文連貫，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。SaturdayIwenttothefamousancienttownYangliuqingtoday.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________參考范文：SaturdayIwenttothefamousancienttownYangliuqingtoday.Inthemorning,IvisitedtheYearlyPaintingMuseumandwatchedhowtomakeyearlypaintings.IthoughttheyweresointerestingthatIboughtsomeformyparents.Thentheguideshowed