北師大版高三英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)類型二第5講續(xù)寫熱 門話題愛心援助學(xué)案

第5講續(xù)寫熱門話題愛心援助閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。(2022·浙江卷改編)Ineededtodosomethinginmycommunity(社區(qū))inordertocompletethecommunityservicehoursrequiredtograduatefromhighschool．Someofmyfriendshadsigneduptospendtimeatasoupkitchen，soIdid，too．Itseemedlikeagoodthingtodo．Ithoughtthatwewouldjustbepassingoutdinnerstothoseinneed，butIfoundoutwewouldbedoingeverythingfrompreparingtoservingthedinner．Webeganpreparingthefood，frommixingsaladdressingtoseparatingfrozenmeat．Muchstillneededtobedonebeforedinnerwasserved，butalreadyoutsidethebuildingmanyhomelesspeopleweregathering．Itwasn'tuntilacoupleofhourslaterthatweopenedthedoorsandbeganservingdinner．Asthelineofpeoplecametowardme，Igotalittlescared．I'dcomefacetofacewiththehomeless:HowshouldIact?Howwouldtheytreatme?Wouldtheyhatemeforhavingmorethantheydid?Whilesomeofthepeoplelookedveryfriendly，someofthemlookedsodangerous．Ididn'thavetoomuchtimetoworryaboutit．Iwasassigned(分配)toservethesaladwiththeladynexttome．ShesmiledatmeandsaidifIneededhelp，she'dberightthere，whichIfoundquitecomforting．Ihadneverseensomanypeoplewantingfood．Theywereofallagesandnationalities．Mostofthemworeclothesthatweretornanddirty．Somelookedliketheyhadtotallygivenuponlife，whileothersseemedtobemakingthebestofthesituation，smilingandjoking．Somewerebetteroffthanothers，buttheyallneededagoodmealandawarmplacetoeat．Itsaddenedmetothinkofhowmanypeopletherewerewhodidn'thaveaplacetocallhomeandthattheonlyfoodtheygotcamefromasoupkitchen．注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請按如下格式作答。Astheycameinmydirection，Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile．IwassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursinthisway．寫作指導(dǎo)：Ⅰ．梳理原文細(xì)節(jié)，理清篇章結(jié)構(gòu)。Ⅱ．依據(jù)首句提示，構(gòu)思后續(xù)情節(jié)。第一段：由續(xù)寫第一段及續(xù)寫第二段的提示語可知，該段應(yīng)該描述我怎么為無家可歸的人提供色拉，過程是令人滿意的，但也會出現(xiàn)小的困難。第二段：由續(xù)寫第二段的提示語可知，該段應(yīng)該描述我對這次社區(qū)服務(wù)的感悟，最后可以進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)纳A。范文佳作：Astheycameinmydirection，Iputonmybrightestandhappiestsmile．Butseeingsomanyhomelesshungrypeopleswarmingendlessly，eventhemostbrilliantsmilecouldn'tconcealthefearandpanicinmyheart．Asifnoticingmyemotion，theladysmilinglycameoverandpatientlytoldmethatIshouldfirstorganizethesepeopletoqueueupandthenhandoutsaladonebyone．Thankfully，Inoddedandimmediatelysprangintoaction．Thenthingswentsmoothly．Eventhosewholookedverydangeroussurprisinglyfollowedmyinstructions．Theyevensaid“Thankyou”tomewhilereceivingthefood，lookingsofriendly．Thepreviousfeelingsofworryandscarehadalreadymeltedaway．IwassohappythatIhadearnedmyservicehoursinthisway．NotonlydidIclearmypreviousprejudiceagainstthosewhoseemedtobedangerousandunamiable，butalsoIextendedahelpinghandtothosewhowantedfood．Isuddenlycametorealizethatnoteveryonewasblessedwithfortuneandborntobewealthy；therefore，weshouldalwaysbegratefulforwhatlifeblesseduswith．However，wedidhavethepowertoshareourhappinesswithothers，thatis，spreadinglove．Loveiseverything，liketheclearmoonhanginghighinthesky，spreadingitsmildmoonlightselflesslytoeveryone．話題佳句：1．Withwindsblowingharder，thefirewentoutofcontrol．隨著風(fēng)越刮越猛，火失去了控制。2．Athickburningsmellfilledtheair．WhenTomopenedthefrontdoorofhisflattocheck，athickcloudofsmokegreetedhim．空氣中彌漫著濃濃的燒焦的氣味。當(dāng)湯姆打開他公寓的前門查看時，一股濃煙迎面撲來。3．Simpsonnoticedtheflamewasgrowing．Frozenwithfear，hestoodrootedtothespot．Bythen，hewascoughingandhiseyeswerestinging．辛普森注意到火勢越來越大。他嚇呆了，站著一動不動。到那時，他已經(jīng)開始咳嗽，眼睛刺痛。4．Hearingthescreams，Henryrantotheriverside，threwoffhisclothesandjumpedintothewaterwithouthesitation．聽到尖叫聲，亨利跑到河邊，把衣服扔在一邊，毫不猶豫地跳進(jìn)了水里。5．Hedivedintothewater．Inafewseconds，hewasnexttothestrugglinggirl．他跳入水中。幾秒鐘后，他就到了那個苦苦掙扎的女孩旁邊。6．Thewaterwasuptoherlap，butMarywasverystrongandshestruggledthroughthewaveswithmeonherback．水漲到了她的大腿處，但瑪麗非常強(qiáng)壯，她背著我穿過海浪艱難前行。7．Withonlysecondstoact，hesuddenlyremovedherseatbeltandpushedheroutofthecarbeforeitfelldownhillagainwithhimtrappedinside．只有幾秒鐘的時間行動了，他匆忙地解開了她的安全帶，把她推出了車，然后車又向山下墜落，他被困在了車?yán)铩?．Thecarhadcometorestontopofaroadsidewall，literallyswingingontheedgeofdisaster．Evenasmallsuddenmovebyanyoneinsidecouldsenditover．汽車卡在路邊的一堵墻上，簡直是在災(zāi)難的邊緣搖擺著。里面任何人的一個小小移動都可能讓它翻過去。9．Someonecameandpulledbothkidsawayfromthewater．Thelittlegirllayontheground，toofrightenedtocry．有人來把兩個孩子從水里拉了出來。那個小女孩躺在地上，嚇得哭不出來。10．Nomatterhowcoldthewinterwas，allthattheycouldfeelnowwasthesurpassingwarmth．無論冬天多么寒冷，他們現(xiàn)在能感受到的都是無比的溫