中考英語(yǔ)人教版總復(fù)習(xí)主題寫(xiě)作突破課件主題一生活2

主題突破主題一生活主題透析教材鏈接七上Unit7Howmucharethesesocks?七上Unit8Whenisyourbirthday?七下Unit2Whattimedoyougotoschool?七下Unit6I’mwatchingTV.八上Unit2Howoftendoyouexercise?八下Unit1What’sthematter?八下Unit5Whatwereyoudoingwhentherainstormcame?九全Unit4Iusedtobeafraidofthedark.教材鏈接九全Unit7Teenagersshouldbeallowedtochoosetheirownclothes.九全Unit12Lifeisfulloftheunexpected.九全Unit14IremembermeetingallofyouinGrade7.頭腦風(fēng)暴素材積累一、主題詞塊1.

畢竟

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例如

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對(duì)……有好處

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和某人和諧相處

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對(duì)……友好

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陷入困境

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參加

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愛(ài)上

afterallsuchasbegoodforgetonwellwithsb.befriendlyto…introubletakepartinfallinlovewith二、高分句型1.Manypeopledon’talwaysseethings

sotheymaydescribethesamepersondifferently.

許多人并非總是用同樣的方式觀(guān)察事物,所以他們描述出來(lái)的同一個(gè)

人也不一樣。2.Atruefriend

yourhandandtouchesyourheart.

真正的朋友是在需要時(shí)給你幫助,使你感動(dòng)。3.Iget

everywhereIgo.無(wú)論我到哪里,總

是被人關(guān)注。

thesamewayreachesfortonsofattention4.Neverfailto

thepeoplearoundyou.永遠(yuǎn)

不要忘記感恩你周?chē)娜恕?/p>

5.Second,Iamgoingtotakeexerciseregularly

Icankeephealthy.

其次,我要定期鍛煉,這樣我才能保持健康。(sothat引導(dǎo)目的狀語(yǔ)

從句)6.Hereare

stoppingschoolbullies.

以下是我關(guān)于制止校園欺凌的一些想法。(倒裝句)

bethankfultosothatsomeofmyideasabout典例剖析(2024眉山一模)緊張的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活就要結(jié)束了,你即將迎來(lái)一個(gè)輕松的暑假。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下圖中的提示以“MySummerVacationPlan”為題,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文,談一談你的假期計(jì)劃。注意:(1)詞數(shù)100左右(開(kāi)頭已給出,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù));(2)文中須包含以上信息,可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;(3)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、學(xué)校等信息。第一步“五定”審題體裁說(shuō)明文人稱(chēng)第一人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài)一般將來(lái)時(shí)要點(diǎn)自我提升;健康生活;和諧家庭思路承接給出的開(kāi)頭,直接寫(xiě)計(jì)劃,即表達(dá)出三個(gè)要點(diǎn);最后表達(dá)出希望或祝愿第二步“三段”謀篇第三步潤(rùn)色成文【基礎(chǔ)版】MySummerVacationPlan

Thesummervacationiscoming.Herearemyplansforit.First,I’mgoingtoreviewtheknowledgebecauseschoolworkcomesfirst.Ialsoplantoreadsomenovels.Second,Iwilleatmorefruitandvegetableseverydaytokeephealthy.Iamgoingtotakeexerciseregularly.Third,I’llgetonwellwithmyparents.Iwillhelpmyparentsdosomehousework.IamsureIwillhaveahappysummervacation.【升格版】MySummerVacationPlan

Thesummervacationiscoming.Herearemyplansforit.First,I’mgoingtoreviewtheknowledgethatIhavelearnedatschool①.Afterall,schoolworkcomesfirst.Ialsoplantodevelopsomehobbies,suchasreadingbooks②.升格說(shuō)明①用定語(yǔ)從句,使表達(dá)更清晰、具體。②舉例說(shuō)明具體是哪方面的愛(ài)好。Second,Iwilleatmorefruitandvegetableseverydaybecausetheyaregoodformyhealth③.IamgoingtotakeexerciseregularlysothatIcankeephealthy④.Andthird,I’llgetonwellwithmyparents.Weknowtheloveofaparentforachildisthetruestandpurestloveofall.⑤Iwillhelpmyparentsdosomehouseworkduringthesummervacation⑥.IamsureIwillhaveahappyandmeaningfulsummervacation.③增加原因,使表達(dá)更有說(shuō)服力。④增加結(jié)果,sothat表達(dá)地道。⑤使用諺語(yǔ),進(jìn)一步深化主題。⑥增加時(shí)間狀語(yǔ),與主題呼應(yīng)。名師點(diǎn)評(píng)

本文緊扣主題進(jìn)行表達(dá),要點(diǎn)全面,表達(dá)清晰。在表達(dá)計(jì)劃時(shí),用到了first,second,third等表達(dá)順序的詞匯,使表達(dá)更清晰、自然。文章用到了很多高級(jí)詞匯、短語(yǔ)或句型,如suchas,begoodfor,schoolworkcomesfirst等,特別是諺語(yǔ)theloveofaparentforachildisthetruestandpurestloveofall的運(yùn)用,增強(qiáng)了表達(dá)效果,提升了文章的層次。最后一段緊扣主題,meaningful的使用使文章得到了升華。學(xué)以致用1.圖表提示類(lèi)·學(xué)校生活初中生活已接近尾聲,三年的時(shí)光肯定給你留

下了很多美好的回憶。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的表格提示,以“MyColorfulSchoolLife”為題寫(xiě)一篇短文,向校報(bào)“英語(yǔ)園地”欄目投稿。withteachersand

classmatesgetonwellwith,…schoolactivitiestakepartin,………注意:(1)短文須包括表格中的要點(diǎn),并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮;(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地名、校名和人名;(3)詞數(shù)80左右。開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。MyColorfulSchoolLifeIhavesomanygoodmemoriesduringthethreeyearsinmymiddleschool.

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Ihavesomanygoodmemoriesduringthethreeyearsinmymiddleschool.Igotonwellwithmyteachersandclassmates.MyteacherswereverypatientsoIlikedthemverymuch.Iwasfriendlytomyclassmates.Weoftenhelpedeachotherwhenanyonewasintrouble.Lastyear,ItookpartinthesportsmeetandIwonfirstplaceinthelongjump.Ifeltsoproudofmyself.Duringthethreeyears,Ialsofellinlovewithreading.WhenIfelttired,Iwouldreadsomebookstorelax.Readingopenedmyeyesandenrichedmymind.Inaword,mylifeinmiddleschooliscolorfulandIwillneverforgetit.2.半開(kāi)放式·校園欺凌近年來(lái),校園欺凌(schoolbullies)事件時(shí)有發(fā)

生,為了提高同學(xué)們的自我防范意識(shí)和保護(hù)能力,某英文報(bào)社將舉行以

“HowtoProtectOurselvesinSchool”為主題的征文活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)

你寫(xiě)一篇英文稿件,談?wù)勑@欺凌現(xiàn)象。寫(xiě)作要求:(1)文中不能提及真實(shí)的人名、地名和校名;(2)詞數(shù)80左右。開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。HowtoProtectOurselvesinSchoolTheseyears,schoolbullieshappeninsomeschools.

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Theseyears,schoolbullieshappeninsomeschools.Inmyschool,wesometimeshavebulliesandsomestudentsarehurt,soitisreallybadforustobullyothersorbebulliedatschool.Soit’stimeforustolearnhowtoprotectourselvesatschool.Herearesomeofmyideasaboutstoppingschoolbullies.Firstly,wearesupposedtostopanyschoolbullywhenweareinthetroubleofit.Whenabullyingbehaviorhappens,weshouldaskourteachersan