2025屆中考英語(yǔ)復(fù)習(xí)寫作培優(yōu)冊(cè)（外研版廣西專用）01-一、遣詞造句技巧講練

高分作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

了解高分作文標(biāo)準(zhǔn)是寫出優(yōu)秀作文的基礎(chǔ)，以下是高分作文的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)：1.寫作內(nèi)容：要點(diǎn)全，能根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.語(yǔ)言表達(dá)：句式豐富且靈活，錯(cuò)誤極少；語(yǔ)言流暢，表意清楚、連貫。3.邏輯結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式，首尾點(diǎn)題，事例典型；能運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)你暯釉~來表示順序和邏輯關(guān)系。4.卷面要求：書寫工整，卷面整潔。寫作步驟

考生可遵循以下步驟寫出高分作文：【遣詞造句技巧講練見P2；改錯(cuò)潤(rùn)色技巧講練見P8】第一部分

書面表達(dá)提分講練一、遣詞造句技巧講練編者按：在進(jìn)行書面表達(dá)試題的解答過程中，考生應(yīng)當(dāng)遵循以下原則：1.確保準(zhǔn)確性：對(duì)于那些對(duì)高級(jí)詞匯或復(fù)雜句式運(yùn)用不夠熟練的考生，建議優(yōu)先使用自己熟悉的詞匯和句型，避免因過分追求難度而犧牲了表達(dá)的準(zhǔn)確性。2.適度提升語(yǔ)言水平：在確保表達(dá)無誤的基礎(chǔ)上，考生可以適當(dāng)?shù)厝谌胍恍└呒?jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型。技巧1

巧用高級(jí)表達(dá)

在確保正確的前提下,使用高級(jí)詞匯,可以提升作文檔次,以下為初中階段普通詞匯與高級(jí)詞匯轉(zhuǎn)換表。動(dòng)詞（詞組）

普通詞匯高級(jí)詞匯help幫助give…a

hand幫助hope希望expect希望look

forward

to

sth./doing

sth.期待某物/做某事普通詞匯高級(jí)詞匯influence影響make

a

（big）

difference

to對(duì)……有（很大）影響know知道understand理解

realize

意識(shí)到like喜歡be

interested

in…/have

a

stronginterest

in…

對(duì)……（非常）感興趣fall

in

love

with愛上……續(xù)表普通詞匯高級(jí)詞匯meet遇見come

across遇見remember記得keep…in

mind記得/記住……solve處理deal

with處理use使用make

good/full

use

of…/put…to

good

use充分使用……visit參觀pay

a

visit

to參觀續(xù)表普通詞匯高級(jí)詞匯should應(yīng)該be

supposed

to應(yīng)該decide

to

do

sth.

決定做某事make

a

decision

to

do

sth.決定做某事make

up

one’s

mind

to

do

sth.下定決心做某事try

to

do

sth.盡力做某事make

every

effort

to

do

sth./spare

no

effort

to

do

sth.不遺余力做某事續(xù)表普通詞匯高級(jí)詞匯want

to

do

sth.想要做某事feel

like

doing

sth./would

like

to

do

sth.

想要做某事be

about和……有關(guān)be

related

to/have

something

to

do

with和……有關(guān)續(xù)表形容詞

普通詞匯高級(jí)詞匯good/great好的wonderful極佳的

excellent

優(yōu)秀的bad糟糕的terrible/awful糟糕的rich富有的wealthy富有的important重要的be

of

importance重要的普通詞匯高級(jí)詞匯useful有用的be

of

use有用的many許多（修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)）quite

a

few/plenty

of/a

large

number

of許多much許多（修飾不可數(shù)名詞）quite

a

little/a

great

deal

of許多續(xù)表副詞/介詞（短語(yǔ)）普通詞匯高級(jí)詞匯firstly

第一，首先first

of

all/to

begin

with/to

start

with

首先secondly

第二，其次besides/what’s

more/in

addition

而且；此外lastly

最后last

but

not

least

最后但同樣重要的是not

不……not…at

all

一點(diǎn)都不……普通詞匯高級(jí)詞匯now

現(xiàn)在nowadays

現(xiàn)如今at

present

目前sometimes

有時(shí)from

time

to

time/once

in

a

while

有時(shí)so

因此therefore

因此

as

a

result

結(jié)果續(xù)表普通詞匯高級(jí)詞匯suddenly

突然all

of

a

sudden

突然very非常pretty/quite/rather/especially/more

than

非常in

my

opinion

依我看as

for

me/from

my

point

of

view/for

my

part/as

far

as

I’m

concerned

在我看來續(xù)表技巧訓(xùn)練1.Lucy

liked

painting

when

she

was

only

five

years

old.（用have

a

strong

interest

in升格句子）_______________________________________________________________________Lucy

had

a

strong

interest

in

painting

when

she

was

only

five

years

old.2.I

have

decided

to

lose

weight

and

keep

healthy.（用make

up

one’s

mind

to

do

sth.升格句子）________________________________________________________I

have

made

up

my

mind

to

lose

weight

and

keep

healthy.3.The

local

clubs

are

trying

to

attract

more

young

people.（用make

every

effort

to

do

sth.升格句子）______________________________________________________________________The

local

clubs

are

making

every

effort

to

attract

more

young

people.4.The

speeches

made

by

Peter

always

attract

many

people.（用a

large

number

of改寫句子）___________________________________________________________________The

speeches

made

by

Peter

always

attract

a

large

number

of

people.5.Henry

keeps

exercising

every

morning.

So

he

looks

healthier

and

healthier.（用as

a

result升格句子）_______________________________________________________________________________Henry

keeps

exercising

every

morning.

As

a

result，he

looks

healthier

and

healthier.技巧2

巧用關(guān)聯(lián)詞匯

靈活運(yùn)用關(guān)聯(lián)詞匯可以使文章條理清楚、連貫通順。寫作中常用的關(guān)聯(lián)詞匯有：1.表示順序：first（ly）;

second（ly）;

third（ly）;

to

begin

with;

to

start

with;

at

first;

at

last;

in

the

end;

next;

then;

after

that;

finally…2.表示并列：either…or;

neither…nor;

both…and;

not

only…but

also;

as

well

as;

together

with…3.表示遞進(jìn)：besides;

what’s

more;

what’s

worse;

in

addition…4.表示轉(zhuǎn)折：but;

however;

after

all;

unluckily…5.表示對(duì)比：while;

on

the

one

hand…，on

the

other

hand;

For

one

thing，…

For

another，…6.表示讓步：though;

although;

even

if/though…7.表示總結(jié)：in

a

word;

in

short;

all

in

all;

generally

speaking…技巧訓(xùn)練1.Jim

can

play

basketball

well.

He

can

also

play

the

violin

well.（用not

only…but

also…

升格句子）____________________________________________________________________Jim

can

not

only

play

basketball

well

but

also

play

the

violin

well.2.Bicycling

makes

us

healthy.

And

it

doesn’t

pollute

the

air.（用what’s

more升格句子）________________________________________________________________Bicycling

makes

us

healthy.

What’s

more，it

doesn’t

pollute

the

air.3.It

was

raining

hard

outside.

The

young

man

went

to

work

as

usual.（用although升格句子）__________________________________________________________________________Although

it

was

raining

hard

outside，the

young

man

went

to

work

as

usual.4.We

must

study

hard.

We

should

learn

to

relax

ourselves.（用on

the

one

hand，on

the

other

hand升格句子）__________________________________________________________________________________________On

the

one

hand，we

must

study

hard;

on

the

other

hand，we

should

learn

to

relax

ourselves.5.Lucy

kept

on

reading

books.

She

was

busy

in

the

past.（用even

if連接句子）______________________________________________________________Lucy

kept

on

reading

books

even

if

she

was

busy

in

the

past.技巧3

巧用比較等級(jí)

在寫作中恰當(dāng)運(yùn)用形容詞和副詞的比較等級(jí)，可以使文章表達(dá)更多樣化。除了形容詞和副詞比較等級(jí)的基本用法，以下常用句型也可以為作文增分添彩：比較等級(jí)常見句型例句原級(jí)比較as+形容詞/副詞原級(jí)+as…

表示“和……一樣……”I

am

as

tall

as

my

best

friend

Liz.比較等級(jí)常見句型例句比較級(jí)the+比較級(jí)...，the+比較級(jí)...，表示“越……，就越……”The

harder

you

work，the

luckier

you

will

be.比較級(jí)+and+比較級(jí)/more

and

more+多音節(jié)形容詞/副詞，表示“越來越……”O(jiān)ur

motherland

is

getting

stronger

and

stronger.續(xù)表比較等級(jí)常見句型例句最高級(jí)A+be動(dòng)詞+one

of

the+形容詞最高級(jí)+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)，表示“A是最……之一”Mo

Yan

is

one

of

the

greatest

writers

in

the

world.A+be動(dòng)詞+the+序數(shù)詞+形容詞最高級(jí)+名詞+范圍，表示“A是……中第……最……的……”The

Yellow

River

is

the

second

longest

river

in

China.續(xù)表技巧訓(xùn)練1.Mike

is

strong.

John

is

strong，too.（用“as+形容詞/副詞原級(jí)+as”升格句子）__________________________Mike

is

as

strong

as

John.2.If

you

exercise

more，you

will

have

fewer

health

problems.（用“the+比較級(jí)，the+比較級(jí)”升格句子）______________________________________________________________The

more

you

exercise，the

fewer

health

problems

youwill

have.3.The

park

is

getting

beautiful.（用“比較級(jí)+and+比較級(jí)”升格句子）____________________________________________The

park

is

getting

more

and

more

beautiful.4.The

Three

Gorges

Dam

is

a

famous

wonder

in

China.（用“one

of

the+形容詞最高級(jí)+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)”升格句子）__________________________________________________________________The

Three

Gorges

Dam

is

one

of

the

most

famous

wonders

in

China.技巧4

巧用復(fù)合句狀語(yǔ)從句

在復(fù)合句中，用作狀語(yǔ)的從句叫狀語(yǔ)從句。學(xué)生可用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞將兩個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句連接起來，構(gòu)成一個(gè)狀語(yǔ)從句。如：

My

brother

is

only

eleven

years

old.

He

can

already

share

housework

on

weekends.→Though

/Although

my

brother

is

only

eleven

years

old，he

can

already

share

housework

on

weekends.

（雖然）我弟弟只有11歲，但他已經(jīng)能在周末分擔(dān)家務(wù)了?？忌谑褂脿钫Z(yǔ)從句時(shí)應(yīng)注意：1.

根據(jù)句意使用正確的引導(dǎo)詞（組）；2.

在含有時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句和條件狀語(yǔ)從句的復(fù)合句中，若主句為一般將來時(shí)，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表將來；①引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句的詞（組）：when，as，while，after，before，until/till，as

soon

as，whenever等。②引導(dǎo)條件狀語(yǔ)從句的詞（組）：if，unless，as

long

as，once等。3.

若主句是祈使句或主句中含情態(tài)動(dòng)詞，從句用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)表將來?！緺钫Z(yǔ)從句具體講解見課堂精講冊(cè)P157】賓語(yǔ)從句

在復(fù)合句中，若由一個(gè)句子充當(dāng)賓語(yǔ)，這個(gè)句子叫作賓語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句必須是陳述語(yǔ)序，即“連接詞+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+其他成分”。常見的連接詞有從屬連詞that，whether，if；連接代詞what，who，whom，whose，which等；連接副詞when，where，how，why等。如：I

believe

that

you

can

achieve

your

dream

by

working

hard.

我相信你可以通過努力實(shí)現(xiàn)你的夢(mèng)想?？忌谑褂觅e語(yǔ)從句時(shí)應(yīng)注意：1.

分析語(yǔ)境及從句的句子成分，使用合適的引導(dǎo)詞；2.賓語(yǔ)從句應(yīng)使用陳述句語(yǔ)序；3.

使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)?！举e語(yǔ)從句具體講解見課堂精講冊(cè)P155】定語(yǔ)從句

在復(fù)合句中，修飾某一名詞或代詞的從句叫作定語(yǔ)從句。定語(yǔ)從句通常置于它所修飾的名詞或代詞之后，被定語(yǔ)從句修飾的詞叫先行詞。兩個(gè)句子由關(guān)系詞連接起來，常見引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句的關(guān)系詞有：1.若先行詞為人，且定語(yǔ)從句缺主語(yǔ)或賓語(yǔ)：定語(yǔ)從句由who，whom，that引導(dǎo)，如：My

sister

is

the

girl

who/that

is

standing

under

the

tree.

我姐姐就是站在樹下的那個(gè)女孩。（先行詞是the

girl，指人，定語(yǔ)從句缺少主語(yǔ)，用who/that引導(dǎo)）2.若先行詞為物，且定語(yǔ)從句缺主語(yǔ)或賓語(yǔ)：定語(yǔ)從句由that，which引導(dǎo)。如：I

saw

a

tree

that/which

has

many

beautiful

flowers

in

that

village.

我在那個(gè)村子里看到了一棵開滿漂亮花朵的樹。（先行詞是a

tree,指物，定語(yǔ)從句缺少主語(yǔ)，用that/which引導(dǎo)）考生在使用定語(yǔ)從句時(shí)應(yīng)注意:1.分析先行詞及從句成分，使用正確的關(guān)系詞；2.

若關(guān)系詞在定語(yǔ)從句中作主語(yǔ)，需結(jié)合先行詞判斷定語(yǔ)從句謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞的單復(fù)數(shù)；3.

使用正確的時(shí)態(tài)。【定語(yǔ)從句具體講解見課堂精講冊(cè)P159】技巧訓(xùn)練1.The

girl

was

sad.

She

couldn’t

say

a

word.（用so...that...升格句子）________________________________________________The

girl

was

so

sad

that

she

couldn’t

say

a

word.2.I’ll

visit

my

grandparents.

The

summer

holiday

begins

this

year.（用as

soon

as升格句子）_________________________________________________________________________I’ll

visit

my

grandparents

as

soon

as

the

summer

holiday

begins

this

year.3.Everyone

in

our

team

trains

hard.

We

can

win

the

basketball

match.（用in

order

that升格句子）______________________________________________________________________________Everyone

in

our

team

trains

hard

in

order

that

we

can

win

the

basketball

match.4.How

do

you

learn

English?

I

want

to

know

your

ways

of

learning

it.（用how引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句升格句子）______________________________________I

want

to

know

how

you

learn

English.5.Miss

Li

is

my

teacher.

She

has

helped

me

a

lot

during

the

past

three

years.（用who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句升格句子）_________________________________________________________________________Miss

Li

is

the

teacher

who

has

helped

me

a

lot

during

the

past

three

years.6.I

like

this

book.

It

was

written

by

Cao

Wenxuan.（用which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句升格句子）__________________________________________________I

like

the

book

which

was

written

by

Cao

Wenxuan.7.我希望我的建議可以幫助你與父母保持良好的關(guān)系。（漢譯英）__________________________________________________________________________________________________I

hope

（that）

my

suggestions/advice

can

help

you

（to）

have

a

good

relationship

with

your

parents.8.他撒謊的原因是他害怕受到懲罰。（漢譯英）________________________________________________________________________The

reason

why

he

told

a

lie

was

that

he

was

afraid

of

being

punished.技巧5

增加句式多樣性

特殊句式或特殊結(jié)構(gòu)可以豐富文章的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，恰當(dāng)使用特殊句式可以為書面表達(dá)加分。以下為常用的特殊句式/結(jié)構(gòu)：感嘆句結(jié)構(gòu)例句What+形容詞+不可數(shù)名詞（+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)/系動(dòng)詞）What

sweet

water

it

is！結(jié)構(gòu)例句What+a/an+形容詞+可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)（+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)/系動(dòng)詞）What

a

kind

girl

she

is！What+形容詞+可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)（+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)/系動(dòng)詞）What

kind

girls

they

are！How+形容詞/副詞（+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)/系動(dòng)詞）How

beautifully

she

dances！How+主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)How

time

flies！續(xù)表倒裝句

倒裝句可以起到強(qiáng)調(diào)作用或驚嘆作用。在寫作中，常用的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)主要有：結(jié)構(gòu)含義例句There

be+主語(yǔ)（人/物）+地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)/時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)某地/某時(shí)有某人/某物There

is

a

big

playground

in

our

school.Here+動(dòng)詞/be動(dòng)詞+名詞這里是/有……Here/There

is

a

photo

of

my

family.There+動(dòng)詞/be動(dòng)詞+名詞那里是/有……結(jié)構(gòu)含義例句so+be/助動(dòng)詞/情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+主語(yǔ)某人也……Bob

is

tall.

So

am

I.neither+be/助動(dòng)詞/情態(tài)動(dòng)詞+主語(yǔ)某人也不……Harry

doesn’t

like

going

shopping.

Neither

do

I.續(xù)表結(jié)構(gòu)含義例句only位于句首，強(qiáng)調(diào)狀語(yǔ)時(shí)倒裝只有……才……Only

in

this

way

can

we

work

out

the

problem

successfully.續(xù)表用it作形式主語(yǔ)或形式賓語(yǔ)的句型it作形式主語(yǔ)1.It

seems

that…

好像/似乎……

如：It

seems

that

there

is

going

to

be

a

heavy

rain.

看來要下大雨了。2.It

takes/took

（sb.）+一段時(shí)間+to

do

sth.

做某事花費(fèi)（某人）……（時(shí)間）。如：It

took

me

four

weeks

to

finish

reading

this

book.

讀完這本書花了我4個(gè)星期。3.It’s+adj.（+for/of

sb.）+to

do

sth.

做某事（對(duì)某人來說）是……/（某人）做某事是……如：It’s

difficult

for

me

to

keep

exercising

in

the

morning，but

I

will

try

to

do

it.

對(duì)我來說，堅(jiān)持在早上鍛煉是困難的，但是我會(huì)盡量堅(jiān)持。4.It’s+adj.+that

從句

……是……

如：

It’s

exciting

that

Quan

Hongchan

is

coming

to

our

city.

全紅嬋要來我們城市了，真令人激動(dòng)。5.It’s

believed/said/reported

that...人們相信/說/據(jù)報(bào)道……

如：It’s

believed

that

doing

sports

is

good

for

health.人們相信做運(yùn)動(dòng)對(duì)健康有益。it作形式賓語(yǔ)

find，make，consider，feel等詞后接的賓語(yǔ)為從句或動(dòng)詞不定式時(shí)，常用it作形式賓語(yǔ)，真正的賓語(yǔ)（從句/動(dòng)詞不定式）后置。如：I

find

it

interesting

to

travel

to

Qinhuangdao.

我覺得去秦皇島旅游很有趣。技巧訓(xùn)練1.It’s

a

fine

day

today.（用感嘆句升格句子）_______________________What

a

fine

day

today!2.Miss

Bai

is

kind

and

caring.（用感嘆句升格句子）_________________________________How

kind

and

caring

Miss

Bai

is!3.莉莉不喜歡古典音樂。我也不喜歡。（漢譯英）____________________________________________Lily

doesn’t

like

classical

music.

Neither

do

I.4.只有通過多讀書，你才能提高閱讀速度。（漢譯英）_______________________________________________________________Only

by

reading

more

books

can

you

increase

your

reading

speed.5.Amy

helps

her

classmates.

She

considers

it

as

her

duty.（用it作形式賓語(yǔ)升格句子）________________________________________________Amy

considers

it

her

duty

to

help

her

classmates.6.Learning

maths

well

is

difficult

for

me.（用it作形式主語(yǔ)升格句子）________________________________________It

is

difficult

for

me

to

learn

maths

well.7.我覺得利用這個(gè)軟件學(xué)英語(yǔ)很有趣。（漢譯英）____________________________________________________I

find

it

interesting

to

learn

English

by

using

this

app.技巧6

巧擴(kuò)要點(diǎn)擴(kuò)寫原因

用來表示原因的詞匯有because，because

of，for，since，as，thanks

to，for

the

reason

that等。如：

I

am

looking

forward

to

the

coming

weekend.

→I

am

looking

forward

to

the

coming

weekend

because/as/for

my

good

friend

will

arrive

in

Beihai

on

Saturday

morning.擴(kuò)寫事例

用來引出例子的短語(yǔ)有for

example，such

as，like…，Let’s

take…for

example等。如：

Playing

basketball

has

many

advantages.

→Playing

basketball

has

many

advantages.

For

example，it

can

make

us

become

healthier.擴(kuò)寫條件

用來表示條件的詞匯有if，unless，as

long

as等。如：

You

can

go

shopping

with

us

this

Sunday.

→If

you

want

to

buy

a

nice

present

for

your

sister，you

can

go

shopping

with

us

this

Sunday.擴(kuò)寫目的

用來表示目的的詞匯有so

that，in

order

that，in

order

to，so

as

to，動(dòng)詞不定式等。如：

I

have

made

up

my

mind

to

study

hard.

→I

have

made

up

my

mind

to

study

hard

so

that/in

order

that

I

can

realize

my

dream

of

being

a

scientist.擴(kuò)寫結(jié)果

用來表示結(jié)果的詞匯有so，therefore，as

a

result，so…that…等。如：

Helen

wants

to

do

something

nice

for

the

environment.

→Helen

wants

to

do

something

nice

for

the

environment.

Therefore，she

joins

this

club.

so后接句子時(shí)，不用逗號(hào)。therefore后接句子時(shí)，需用逗號(hào)隔開。擴(kuò)寫感受

用來表示想法的詞匯有in

my

opinion，from

my

point

of

view，as

for

me等。如：

There

are

many

good

ways

to

learn

English

well.

→There

are

many

go