2025屆高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習+法國小鎮(zhèn)上的追船還包之旅+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習法國小鎮(zhèn)上的追船還包之旅1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文RaceatRiver’sEdgeWhenwearrivedinTournus,mycousinGabrielandIparkedourbikesandwalkedtothetownsquare.We’djustridden33kilometers,andwewerestarving.WeplannedtogetlunchandthenridebacktoMacon,asmallcityinFranceontheSa?neRiver.IwasspendingthesummertherewithGabriel’sfamily.Itwasmarketday.Localsarebusyfillingtheirbasketswithgroceries.Touristshuntedforsouvenirs.GabrielandIboughtalong,thinloafofbreadandsomecheeseI’mobsessedwith.Ittastesawesome.Asweate,InoticedagirlwearingaUSABasketballT-shirt.Shesmiledatus.BasketballisbiginFrancetoo.YoucanevenwatchNBAgamesonTV.ThegirlstoppedtoshopwithsomeonethatIguessedwashermombecausetheylookedsomuchalike.4續(xù)寫原文Isawthemagainbytheriver.Theysatonabenchenjoyingtheirsnacksinfrontofalong,narrowriverboatnamedVoyageur,whichhaddocked(停靠碼頭)earlier.Thentheyboardedtheboat.Itwaspreparingtoleave.Astheshipstartedtopullaway,Ispottedacolorfulshoppingbagonthebench.Thegirlhadleftit!Ilookedup.Somepassengersweregatheringontheupperdeckoftheriverboat,includingthegirlandhermom.IheldupthebagandwavedittogettheirattentionwhileGabrielcalledtothem.Whenthegirlnoticedthebag,sheopenedhermouthinsurprise.Butherfacefellastheboatstartedtopullawayfromthedock.Shedidn’tthinkshe’dgetherstuffback.5續(xù)寫原文“Maybewecanthrowittoher,Hugo!”Gabrielsaid.“It’stoolight,”Isaid.“Itwouldendupintheriver.Wehavetofindawaytoreturnit!”Runningalongsidetheboat,Gabriellearnedfromasailorthattheboat’snextstopwasMacon—ourdestinationaswell.“Doyouthinkwecankeepup?”Iasked.Gabriellaughed.“We’reabouttofindout!”6段首句Paragraph1：Ithrewthebagovermyshoulder,andwesetoff.Paragraph2：WefinallygottoMacon,thinkingwe’dfailed,whenGabrielsuddenlyshouted,“Iseethem!”7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了“我”和表哥加布里埃爾騎行33公里到達圖爾尼后，在集市買了食物充饑，期間注意到一個穿美國籃球T恤的女孩。之后在河邊，女孩和母親登上名為“旅行者”號的船離開時落下一個購物袋。船開動后，“我”和加布里埃爾發(fā)現(xiàn)女孩在船上且意識到包落下了。由于包太輕扔不過去，又得知船的下一站是“我們”要回的馬孔，于是兩人決定沿著河岸追趕船只，試圖將包歸還給女孩，一場充滿意外與挑戰(zhàn)的還包之旅就此展開，他們也踏上了未知能否成功的追船征程。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Ithrewthebagovermyshoulder,andwesetoff.我把包挎在肩上，和加布里埃爾一起沿著河岸朝著馬孔的方向奮力騎行。我們的呼吸急促而沉重，汗水不停地從額頭滾落，雙腿也因長時間的運動而逐漸酸痛乏力，但我們絲毫不敢停歇。一路上，我們既要留意腳下崎嶇的道路，又要緊緊盯著前方河面上漸漸遠去的“旅行者”號，生怕跟丟。盡管疲憊不堪，但歸還女孩購物袋的決心讓我們咬牙堅持，與船并行的每一刻都充滿了緊張與期待。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：WefinallygottoMacon,thinkingwe’dfailed,whenGabrielsuddenlyshouted,“Iseethem!”我們最終抵達了馬孔，滿心以為追不上船歸還計劃已經(jīng)失敗，心情無比失落。就在這時，加布里埃爾突然大聲喊道：“我看到她們了！”我猛地抬起頭，順著他手指的方向望去，果然看到女孩和她的媽媽正站在不遠處的岸邊。一瞬間，沮喪的情緒一掃而空，我們急忙朝著她們跑去，手中緊緊握著那個購物袋。女孩看到我們后，臉上露出驚喜與感動的神情，我們將購物袋遞還給她，她連聲道謝，而我們也因為成功歸還物品，內(nèi)心滿是成就感和溫暖。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Ithrewthebagovermyshoulder,andwesetoff.Withdeterminationburninginoureyes,GabrielandIpedaledfuriouslyalongtheriverbank,chasingaftertheVoyageur.Thewindwhippedpastourfaces,makingitdifficulttohearanythingbutthepoundingofourheartsandthewhirringofthebicyclewheels.Thepathwasuneven,andwehadtododgerocksandpotholeswhilekeepingoureyesfixedontheboat.Mylegswerealreadyachingfromthelongrideearlier,butthethoughtofreturningthegirl'sbagspurredmeon.Wepassedbypatchesofgreeneryandtheoccasionalfisherman,butourfocusremainedunshaken.Aswerode,Icouldfeeltheweightofthebagonmyshoulder,areminderofourmission.14范文呈現(xiàn)WefinallygottoMacon,thinkingwe’dfailed,whenGabrielsuddenlyshouted,“Iseethem!”Exhaustedanddisheartened,Ihadalmostgivenuphope.Butathiswords,myheadsnappedup,andtheretheywere,thegirlandhermother,standingonthedock.Asurgeofenergycoursedthroughme,andwequicklydismountedourbikesandrushedtowardsthem.Thegirl'seyeswidenedinsurpriseandthenfilledwithgratitudeaswehandedherthebag.Shethankedusprofusely,andwegrinnedateachother,knowingthatoureffortshadbeenworthit.Inthatmoment,thewearinessofthelongridevanished,replacedbyasenseofaccomplishmentandsatisfactionthatwarmedourhearts.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Ithrewthebagovermyshoulder,andwesetoff.Heartsaflamewithdetermination,GabrielandIspedalongtheriverbank,thewindhowlingpastusasifurginguson.Ourlegs,alreadyfatiguedfromtheprior33-kilometerride,pumpedwithrenewedvigor.Theunevenpathbeneathourwheels,litteredwithrocksandpotholes,failedtodeterus;instead,itwasasiftheverythoughtofthegirl'slostbagpropelledusforward.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)WefinallyreachedMacon,crestfallenandconvincedofourfailure.Then,outoftheblue,Gabrielexclaimed,"Iseethem!"Itwasatthatmomentthatasparkofhopereignitedwithinus.Thereonthedockstoodthegirlandhermother.Witharushofadrenaline,wehastenedtowardsthem.Thegirl'seyeswidenedinastonishmentandgratitudeaswereturnedthebag.Itwasnotjus