高考英語復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫練習(xí)+相信的力量+課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習(xí)相信的力量1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Thepowerofbelief“Youwillneverwalkagain.Youwillhavetouseawheelchair.”Unpreparedforthedoctor’sjudgment,Iheardhiswordsfallheavilyonmyears,numbingmysoul.Myseriouscaraccidenthadleftmeunconsciousandincriticalcondition.Iawakenedtofindbothleg:wrappedincasts(石膏).Lyinginmybedmotionlessandrelyingonprayer,IwonderedhowIcouldgivemyten-year-oldsonhopethatMomwouldheal.He’dbeencheerfuloneveryvisit,butIsawthefearinhiseyes.Thethoughtofhavingatotallyhandicapped(殘疾的)motherwasweighingheavilyonhislittleshoulder.HeneededtherayofhopethatIwouldnotbeinawheelchairforever.4續(xù)寫原文Justmaybe,Ithought,Icouldusethisexperiencetoteachwhattodowhendisastersstrike.IneededsomethingbesidesmyphysicalhealingtosinkmyIrishstubbornnessinto—it’sthatpersonalitythatkeptmegoingthroughthetoughestchallengeofmylifeItdidn’ttakemelongtobecomeimpatientwiththepacethedoctorswerewillingtogowithme.Ideterminedtolearneverythingtheyshowedme.Ineededtomakethingshappenmyway.Andbeingconfined(限制)toawheelchairtherestofmylifedidn’tfitintomyplans.5續(xù)寫原文Atfirst,Itaughtmyselftomovefromthebedtothewheelchair.Imadetinymovementsforweeks,afraidoffalling,butmoreafraidtojustlieinbed.Ireachedapointwheremyarmswerestrongenoughtocarrymeintothechair.Gettingoutofthechairandbackintobedprovedmoredifficult,butIsoondevelopedamethodofgrabbingthesheets.Ioftenwonderedwhatthenursesanddoctorswouldhavedoneifthey’dseenmestrugglingonmyown.OncesureIcouldreturnmyselftothebedfromthewheelchair,Ibegantouseawalkerthathadbeenleftinmyroombyaformerhospitalroommate.6段首句Paragraph1：Everynight,whenIknewIwouldn’tbeinterrupted(打擾),Iwouldstarttotrain.Paragraph2：Itcametimetosharemyachievementswiththepersonmostimportanttome.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了作者遭遇嚴(yán)重車禍后，被醫(yī)生判定可能再也無法行走，只能依靠輪椅生活，這一消息讓作者深受打擊。兒子的探視，其眼中的恐懼讓作者意識到必須振作，于是決定利用這次經(jīng)歷教導(dǎo)兒子如何面對災(zāi)難。作者很快對醫(yī)生的治療進(jìn)度失去耐心，憑借自身頑強(qiáng)的愛爾蘭式倔強(qiáng)，開始自學(xué)從床上移動到輪椅，經(jīng)過數(shù)周的微小移動練習(xí)，手臂力量增強(qiáng)后能夠坐到輪椅上，又摸索出從輪椅回到床上的方法，還開始使用前室友留下的助行器，展現(xiàn)出不向命運低頭、努力康復(fù)的堅強(qiáng)精神。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：Everynight,whenIknewIwouldn’tbeinterrupted(打擾),Iwouldstarttotrain.每當(dāng)夜幕降臨，萬籟俱寂，確定不會被任何人打擾后，我便開啟艱難的訓(xùn)練之旅。我咬緊牙關(guān)，雙手緊緊抓住床邊的欄桿，拼盡全力想要撐起自己虛弱無力的身體，豆大的汗珠從額頭滾落，浸濕了枕頭。每一次嘗試移動，腿部傳來的疼痛都如針般刺扎，但心中那團(tuán)渴望重新行走的火焰從未熄滅。我在黑暗中獨自摸索，從最初簡單的肢體伸展，到逐漸增加難度的坐立練習(xí)，一點點地挑戰(zhàn)著身體的極限，心中默默為自己加油打氣，期待著能夠早日恢復(fù)行走能力，哪怕只是一小步。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Itcametimetosharemyachievementswiththepersonmostimportanttome.經(jīng)過一段時間艱苦卓絕的努力，我終于迎來了這個重要的時刻——與我生命中最重要的人，也就是我的兒子，分享我的訓(xùn)練成果。那天，陽光透過窗戶灑在病房的地上，像是為這個特殊的時刻鋪上了金色的地毯。我特意讓兒子來到病房，在他充滿期待與好奇的目光中，我深吸一口氣，雙手緊緊握住助行器，緩緩地、穩(wěn)穩(wěn)地從床邊站起身來。兒子的眼中先是閃過一絲驚訝，繼而被滿滿的驚喜與自豪所取代。我一步一步，緩慢卻堅定地走向他，每一步都承載著無數(shù)個日夜的汗水與堅持，當(dāng)我終于走到他面前，緊緊地抱住他時，我看到他眼中閃爍著激動的淚花，而我也深知，這一切的付出都是值得的。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)Everynight,whenIknewIwouldn'tbeinterrupted,Iwouldstarttotrain.Astheworldoutsidefellsilentandthehospitalcorridorsdimmed,Isummonedallmystrengthanddetermination.Lyinginbed,I'dfirstfocusonmybreathing,tryingtocalmthenervesthatalwaysseemedtosurfaceatthishour.Then,withgreateffort,I'dslowlymovemylegsunderthesheets,wincingatthepainthatshotthroughthem.Inchbyinch,I'dedgemyselfclosertothesideofthebed,myhandsgrippingthemattresstightly.Onceinposition,I'dtakeadeepbreathand,usingthemomentum,pushmyselfupintoasittingposition.Itwasastrugglethatleftmeexhausted,butIrefusedtogiveup.I'drepeatthisprocessoverandover,sometimesfallingbackontothebedindefeat,butalwaysgettingupagain,fueledbythehopeofonedaywalkingoutofthathospitalonmyowntwofeet.14范文呈現(xiàn)Itcametimetosharemyachievementswiththepersonmostimportanttome.Ihadcarefullyplannedthismoment,wantingittobeperfect.Iaskedthenursetobringmysontomyroom.AsIwaited,Iadjustedmypositioninthewheelchair,makingsureIlookedasstrongandconfidentaspossible.Whenhewalkedthroughthedoor,hiseyeswidenedwithanticipation.Ismiledathim,asmilethatmaskedthepainandexhaustionIfelt.Withadeepbreath,Iplacedmyhandsonthearmrestsofthewheelchairand,slowly,withallthegraceIcouldmuster,Ipushedmyselfup.Mylegstrembledbeneathme,butIheldmyground.Itookatentativestepforward,thenanother.Hiseyesfilledwithtearsashewatchedme,andIcouldseetheprideandjoyinhisexpression.ItwasamomentIwouldcherishforever,knowingthatallmyhardworkhadbeenworthitjusttoseethatlookonhisface.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Everynight,whenconvincedthatnointerruptionwouldcomemyway,Iembarkedonmyarduoustrainingjourney.Withthestillnessofthenightenvelopingthehospital,I,lyinginbed,wouldfirststeadymybreath,tryinghardtoovercomethenervesthatalwayslurked.Then,painshootingthroughmylegs,I'dinchmyselftowardstheedgeofthebed,handsgrippingthemattresstightly.Itwasmyunwaveringdetermination