讀后續(xù)寫+意外邂逅獨(dú)角獸：一場關(guān)于成長的旅程+講義 高三下學(xué)期第二次質(zhì)量監(jiān)測英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。MynameisFauna,butMomandDadsometimescallmeMagpie,sinceItalkalot.Theycallme“animalmagnet,”too;becauseanimalslikeme.Idon’tmindatallbecauseIlikethem,too.Infact,whatIreally,reallywantisapetofmyown.Mydadhasapetfish,andIlikeitalot

—butIwouldstilllikeapetthat’sallmine.“Please?Iaskedmyparents.“Prettyplease,withcherriesandchocolateandwhippedcreamontop?”“We’llsee!”“I’llwalkitandfeeditandbrushit....well,unlessithasscalesorsomething.ThenI’llpolishthemrealnice.”“We’llsee.”Finally,though,“we’llsee”wasupgradedto“soon.”“Let’sdosomeresearch,”saidDad,“andseewhatkindofpetisbestforyou.”“Andkeepyoureyespeeled,”saidMom.“Youneverknowwhenanopportunitywillcomealong.”O(jiān)nedidcomealong.IwasonmywayhomefromschoolwhenIsawaunicorn(獨(dú)角獸)standinginbackofBakerTrembly’sshop.Hewasnibblingstalebiscuitsoutofthetrashcan.Ithoughthemightbeawildunicorncomeintotown,buthetrotted(小跑)rightuptomewhenIheldouttheappleIhadinmybackpack,leftoverfromlunch.“Itfollowedmehome!”Itoldmyparents,afterImanagedtoleadtheunicorntoourfrontgate.“CanIkeepit?”“Ihopeyouwerecareful,”saidmydadwithafrown.“Unicornscanbedangerous.”“Notthisone!He’sverysweet.Andhe’sjustwhatIwant!.Icankeephim.inthegarden.”“Hedoeslooksweet,”saidmymom.“Let’scheckhistags(標(biāo)牌).”Tags?Ihadn’tevennoticedhisthinsilvercollar,I’dbeensoexcited.注意：1．續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2．請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：Fauna非常想要一個屬于自己的寵物，父母說要做些研究來確定哪種寵物適合她，還讓她留意機(jī)會。一天Fauna在放學(xué)回家路上看到一只獨(dú)角獸在吃BakerTrembly商店后面垃圾桶里的餅干，她用午餐剩下的蘋果把獨(dú)角獸引到了自家前門，請求父母讓她養(yǎng)這只獨(dú)角獸，父母發(fā)現(xiàn)獨(dú)角獸戴著有電話號碼的銀項圈，故事由此續(xù)寫。5處伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆：Fauna一直渴望有一個屬于自己的寵物，這為她發(fā)現(xiàn)獨(dú)角獸后極力想留下它做鋪墊。回應(yīng)：當(dāng)?shù)弥?dú)角獸可能有主人時，F(xiàn)auna內(nèi)心從期待轉(zhuǎn)為失落，但最終在與獨(dú)角獸主人的交流中學(xué)會了理解和成全，體現(xiàn)了她在追求寵物過程中的成長，也呼應(yīng)了她對寵物的渴望，使情感線更加豐富。伏筆：父母提到要做研究確定適合Fauna的寵物，暗示寵物的選擇并非隨意，需要考慮多方面因素，這為獨(dú)角獸有主人且需要?dú)w還這一情節(jié)做了伏筆?；貞?yīng)：獨(dú)角獸有主人這一事實符合父母所說的要慎重選擇寵物的理念，同時也教育了Fauna不是所有喜歡的動物都能成為自己的寵物，推動了故事的發(fā)展和主題的深化。伏筆：Fauna用蘋果輕易地將獨(dú)角獸引到自家前門，顯示出獨(dú)角獸對食物的需求和它可能不太怕人的性格，這為后面獨(dú)角獸與主人的關(guān)系以及它走失的原因做了暗示?；貞?yīng)：獨(dú)角獸主人Sari提到獨(dú)角獸是因為被食物吸引而走失，與前文Fauna用蘋果引它的情節(jié)相呼應(yīng)，使故事邏輯更加連貫，也解釋了獨(dú)角獸出現(xiàn)在這里的原因，豐富了故事細(xì)節(jié)。伏筆：Fauna一開始沒有注意到獨(dú)角獸的銀項圈，體現(xiàn)了她的興奮和粗心，同時也為后續(xù)發(fā)現(xiàn)項圈上的電話號碼以及聯(lián)系主人的情節(jié)設(shè)置了懸念?；貞?yīng)：發(fā)現(xiàn)電話號碼后聯(lián)系主人，推動了故事向歸還獨(dú)角獸的方向發(fā)展，解開了之前獨(dú)角獸身份不明的懸念，使故事節(jié)奏緊湊，情節(jié)跌宕起伏。伏筆：父母對獨(dú)角獸的態(tài)度比較謹(jǐn)慎，擔(dān)心其危險性，這為后面他們支持Fauna歸還獨(dú)角獸做了鋪墊，也體現(xiàn)了父母在教育孩子過程中的理性和責(zé)任感?；貞?yīng)：父母在整個過程中引導(dǎo)Fauna做出正確的選擇，幫助她理解寵物所有權(quán)和責(zé)任的重要性，使故事不僅是關(guān)于寵物的故事，更是Fauna成長的故事，深化了文章的內(nèi)涵和教育意義。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)情感線：第一段：Fauna看到項圈上的電話號碼時，心情瞬間變得復(fù)雜，既有些失望，因為可能無法留下獨(dú)角獸，又有些好奇和擔(dān)憂，擔(dān)心獨(dú)角獸的主人會責(zé)怪它亂跑。她懷著忐忑的心情撥打了電話，等待主人的到來，此時她對獨(dú)角獸的喜愛和不舍愈發(fā)強(qiáng)烈，但也知道應(yīng)該做正確的事。第二段：當(dāng)Sari說她和獨(dú)角獸從未分開過時，F(xiàn)auna看到了他們之間深厚的感情，心中的不舍逐漸轉(zhuǎn)化為理解和成全。雖然難過，但她也為獨(dú)角獸能回到主人身邊而感到欣慰，感受到了一種超越個人喜愛的大愛，完成了從單純的渴望擁有到學(xué)會放手和祝福的情感升華。故事線：第一段：Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.Itookadeepbreathanddialedthenumberwithtremblinghands.AwomannamedSariansweredthephone.ItoldherIhadfoundherunicorn.Shesoundedveryrelievedandsaidshewouldcomerightover.Whilewewaited,Istrokedtheunicorn'smaneandwhisperedtoitthatitsownerwascoming.Theunicornseemedtounderstandandnuzzledmyhand.WhenSariarrived,sheranuptotheunicornandhuggedittightly.第二段：“I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”Shethankedmefortakingcareofhimandtoldmehowhehadgottenlostwhilefollowingthesmelloffood.IfeltapangofsadnessknowingIcouldn'tkeephim,butseeingthejoyonSari'sfacemademerealizeitwastherightthingtodo.AsSariledtheunicornaway,Iwavedgoodbyewithasmile,eventhoughthereweretearsinmyeyes.Iknewthatoneday,Iwouldfindtheperfectpetforme,anditwouldbemineintherightway.主旨升華句Trueloveisnotaboutpossession,butabouttheabilitytoletgowhenit'snecessary,allowingtheoneswecareabouttobewheretheytrulybelong.（真正的愛不是占有，而是在必要時放手，讓我們所關(guān)心的人回到他們真正屬于的地方。）Sometimes,themostdifficultchoiceswemake,likegivingupsomethingwedesire,aretheonesthatteachusthegreatestlessonsaboutresponsibilityandkindness.（有時，我們做出的最艱難的選擇，比如放棄我們渴望的東西，正是那些教會我們關(guān)于責(zé)任和善良的最重要課程的選擇。）Inthejourneyoflife,wemayencountermanytemptations,butitisourabilitytomaketherightdecisions,evenwhenithurts,thatdefinesourcharacterandshapesourfuture.（在人生的旅途中，我們可能會遇到許多誘惑，但正是我們即使在痛苦時也能做出正確決定的能力，定義了我們的性格并塑造了我們的未來。）Thepathtomaturityisoftenpavedwiththebittersweetexperiencesoflettinggo.Itisthroughtheseactsthatwelearntocherishthethingsthataretrulymeantforusandgrowintobetterversionsofourselves.（通往成熟的道路往往是由放手的苦樂參半的經(jīng)歷鋪就的。正是通過這些行為，我們學(xué)會珍惜真正屬于我們的東西，并成長為更好的自己。）Loveandkindnessextendbeyondourowndesires.Whenwechoosetodowhat'srightforothers,wenotonlybrightentheirlivesbutalsodiscoverthebeautyandstrengthwithinourselves.（愛和善良超越了我們自己的欲望。當(dāng)我們選擇為他人做正確的事情時，我們不僅照亮了他們的生活，也發(fā)現(xiàn)了自己內(nèi)心的美麗和力量。）寫作示范第一篇Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.MyheartsankalittleasIrealizedtheunicornprobablyhadanowner.Ishowedthetagtomyparents,andwedecidedtocallthenumber.Awomananswered,andshesoundedfrantic.Shesaidherunicornhadgonemissingandshehadbeensearchingeverywhere.Itoldherwherewewere,andshesaidshe'dberightthere.Whilewewaited,Igavetheunicornsomemoreapplesandtalkedtoitsoftly.Itolditthatitsownerwascomingandthatithadbeenverybrave.Whenthewomanarrived,sherushedovertotheunicornandhuggedittightly.“I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”Shethankedmeprofuselyfortakingcareofhimandtoldmehowhehadmanagedtoslipaway.IfeltabitsadthatIcouldn'tkeeptheunicorn,butseeingthehappinessonSari'sfacemademefeelbetter.MyparentsputtheirarmsaroundmeandtoldmethateventhoughIcouldn'thavethisunicorn,therewouldbeotheropportunitiesformetogetapet.Inodded,realizingthatsometimes,doingtherightthingmeanslettinggoofwhatwewant.AndIknewthatwhenthetimewasright,Iwouldfindtheperfectpetthatwasmeantforme.第二篇Therewasalittletagonit,withaphonenumber.Iwashesitanttocallatfirst,fearingthatIwouldlosethechancetokeeptheunicorn.Butmyparentsencouragedmetodotherightthing.Idialedthenumber,andaladynamedSaripickedup.ShewasoverjoyedtohearthatIhadfoundherunicorn.Shetoldmethathewasveryprecioustoherandthatshehadbeenworriedsick.Aswewaitedforhertoarrive,Isatwiththeunicorn,pettingitgently.WhenSarishowedup,shehadtearsinhereyes.“I’vehadhimsincehewaslittle,”Sarisaid.“We’veneverbeenapart.”Sheexplainedhowtheunicornhadgottenoutbyaccident.Icouldseethestrongbondbetweenthem.Althoughitwashard,IknewIhadtogivetheunicornback.Sarithankedmeagainandagain,andsheevengavemeasmallunicorncharmasatokenofhergratitude.Astheywalkedaway,Iwatchedwithamixtureofsadnessandhappiness.Ilearnedthatsometimes,thethingswelovethemostaren'talwaysmean