Unit8Naturaldisasters-【同步寫作課】2023-2024學年八年級上冊英語單元寫作深度指導(牛津譯林版)(原卷版+解析)

Unit8Naturaldisasters單元寫作指導與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度記敘文：災害發(fā)生的當天情況說明文：災害防范措施本單元的話題是“自然災害與防范”，主要介紹自然災害的發(fā)生和防范措施，包括介紹自然災害發(fā)生時的情況、防范措施等相關(guān)內(nèi)容。在具體的寫作中，學生應注意以下幾點：1.能夠正確拼寫描自然災害的相關(guān)詞匯；2.能夠恰當使用相關(guān)短語和句型表達；3.能夠正確使用過去進行時進行描述當時的狀況?！驹~匯積累】1.一個像雷聲的很大的聲音2.開始晃動3.害怕的尖叫4跑出樓房5.盡某人最大的能力做某事6.四面八方7.玻璃塊8.倒塌9.黑暗安靜10.根本不11.覺得緊張12.快速跳動13.被困住14.自言自語15.片刻的恐懼16.穿過17.冷靜下來18.喊救命19.慢慢爬過黑暗20.足夠的空間更我移動21.試圖找到出路22.移走23.明亮的日光24.拖干凈水25.輸?shù)魶Q賽26.上千的27.撞上28.沖走29.引火30.從樹上掉下來31.有雷電的風暴32.著火33.受傷34.壞掉35.摔倒36.盡快37.用某物蓋住某物38.保護自己免遭危險39.著火的建筑40.從洪水中過去41.保持某人安全免遭危險【句型積累】42. Soontherealnoisecame,likebombsundertheground. 很快，像地下的炸彈一樣的聲音傳來。43. Outside,peoplewererunninginalldirectionswhilepiecesofglassandbrickswerefallingdown. 外面，碎玻璃和碎磚紛紛掉落下來，人們四處逃散。44. Icouldnotseeanythingatall,andIdidnotknowifanyoneelsewasnearme. 我什么也看不見，也不知道是否有人在我附近。45. Ifeltnervousandmyheartwasbeatingfast. 我感到緊張，我的心跳得很快。46. AmomentoffearwentthroughmymindbutItoldmyselftocalmdownsinceIwasstillalive.我的腦中掠過一陣恐懼，但我告訴我自己要鎮(zhèn)定下來，既然我仍然活著。47. Istartedtopullmyselfslowlythroughthedark. 我開始在黑暗中慢慢地向前移動身體。48. AsIwastryingtofindmywayout.Isuddenlyheardsomenoiseaboveme. 當我嘗試著找到出路，我突然聽到了上面的噪聲。49. Timmywassleeping/asleepwhentheearthquakestarted. 當?shù)卣痖_始的時候蒂姆在睡覺。50. Mydad’scarbrokedownbecauseofthecoldweather. 由于糟糕的天氣我爸爸的汽車出故障了。51. Staylowtotheground. 貼著地面。52. Thesnowkeptfallingaroundus. 雪不停地在我們周圍落下。53. IwasdoingmyhomeworkintheclassroomwhenMr.Wucameinandtoldustogohomeearly. 當吳老師進來告訴我們早點回家時，我正在教室里做家庭作業(yè)。54. WelostourumbrellainthewindandInearlyfellover. 我們在風中丟了雨傘，我差點兒摔倒。55. Suddenly,astrongwindcamefrombehind. 突然，一陣大風從后面刮來【諺語積累】1.Natureiskindofalovingmother,butalsoabutcherincoldblood. 自然不僅是位慈愛的母親，還是個冷血的屠夫。2.Fishjumpoutofthewaterandraincomes. 魚兒出水跳，風雨就來到。3. Allofthedisaster,butbecauseoflove. 所有的災難，不過是因為眷戀。災時狀況【萬能寫作模板】災時狀況Anearthquake/Aflood/Asnowstorm/...hit....Iwasdoing...when......becauseoftheheavyrain/snow....Wecouldonlyhear/see.......keptfalling.Suddenly,..防范措施...hadtowalkslowly/pulloneselfthrough....防范措施If...,don’t...災后感受...wasreallyterrible.災后感受Wewereallsave.2022年6月10日，李華的家鄉(xiāng)四川雅安市蘆山縣發(fā)生了一場地震，地震造成了巨大的損毀，但幸運的是，李華一家安然無恙。假如你是李華，請你描述一下地震發(fā)生時家里人的活動情景及感受：1.李華在浴室里洗澡；2.爸爸在電腦旁工作；3.媽媽在廚房里做晚餐；4.爺爺奶奶在客廳看電視。要求：1．結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達通順，語言規(guī)范，書寫清晰；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實的人名，學校名等信息；3．80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

MynameisLiHua.Therewasanearthquakeatabout5:00p.m.onJune1st.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MynameisLiHua.Therewasanearthquakeatabout5:00p.m.onJune1st.Atthattime,allmyfamilywereathome.Iwastakingashowerinthebathroom.Myfatherwasworkingonthecomputer.Mymotherwascookinginthekitchen.MygrandparentswerewatchingTVinthelivingroom.Wewereallscared.

Theearthquakemadeourneighborhoodinamess.Thereweresomefallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbish.Butluckily,itwasn’ttooheavyanditdidn’tlastfortoolong.Wewereallsafe.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，屬于材料作文寫作；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”和“過去進行時”；③提示：文章開頭以及要點已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點逐點闡述，不要遺漏提示中的“家里人的感受”這一要點，可以適當增加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接短文開頭，引出話題；第二步，接著按照要點敘述當時家里人各自正在做的事情，以及家人們的感受；第三步，介紹地震給周邊生活環(huán)境帶來的破壞，抒發(fā)作者的感受并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點詞匯]①bescared感到害怕②inamess亂七八糟[高分句型]Thereweresomefallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbish.（and連接三個并列的名詞，therebe句型，就近原則，過去分詞作定語）英漢互譯（一）BencouldhearstrongwindsoutsidehishomeinAlabama.Blackcloudsweremakingtheskyverydark.Withnolightoutside,itfeltlikemidnight.（1）ThenewsonTVreportedthataheavyrainstormwasinthearea.Everyoneintheneighborhoodwasbusy.Ben’sdadwasputtingpiecesofwoodoverthewindowswhilehismomwasmakingsuretheflashlightsandradiowereworking.（2）她也放了一些蠟燭和火柴在桌子上.Benwashelpinghismommakedinnerwhentherainbegantobeatheavilyagainstthewindows（3）晚餐后，他們試著去玩游戲，butitwashardtohavefunwithaseriousstormhappeningoutside.Bencouldnotsleepatfirst.Hefinallyfellasleepwhenthewindwasdyingdownataround3:00a.m.Whenhewokethesumwasrising.Hewentoutsidewithhisfamilyandfoundtheneighborhoodinamess.（4）Fallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbishwereeverywhere.Theyjoinedtheneighborstohelpcleanuptheneighborhoodtogether.（5）Althoughthestormbrokemanythingsapartitbroughtfamiliesandneighborsclosertogether.將文中劃線部分譯成漢語或者英語.1．2．3．4．5．（二）Inmanycountries,therearesomestormsinsummerorautumn.Whenastormcomes,itisoftenwiththunderandlightening(雷電).Soit'susuallydangerousduringastorm._Themostimportantthingyoucandoistogetyourself,yourfamilyandyourhomeprepared._有時,盡管你在室內(nèi),也是不安全的。Thelighteningcangothroughelectricalwires(電線)andoverphonelines._Sometimesitkillspeoplebysettingtheirhouseonfire._Ifyoustayoutside,youwill-alsobeindanger._Whenyoustandinanopenplaceorunderabigtree,thelighteningmayhityou.Whenyouseeastormcoming,goindoors.Don'tstayoutside._在室內(nèi),最好不要用手機或電腦。Keepawayfromoutsidedoorsandwindowsanddonotlieon.thefloor.Inordertoprotectourselves,it'snecessaryforustoknowthedosanddon'tinastorm.6．7．8．9．10．（三）

WhenSamwasan11-year-oldboy,arainstormhithishometownonadarknight.71.Whenthestormcame,hewasdoinghishomework.

Hissisterwasasleepandhismotherwasbusycookinginthekitchen.72.他爸爸正在看電視.Suddenly,allthelightswentoff.73.Thentherainbeatagainstthedoorsandwindowsheavily.Thewindblewstrongly,sohissisterwokeup.Shewasscaredandstartedtocry.74.這家人什么也做不了。Sam’sfathertookouttheflashlight,butthebatteries（電池）weredead.75.Sohismotherfoundsomecandlesandaboxofmatches.Thenextmorning,aftertheylistenedtothenewsontheradio,theyrealizedthataheavyrainstormhadhappened.11．12．13．14．15．【參考答案】（一）【答案】1．電視新聞報道該地區(qū)有一場大暴風雨。2．Shealsoputsomecandlesandmatchesonthetable.3．Afterdinnertheytriedtoplaygames.4．到處都有倒下的樹壞了的窗戶和垃圾。5．盡管暴風雨破壞了很多的東西但是它使家人和鄰居們更相近了。（二）【答案】6．你能做的最重要的事情就是讓你自己、你的家人和家準備好。7．Sometimesitisn’tsafeevenifyouareinthehouse.8．有時它通過讓人們的房子著火來殺死人們。9．當你站在開闊的地方或大樹下時，閃電可能會擊中你。10．Inthehouse,youhadbetternotusethephoneorcomputer.（三）【答案】11．暴風雨來臨的時候，他正在做作業(yè)。12．HisfatherwaswatchingTV.13．然后雨重重地敲打著門窗。14．Thefamilycouldn’tdoanything.15．因此他的媽媽找到了一些蠟燭和一盒火柴。（一）地震是一種自然現(xiàn)象，雖然目前我們還無法預測，但我們可以了解一些自救知識，減少地震帶來的傷害。假如你是你學校校報英文版的編輯，請你寫一篇題為“WhattoDoDuringanEarthquakeatSchool”短文，刊登在校報上。提示：◆在高樓里，不要從樓上跳出去。遠離窗戶和黑板。遠離火源。藏在課桌下面。當?shù)孛嫱Ｖ箵u晃時，快速離開大樓，然后去操場?！粼诓賵錾仙象w育課，待在那里。不要返回到教室去。不要站在高樓和高樹附近，因為它們可能落到你的身上?？傊?，按照在學校所學的知識去做。保持鎮(zhèn)定，要勇敢且樂于助人。要求：1.時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時

人稱：第二人稱2.包含信息提示中的所有信息，可適當發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)80左右（開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。WhattoDoDuringanEarthquakeatSchoolYouhavenoideawhentheearthquakewillhappen,butyoushouldknowwhattododuringanearthquakeatschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（二）Writeapassageofatleast40wordsonthetopic“Whatshallwedowhenthereisatyphoon?”(以“臺風來時我們該怎么做？”為題寫一篇不少于40個詞的短文)Usethefollowingpointsasareference(以下內(nèi)容僅供參考)1.Whatcanweseewhenthereisatyphoon?2.Whatmayhappenwhenthereisatyphoon?3.Whatshallwedowhenthereisatyphoon?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）2020年7月17日，恩施州因持續(xù)暴雨爆發(fā)特大洪水，恩施人民團結(jié)一致抗擊洪水。請根據(jù)要點提示并結(jié)合你的所見所聞寫一篇英語短文，介紹恩施人民如何互幫互助共渡難關(guān)。要點提示：1.簡要描述受災情況；2.齊心協(xié)力抗洪救災（如：轉(zhuǎn)移群眾、提供住宿、捐贈物品、清掃街道……）3.談談自己的感受。寫作要求：1.要點齊全，并根據(jù)內(nèi)容適當發(fā)揮；2.條理清晰，字跡工整，詞數(shù)不少于80詞；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯：洪水flood

捐贈donate___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（四）請根據(jù)下面提示，以“Alandslide（山崩）”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。提示：1.上周一早上，在連續(xù)下了兩天大雨之后發(fā)生了山崩；2.我和媽媽在家，爸爸下午回來，雨很大，他叫我和媽媽趕快帶傘離開；3.就在那時，房子開始搖晃，我們非常害怕，迅速跑開了；4.第二天上午回家時，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)房子沒有了，到處是碎玻璃和磚塊，我們感到很傷心。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（五）假如你是Lucy，昨天下午你所居住的地方遭遇了一場暴風雨。請給你的好友Lily寫一封電子郵件。向她描述一下暴風雨來臨時，你的家人（爸爸、媽媽、你、妹妹）都在干什么，暴風雨的影響是什么？要求：1.須包括所有要點提示，并適當補充，語句通順，意思連貫；2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右；開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)個人真實姓名和校名。DearLily,Letmetellyousomethingabouttherainstormyesterdayafternoon.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Lucy

參考答案：1.【答案】例文：WhattoDoDuringanEarthquakeatSchoolYouhavenoideawhentheearthquakewillhappen,butyoushouldknowwhattododuringanearthquakeatschool.Whenyou’reinahighbuilding,don’tjumpoutofit.Stayawayfromwindowsandblackboardsandfire.Hideunderthedesk.Whenthegroundstopsshaking,leavethebuildingquicklyandthengototheplayground.Ifyou’rehavingaPEclassintheplayground,pleasestaythere.Don’tgobacktotheclassroom.Don’tstandneartallbuildingsortalltrees,becausetheymayfalldown.Ifyoufollowtheserules,youcanbesafeduringanearthquake.Keepcalm,bebraveandhelpful.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說明文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，可適當補充細節(jié)，以第二人稱為主。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出主題——發(fā)生地震時該做什么；第二步，介紹如何在地震中自救；第三步，叮囑注意事項并做總結(jié)。[亮點詞匯]①stayawayfrom遠離②falldown掉落③keepcalm保持鎮(zhèn)定[高分句型]①Whenthegroundstopsshaking,leavethebuildingquicklyandthengototheplayground.(When引導的時間狀語從句)②Ifyou’rehavingaPEclassintheplayground,pleasestaythere.(If引導的條件狀語從句)2.【答案】例文Whatshallwedowhenthereisatyphoon?Atyphoonisakindofverystrongwind.Whenthereisatyphoon,wecanseethecloudsmovingquicklyinthesky.Peopleholdtheirraincoatstightlywhentheyarewalkinginthestreets.Thestrongwindmaybreakthewindowsanditmayalsoblowawaytheflowerpotsoutsideourflat,soweshouldclosethewindowsandmovetheflowerpotsintotheflat.Weshouldstayathomeandlistentothenewsaboutthetyphoon.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時”；③提示：要求根據(jù)提示內(nèi)容寫一篇關(guān)于“臺風來時我們該怎么做？”的短文，可適當發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫，表述完整。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹臺風來臨時，我們會看見什么；第二步，介紹臺風來臨時，會發(fā)生什么；第三步，介紹臺風來臨時，我們應該怎么做。[亮點詞匯]①akindof一種②blowaway吹走③stayathome待在家[高分句型]①Peopleholdtheirraincoatstightlywhentheyarewalkinginthestreets.（when引導時間狀語從句）②Thestrongwindmaybreakthewindowsanditmayalsoblowawaytheflowerpotsoutsideourflat,soweshouldclosethewindowsandmovetheflowerpotsintotheflat.（so連接并列句）3.【答案】例文：Inmanyareasofthecity,therewasseriouswaterlogging,vehicleswereflooded,houseswereirrigated,anditwasdifficultforpeopletotravel.Inaddition,thedisastercausedalargeareaofpowerfailure,people’sproductionandlifewereseriouslyaffected.Inordertofightfloodsandprovidedisasterrelief,peopleworkedtogether.Withthegovernment’spositiveresponse,groupsandorganizationstransferredpeople,andlocalcharitiesraisedmoneytoprovidepeoplewithaccommodationanddonatedgoods.Aftertheflood,manyvolunteersvolunteeredtocleanthestreetsandresumedtheconstructionofthecity.Afterthis,Ithinkunityisstrength.Chinesepeoplecanovercomeanydifficultybyuniting.Inaddition,weshouldlearntotakeprecautionsandtryourbesttominimizethelosses.【詳解】1.題干解讀：本文是一篇材料作文，按照要點提示介紹恩施州因暴雨引發(fā)的洪澇災害；內(nèi)容包括：恩施州的受災情況、人們救災的措施行動、自己的感受。2.寫作指導：本文以第三人稱、一般過去時為主，注意主謂一致問題；寫作時注意按要點分段敘述，保證文章條理清晰，語句通順。4.【答案】AlandslideLastMondaymorning,aftertwodays’heavyrain,alandslidehappened.Iwasathomewithmymotherandthenmyfathercamebackintheafternoon.Itwasrainingheavily.Heaskedmetoleavequicklywithumbrellas.Justthen,thehousestartedtoshake.Wewereveryafraidandranawayquickly.Thenextmorning,wewentbackhome.Wefoundthattherewasnohouseatall.Therewereonlypiecesofglassandbrickseverywhere.Wefeltverysad.【詳解】這是一篇要求寫自己經(jīng)歷的一次自然災害——山崩。動筆前先要認真閱讀要點，圍繞要點組織材料，然后用正確的英語句子把這些內(nèi)容表達出來，在此基礎上亦可適當發(fā)揮，注意不要遺漏材料中給出的要點。根據(jù)材料可知本文主要是應用第一人稱，一般過去時態(tài)，注意標點符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。5.【答案】DearLily,Letmetellyousomethingabouttherainstormyesterdayafternoon.Athalfpastsixyesterdayafternoon,therainstormcame.Itfeltlikemidnight.Atthattime,myfamilyweredoingdifferentthings.Myfatherwaslookingthroughthenewspaperinthelivingroom.Mymotherwascookingdinnerinthekitchen.Mysisterwasreadingastorybook.IwasdoingmyEnglishhomeworkonline.Aftertherainstorm,ourneighborshelpedeachotherinneed.Therainstormwassostrongthatitbrokemanythingsapart,butitbroughtfamiliesandneighborscloserthanbefore.Yours,Lucy【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應用文，為電子郵件；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”；③提示：根據(jù)題干要求，具體介紹昨天暴風雨來臨時，你的家人在做什么以及暴風雨的影響，可適當添加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖（已給出）；第二步，具體介紹暴風雨來臨時，你的家人正在做的事情以及暴風雨的影響。[亮點詞匯]①feellike感覺像②lookthrough瀏覽③inneed在困難中④so...that...如此……以至于……[高分句型]Therainstormwassostrongthatitbrokemanythingsapart,butitbroughtfamiliesandneighborscloserthanbefore.(so...that引導的結(jié)果狀語從句；比較級句型)

Unit8Naturaldisasters單元寫作指導與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度記敘文：災害發(fā)生的當天情況說明文：災害防范措施本單元的話題是“自然災害與防范”，主要介紹自然災害的發(fā)生和防范措施，包括介紹自然災害發(fā)生時的情況、防范措施等相關(guān)內(nèi)容。在具體的寫作中，學生應注意以下幾點：1.能夠正確拼寫描自然災害的相關(guān)詞匯；2.能夠恰當使用相關(guān)短語和句型表達；3.能夠正確使用過去進行時進行描述當時的狀況?！驹~匯積累】1.aloudnoiselikethunder一個像雷聲的很大的聲音2. starttoshake 開始晃動3. screaminfear 害怕的尖叫4. runoutofthebuilding跑出樓房5. do/tryone’sbesttodosth 盡某人最大的能力做某事6. inalldirections 四面八方7. piecesofglass 玻璃塊8. comedown 倒塌9. darkandquiet 黑暗安靜10. not...atall 根本不11. feelnervous 覺得緊張12. beatfast 快速跳動13. betrapped 被困住14. Saytooneself 自言自語15. Amomentoffear 片刻的恐懼16. Gothrough 穿過17. Calmdown 冷靜下來18. Shoutforhelp 喊救命19. Pulloneselfslowlythroughthedark慢慢爬過黑暗20. Enoughspaceformetomove 足夠的空間更我移動21. Trytofindone’swayout 試圖找到出路22. Moveaway 移走23. Brightdaylight 明亮的日光24. mopupthewater 拖干凈水25. losethegame 輸?shù)魶Q賽26. thousandsof 上千的27. crashinto 撞上28. washaway 沖走29. startafire 引火30. fallfromthetree 從樹上掉下來31. astormwiththunderandlightning 有雷電的風暴32. catchfire 著火33. get/behurt 受傷34. breakdown 壞掉35. fallover 摔倒36. assoonaspossible 盡快37. coversthwithsth 用某物蓋住某物38. protectoneselffromdanger 保護自己免遭危險39. thebuildingonfire 著火的建筑40. gothroughthefloodwater 從洪水中過去41. keepsbsafefromdanger 保持某人安全免遭危險【句型積累】42. Soontherealnoisecame,likebombsundertheground. 很快，像地下的炸彈一樣的聲音傳來。43. Outside,peoplewererunninginalldirectionswhilepiecesofglassandbrickswerefallingdown. 外面，碎玻璃和碎磚紛紛掉落下來，人們四處逃散。44. Icouldnotseeanythingatall,andIdidnotknowifanyoneelsewasnearme. 我什么也看不見，也不知道是否有人在我附近。45. Ifeltnervousandmyheartwasbeatingfast. 我感到緊張，我的心跳得很快。46. AmomentoffearwentthroughmymindbutItoldmyselftocalmdownsinceIwasstillalive.我的腦中掠過一陣恐懼，但我告訴我自己要鎮(zhèn)定下來，既然我仍然活著。47. Istartedtopullmyselfslowlythroughthedark. 我開始在黑暗中慢慢地向前移動身體。48. AsIwastryingtofindmywayout.Isuddenlyheardsomenoiseaboveme. 當我嘗試著找到出路，我突然聽到了上面的噪聲。49. Timmywassleeping/asleepwhentheearthquakestarted. 當?shù)卣痖_始的時候蒂姆在睡覺。50. Mydad’scarbrokedownbecauseofthecoldweather. 由于糟糕的天氣我爸爸的汽車出故障了。51. Staylowtotheground. 貼著地面。52. Thesnowkeptfallingaroundus. 雪不停地在我們周圍落下。53. IwasdoingmyhomeworkintheclassroomwhenMr.Wucameinandtoldustogohomeearly. 當吳老師進來告訴我們早點回家時，我正在教室里做家庭作業(yè)。54. WelostourumbrellainthewindandInearlyfellover. 我們在風中丟了雨傘，我差點兒摔倒。55. Suddenly,astrongwindcamefrombehind. 突然，一陣大風從后面刮來【諺語積累】1.Natureiskindofalovingmother,butalsoabutcherincoldblood. 自然不僅是位慈愛的母親，還是個冷血的屠夫。2.Fishjumpoutofthewaterandraincomes. 魚兒出水跳，風雨就來到。3. Allofthedisaster,butbecauseoflove. 所有的災難，不過是因為眷戀。災時狀況【萬能寫作模板】災時狀況Anearthquake/Aflood/Asnowstorm/...hit....Iwasdoing...when......becauseoftheheavyrain/snow....Wecouldonlyhear/see.......keptfalling.Suddenly,..防范措施...hadtowalkslowly/pulloneselfthrough....防范措施If...,don’t...災后感受...wasreallyterrible.災后感受Wewereallsave.2022年6月10日，李華的家鄉(xiāng)四川雅安市蘆山縣發(fā)生了一場地震，地震造成了巨大的損毀，但幸運的是，李華一家安然無恙。假如你是李華，請你描述一下地震發(fā)生時家里人的活動情景及感受：1.李華在浴室里洗澡；2.爸爸在電腦旁工作；3.媽媽在廚房里做晚餐；4.爺爺奶奶在客廳看電視。要求：1．結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達通順，語言規(guī)范，書寫清晰；2．文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實的人名，學校名等信息；3．80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

MynameisLiHua.Therewasanearthquakeatabout5:00p.m.onJune1st.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MynameisLiHua.Therewasanearthquakeatabout5:00p.m.onJune1st.Atthattime,allmyfamilywereathome.Iwastakingashowerinthebathroom.Myfatherwasworkingonthecomputer.Mymotherwascookinginthekitchen.MygrandparentswerewatchingTVinthelivingroom.Wewereallscared.

Theearthquakemadeourneighborhoodinamess.Thereweresomefallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbish.Butluckily,itwasn’ttooheavyanditdidn’tlastfortoolong.Wewereallsafe.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，屬于材料作文寫作；②時態(tài)：時態(tài)為“一般過去時”和“過去進行時”；③提示：文章開頭以及要點已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點逐點闡述，不要遺漏提示中的“家里人的感受”這一要點，可以適當增加細節(jié)，并突出寫作重點。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接短文開頭，引出話題；第二步，接著按照要點敘述當時家里人各自正在做的事情，以及家人們的感受；第三步，介紹地震給周邊生活環(huán)境帶來的破壞，抒發(fā)作者的感受并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點詞匯]①bescared感到害怕②inamess亂七八糟[高分句型]Thereweresomefallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbish.（and連接三個并列的名詞，therebe句型，就近原則，過去分詞作定語）英漢互譯（一）BencouldhearstrongwindsoutsidehishomeinAlabama.Blackcloudsweremakingtheskyverydark.Withnolightoutside,itfeltlikemidnight.（1）ThenewsonTVreportedthataheavyrainstormwasinthearea.Everyoneintheneighborhoodwasbusy.Ben’sdadwasputtingpiecesofwoodoverthewindowswhilehismomwasmakingsuretheflashlightsandradiowereworking.（2）她也放了一些蠟燭和火柴在桌子上.Benwashelpinghismommakedinnerwhentherainbegantobeatheavilyagainstthewindows（3）晚餐后，他們試著去玩游戲，butitwashardtohavefunwithaseriousstormhappeningoutside.Bencouldnotsleepatfirst.Hefinallyfellasleepwhenthewindwasdyingdownataround3:00a.m.Whenhewokethesumwasrising.Hewentoutsidewithhisfamilyandfoundtheneighborhoodinamess.（4）Fallentrees,brokenwindowsandrubbishwereeverywhere.Theyjoinedtheneighborstohelpcleanuptheneighborhoodtogether.（5）Althoughthestormbrokemanythingsapartitbroughtfamiliesandneighborsclosertogether.將文中劃線部分譯成漢語或者英語.1．2．3．4．5．（二）Inmanycountries,therearesomestormsinsummerorautumn.Whenastormcomes,itisoftenwiththunderandlightening(雷電).Soit'susuallydangerousduringastorm._Themostimportantthingyoucandoistogetyourself,yourfamilyandyourhomeprepared._有時,盡管你在室內(nèi),也是不安全的。Thelighteningcangothroughelectricalwires(電線)andoverphonelines._Sometimesitkillspeoplebysettingtheirhouseonfire._Ifyoustayoutside,youwill-alsobeindanger._Whenyoustandinanopenplaceorunderabigtree,thelighteningmayhityou.Whenyouseeastormcoming,goindoors.Don'tstayoutside._在室內(nèi),最好不要用手機或電腦。Keepawayfromoutsidedoorsandwindowsanddonotlieon.thefloor.Inordertoprotectourselves,it'snecessaryforustoknowthedosanddon'tinastorm.6．7．8．9．10．（三）

WhenSamwasan11-year-oldboy,arainstormhithishometownonadarknight.71.Whenthestormcame,hewasdoinghishomework.

Hissisterwasasleepandhismotherwasbusycookinginthekitchen.72.他爸爸正在看電視.Suddenly,allthelightswentoff.73.Thentherainbeatagainstthedoorsandwindowsheavily.Thewindblewstrongly,sohissisterwokeup.Shewasscaredandstartedtocry.74.這家人什么也做不了。Sam’sfathertookouttheflashlight,butthebatteries（電池）weredead.75.Sohismotherfoundsomecandlesandaboxofmatches.Thenextmorning,aftertheylistenedtothenewsontheradio,theyrealizedthataheavyrainstormhadhappened.11．12．13．14．15．【參考答案】（一）【答案】1．電視新聞報道該地區(qū)有一場大暴風雨。2．Shealsoputsomecandlesandmatchesonthetable.3．Afterdinnertheytriedtoplaygames.4．到處都有倒下的樹壞了的窗戶和垃圾。5．盡管暴風雨破壞了很多的東西但是它使家人和鄰居們更相近了。【分析】文章講述了Ben住的社區(qū)經(jīng)歷了一場嚴重的暴風雨，雖然暴風雨過后一片混亂，但它使得鄰居們走得更近了。1．ThenewsonTV“電視新聞”；report“報道”；that引導賓語從句，無實際意義；aheavyrainstorm“一場大暴風雨”；inthearea“在這個地區(qū)”，故填：電視新聞報道該地區(qū)有一場大暴風雨。2．she“她”，人稱代詞主格作主語；also“也”，位于實義動詞前；put…on“把……放在……上”；somecandles“一些蠟燭”；matches“火柴”，故填Shealsoputsomecandlesandmatchesonthetable.3．a(chǎn)fterdinner“晚飯后”；they“他們”，人稱代詞主格作主語；trytodosth“試著做某事”；playgames“玩游戲”，故填Afterdinner,theytriedtoplaygames.4．Fallen“倒下的”，過去分詞作定語；trees“樹”；broken“破壞的”；windows“窗戶”；and“和”；rubbish“垃圾”；everywhere“到處”，故填：到處都有倒下的樹壞了的窗戶和垃圾．5．Although“盡管”；the