高考英語復習讀后續(xù)寫練習+阿布山之旅后行李箱意外失蹤之謎 課件

高考英語讀后續(xù)寫語篇練習阿布山之旅后行李箱意外失蹤之謎1題目分析讀后續(xù)寫題目再現(xiàn)范文呈現(xiàn)努力方向2Part1題目呈現(xiàn)3續(xù)寫原文Alongtimeago,whenIworkedinAhmedabad,wewouldoftendrivetoMountAbuforshorttrips—ittookusanywherebetweenseventoeighthourstodriveup.Thatyear,mycloserelativeswerevisitingfromLucknowduringtheholidays,andwemadeaplantovisitAbuforthreedays.Sincethereweresevenofus,includingmybrother’sfamilywhoalsolivedinAhmedabad,wehiredtwocabs.Wepickedourselvesintothevehicles,stacked(堆放)ourluggageonthecarriersontopandstartedout.Agoodtimewasbadbyall,andsoonitwastimetoreturn.Duringthejourneyback,westoppedataDhabaforteaandsnacksneartheMehanadistrict.That’swhenInoticedsuddenlythattheropewithwhichtheluggagewastiedonandofthecarriershadcomelooseandoneofthesuitcaseswasmissing.Itmusthavefallenoffsomewherealongtheway.4續(xù)寫原文Althoughitdidn’tcontainanyvaluables—justclothesandsomecash,wedecidedtoretraceoursteps,drawingbackfourkilometres,lookingforthebag.Butluckwasn’tourfriend:wecouldnotlocateitandreturnedtoAhmedabaddepressed.Afteraboutamonth,oneday,whileinmyoffice,IgotacallfrommyassistantthatacertainMr.Shahwantedtoseeme.Iwasinthemiddleofameetingsohewasaskedtowait.AfterIgotdone,Icalledhimintomyoffice.5續(xù)寫原文Iwaslookingafterthedevelopmentofsmallindustriesinthestateatthetime,somyimmediatequerywas.“Howcanwehelpyou?Doyouwanttosetupanindustryorareyoufacinganyissuesinyourenterprise?”Towhichhesaid,“No,sir.Ihavenotcomeforanyofficialhelp.Itisapersonalmatter.Didyoulosesomethingrecently?”O(jiān)fcourse,itallcamebacktomeandItoldhimaboutthelostsuitcasefromthecabbackfromMountAbuamonthago.6段首句Paragraph1：ThenShahtoldhissideofthestory.Paragraph2：Butthegentlemaninsistedondeliveringthesuitcasetome.7Part2題目分析8續(xù)寫原文分析9文章講述了很久以前，“我”在艾哈邁達巴德工作時，常與家人去阿布山短途旅行。那次假期親戚來訪，一行七人租兩輛出租車前往阿布山游玩三天后返程。途中在梅哈納區(qū)附近的小餐館休息時，發(fā)現(xiàn)一輛出租車車頂行李架上綁行李的繩子松開，一個行李箱丟失，里面雖無貴重物品但大家仍決定沿原路返回尋找，可惜未找到只能沮喪回艾哈邁達巴德。約一個月后，“我”在辦公室接到沙阿先生來電，他因一件私事求見，原來是關于那個丟失的行李箱。點1：位于續(xù)寫第一段段首，流暢銜接前面的記敘文和第一段段首語；點2：位于續(xù)寫第一段段尾，流暢銜接第二段段首句；點3：位于續(xù)寫第二段段首，續(xù)寫銜接第二段段首語；點4：文章結尾升華，給予讀者正能量，揭示和強調主題。情節(jié)構建的重點10續(xù)寫思路分析Para1：ThenShahtoldhissideofthestory.然后沙阿先生講述了他的經歷。他說自己是一位農民，就住在我們所經之路附近。那天，他正在田間勞作，突然看到路邊有一個行李箱。出于好奇，他走上前去查看，發(fā)現(xiàn)里面裝滿了衣物和一些現(xiàn)金。他明白這肯定是某位過客遺失的。于是他把箱子帶回了家，并努力想辦法歸還。他在當地社區(qū)四處打聽，后來通過有我們那次旅行通行證記錄的當地政府部門，終于找到了我的聯(lián)系方式。11續(xù)寫思路分析Para2：Butthegentlemaninsistedondeliveringthesuitcasetome.但這位先生堅持要親自把行李箱送到我手上。盡管我提出安排人去他那里取，他卻說一定要確保箱子安全且當面交到我手中。他長途跋涉，換乘了好幾趟巴士，甚至還步行了一段路。當他終于抵達我的辦公室時，雖略顯疲憊，但臉上滿是堅定與真誠。他把行李箱遞給我，我感激不已。我連連向他道謝，并要給他酬謝以報答他的善良與誠實，可他拒絕了，說這只是他應該做的，能幫上忙他很高興。12Part3范文呈現(xiàn)13范文呈現(xiàn)ThenShahtoldhissideofthestory.Hesaidthathewasafarmerwholivedneartheroutewehadtaken.Thatday,whilehewasoutinhisfields,henoticedasuitcaselyingbythesideoftheroad.Curious,hewenttocheckitoutandfounditwasfilledwithclothesandsomecash.Heknewitmusthavebelongedtosomeonewhohadpassedby.Hetookithomeandtriedtofigureoutawaytoreturnit.Afteraskingaroundinthelocalcommunityandmakingsomeinquiries,hefinallymanagedtotrackdownmycontactinformationthroughthelocalauthoritieswhohadarecordofourtravelpermitsforthattrip.14范文呈現(xiàn)Butthegentlemaninsistedondeliveringthesuitcasetome.Despitemyoffertoarrangeforsomeonetopickitupfromhisplace,hesaidhewantedtomakesureitreachedmesafelyandinperson.Hetraveledalongdistance,takingseveralbusesandevenwalkingpartoftheway.Whenhefinallyarrivedatmyoffice,hewasabittiredbuthisfacewasfilledwithdeterminationandhonesty.Hehandedmethesuitcase,andIwasextremelygrateful.Ithankedhimprofuselyandofferedhimarewardforhiskindnessandhonesty,butherefused,sayingthatitwasjusttherightthingtodoandthathewashappytobeofhelp.15升級版范文呈現(xiàn)ThenShahtoldhissideofthestory.Hewasafarmerwhosefieldswereneartheroutewehadtaken.Oneday,whileworkinginhisfields,hespottedasuitcaselyingdesertedbytheroadside.Beingakind-heartedman,hewentovertohavealookandfounditfilledwithclothesandabitofcash.Knowingitmusthavebelongedtoatravelerpassingby,hetookithome.Aftermakinginquiriesinthelocalcommunity,itwasthroughthelocalauthorities,whohadarecordofourtravelpermitsforthattrip,thathefinallymanagedtotracemycontactdetails.16升級版范文呈現(xiàn)Butthegentlemaninsistedondeliveringthesuitcasetome.Regardlessofmyoffertosendsomeonetofetchitfromhisplace,hesaidhewouldensureitssafearrivalinperson.Havingtraveledalongway,takingseveralbusesandevenwalkingpartofthejourney,hefinallyreachedmyoffice.Tiredashewas,hisfacewasfilledwithdeterminationandhonesty.Itwashewhohandedmethesuitcase.Iwasextremelygratefulandthankedhimprof