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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Onasnowynightinmidwinter,acouplewanderedalongaruralhighwayinOhio,seekingshelter.Thefather-to-bescannedtheroadsideforsomehomeorsomeinn,wherehisstrugglingcompanionmightrestsafelyforthenight.Helookedoveratherfrequently.Shelaboredalongwithoutcomplaint,herwaymadeheavierbythenewlifegrowinginsideher.Theyneededawarm,dryplacesafefromthebitterwind.Whenhertimecame,itmustnotbeoutherealongtheroadway.TheirnameswerenotMaryandJoseph,butPepperandCooper.Norweretheymanandwife,butratherapairofdogs.GusKiebel,acountywildlifeofficer,wasdrivinghomefromworkwhenhespottedthepairintheflashofhisheadlights.Curiousandconcerned,Guspulledoverandapproachedthedogs,whichmadenoefforttoescape.Theywerebothwearingcollarswithtags,sohebentdownandreadtheirnames-PepperandCooper-beforeattemptingtocallthenumberlisted.Thesnowfallwassothickthathisphonescreenbecametoowettoworkproperly,soGusdecidedtotakethedogsintohistruckforwarmth.Onceinside,thedogsquicklyclimbedontothepassengerseat,snugglingtogetherforcomfort.Gustookaphotoandsentittohiswife,Katie,beforecallingthenumberonthetagsagain.Amananswered,butwhenGusexplainedthathehadfoundthedogs,themanquickly,distancedhimselffromthesituation.“Igavethemaway,"hesaid.ItbecamecleartoGusthatthedogshadbeenabandoned.Nohomeforthedogsatallinthisworld!Guslookedoveratthem,theirlargeeyespleading.GuscalledKatie.“Youcannotputthembackoutinthesnowstorm,”shesaid.“Bringthemhome.”.TheKiebelspreparedabedforthedogsontheirwarmenclosedporch,alsosettingoutfoodandwater.Theexhaustedanimalslaytogether,CooperperiodicallyliftinghisheadtofussoverPepper.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Thenextday,theKiebelscontactedano-killshelter,theLeagueforAnimalWelfare.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inthedaysfollowing,theKiebelsvisitedtheshelterrepeatedlytoseePepperandCooper.————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————文章大意:在一個(gè)冬夜,懷孕的母狗Pepper和公狗Cooper在俄亥俄州鄉(xiāng)村公路流浪,被野生動物官員GusKiebel發(fā)現(xiàn)。它們雖有項(xiàng)圈卻遭主人遺棄,Gus與妻子Katie決定收留它們過夜并準(zhǔn)備食物和床鋪。文章圍繞狗狗被發(fā)現(xiàn)后的遭遇及后續(xù)去向展開,體現(xiàn)出人與動物之間的溫情故事。伏筆與回應(yīng):伏筆:狗狗在雪地中流浪且Pepper懷著孕?;貞?yīng):Kiebel夫婦的收留和照顧為它們提供了暫時(shí)的避風(fēng)港,后續(xù)送往收容所也著重關(guān)注了Pepper的孕期狀況并給予特殊照顧。伏筆:狗狗戴著有信息的項(xiàng)圈?;貞?yīng):Gus試圖聯(lián)系原主人,但原主人的遺棄態(tài)度促使Gus夫婦決定救助,也為收容所登記信息提供了便利。伏筆:Gus把狗狗帶回家,妻子Katie表示支持?;貞?yīng):為后續(xù)Kiebels夫婦持續(xù)關(guān)注狗狗在收容所的情況并最終決定收養(yǎng)埋下伏筆,體現(xiàn)他們的善良和對狗狗的關(guān)愛。伏筆:狗狗在卡車?yán)镆蕾巳∨;貞?yīng):表明它們渴望溫暖與庇護(hù),這使得Kiebels夫婦更堅(jiān)定了幫助它們的決心,在收容所也努力為它們營造舒適環(huán)境。伏筆:Cooper對Pepper很照顧。回應(yīng):在收容所里這種相互陪伴的關(guān)系依舊明顯,也讓Kiebels夫婦看到它們之間深厚的情感,更不忍分離。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn):情感線:第一段從狗狗被帶到收容所時(shí)的不安與對新環(huán)境的陌生感,到逐漸感受到工作人員善意后的平靜;第二段從Kiebels夫婦探望時(shí)狗狗的興奮與依賴,到最后被收養(yǎng)時(shí)的安心與幸福。故事線:第一段講述Kiebels聯(lián)系收容所送狗狗前往,收容所檢查安置并登記信息;第二段描述Kiebels多次探望,狗狗反應(yīng)熱烈,最終Kiebels完成收養(yǎng)手續(xù)帶狗狗回家。主旨升華句:Inthefaceofabandonment,alittlekindnesscanlightupthedarkestpath.(面對遺棄,一點(diǎn)善意能照亮最黑暗的道路。)Thebondbetweenhumansandanimalsisbuiltonloveandcompassion.(人與動物之間的紐帶建立在愛與同情之上。)Rescuingtheforsakenisnotonlyanactofmercybutalsoagiftofhope.(拯救被遺棄者不僅是一種仁慈之舉,也是一份希望的禮物。)Truekindnessneverfades;itenduresandtransformslives.(真正的善良永不褪色;它持久并改變生活。)Whenweopenourheartstothehomeless,wefindanewfamilymember.(當(dāng)我們向無家可歸者敞開心扉時(shí),我們就找到了一個(gè)新的家庭成員。)寫作示范一:Thenextday,theKiebelscontactedano-killshelter,theLeagueforAnimalWelfare.Theydrovethedogstotheshelter,wherethestaffgreetedthemwarmly.Afterhearingthestory,theshelterworkerscheckedPepperandCoopercarefully.Theyprovidedasoft,warmbedforPepper,especiallyconsideringherpregnancy.Cooperwasalsogivenacomfortablespacebesideher.TheKiebelsfilledoutformswiththeinformationfromthedogs'tags,hopingitmighthelpincasetheoriginalownerhadachangeofheart.Thedogsseemedabitwaryatfirstbutsoonrelaxedwiththegentlecoaxingoftheshelterstaff.
Inthedaysfollowing,theKiebelsvisitedtheshelterrepeatedlytoseePepperandCooper.Eachtimetheyentered,PepperandCooperwouldruntothem,tailswaggingwithexcitement.TheKiebelsspenthoursplayingwiththemandpettingthem.Astimepassed,itwasclearthatthedogshadbecomedeeplyattachedtotheKiebels.TheKiebelsrealizedtheycouldn'tletthesetwogo.So,theycompletedtheadoptionprocessandtookPepperandCooperhome,wheretheywouldbepartofthefamilyforever.寫作示范二:Thenextday,theKiebelscontactedano-killshelter,theLeagueforAnimalWelfare.GuscarriedPepperandCooperintotheshelter.Thestaffimmediatelytookover,promisingtotakegoodcareofthem.TheygavePepperathoroughexaminationtoensurethehealthofherandherunbornpups.Cooperstayedcloseby,watchingprotectively.Theshelterputupposterswiththedogs'picturesandinformation,incasesomeonewaslookingforthem.TheKiebelsleftreluctantlybutknewtheywereingoodhands.
Inthedaysfollowing,theKiebelsvisitedtheshelterrepeatedlytoseePepperandCooper.Thedogs'eyeslitupwhentheysawtheKiebels.Theywouldjumpandbarkwithjoy.TheKiebelsbroughttreatsandtoys,makingthevisitsspecial.Afterseveralvisits,theKiebelsfeltanunbreakableconnection.TheydecidedtoadoptPepperandCooper.Onthedaytheytookthemhome,thedogsseemedtounderstandandnestledhappilyinthecar,readytostarttheirnewlifewiththeirlovingnewfamily.讀后續(xù)寫參考答案Thenextday,theKiebelscontactedano-killshelter,theLeagueforAnimalWelfare.“Bothofusarepassionatedoglovers,butkeepingthispairwasoutofthequestion-wealreadyhadafamilydog,”saidGus.Theythentookthedogstothesheltertodropthemoff-ono
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