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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文?!癟hisismyfirstdaydeliveringfood.”“Thisismyseconddayofdelivery.”...Xiaowenpostedhisdailyvlogonline,inwhichheworeacontagioussmileandstammered,“Itismy20thdayoffooddeliveryandI’mworkinghardtoearnmoneyformycochlearimplantation(耳蝸植入手術(shù))!”Recognizedastheonlymeanstorestorehearingandlanguageabilityforpeoplewithextremelysevereneurologicaldeafness,cochlearimplantationinvolvesconductingriskysurgerywheredoctorswillputabuilt-indeviceinthepatient’sheadbehindtheearandfittingthepatientwithawearablesignal-receivingdevice,likeanearphone,onemonthafterthesurgery.Meanwhile,itcostsashighas300,000yuan,orover100,000yuanwhensocialsecurityreimbursespartofit.InXiaowen’scase,itwouldmean10yearsofdeliverywhenhejustmadeapproximately100yuanaday.Worsestill,hearing-impaired,Xiaowenhadseveralnarrowescapeswithdeathattheintersectionontheroadsbecausehecouldn’thearthehornofthecarsbehindhim!Hesighedwithaheavyheartwhencustomerscomplainedabouthisinabilitytospeakonthephonetoinformthemofthearrivalofadelivery.Evenso,Xiaowenkindlyrefusedpeople’sfattipsbutacceptedtheirapologieswhentheyfoundoutabouthisdisability.Borninanordinaryfamily,Xiaowen,thelittlechubbyboy,wasdiagnosedwithcongenitalhearingimpairment.Thiswaslikeaboltfromtheblue,breakingthefamily’sbeautifulvisionofXiaowen’sfuture.Butitdidn’tbringdownXiaowen’smother.FearingthatXiaowencouldn’tunderstandteachers’instructions,shewasalwayspatientlytheretohelphimwithlip-readingandguidehimtoexpresshimselfbravely.Thankstomom,Xiaowenhasgrownintoaself-reliantadultwhowouldn’treapwithoutsowing.Oneday,Xiaowenwatchedhismothersingingandsaidwithalisp,“Mom,youmusthavethemostbeautifulvoiceintheworld!”“Dear,howIwishyoucouldhearmommyandsingwithme...”MomeyedXiaowenwithtenderlove,atraceofsorrowflashingoverherface.Itwouldbejustalong,longtimebeforetheycouldpaythatmuchmoney.Mr.B,awell-knownblogger,isdevotedtocharitycauses.HeandhisteamhappenedtoseeXiaowen’spostsandtheyfollowedhimonlineanddecidedtohelphim.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Mr.BinvitedXiaowenandhismomtohisofficeandtoldthemthegoodnews._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onemonthlater,Xiaowenandhismomwenttothehospitaltotryoutthesignal-receivingdevice.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:小文因先天性聽力障礙,為了籌集高昂的耳蝸植入手術(shù)費用開始送外賣并拍攝日常vlog。他在送外賣過程中面臨諸多困難,如路口聽不到汽車喇叭聲而險象環(huán)生,與顧客溝通不便被投訴等,但他依然樂觀善良。他的家庭普通,母親一直耐心幫助他成長。知名博主Mr.B看到小文的帖子后決定幫助他。伏筆及續(xù)寫回應:伏筆:小文努力送外賣賺錢做耳蝸植入手術(shù)且費用高昂。續(xù)寫回應:Mr.B告知他們要資助手術(shù)費用,解決了小文家的經(jīng)濟難題,使小文有了恢復聽力的希望,推動故事走向轉(zhuǎn)機。伏筆:小文在路口因聽力問題有危險。續(xù)寫回應:手術(shù)后小文能聽到路口聲音,意識到之前危險,凸顯手術(shù)對他生活的重要改變,也體現(xiàn)出他重獲聽力后的感慨。伏筆:顧客因小文無法電話溝通而抱怨。續(xù)寫回應:手術(shù)后小文能正常與顧客交流,改善了他的工作狀況,從側(cè)面反映出手術(shù)給他帶來的積極影響,也展現(xiàn)了他生活的變化。伏筆:小文看到母親唱歌表示母親聲音美但自己聽不到。續(xù)寫回應:手術(shù)后他聽到母親歌聲,母子能一起唱歌,滿足了之前的愿望,使親情在經(jīng)歷磨難后更加深厚,溫暖感人。伏筆:Mr.B致力于慈善事業(yè)且關(guān)注到小文。續(xù)寫回應:他邀請小文母子并資助手術(shù),體現(xiàn)了其慈善行為的落實,也使故事有了圓滿結(jié)局,弘揚了樂于助人的精神。續(xù)寫要點:
第一段:描述Mr.B告知小文母子資助消息時他們的反應,如驚喜、感激等。提及準備手術(shù)的相關(guān)事宜,如安排手術(shù)時間、醫(yī)院協(xié)調(diào)等。第二段:講述小文試用信號接收裝置時的場景和感受,如聽到聲音的新奇、對周圍環(huán)境聲音的描述等。表達小文對未來生活的期待以及對Mr.B的感恩之情。情感線:
小文和母親起初因手術(shù)費用高昂而憂愁無奈,但依然懷揣希望努力生活。得知Mr.B資助后轉(zhuǎn)為驚喜與感激。手術(shù)前是緊張與期待,試用裝置時則充滿新奇與興奮,對未來充滿信心并感恩所有幫助過自己的人,情感從壓抑逐步走向積極向上,體現(xiàn)了困境中得到幫助后的轉(zhuǎn)變與希望。故事線:
Mr.BinvitedXiaowenandhismomtohisofficeandtoldthemthegoodnews.“Wearegoingtopayforyourcochlearimplantationsurgerycompletely.”Xiaowenandhismomwerestunnedatfirst,thentearswelledupintheireyes.TheythankedMr.Bprofusely.Soon,thehospitalwasarranged,andXiaowenwaspreparedforthesurgery.Thedaybeforetheoperation,Xiaowenwasalittlenervousbutalsofullofanticipation.Onemonthlater,Xiaowenandhismomwenttothehospitaltotryoutthesignal-receivingdevice.Whenthedoctorturnedonthedevice,Xiaowenheardavarietyofsoundsforthefirsttime.Hecouldhearthebeepingofthehospitalequipment,thefootstepsinthecorridor,andthevoicesofpeopletalking.Hewassoexcitedandsaidtohismom,“Mom,Icanhear!Icanhearyourvoiceclearlynow.”Hismomhuggedhimtightly,cryingwithjoy.Xiaowenknewthathislifewouldbecompletelydifferentfromthenon,andhewasdeeplygratefultoMr.Bforthisnewleaseonlife.主旨升華句:“Inthefaceofadversity,ahelpinghandcanbethekeythatunlocksthedoortoanewandhopefulfuture.”(在困境面前,援助之手可以成為開啟充滿希望的新未來之門的鑰匙。)“Kindness,likeabeamoflight,piercesthroughthedarknessofmisfortune,illuminatingthepathtoabetterlife.”(善良,如一束光,穿透不幸的黑暗,照亮通往美好生活的道路。)“Eveninthedeepestvalleyofdespair,thegiftofhopecantransformlivesandcreatemiraclesofgratitudeandrenewal.”(即使在絕望的最深谷,希望的禮物也能改變生活,創(chuàng)造感恩與新生的奇跡。)“Thepowerofcharityliesnotonlyinthematerialassistancebutalsointherestorationofdreamsandtherevivalofspirits.”(慈善的力量不僅在于物質(zhì)援助,還在于夢想的重拾和精神的重振。)“Whenkindnessandneedconverge,asymphonyofhopeandchangeisorchestrated,playingamelodyofasecondchanceatlife.”(當善良與需求交匯時,希望與改變的交響樂奏響,奏響生命重生的旋律。)寫作示范一:Mr.BinvitedXiaowenandhismomtohisofficeandtoldthemthegoodnews.Xiaowen'smomcoveredhermouthinshock,andtearsstreameddownherface.Xiaowenwasalsovisiblyexcited,hiseyesshining.Mr.Bexplainedthedetailsoftheassistanceandassuredthemthateverythingwouldbetakencareof.Thefamilywasfilledwithgratitudeandrelief.Theyimmediatelystartedpreparingforthesurgery,withXiaowen'smomconstantlycomfortingandencouraginghim.Onemonthlater,Xiaowenandhismomwenttothehospitaltotryoutthesignal-receivingdevice.Asthesoundsenteredhisears,Xiaowenwasamazed.Hecouldheartherustlingoftheleavesoutsidethewindowandthesoftwhispersofthenurses.Heturnedtohismomandsaid,“Mom,it'slikeawholenewworld.Ican'twaittoexperiencemore.”Hismomsmiledthroughhertears,andXiaowenfeltanewfoundconfidence.Heknewthathewouldnowbeabletoliveamorenormallifeandwasdeterminedtomakethemostofthisopportunity.Healsomadeamentalnotetopayforwardthekindnesshehadreceived.寫作示范二:Mr.BinvitedXiaowenandhismomtohisofficeandtoldthemthegood消息.Xiaowen'sfacelitupwithdisbeliefandjoy.HismomhuggedMr.B,thankinghimoverandover.Thenextfewweekswereaflurryofactivityastheygotreadyforthesurgery.Xiaowenwasabitscaredbutalsoeagertochangehislife.Onemonthlater,Xiaowenandhismomwenttothehospitaltotryoutthesignal-receivingdevice.Xiaowen'seyeswidenedasheheardthesounds.Heheardtheclickingofthedoctor'spenandtheringingofadistantphone.Hesaidtohismom,“Mom,Icanfinallyhearyouclearly.Thisisamiracle.”Hismomheldhishandtightly.Xiaowenwasfilledwithasenseofhopeandpurpose.Herealizedthattherewerestillmanygoodpeopleintheworldandthathecouldnowfacelife'schallengeswithanewperspective.Hewaslookingforwardtoafuturewherehecouldcommunicatebetterandpursuehisdreams.讀后續(xù)寫參考答案Mr.BinvitedXiaowenandhismomtohisofficeandtoldthemthegoodnews.Hesaidthatthey’dliketooffermoneyfortheimplantation.Surprisedbutgrateful,Xiaowendeclinedthegestureatfirst,sayingheshouldn’ttakeitwithoutareason.“Butthat’stheonlywaytorestoreyourhearing.Andyoucanreturnthatfavorafterwardsifyouinsist!”Mr.Bmaintainedthatthisuprig
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