讀后續(xù)寫+晨路援手：馬克與走失老婦的暖心相遇+講義 高二下學(xué)期期中英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Whenthesunroseonesummermorning,Mark,ahighschoolstudent,wasridinghisbikeonthewaytoschoolasusual.Headmiredtheattractivesightsalongtheroadwithcolorfulflowersonbothsides,andfreshairfullofpleasantsmell.Itseemedtobeagreatday.Markwaspassingaparkwhenhenoticedanelderlywomanwalkingabout100metersaheadslowlyfallingdownontotheground.Hefelthisheartstandingstillwithgreatconcern.Withnobodyelsearoundtoturntoforhelp,Markdecidedtorideovertoseewhatwaswrongwithherforhimself.Asheapproachedtheoldlady,hefoundherlyingonthegroundandlookingpaleandweak.Judgingfromheruntidyclothesandmessyhair,shemighthavebeenoutformorethanoneday.“Areyouallright,Granny?”Shakingherarm,Markaskedanxiously.Theoldladyopenedhereyes,aconfusedandlostexpressiononherface.Shehesitatedandthentookacloserlook.Immediatelyabigsmileappearedonherface.GraspingMark’shand,shesaidwithshiningeyes,“John,thereyouareatlast!Myson,I’mhungry...hungry...Givemefood...”Sherepeated,pattingherselfonthestomach.Notknowingwhattodo,Markanxiouslyaskedher,“Granny,whereisyourhome?Canyoutellmewhoyoursonis?”Buttheoldladydidn’trespond,onlymumbling(嘟囔),“I’mhungry.Givemefood,John.”O(jiān)bviously,shemistookMarkforherson.Allofasudden,MarkrealizedtheoldladymightbeapatientwithAlzheimer’s(癡呆癥)diseasebecausehisownlategrandpausedtosufferfromsuchacondition.“Shemighthavegoneoutwithoutbeingnoticedbyherfamily.Theymusthavebeenworriedabouther.Maybethey’researchinglikecrazyforhereverywhere.”Markthoughttohimself,“Butsheissostarved.ImustgivehersomefoodbeforeIgetintouchwithherfamily.”注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Lookingaround,MarksawBilly’sHamburgersnearby.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Justthentheoldladyreachedintoherpocket,anotedroppingout._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

文章大意：夏日清晨，高中生馬克騎車上學(xué)途中，看到一位老婦人摔倒在地。他上前查看，老婦人錯(cuò)把他認(rèn)成自己兒子約翰，還喊著餓。馬克猜測老婦人可能患有老年癡呆癥且已離家多日，家人肯定在焦急尋找，于是決定先給她找些食物。

伏筆與回應(yīng)：伏筆：馬克看到老婦人摔倒且無人求助，為他獨(dú)自上前關(guān)心并決定幫忙埋下伏筆。續(xù)寫中他一直積極想辦法照顧老婦人并聯(lián)系其家人。伏筆：老婦人把馬克認(rèn)成兒子，這一誤解推動(dòng)后續(xù)馬克以“兒子”身份照顧她的情節(jié)。續(xù)寫中馬克繼續(xù)順著老婦人的誤解給她買食物、照顧她。伏筆：馬克從老婦人的外貌判斷她已在外多日，暗示老婦人身體虛弱需要食物和照顧，這促使馬克去買漢堡。續(xù)寫中馬克買到漢堡并喂老婦人吃，緩解了她的饑餓。伏筆：馬克因爺爺曾患老年癡呆癥而認(rèn)出老婦人的病癥，這使他能理解老婦人的行為并更有耐心地幫助她。續(xù)寫中他繼續(xù)以同情和耐心對(duì)待老婦人，如陪她等家人。伏筆：提到馬克要聯(lián)系老婦人家人，為后文發(fā)現(xiàn)紙條上有家人電話做鋪墊。續(xù)寫中馬克根據(jù)紙條順利聯(lián)系到家人，使故事有圓滿結(jié)局。續(xù)寫要點(diǎn)：第一段：描寫馬克去漢堡店買食物的過程，如他快速進(jìn)店、購買合適的食物、返回老婦人身邊并喂她吃，展現(xiàn)馬克的善良和細(xì)心。第二段：講述老婦人從口袋里掉出紙條，上面有家人電話，馬克聯(lián)系家人后，家人趕來，表達(dá)對(duì)馬克的感激，突出善有善報(bào)的主題。情感線：從馬克看到老婦人摔倒時(shí)的擔(dān)憂，到老婦人錯(cuò)認(rèn)他時(shí)的驚訝與無奈，再到?jīng)Q定幫助時(shí)的堅(jiān)定，以及最后聯(lián)系到家人時(shí)的欣慰。故事線：馬克上學(xué)途中遇摔倒老婦人，老婦人錯(cuò)認(rèn)他，他判斷老婦人患老年癡呆癥且離家多日，先去買食物，后發(fā)現(xiàn)紙條聯(lián)系家人。主旨升華句：“Kindnessisthelanguagewhichthedeafcanhearandtheblindcansee.”（善良是一種聾人能聽見、盲人能看見的語言。）“Inaworldwhereyoucanbeanything,bekind.”（在這個(gè)你可以成為任何人的世界里，做個(gè)善良的人。）“Thebestwaytofindyourselfistoloseyourselfintheserviceofothers.”（找到自我的最佳方式是在服務(wù)他人中迷失自我。）“Noactofkindness,nomatterhowsmall,iseverwasted.”（任何善舉，無論多么微小，都不會(huì)被浪費(fèi)。）“Asingleactofkindnessthrowsoutrootsinalldirections,andtherootsspringupandmakenewtrees.”（一個(gè)單一的善舉向四面八方播撒種子，這些種子發(fā)芽并長成新的樹木。）寫作示范一：

Lookingaround,MarksawBilly’sHamburgersnearby.Hequicklyparkedhisbikeandrushedintotheshop.Heboughtacoupleofhamburgersandabottleofwater.Thenhehurriedbacktotheoldlady.“Granny,here’ssomefoodforyou.”Marksaidgentlyashehelpedhersitup.Hecarefullyunwrappedthehamburgerandfedittoherbitbybit.Theoldladyatewithrelish,asatisfiedlookonherface.Markwatchedher,relievedthatshewasgettingsomenourishment.

Justthentheoldladyreachedintoherpocket,anotedroppingout.Markpickeditupandsawaphonenumberwrittenonit.Heguesseditmightbeherfamily’snumber.Heimmediatelydialedthenumber.Afewminuteslater,afranticvoiceanswered.Itwastheoldlady’sson.Hesaidtheyhadbeensearchingforhereverywhere.Soon,thesonarrivedandhuggedtheoldladytightly.HethankedMarkprofusely,sayinghewasarealhero.Marksmiled,happythathecouldhelp.寫作示范二：

Lookingaround,MarksawBilly’sHamburgersnearby.Withouthesitation,helockedhisbikeandsprintedtothestore.Heorderedawarmhamburgerandsomefries.Ashecarriedthefoodback,hethoughtabouthowscaredtheoldladymustbe.“Granny,I’vegotyousomethingtoeat.”Marksaidsoftly.Hesatbesideherandpatientlyfedher.Theoldlady’seyeslitupasshetastedthefood.Markwipedthecrumbsfromhermouth,likeadutifulson.

Justthentheoldladyreachedintoherpocket,anotedroppingout.Markopeneditandfoundthecontactnumber.Hecalledrightaway.Thevoiceontheotherendwasfilledwithworryandrelief.Thefamilymembersrushedover.WhentheysawMarktakingcareoftheirmother,theyweredeeplygrateful.Theoldlady’sdaughter-in-lawsaid,“Youareanangel.Yourkindnesswillberemembered.”Markfeltawarmglowinhisheart,knowinghehaddonetherightthing.參考答案Lookingaround,MarksawBilly’sHamburgersnearby.Markwalksintotheburgerbarandstartspickingoutsomeburgers.Hepicksoutthemostexpensiveburgersintherestaurant.Seeingthelargequantityofexpensivebread,thecashieraskedpuzzled,“Arethesehamburgersforyoutoeat?”Markreplied,“Ididn’teatit,Iboughtitforanoldlady.”Thenhetoldthewholestory.Atthistime,theburgerrestaurantownerjustheardwhatMarksaid,andthentoldthecashiertogiveMark’shamburgerfree,saying,thisismylittletoken,pleasehelpmeconvey.Weshouldalltryourbesttohelpthoseinneed.Markthanked