Unit 4 《Reading for Writing 寫作實踐 》課件2023-2024學(xué)年高一上學(xué)期英語人教版（2019）必修第一冊

ReadingforWritingUnit4

NaturaldisastersTeachingObjectives1.Masterthestructureandthelanguagesofasummary.2.Masterthemethodofwritingasummary.3.Practisewritingasummary.Activity1

細節(jié)把握1.Wherecanthispassagemostprobablybeseen?A.Amonthlymagazine.B.Adailynewspaper.C.Atravelbrochure.D.Agovernmentwebsite.√2.Whendidthetsunamihappen?A.At7∶00am,27December2004.B.At7∶00pm,27December2004.C.At7∶00am,26December2004.D.At7∶00pm,26December2004.√3.Whatcausedthetsunami?A.Adrought.B.Aflood.C.Avolcaniceruption.D.Anearthquake.√4.In

，thenumberofpeoplewhowerekilledinthetsunamiwasthelargest.A.Indonesia B.SriLankaC.India D.Thailand√5.Whywoulditbedifficulttodeliverfoodandsuppliestothetsunami-hitcountries?A.Therewerenoenoughtrucks.B.Itwasstillrainingheavily.C.Thepeopleintheseareaswerenotwillingtoacceptthesefoodandsupplies.D.Theroadstotheseareaswereblocked.√Activity2

文章架構(gòu)1.Readthenewsreportandfindoutthekeypointsofit.(①time②place③events④cause⑤effect⑥followingevents)答案

①At7∶00am,26December2004②Asia—Indonesia，Malaysia，SriLanka，IndiaandThailand③AtsunamihitAsia.④Anunderseaearthquake⑤Morethan6,500deaths—1,870；2,498；1,900；254；54

⑥Thousandsofpeoplearemissing；thenumberofdeathsisgrowing./Rescueworkishard.2.Readthereportagainandwritedownthemainideaofeachparagraph.答案

Para.1ThetsunamicausedbyanearthquakeanditsdamagetoAsia.Para.2Detailedinformationofthedamageindifferentcountries.Para.3Followingeventsandtherescuework.3.ReadthesummaryofthenewsreportonP55andfindoutwhatiscutoutinthesummary.答案

(1)detailedinformation(2)examples4.Accordingtothenewsreportanditssummary，wecanwriteasummaryofanewsreportlikethis.(寫作模板)On(時間)...，(事件)...happenedin(地點)...Itcaused(后果)...And...isexpectedtohappen(后續(xù))...Activity3

增分靚句Readthenewsreportandfindoutthestructuresthattheauthorusestodescribethetime.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________inthepast40years，around7∶am，Sunday，overthenextfewdays概要本單元的寫作任務(wù)是為新聞報道(記敘文)寫概要。概要寫作是一種要求閱讀和寫作并重的英語高考題型，有準確性、完整性、概括性、客觀性和個體性等特點。概要寫作提供一篇350詞以內(nèi)的短文，要求考生在對原文閱讀后，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。概要既要用詞準確、結(jié)構(gòu)合理、語意連貫、不得抄襲原文，又要能完全概括出文章的中心大意。注意事項1.詞數(shù)要限制在60詞左右，上下限不得超出10個單詞。2.要根據(jù)文章的體裁特點進行概要寫作。3.人稱和時態(tài)要與所給文章中的人稱和時態(tài)保持一致，但必要時也可以轉(zhuǎn)變成為第三人稱。4.寫作時盡可能地使用復(fù)合句，必要時可轉(zhuǎn)換詞性，不得完全照抄照搬原文。5.進行概要寫作時，一定不要加入自己的觀點并對原文加以評論；一定不要引入與原文內(nèi)容無關(guān)的信息。寫作步驟1.確定體裁，明確主題及結(jié)構(gòu)體裁結(jié)構(gòu)記敘文記敘文：人物、時間、地點、事件(起因—發(fā)展—結(jié)果)夾敘夾議文：六要素＋寓意/啟示說明文事物的性質(zhì)功能類：對象＋性質(zhì)功能問題/現(xiàn)象＋解決方法類：

現(xiàn)象＋原因＋結(jié)果議論文論點＋論據(jù)＋結(jié)論2.確定主題句，找關(guān)鍵信息畫出每一段的主題句，抓住關(guān)鍵信息，忽略次要信息。3.改寫關(guān)鍵信息，得出要點使用意義相同或相近的單詞、短語或句式，或使用不同的句子結(jié)構(gòu)表達同樣的意思，如改變語態(tài)，肯定變否定等。4.添加連接詞，使行文連貫要牢記各段落要點之間的邏輯關(guān)系和自然銜接，用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞連貫全文。

常用的關(guān)聯(lián)詞有：however，besides，inaddition，therefore，instead等。常用表達1.Thisarticle/passagemainlytellsastoryabout...這篇文章主要講述關(guān)于……的故事。2.Thispassagemainlydealswith/discusses/explores...這篇文章主要處理/討論/探索……3.Thisarticlefocusesonthetopicof...這篇文章關(guān)注……的話題。4.Thisessaypresentsknowledgethat...這篇短文呈現(xiàn)……的知識。5.Inthispassage(about...)，theauthor...在這篇(關(guān)于……)的文章里，作者……6.Theauthorbegantheessay/passagebytelling/presenting...作者通過講述/呈現(xiàn)……開始這篇短文/文章。7.First/Firstly/Inthebeginning/Inthefirstpart，theauthorargues/explains/mentions/states/pointsout(that)...首先，作者論證/解釋/提及/陳述/指出……8.Secondly/Next/Then/Inthenextpart/Inthemainpart，theauthorgoesonwith...第二/接下來/然后/在下一部分/在主要部分，作者繼續(xù)……9.Finally，theauthorstressesthat...最后，作者強調(diào)……典例展示閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Plant-basedDietWhatisaplant-baseddiet？Isitjustafashionablenewtermfora“vegan(嚴格素食主義者)”？Whilethereisnosetdefinition，aplant-basedwayofeatingfocusesonconsumingplant-sourcedwholefoods(全天然食物)thatareleastprocessedintheiroriginalform，forexample,wholegrains，fruits，vegetables，nutsandseeds.Thesearefullofvitamins，minerals，andprovideanabundanceofnutrientsforyourbody.Followingaplant-basedlifestyledoesn’tnecessarilymeanfullyavoidinganimalproductslikeavegan.Forplant-basedeaters，animalproteinscanhappilyfitinwiththelifestyle，yettheyplaymoreofasupportingrole.Overall，“plant-based”ismoreofabroadandflexiblewayofthinkingaboutnutritionratherthanarigiddiet.Withaplant-baseddiet，thefocusisonsimple，nutritiouswholefoods.Whypeoplestartfollowingaplant-baseddiet？Oneofthemainreasonsisthehealthbenefits.Now，moresothanever，researchisshowinghoweatingmoreplantsandlessmeatcanpositivelyaffecthealth.Particularlyaplant-basedlifestylehasbeenlinkedtohearthealth.Inastudyofmorethan10,000adultspublishedintheJournal

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Association，itwasshownthatthosewhofollowedamoreplant-baseddiethada16percentlowerriskofhavingcardiovascular(心血管的)diseaseanda32percentlowerriskofdyingofcardiovasculardisease.Aplant-basedlifestylecanalsohelptopromoteweightlossandhelptomaintainyourgoalweight.Weightlosscommonlyoccursbecausethedietconsistsoffoodsthatarefulloffiberandhaveahigh-watercontent，whicheasilymakeyoufeelfullup.Anothermajorreasontojumpattheplant-basedeatingtrainistheexternalbenefits.Plant-basedfoodsareloadedwithvitamins，whichhelpbrightenyourskin.Oneoftheplant-basedall-starvitaminsisvitaminC，whichisapowerfulantioxidant.AlargenumberoffruitsandvegetablescontainvitaminC.Theyassistinsmoothinglines，andreducingwrinkles.范文賞讀Aplant-baseddietcentersonnutritiouswholefoodscomingfromplantsources，withanimalproteinsservingascomplements.(要點1)Researchhasshownaplant-basedlifestyleisconducivetokeepinghealthy，especiallyreducingtheriskofcardiovasculardisease.(要點2)Besides，abundantfiberandwaterintheplant-baseddietgeneratethefeelingofbeingfull，consequentlycontributingtolosingweight.(要點3)Moreover，plant-basedeatersmayhavebrightandsmoothskinthankstotherichvitaminsfromthediet.(要點4)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Mostofthesurvivorshadtostayintheopenareaovernightaftera7.1-magnitudeearthquaketoppled(使倒塌)houses，cutoffpowerandfirst-aidmaterialssupplyinnorthwestChina’sQinghaiProvinceonWednesdaywhilerescuersfaceddifficultiesinsearchingfortheburied.Rescuershavesetupmorethan40tentsforsurvivorsintheGyeguTown，neartheepicenter(震中)intheTibetanAutonomousPrefectureofYushuinsouthernQinghai.Buttheeffortseemsfarlessthanenoughfortheareainhabitedbysome100,000people.Manypeoplesoughttemporarysheltersinbuildingsthatremainedunaffectedbythetremor(輕微地震).IntheyardofYushu’sSportsCommittee，nearly1,000peopleweresittingorlyingonthegroundinsheer(完全的，十足的)darkness.Somewrappedthemselvesupwithquiltstakenoutfromthedebris(碎片，殘骸).Somebroughttheirowntentsandothersturnedonthelightsofmotorcycles.“I’mhungryandthirsty.We’vebeenwaitingforhelpsincethemorning，”saidZhaxiToinzhub.Thewomansaidherthreechildrenwerestillburiedintherubble(碎石，瓦礫).TheNationalMeteorologicalStationforecastWednesdaythattemperaturesmayhitminus3degreesCelsiusatnightand15degreesCelsiusinthedaytimeinthecomingdays.Thetownwouldseestrongwindsandsunnyweatherinthecomingdays，providingfavorableconditionsforrescueoperations.ThetownislocatedinaremoteareainQinghaiandthequakeandensuing(隨后的)landslideshavedamagedroads，causinggreatdifficultiesforrescuersand，especially，machinesfromoutsidetoentertheregion.“Rescuershadtodigwithbarehandsorironsticks，lookingforwardtothearrivalofdiggingmachines，”saidarescuersurnamedWang，whowasworkingatacollapsedhostel.“Thesearchingoperationbecameevenharderatnightwithoutlightingfacilities，”hesaid.Inaddition，rescuersmayeasilygetexhaustedworkingataplacewithanaltitude(海拔)ofabove4,000metres.ThousandsofrescuersandmedicalstaffarerushingtoYushufrommanyregionsofChina，bringingmachines，disaster-reliefmaterialsandmedicinestothequake-hittown.Governments，organizations，enterprisesandindividualsareofferingdonationsofmoneyandmaterialstotheregion.第一步審題謀篇第二步遣詞造句核心詞匯(含本單元詞匯)信息歸納快速閱讀短文，找出每一部分的核心詞匯，并連詞成句Part11.核心詞匯a7.1-magnitudeearthquake；toppled；cutoff；QinghaiProvince；Yushu；Wednesday2.連詞成句①A7.1-magnitudeearthquakehitYushu，QinghaionWednesday.Ittoppledhousesandcutoffsupplies.Part23.核心詞匯

100,000people，shelters，hungryandthirsty，darkness，wind，damagedroads，digwithbarehands，thesearchingoperationbecameevenharder，getexhausted4.連詞成句

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.About100,000peoplearesufferinghungerandcoldfromit，andthedamagedroads，lackofmachinesandthehighaltitudemakeithardertorescuethesurvivorsPart35.核心詞匯governments，organizations，enterprisesandindividuals，donations，money，materials6.連詞成句③_________________________________________

.Governments，organizations，enterprisesandindividualsaredonatingmoneyandmaterialstothearea第三步句式升級把第①句變成含有定語從句的句子。____________________________________________________________________________