寫作應(yīng)用文之申請(qǐng)郵件課件高三英語上學(xué)期一輪復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

寫作應(yīng)用文之

申請(qǐng)郵件Emily假定你是李華，你希望參加學(xué)校組織的英語夏令營，請(qǐng)你給負(fù)責(zé)該夏令營的老師MissEvans寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括，

1.寫信目的。

2.參加理由。

3.表達(dá)期待。

注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80詞左右。

2.適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章流暢連貫;

3.開頭結(jié)尾已寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

(Analyzing審題):Figureoutthewritingpurpose,thetense＆theeventbeforeyoustart.ThinkThinking

letterofapplication申請(qǐng)信genre體裁theletterofapplicationtense時(shí)態(tài)person

人稱以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主，將來時(shí)第一（liHua-I），二（MissEvans-you

)，structure結(jié)構(gòu)Thebeginning（背景+目的）Thebody主體--參加理由1:（至少拓展兩點(diǎn)）

2：3:Theend結(jié)語Whatarethefeaturesofthewriting?

Construct&Addstructure結(jié)構(gòu)ThebeginningThebody主體

(具體)Theend結(jié)語Thebody:AdditionaldetailedfactsMostimportantinformation

（2）Theend:（3）LessimportantThebeginning:Mostimportantinformation

（1）ThinkingPurposeHowdoweconstructaletterofapplication?ReasonsforparticipationStep2(Outlining列提綱):ArrangetherequirementsintoeachpartPara.1intention--明確申請(qǐng)意圖。(可補(bǔ)充強(qiáng)調(diào)個(gè)人興趣并表示對(duì)夏令營的期待）Para.2reasonsforparticipation--whydoyouapply?（注意拓展內(nèi)容的豐富和合理）Para.3expectation(Adding補(bǔ)充):AddsomedetailedinformationWritealetterofapplicationChecklistContent內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)齊全)有適當(dāng)拓展要點(diǎn))Structure段落:分段落寫作（3-4段）)結(jié)構(gòu)：內(nèi)容布局合理)LanguagePolishthelanguageWritingpurposepara.1表明寫信目的01在郵件開頭直接陳述申請(qǐng)參加英語夏令營的意圖，簡潔明了地表達(dá)自己的需求。明確申請(qǐng)意圖02簡述自己對(duì)英語學(xué)習(xí)的熱情以及參加夏令營的個(gè)人興趣和期望，展現(xiàn)積極態(tài)度。強(qiáng)調(diào)個(gè)人興趣SomeusefulexpressionsSomeusefulexpressionsaboutpara.1writingpurposeI'm

writing

toexpressmykeeninterestin/strongdesireto....organisedby...Iamwritingtoapplyforanopportunity/position/postto.....Reasons

forparticipationpara.2體驗(yàn)文化交流提升英語能力通過夏令營的沉浸式學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境，提高英語聽說讀寫能力。有機(jī)會(huì)通過英語與不同文化背景的人交流，拓展視野。促進(jìn)社交能力通過與來自不同背景的人交流，增強(qiáng)自信心，提升個(gè)人社交能力。SomeusefulexpressionsReasons

forparticipation：Participatinginthisactivitywillhelpmeimprovemy...skillorability],whichisessentialformypersonalandprofessionalgrowth.Ibelievethis...willprovidemewithvaluableopportunitiestolearnfrom....andbroadenmyherisons.The....offersaplatformformetopracticemysocialskillsandlearnhowtointeractwithpeoplefrom....Expressionsofexpectationpara.301表達(dá)渴望和期待02期待積極回復(fù)SomeusefulexpressionsExpressionsofexpectation：IsincerelyhopethatIwillhavetheopportunityto...ItwouldbeagreathonorandIamconfidentthatIwillmakethemostofthisopportunity.Ifgiventhechanceto...,Iamcertainthatitwillnotonly...butalsohelpme....Ilookforwardtotheopportunitytolearnandhavefun.Iamextremelyeagerandlookingforwardtoreceivingyourpositivereply.Ibelievethis...willbeanunforgettableexperienceforme.Onepossiblevesion:DearMissEvans,

IamwritingtoexpressmykeeninterestinjoiningtheEnglishSummerCamporganizedbyourschool.

Theimmersiveenvironmentwillbeanexcellentopportunitytoimprovemylanguageskills,andIameagertolearnfromnativespeakersandexperiencedteachers.IbelieveparticipatinginthiscampwillnotonlyenhancemyEnglishproficiencybutalsoprovideaplatformtointeractwithpeersandbroadenmyhorizons.Iamlookingforwardtothechancetoimmersemyselfinadifferentcultureandmakenewfriends.

HowIwishyoucouldgivemethegoldenopportunity!Andyourtimelyreplycouldn'tbeappreciatedmore.

Yours

LiHuaConclusions!!!一、審題干：文體、人稱、時(shí)態(tài)二、審要點(diǎn)：圈畫要點(diǎn)，列關(guān)鍵詞三、擬提綱：確認(rèn)文章段落架構(gòu)，分配句子Para1:寫作目的

把問題以最簡潔的語言呈現(xiàn)出來，開門見山Para2:圍繞要點(diǎn)

增補(bǔ)細(xì)節(jié)Para3:結(jié)尾

緊扣主題詞*亮出關(guān)鍵詞

四、加工潤色：更換高級(jí)詞匯，變簡為復(fù)，促成3-5個(gè)復(fù)合句或高級(jí)

表達(dá)

五、連句成篇，添加適當(dāng)銜接詞Showtime!Excellentworkfromstudents!DearMissEvans.

SoblissfulamIthatI'meagertoparticipateintheEnglish

SummerCamp,whichwillbeorganizedbyschool.

Firstandforemost,withthetargetofimprovingtheEnglishlauguagecapacity.IconsiderthatIcan'tmissthisopportunityspeciallytailoredtome.Additionally,notonlycanIbroadenmyhorizonsoftheworld,butalsoIcanenhanceabilityoftalkingwithothersandincreasemyconfidence.

I'dappreciateitifyoucangrantmewiththispreciouschance.Lookingforwardtoyourreply!