新高考英語｜讀后續(xù)寫素材積累之高分句式課件-2025屆高三英語作文專項(xiàng)復(fù)習(xí)

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高分句式句型1：場景+情緒+面部描寫（肢體動(dòng)作）Seeing(Hearing/Thinkingof...)sb./sth,sb.feltastrong(anoverwhelming)senseof+情緒名詞wellingupinsidesb.andsurgingthroughone'sbody,(withtearsof+情緒名詞runningdownone'scheeks).看到(聽到/想到…)某人/某物，某人感覺一股強(qiáng)烈的...情緒涌上心頭并涌遍全身，（....的淚水從某人的臉上流下來了）。例：Seeingadarkfigureapproaching,Lilyfeltastrongsenseoffearwellingupinsideherandsurgingthroughherbody,withtearsofhopelessnessrunningdownhercheeks.【注：】最后的with結(jié)構(gòu)還可以換成以下的肢體表達(dá)1)withhands+非謂語動(dòng)詞(shaking/waving/sweating/crossed交叉/clenched緊握/2)withlegs+非謂語動(dòng)詞(trembling/kicking/frozen靜止/rootedtothespot一動(dòng)不動(dòng)）3)witheyes+非謂語動(dòng)詞（fixedon.../staringat...盯著/lockedon...鎖住/lookingupanddown上下看/burningwithfire怒氣沖沖/twinklingwithpleasure(excitement)閃耀喜悅、興奮的光芒/widewithhorror(surprise)害怕、驚訝睜大眼睛）4)withhead+非謂語動(dòng)詞（drooping耷拉著/bent(bowed/lowered)頭低著/helduphigh頭抬得高高得/spinning頭暈?zāi)垦?）5)withface+非謂語動(dòng)詞(turningpale變蒼白/burninghot火辣辣的/litup面露喜色/forcingasmile勉強(qiáng)微笑/growingserious變嚴(yán)肅)句型1應(yīng)用實(shí)例：1.看到他跳入(jumpinto)水中，我感到一股強(qiáng)烈的希望涌上心頭并涌遍全身，激動(dòng)的淚水從我的臉上留下。Seeinghimjumpingintowater,Ifeltastrongsenseofhopewellingupinsidemeandsurgingthroughmybody,withtearsofthrillstreamingdownmycheeks.2.聽到他因運(yùn)動(dòng)員精神而被授予一個(gè)獎(jiǎng)項(xiàng)，他感到一股強(qiáng)烈的激動(dòng)之情涌上心頭并涌遍全身，眼睛閃耀著喜悅的光芒。Hearinghewasawardedaprizeforhissportsmanship,hefeltastrongsenseofhopewellingupinsidehimandsurgingthroughhisbody,witheyessparklingwithjoy.3.想到她要一個(gè)人在這漆黑的森林度過一個(gè)晚上，她感到一股強(qiáng)烈的絕望與無助涌上心頭并涌遍全身，臉變得蒼白起來。Thinkingshewouldspendanightaloneinthisdarkforest,shefeltastrongsenseofdespairandhopelessnesswellingupinsideherandsurgingthroughherbody,withfaceturningpale.句型2：“as倒裝+擬人修辭”驚艷到爆2.adj.+adj.assb/sth.be,sb.stilldidsth.asiftherewasaninnervoicetellingsb.thatsb.shoulddosth.=adj.+adj.assb.be,sb.stilldidsth.,doingsth(非謂語),withaninnervoicereminding/encouragingsb.(not)todosth.盡管既......又......，某人仍然做某事，(做某事)仿佛內(nèi)心有個(gè)聲音告訴/提醒/鼓勵(lì)某人，（不）做某事（“面對(duì)困難”可用）例：Downcastandfrustrated,Daviddidnotgiveintothisraceasiftherewasaninnervoicetellinghimthathecoulddowhateverhewanted.句型2應(yīng)用實(shí)例1.盡管既艱難又有挑戰(zhàn)性(challenging)，他仍然游向（swimtowards）我女兒，仿佛內(nèi)心有個(gè)聲音告訴他，他不應(yīng)該放棄。Toughandchallengingasitwas,hestillswamtowardsmydaughter,asiftherewasaninnervoicetellinghimnottogiveup.2.盡管既疲憊又失落，Mr.Ray依然相信能找到他丟失的車，仿佛內(nèi)心有個(gè)聲音告訴他，他要堅(jiān)持下去。Exhaustedanddowncast,Mr.Raystillclungtothebeliefthathecouldfindhislostcarasiftherewasaninnervoicetellinghimtokeepon.3.盡管斷掉電子設(shè)備既艱難又煎熬，我依然努力克制自己的渴望，仿佛內(nèi)心有個(gè)聲音在鼓勵(lì)我，“你可以做到的?！盇rduousandtorturingasitwastoweanmyselffromelectronicdevices,Istilldoubledmyeffortstorefrainfrommyurgewithaninnervoiceencouragingme,“Youcandoit!”句型3表示“一.......就....”多樣表達(dá)不會(huì)膩1)Awaveof+情緒名詞tookholdofsb.themomentsb.didsth.某人一做某事，某種情緒占據(jù)了某人。(此處的themoment也可換成theinstant/theminute等）2）Hardlyhadsb.donesth.when....=Nosoonerhadsb.donesth.than...3)Upondoingsth.,sb.didsth.例：AwaveofsadnesstookholdofmethemomentIwasnotchosenfortheteam.句型3應(yīng)用實(shí)例1.一看到他們返回岸邊(theshore)，喜悅的情緒占據(jù)了我。ThemomentIsawtheirreturntotheshore,awaveofjoytookholdofme.2.他一打開房門，就看到一個(gè)為他精心準(zhǔn)備的蛋糕映入眼簾，使他充滿的感動(dòng)與溫暖，驅(qū)散了一天工作的疲憊感。Hardlyhadheopenedthedoorwhenhesawacarefullypreparedcakegreetinghiseyes,fillinghimwithgratitudeandwarmth,dispellingtirednessafteradayofwork.3.一得知被心儀的大學(xué)錄取了，Tim迫不及待地跑回家與媽媽分享他的喜悅。Uponknowinghewasadmittedtohisidealuniversity,Timcouldn’twaittosharehisdelightwithhismom.句型4全部倒裝呈現(xiàn)“百感交集”Atthatverymoment,withinone’sheartwasafeelingof+情緒名詞A，mixedwithoverwhelming+情緒名詞,makingsb....

例句：Atthatverymoment,withinmyheartwasafeelingofgratitude,mixedwithoverwhelmingexcitement,makingmeunabletoutteranyword.句型4應(yīng)用實(shí)例1.在那一刻，我的內(nèi)心充滿不安，夾雜著一絲悔意，使我站在原地一動(dòng)不動(dòng)。Atthatverymoment,withinmyheartwasafeelingofanxiety，mixedwithoverwhelmingregret,makingmefrozenonthespot.2.在那一刻，Peter內(nèi)心充滿了驚訝之情，夾雜著極大的激動(dòng)之情，使他進(jìn)入到了奇幻的世界。Atthatverymoment,withinPeter’sheartwasafeelingofamazement，mixedwithoverwhelmingtremendousthrill,makinghimintoawonderland.3.在那一刻，Linda的內(nèi)心充滿的憤怒，夾雜著無以言表的羞愧之情，使她不敢面對(duì)家人。Atthatverymoment,withinLinda’sheartwasafeelingofanger，mixedwithoverwhelminginexpressibleshame,makingherunabletofaceherfamily.句型5witness無靈主句“說”變化時(shí)間+witnessedone’sprogress/growth/changes,from...to...時(shí)間見證....的變化/成長，從....到(此句型十分適用于“人與動(dòng)物”話題，如描述“動(dòng)物的改變”)例：Thefollowingdaywitnessedthelittlecat’sprogress,fromaweakpoorcreturetakenhomebymetoalivelyandenergeticsoldier.句型5應(yīng)用實(shí)例1.接下來的幾周見證了這個(gè)麻雀的變化，從一開始毫無生命力的雙眼到現(xiàn)在的眼里充滿好奇，從耷拉的翅膀到時(shí)不時(shí)的振翅。Thefollowingweekswitnessedthissparrow’sprogress/growth/changes,frominitiallifelesseyestoeyesfilledwithcuriosity,fromdroopingwingstooccassionaldeterminedfluttering.2.接下來的幾個(gè)月見證Lucy的變化，從對(duì)隊(duì)友的冷漠和無視到熱情地融入到這個(gè)集體中來，從一言不發(fā)到無話不說。ThenextmonthswitnessedLucy’sprogress/growth/changes,frombeingindifferenttoherteammatestoherenthusiasmaboutfittinginwiththisteam,frombeingsilenttobeingeagertoshareeverything.3.接下來的幾天見證了我們關(guān)系的轉(zhuǎn)折點(diǎn)，從相互之間的敵對(duì)與對(duì)抗到形影不離。Thedaysaheadwitnessedaturningpointofourrelationship,frombeinghostiletoeachotherandconfrontationtobeinginseparable.句型6矛盾心理，左右為難sb.sankintoaninnerconflictbetween...

and...sb.wastornbetween...and...one’semotionsswungbetween...and...以上句型均可用來人物內(nèi)心處于矛盾當(dāng)中，在兩件事中猶豫不決。例：Shesankintoaninnerconflictbetweenherloveofdancingandherfearofperforminginpublic。她內(nèi)心充滿矛盾，既熱愛舞蹈又害怕公開表演。

句型6應(yīng)用實(shí)例

他內(nèi)心充滿矛盾，在堅(jiān)持自己的飛行員夢(mèng)與父親的期待之間產(chǎn)生沖突。Hesankintoaninnerconflictbetweenstickingtohisdreamofbeingapilot

andhisfather’sexpectation.

Cindy在選擇幫助需要幫助的人與花時(shí)間在自己的興趣上矛盾著。Cindywastornbetweenhelpingothersinneedandspendingtimeonherowninterest.句型7“否定+比較”凸顯文章主題nothingwasmore+形容詞thansth.,constantlyremindingsb.ofthesignificanceof...

此句型可用于“某物”在文章中起到警示、提醒等作用，來彰顯文章主題。

例：Nothingwasmoreimportantthisbrokenvase,remindinghimofthesignificanceofbeinganhonestboy.沒有什么比這個(gè)破碎的花瓶更重要了，它提醒著他做一個(gè)誠實(shí)的男孩的重要性。句型7應(yīng)用實(shí)例在他的臥室里，沒有什么比這三顆巧克力更引人注目的了，時(shí)刻提醒著他誠實(shí)的重要性。Inhisbedroom,nothingwasmorestrikingthanthethreechocolates,constantlyremindinghimofthesignificanceofbeinghonest.在他心里，沒有什么比這個(gè)損壞的手表更具有教育意義的了，時(shí)刻提醒著他耐心的重要性。Nothingwasmoreeducationalthanthisbrokenwatch,constantlyremindinghimofthesignificanceofpatience.

沒有什么比這個(gè)這張紙條更令人動(dòng)容的了，時(shí)刻提醒著Peter善良的重要性。Nothingwasmoretouchingthanthisnote,constantlyremindingPeterofthesignificanceofkindness。句型8情緒轉(zhuǎn)變這樣說更生動(dòng)情緒1+情緒2werereplacedby/gavewayto/translatedinto/wereconvertedinto

情緒3+情緒4

上述短語均可表達(dá)情緒的轉(zhuǎn)變，如：Hissadnessanddisappointmentwerereplacedby/gavewayto/translatedinto/wereconvertedinto

joyandexcitement.句型8應(yīng)用實(shí)例在得知自己被選為籃球隊(duì)隊(duì)員后，他最初失望和挫敗的情緒轉(zhuǎn)變成了欣喜和自豪。Aftertheknowledgethathewaschosenbythebasketballteam,hisinitialdisappointmentandfrustrationwasreplacedbyjoyandpride.狂怒不安的熊步步逼近，我們緊張擔(dān)心的情緒轉(zhuǎn)變成了恐懼與絕望。Withtheragingbearapproaching,ourtensionandconcerngavewaytofearanddespair.

直升機(jī)的轟鳴聲響徹天空，簡一開始的焦慮與害怕轉(zhuǎn)變成了喜悅和激動(dòng)。Therumbleofthehelicopterbrokethesky.Jane’sanxietyandfearatthebiginningwereconvertedintodelightandthrill.句型9期望變失望怎么寫whatawaitedsb.wasAratherthanB,throwingsb.intoastateof...等待某人的是A不是B，使某人陷入了.....的狀態(tài)

此句型用于說明某人期待的事情與自己的預(yù)期不符，從而使其陷入消極的情緒當(dāng)中，如：Whatawaitedhimwasdisapprovalratherthandad’sunderstanding,throwinghimintoastateofdisappointment.句型9應(yīng)用實(shí)例然而,等待我的不是媽媽熱心的支持，而是她失望的眼神，使我陷入了悲傷的境地。Whatawaitedmewasmom’sdisappointinglookratherthanhersupport,throwingmeintoastateofsadness.等待他的不是老師的肯定而是批評(píng)，使他陷入了自我懷疑的境地。Whatawaitedhimwascritisimratherthanhisteacher’srecognition,throwinghimintoastateofself-doubt.

等待他的不是大家的鼓勵(lì)而是一陣嘲笑，使他陷入了絕望的境地。

Whatawaitedhimwaseveryone’steaserathertha