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Heroes模塊提升九年級(jí)上冊(cè)WY初中英語本模塊的寫作話題是"描述自己心目中的英雄"。這種話題通常要求學(xué)生介紹一位偉人的生平。在寫作時(shí)，如果敘述的是過去發(fā)生的情況，

應(yīng)使用過去時(shí)；如果講述的是現(xiàn)在的情況，應(yīng)使用現(xiàn)在時(shí)。寫作時(shí)，可

按照時(shí)間順序展開敘述，寫作過程中可使用本模塊所學(xué)的狀語從句對(duì)事

情的原因或結(jié)果進(jìn)行闡述。文章的結(jié)尾可表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)或看法。如何寫關(guān)于心目中的英雄的文章話題分析(桂林中考)

2021年5月22日，"世界雜交水稻之父"袁隆平因病在湖南長沙逝世。巨星隕落，舉世皆哀，人們紛紛以各種不同的方式來紀(jì)念這位偉大的科學(xué)家。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列表格信息提示，以"Thegreatestheroinmyheart—YuanLongping"為題，寫一篇英文短文簡

單介紹袁隆平院士的生平事跡(話題：人物介紹

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heart—Yuan

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Longping

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my

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of

food

for

millions

of

people

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ofHybrid

Rice".①He

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Beijing

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people

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more

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onlyin

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in

many

other

areas

around

the

world.④He

died

in

Changsha

on22nd

May

2021,when

he

was

ninety-one

years

old.教材原句She

died

in

London

on

13th

August1910,when

she

wasninety

years

old.(教材P25)⑤One

of

the

best

ways

to

remember

him

is

that

we

shouldsave

food

and

never

waste

any

food.Yuan

Longping

will

live

in

my

heart

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