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閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文?！癐t’sbeenpotatoesallweek,mom!Can’twegotothedinerforaburgerandanicecream?That’sallIwantformybirthday!”Eve’s8-year-oldsonDylanthrewhisarmsaroundhershoulders,lookingatherhopefully.Inherhear,shewantedtothrowDylanthebiggestbirthdaypartyever,withballoonsandadeliciouscakewith8beautifulcandlesonit.Butinreality,Evecouldaffordnoneofthat.Afterbeingletgofromthethirdtemporaryjobandpayingtheoverduebills,shedidn’thaveenoughmoneyleft.“Sorry,baby.Ican’taffordmeals...”Evesaidsadly.Seeingtearsinhismother’seyes,Dylanquicklychangedhistone(語(yǔ)氣).He’dseenherstrugglingtomakeendsmeetandcouldn’tstandhurtingher.“Actually,mom,thatpotatosaladlooksdelicious!CanIhavesomemore?”Heaskedhercheerfully.Afterthehumblemeal,Evedidhousework.Dylantookoutanenvelopehiddenonhisbookshelf.He’dsecretlysavedafewdollarsfromthelunchmoneyhismomhadgivenhimoverthepastfewyears.Hecountedthemoney.“$28!”Hiseyeslitup.“Icangetagoodmealforcmom!”Dylanslidoutwiththeenvelopeandwalkedtothenextblock,wherehesawexactlywhathe’dexpected—themobilefoodtruck!He’dseenitafewtimesandwonderedwhytheplacewasalwayscrowded.Hewaiteduntilthecrowdwaitingtobuyfoodatthecounterclearedaway“Sir!PleasegivemeeverythingIcangetfor$28!”Dylanrequestedeagerly.ButMartin,theownerofthefoodtruck,replied,“Sorry,kid.We’reoutofeverythingtoday!”Disappointed,Dylanwasseatedonthesidewalk,mumbling(咕噥):“It’smybirthday,butIcan’teventreathertoanicemeal.Shedoessomuchforme.Ithought,foronce,Iwoulddosomethingniceforher.”Hekepttalkingoutloudtohimself,givingintohisurgetocry.注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答?！癢oah,happybirthday,boy!”Martinsaid,sittingdownnexttoDylan.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thenextmorning,Evewokeuptoafoodtruckoutsideherhouse.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意伊芙經(jīng)濟(jì)拮據(jù)，剛失去第三份臨時(shí)工作且支付完逾期賬單后沒(méi)什么錢(qián)了。8歲兒子迪倫生日，他本想吃漢堡和冰淇淋，但看到媽媽的難處后改變想法。飯后，迪倫拿出偷偷攢下的28美元，想給媽媽買(mǎi)一頓好飯，于是去了經(jīng)?？吹降囊苿?dòng)餐車(chē)。然而餐車(chē)?yán)习羼R丁說(shuō)東西都賣(mài)完了，迪倫失望地坐在人行道上，為不能給媽媽買(mǎi)飯而難過(guò)。伏筆與續(xù)寫(xiě)回應(yīng)伏筆：迪倫的失望和他對(duì)媽媽的愛(ài)。續(xù)寫(xiě)中馬丁的出現(xiàn)和幫助回應(yīng)了這一伏筆，馬丁被迪倫的孝心感動(dòng)，幫助他實(shí)現(xiàn)愿望。伏筆：移動(dòng)餐車(chē)總是很擁擠（暗示餐車(chē)食物受歡迎）。續(xù)寫(xiě)中第二天餐車(chē)出現(xiàn)在伊芙家外，可能是餐車(chē)食物受歡迎才會(huì)有能力幫助迪倫，同時(shí)滿(mǎn)足了迪倫為媽媽準(zhǔn)備一頓好飯的心愿。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)第一段情感線：同情、溫暖。馬丁被迪倫的遭遇和對(duì)媽媽的愛(ài)打動(dòng)，決定幫助他，給故事帶來(lái)溫暖的情感氛圍。故事線：描述馬丁與迪倫的交流，馬丁詢(xún)問(wèn)迪倫情況，得知他的想法后決定幫助他實(shí)現(xiàn)為媽媽準(zhǔn)備一頓好飯的愿望。續(xù)寫(xiě)示范：“Woah,happybirthday,boy!”Martinsaid,sittingdownnexttoDylan.“Iheardyou.You'reagoodkid.Youknowwhat?I'llmakeyouaspecialbirthdaymealforyourmom.Youdon'thavetopay.”Dylan'seyeswidenedwithsurpriseandgratitude.HetoldMartinhowhardhismomhadbeenworkingandhowmuchhewantedtodosomethingniceforher.Martinsmiledandgottowork.第二段情感線：驚喜、感動(dòng)。伊芙看到餐車(chē)時(shí)感到驚訝，當(dāng)?shù)弥莾鹤訛樽约簻?zhǔn)備的生日驚喜后會(huì)非常感動(dòng)，體現(xiàn)母子間濃濃的親情。故事線：講述伊芙看到餐車(chē)后的反應(yīng)，以及迪倫向她解釋這是給自己的生日禮物，展現(xiàn)這一驚喜背后的愛(ài)意。續(xù)寫(xiě)示范：Thenextmorning,Evewokeuptoafoodtruckoutsideherhouse.Shewasconfused.ThenshesawDylanrunningtowardsherwithabigsmile.“Happybirthday,mom!Thisisforyou.Iwantedtogetyouanicemeal.”Eve'seyesfilledwithtearsasshehuggedhersontightly.Sherealizedthatevenintoughtimes,lovecouldcreatethemostbeautifulsurprises.情感線從迪倫最初對(duì)生日餐的期待，到理解媽媽后的懂事，再到買(mǎi)不到餐的失望，接著是馬丁出現(xiàn)后的驚喜與感激，最后伊芙的感動(dòng)，情感變化豐富且真摯，讓讀者感受到親情的溫暖和人性的美好。情感變化推動(dòng)了故事發(fā)展，使讀者更關(guān)注這對(duì)母子的命運(yùn)和他們之間的情感互動(dòng)。故事線故事圍繞迪倫生日想給媽媽買(mǎi)一頓好飯展開(kāi)，從家庭的經(jīng)濟(jì)困境、迪倫的計(jì)劃、遇到挫折到最后得到幫助實(shí)現(xiàn)愿望，情節(jié)完整、邏輯清晰。每個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)緊密相連，突出了親情的力量和在困境中人與人之間的善意這一主題。主旨升華句"Lovedoesn'tcountonwealth;achild'spureheartcanbethemostpreciousgiftinthepoorestfamily."（愛(ài)不取決于財(cái)富；在最貧困的家庭中，孩子的純潔心靈可能是最珍貴的禮物。）"Inthefaceofhardship,thelovebetweenmotherandsonshinesbrightly,lightingupthedarkestcornersoflife."（面對(duì)困難，母子之間的愛(ài)閃耀光芒，照亮生活中最黑暗的角落。）"Sometimes,themostbeautifulsurprisescomefromthesimplestactsoflove,eveninthetoughesttimes."（有時(shí)，即使在最艱難的時(shí)刻，最美麗的驚喜也來(lái)自最簡(jiǎn)單的愛(ài)的舉動(dòng)。）"Alittleboy'swishforhismothershowsthatkindnessandlovearetherealtreasureswecanholdontoduringdifficultdays."（一個(gè)小男孩對(duì)母親的愿望表明，在艱難的日子里，善良和愛(ài)是我們可以堅(jiān)守的真正財(cái)富。）"ThestoryofDylanandEvetellsusthatlovecanovercomepoverty,creatingwarmmemoriesthatlastalifetime."（迪倫和伊芙的故事告訴我們，愛(ài)可以戰(zhàn)勝貧窮，創(chuàng)造出持續(xù)一生的溫暖回憶。）兩篇寫(xiě)作示范范文一“Woah,happybirthday,boy!”Martinsaid,sittingdownnexttoDylan.“Ican'tjustleaveyousadonyourbirthday.I'llreopenthetruckandmakeyouandyourmomagreatmeal.”Dylan'sfacelitupwithjoy.HewatchedasMartinpreparedadeliciousspreadofburgers,fries,andevenanicecream.Martinalsoaddedasmallcakewithacandle.“Thisisforyouandyourmom.Youdeserveit.”

Thenextmorning,Evewokeuptoafoodtruckoutsideherhouse.Shewasshocked.Dylanrushedtoher,excited.“Mom,it'sforyou!Happybirthday!”Evewasspeechlessasshesawthefood.WhenshelearnedwhatDylanhaddone,shehuggedhimtightly,tearsofhappinessstreamingdownherface.Thiswasthebestbirthdaypresentshecouldeverreceive.范文二“Woah,happybirthday,boy!”Martinsaid,sittingdownnexttoDylan.“I'mtouchedbyyourloveforyourmom.Youknowwhat?I'llmakesureyouhaveagreatmealforher.”Martinquicklypreparedamealboxfilledwithhisbest-sellingitems.Healsoincludedanotesaying“HappyBirthdaytoawonderfulmother.”Dylanthankedhimrepeatedly,hiseyesshiningwithexcitement.

Thenextmorning,Evewokeuptoafoodtruckoutsideherhouse.Shewonderedwhatwasgoingon.Dylanpulledheroutside.“Mom,thisismygifttoyou.Iwantedtogiveyouanicemeal.”Evewasovercomewithemotion.SheheldDylanclose,realizingthathislovewasmorevaluablethananyluxury.Thefoodtruckbecameasymbolofloveandkindnessonthisspecialday.參考答案“Woah,happybirthday,boy!”Martinsaid,sittingdownnexttoDylan.Withkindnessinhisheart,heaskedpatientlyinasoftvoicetogettoknowtheintentionofthelittleboywhoonlygot$28.