高一上學期英語讀后續(xù)寫例題詳解導學案

2024年秋高一第十一周讀后續(xù)寫【2023年南通高一上期末】Engagement(訂婚)isanexcitingandmemorableeventthatmanypeoplelookforwardto.BaileyDavis,whohadbeeninlovewithherboyfriendformorethantwoyears,likemanyothers,recentlyexperiencedthisjoyousoccasionwhenshegotengaged.Asforthefuture,Baileyknewthatnomatterwhatchallengesorobstaclescameherway,shewouldalwaysholdontothememoriesandexperiencesshesharedwithherpartner.Shehasbeenproudlywearingherbeautifulengagementringeversince,valuingitasasymbolofherloveandcommitment.However,herhappinesswasshort-lived.Asasalesgirlofalargechainstore,Baileywasasbusyasabee,goingonbusinessalonefromtimetotime.Onthisparticularday,Columbus,Ohiowasherdestination.Shegotupveryearly,packedallherbaggage,anddrovetherehappily.Whileatareststop,sheusedtherestroom.Here,shetookoffherring.Butlittledidsheknowthatshe’dalsoleaveitthere.Itwasn’tuntilshearrivedinColumbusthatsherealizedherringwasmissing.“IhaddrivenalreadytwohoursawaytoColumbusbeforeIrealizeditwasn’tonmyhand,”Baileyrecalled.“Iwasshakyandsweating—IfeltlikeIwasgoingtopuke(嘔吐).”Bythetimeshereturnedtothereststopbathroom,theringwasgone.Atthatmoment,Baileyfeltcertainshewouldneverseeherpreciousringagain.Bailey’sheartbegantosinkatthethoughtofthespecialvalueofthering.Forher,itwasnotjustapieceofjewelrybutasymboloftheloveandcommitmentshesharedwithherpartner.Shecouldn’thelpbutfeeladeepsenseoflossanddisappointment.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。However,Baileyrefusedtogiveuphope._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Justwhenshe’sabouttoloseheart,somethingamazinghappened._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

【解析】【導語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了BaileyDavis的訂婚戒指失而復得的故事?！驹斀狻?.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“然而，貝利拒絕放棄希望?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼懾惱麤]有放棄想方設法去找戒指。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“就在她快要灰心喪氣的時候，驚人的事情發(fā)生了。”可知，第二段可描寫一位好心人找到了戒指并還給了她。2.續(xù)寫線索：拒絕放棄希望——開始聯(lián)系休息站——繼續(xù)尋找——開始感到無望——驚人的事發(fā)生了——好心人找到了她的戒指——感激和寬慰——感悟第一段：但是，她拒絕放棄希望。她開始聯(lián)系休息站，希望有人撿到她的戒指并上交。她還發(fā)布在社交媒體上，很多人轉發(fā)并鼓勵安慰。她聯(lián)系了當?shù)氐闹閷毶痰?，甚至報警了。盡管她的種種努力，戒指依然沒有找到，她開始絕望。第二段驚人的事情發(fā)生了。她接到休息站的電話。有個善良的員工發(fā)現(xiàn)了戒指卻不知道交給誰直到看到休息站發(fā)布的尋物啟事。Bailey不能相信她的運氣趕忙沖到休息站。當她再一次拿到\看到戒指時，她感到高興\感激\寬慰（松了一口氣）。=1\*GB3①從那一天起，這個戒指不僅象征著她和伴侶之間的愛和承諾，還有陌生人的，作為一個提醒，是愛和善良讓這個世界運轉。=2\*GB3②她意識到她和伴侶之間的愛和承諾是不可替代的。這個經(jīng)歷也教會了她珍惜生活中真正重要的東西。

高興、感激Whensheheldtheringonceagain,afeelingofhappinesswelledupinsideher.Themomentshecaughtsightofthering,herfacelitupwithdelight,tearsofgratitudestreamingherface.Atthesightofthering,shewasoverwhelmedwithjoy,hereyesshiningandherfacebeaming(herhandstrembling).Sheexpressedheartfeltgratitudetoeveryonefortheirhelpandcare.Hewasovercomebyfear,handstremblingandeyeswideopen.他被恐懼沖昏了頭腦，雙手顫抖，眼睛睜得大大的。Iwasovercomebyshame,myheartthumpingandmyfaceblushing.我被羞愧沖昏了頭腦，心砰砰直跳，臉色泛紅。Theywereovercomewithsadness,tearsstreamingdowntheirfaces.他們傷心欲絕，淚流滿面。Iwasovercomewithexcitement,myheartracingrapidlyandmyeyesshining/twinklingwildly.我被激動的心情沖昏了頭腦，心跳加速，雙眼狂閃。Hewasseizedbyagreatsenseofanger,hiseyesglaringatthem.感悟，升華句型句型一：It’s...that...(強調句）ItislovethatmakestheworldgoroundandBernardfeltitdeepinhislittleheart.（2020.7高考山東卷）正是愛讓世界轉動，Bernard在心里深深地感受到了這一點。It’sMrJohnson’sencouragementthatgavemecourageandconfidence.是Johnson老師的鼓勵給予了我勇氣和自信。It’sherselflessloveandpowerfulsupportthatchangedourlife.是她無私的愛和堅實的支持改變了我的人生。2.句型二：fromthenon+行動1）Fromthenon,Imadeupmymindtopasson“l(fā)ove”toothers.Justasasayinggoes,“Rosesgiven,fragranceinhand.”從那以后,我下定決心向別人傳遞“愛”。俗話說:“玫瑰予人，手留余香?！?)Fromthatdayon,everytimeImeetsomeonewhoneedshelp,Ialwaysreachouttothem,hopingtopassonthekindnessthatMexicanfamilyofferedme.（2021年1月八省聯(lián)考）從那天起，每當我遇到需要幫助的人，我總是伸出手去幫助他們，希望把墨西哥家庭給予我的善良傳遞下去。3.句型三：Itdawnedonsb.that...1）Itdawnedonmethatamomentofkindnesscouldmeansomuchtoanother,andthatasimpleactcouldmaketheworldsomuchbetter.我恍然大悟，那一刻的善良對另一個人來說意義重大，而一個簡單的行為可以使世界變得如此美好。2）ItdawnedonMiathatsometimesasmallactofkindnessmaybepowerfulenoughtomakeahugedifference.米婭突然意識到，有時候一個小小的善舉可能會產(chǎn)生巨大的影響。4.句型四：Only...（倒裝句）1）Onlywhenweopenupthedoorofourheartcanwebebathedinthebrilliantsunshineandenjoythewarmthoflove.只有當我們打開心扉，我們才能沐浴在陽光中享受愛的溫暖。OnlythendidIrealizethatitwaskindnessandlovethatmadeourworldsowarmandbeautiful.直到那時候，我才意識到，正是愛和善意讓我們的世界如此溫暖美麗。

翻譯練習正是這次特別的經(jīng)歷使我明白了幫助別人是多么寶貴的品質。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________是媽媽偉大無私的愛讓我們健康快樂成長。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________從那天起，Lily清楚意識到奉獻的重要性，她下定決心，以后遇到有需要幫助的人，她會主動伸出援手。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________她恍然大悟，善良是打開心扉的鑰匙。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________直到那時候，他才清楚明白到幫助別人是多么有意義的事情。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

第一段However,Baileyrefusedtogiveuphope.Shestartedbycontactingthereststopmanagement,hopingthatsomeonemighthavefoundherringandturneditin.Shealsopostedaboutherlostringonsocialmedia.Theresponsewassurprisingwithpeoplesharingherpostandofferingwordsofencouragement.Daysturnedintoweeks,andBaileycontinuedhersearch.Shecontactedlocaljewelrystoresandevencalledthepolice.Despiteherefforts,theringremainedhardtofind,andBaileybegantofeelhopeless.第二段Justwhenshe’sabouttoloseheart,somethingamazinghappened.Shereceivedacallfromthereststopmanagement.Akind-heartedemployeehadfoundherringbutdidn’tknowwheretoturnitin.Baileycouldn’tbelieveherluckandrushedbacktothereststop.Assheheldtheringinherhandonceagain,Baileywasoverwhelmedwithgratitudeandrelief.Fromthedayon,thepreciousringdidn’tonlysymbolizetheloveandcommitmentshesharedwithherepartner,butalsothekindnessfromacompletestranger,servingasareminderthatitisloveandkindnessthatmakestheworldgoround.Sherealizedthatmaterialpossessionscancomeandgo,buttheloveandmemoriessheshareswithherpartnerareirreplaceable.Theexperiencehastaughthertheimportanceofcherishingandvaluingwhattrulymattersinlife.翻譯練習Itwasthespecialexperiencethatmademerealizethathelpingothersisanimportantvirtue.Itwasmother’sgreatandselflesslovethatmadeusgrowhealthilyandhappily.Fromthatdayon,Lilyclearlyrealizedtheimportanceofdevotion,andshemadeuphermindthatshewouldofferahelpinghandtothoseinneedinthefuture.Itdawnedonherthatkindnessisthekeytoopenone’sheart.Onlythendidheclearlyrealizehowmeaningfulitwastohelpothers.

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