2024年高考英語重難點突破訓練書面表達提綱類含解析

書面表達提綱類假定你是李華，你所在的城市正在舉辦首屆書法(Calligraphy)展，不僅包括了古今名作，還有一些業(yè)余愛好者的優(yōu)秀作品，請你給外教Mr.Green寫封信，邀請他去參觀。1.寫信目的；2.舉辦的時間(本周早九點到晚九點)和地點(theCityExhibitionCenter)；留意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2.可以適當增加細微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好。DearMr.Green,Knowingthat_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMr.Green,KnowingthatyouareinterestedinChineseculture,Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinthefirstcalligraphyexhibitionwhichisbeingheldinourcity.Inordertoincreasepeople’sinterestincalligraphyandprovideopportunitiesforordinarypeopletodisplaytheircalligraphicskills,theshowisgoingtobeheldintheCityExhibitionCenterfrom9:00amto9:00p.m.thisweek.ApartfromtheworksofsomeancientandmodemChinesemasters,theworksofordinarypeoplewillalsobeexhibited,whichIthinkisthemostattractivepartforus.Ibelievetheexhibitionwillnotonlyofferusagoodopportunitytoobtainadearpictureofcalligraphy,butalsolearnthedeeploveChinesepeoplehaveforit.Ifyouwanttopayavisittoit,pleaseinformmeofyouravailabletimesothatwecangotheretogether.Yours,LiHua【文章大意】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，邀請外教Mr.Green去參觀首屆書法(Calligraphy)展?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑簩忣}體裁：應用文時態(tài)：依據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式支配所寫內(nèi)容。要求：1.寫信目的；2.舉辦的時間(本周早九點到晚九點)和地點(theCityExhibitionCenter)；其次步:列提綱（重點詞組）Inorderto；Apartfrom；themostattractivepart；payavisitto第三步：連詞成句1.KnowingthatyouareinterestedinChineseculture,Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinthefirstcalligraphyexhibitionwhichisbeingheldinourcity.2.Inordertoincreasepeople’sinterestincalligraphyandprovideopportunitiesforordinarypeopletodisplaytheircalligraphicskills,theshowisgoingtobeheldintheCityExhibitionCenterfrom9：00amto9：00p.m.thisweek.3.ApartfromtheworksofsomeancientandmodemChinesemasters,theworksofordinarypeoplewillalsobeexhibited,whichIthinkisthemostattractivepartforus.4.Ibelievetheexhibitionwillnotonlyofferusagoodopportunitytoobtainadearpictureofcalligraphy,butalsolearnthedeeploveChinesepeoplehaveforit.5.Ifyouwanttopayavisittoit,pleaseinformmeofyouravailabletimesothatwecangotheretogether.依據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，留意主謂一樣和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（連接詞）1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)依次：Firstofall,Firstly/First,Secondly/Second…Andthen,Finally,Intheend,Atlast2.表并列補充關系：Whatismore,Besides,Moreover,Furthermore,InadditionAswellas,notonly…but(also),including,3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關系：However,Onthecontrary,but,Although+clause(從句),Inspiteof+n/doing,Ontheonehand…,Ontheotherhand…Some…,whileothers…,asfor,so…that…4.表因果關系：Because,As,So,Thus,Therefore,Asaresult連句成文，留意運用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的連接與過渡，書寫肯定要規(guī)范清晰，第五步：潤色修改某英文雜志正在舉辦"Whethershouldhighschoolstudentsstayuplatetostudy?"為主題的征文活動。假如你是紅星中學李華，就“中學學生該不該熬夜學習“在學校作了一次調(diào)查，結(jié)果發(fā)覺60%的同學認為應當熬夜學習，認為晚上學習寧靜，效率高，而還有40%的同學認為晚上不該熬夜學習，熬夜不利于身體，對學習沒有多大幫助。況且白天又簡單打瞌睡，得不償失?，F(xiàn)在請你給報社寫一封信，反映此現(xiàn)并發(fā)表自己的觀點。留意：詞數(shù)100左右.參考詞匯：gainscannotmakeupforlosses得不償失DearEditor.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Your’s,LiHua【答案】DearEditor,Withthelearningtaskincreasinginhighschool,moreandmorehighschoolstudentsarebeginningtostayuplatetostudy.RecentlywedidasurveyaboutwhetherhighschoolfreshmenshouldstayuplatetostudyornotOpinionsaredividedintotwoparts.60%ofthestudentsthinktheyshouldstudyatnightbecausethereisnonoiseatthattimeandthattheyhavehigherlearningefficiency.Howeverothersthinkthattheyshouldstayuplatetostudyhavethreereasons.Firststayingupdoesgreatharmtohealth.Seconditisofnohelptoimprovetheirgrades.Thirdtheywillbedozyduringthedaysothatgainscannotmakeupforlosses.AsfarasI’mconcerned,healthismoreimportantthananythingelse.Itisnormalforhighschoolfreshmentostayuplatetostudy,butitisveryharmfultohealthiftheystayuptoolatefrequently.Yours,LiHua【文章大意】本書面表達是一篇提綱類寫作。要求以紅星中學李華的名義用英語給報社寫一封信?！驹斀狻窟@是一篇書信類作文。寫作提要為某英文雜志正在舉辦"Whethershouldhighschoolstudentsstayuplatetostudy?"為主題的征文活動。假如你是紅星中學李華，就“中學學生該不該熬夜學習“在學校作了一次調(diào)查，結(jié)果發(fā)覺60%的同學認為應當熬夜學習，認為晚上學習寧靜，效率高，而還有40%的同學認為晚上不該熬夜學習，熬夜不利于身體，對學習沒有多大幫助。況且白天又簡單打瞌睡，得不償失?，F(xiàn)在請你給報社寫一封信，反映此現(xiàn)并發(fā)表自己的觀點。我們所要做的就是用正確的英語把給出的要點表達出來。本作文中給出的要點比較簡略，故須要自由發(fā)揮的地方較多。須要留意不要偏離文章中心。寫作時留意精確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，肯定要契合整個文章，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量運用自己熟識的單詞句式，同時也要留意運用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。假定你是大慶試驗中學高三學生會主席李華，試驗中學被選定為大慶市垃圾分類試點單位，請你依據(jù)以下要點寫一篇倡議書，倡議全體同學垃圾分類，內(nèi)容包括：1.告知學校要進行垃圾分類。2.垃圾分類的重要意義。3.提出倡議。要求：詞數(shù)：100詞左右；參考詞匯：垃圾分類wastesorting/rubbishclassification可回收的recyclableDearfellowstudents,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!Yours,LiHua【答案】Dearfellowstudents,Ourschoolhasbeenselectedasoneoftheexperimentalunitsforrubbishclassification.Differentkindsofgarbagearerequiredtobesortedoutandplacedindifferentdustbins.Papercanberecycled,whileleftoverscanbecollectedasfoodforpigsorprocessedasfertilizerforplants.Aboveall,suchharmfulthingsasplasticsandusedbatteriesshouldnotbemixedwithotherwastes.Theprogramisofgreatbenefit.Wewillbeabletosaveresourcesbymakinguseofrecyclablegarbageandharmfulthingswillnotpolluteourenvironmentafterspecialtreatment.Let’sworktogetherforabettercampus!【文章大意】這是一封倡議信。寫倡議信語言應簡潔明白，用詞精準，內(nèi)容明確。依據(jù)內(nèi)容提示可知，寫作主要分為三部分：倡議內(nèi)容、垃圾分類的意義以及提出倡議?！驹斀狻康?步：審題。確定時態(tài)和人稱。依據(jù)提示：你作為學生會主席，向大家發(fā)起倡議。時態(tài)應以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主。第2步：確定關鍵詞（組），提煉寫作要點。如：experimentalunits(試點)，sortout（分類），becollectedasfoodforpigs（回收喂豬），beprocessedasfertilizerforplants(被加工成植物肥料)，mixedwith（混在一起）等。第3步：對寫作要點遣詞造句，留意主謂一樣和時態(tài)問題。第4步：連句成文，留意運用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的連接與過渡，書寫肯定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整齊美觀的卷面是特別重要的。本文內(nèi)容完整，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當。符合英語表達習慣，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的實力。假如你是李華，你的美國摯友Jenny正在做一份關于中國移動支付（mobilepayment）的問卷調(diào)查，你是她的重點采訪對象。內(nèi)容包括：1.你或你身邊的人在日常生活中是運用移動支付的狀況；2.移動支付帶來的好處；3.你的看法DearJack,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJenny,Howisyoursurveyonmobilepaymentgoing?I’mgladIcanhelpwithit.MobilepaymentcanbereceivedalmostanywhereinChina.Forexample,whenmyfamilyeatoutinarestaurant,seeadoctor,orpayelectricityandwaterbills,we’drathermakepaymentswithourmobilephones.(ItisgenerallybelievedthatChinaisthelargestmobilepaymentmarket.NowhereelseisthecashlesstrendmoreobviousthaninChina.MostofusareusedtopayingbyscanningQRcodeswhateverwebuy—books,clothes,andelectronicdevices,tonameafew,whichisaglimpseintothelifeofmostChineselikemeandmyfamily.)Withthewidespreaduseofmobilepayment,WechatorAlipayisthemostconvenientandsafestwaytopay.Werarelyneedtocarryawalletorcashatall.Besides,neverwillweworryaboutgettingfakenotesorhavingtocountchange.Inshort,mobilepaymenthasgreatlychangedpeople’slifeinChina.Personally,Ithinkmobilepaymentshouldbeencouraged.First,ithaswonoverconsumerswithitsconvenience.Anotheradvantageisthatthereareoftendiscountsifyoumakemobilepayment.Thereasonisthatmajoronlinepaymentplatformsarecompetingtohavemoreconsumersusetheirservice.Ihopemyexplanationcanbeofsomehelptoyou.Wishyougoodluck.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua【分析】本篇書面表達屬于書信類的應用文。第一：依據(jù)提示給出寫作的目的或者是書信類的問候語其次：通過所給提示可知調(diào)查問卷總共三個問題，對三個問題分成三段進行解答。第三：書信類應用文的結(jié)尾語?！驹斀狻康谝徊剑阂罁?jù)提示可知，本篇書面表達為信件；你的美國摯友Jenny正在做一份關于中國移動支付（mobilepayment）的問卷調(diào)查，你是她的重點采訪對象?，F(xiàn)在，請給她回復調(diào)查問卷的內(nèi)容，并且希望能對她有很大幫助，書信類用一般現(xiàn)在時表達，時態(tài)恰當。其次步：依據(jù)文章所給的三句提示，分三段進行敘述，結(jié)構(gòu)分明，段落清晰。敘述“你或你身邊的人在日常生活中是運用移動支付的狀況”，舉例說明，更詳細，更直觀，更有勸服力?！耙苿又Ц兜暮锰帯边壿嬊逦治稣f明有道理，語句層次清晰。發(fā)表個人觀點層次分明，用的復合句恰到好處，提高文章檔次。第三步：首尾段都符合書信體的規(guī)范，并且恰當?shù)倪\用了問候語和結(jié)尾語，與文體相符。本篇作文寫出了全部內(nèi)容，段落清晰，用詞恰當，適當?shù)倪\用了結(jié)構(gòu)過渡詞Firstly，文章層次更清晰，運用了3-4個復合句式，文章更豐滿。假設你是晨光中學的李津。為了踐行社會主義核心價值觀，提倡文明行為，你校正在開展“創(chuàng)建文明校內(nèi)”的活動。請你用英語給全校學生寫一封倡議書。內(nèi)容包括：1.創(chuàng)建文明校內(nèi)的重要性；2.校內(nèi)內(nèi)存在的不文明現(xiàn)象；3.你的觀點。參考詞匯：文明校內(nèi)civilizedcampus社會主義核心價值觀socialistcorevalues留意：1.詞數(shù)不少于100；2.內(nèi)容充溢，行文連貫；3.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總次數(shù)。Dearfellowstudents,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiJin【答案】Dearfellowstudents,Topracticesocialistcorevaluesandstimulatecivilizedbehaviours,wearemakingourcampusacivilizedone,whichis