2024-2025學(xué)年新教材高中英語Unit6Atonewithnature表達(dá)作文巧升格學(xué)案外研版必修第一冊

PAGEUnit6Atonewithnature寫一篇概要寫作本單元的寫作項目是寫一篇概要。概要寫作是在正確理解文章的基礎(chǔ)上，在不變更原文中心思想、體裁和結(jié)構(gòu)的前提下，用簡明、精練的語句高度濃縮文章的主要內(nèi)容和觀點。[寫作步驟]1．覽全文，定體裁。閱讀整篇文章，找出作者的寫作目的；2．劃要點，省細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)。再次閱讀文章，找出并總結(jié)出每段的主旨句或關(guān)鍵詞；3．析結(jié)構(gòu)，換表達(dá)。運用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接方式，把主旨句連接成邏輯連貫的語段。[常用詞塊]1．befamousforituniqueflavor因其獨特的風(fēng)味而出名2．thenewly-builtpartdating/tracedbacktotheTangDynasty新建的部分可以追溯到唐朝3．havewitnessedgreatchangesinnaturalenvironment已經(jīng)見證了自然環(huán)境的諸多變更4．beofgreatvalueinmedicine在藥用方面有極大的價值5．speakhighly/poorlyofitseffect對其效果評價很高/很低6．a(chǎn)bigproblemwaitingforustodealwith亟待我們處理的一大問題7．findawayouttosolvethepresentconflict找到解決當(dāng)前的沖突的方法8．reducepeople'spressureinworkandstudy減輕人們工作以及學(xué)習(xí)方面的壓力9．giveusarealsenseofhappinessofenjoyingnature給我們一種真正的享受自然的華蜜感10．provideafreshexperienceofgardeningforus供應(yīng)一種全新的園藝體驗[常用語句]1．爭論文可用以下開頭語：(1)Thepassage/authorarguesthat...本文/作者主見……(2)Thepassage/authorhighlightstheimportanceof...本文/作者強(qiáng)調(diào)了……的重要性。(3)Thepassage/authordiscussestheimpactof...本文/作者探討了……的影響。(4)Thepassage/authorcompares...with...本文/作者比較了……與……2．說明文可用以下開頭語：(1)Accordingtothepassage/article，wecanknow...依據(jù)文章我們可知……(2)Thispassage/articleismainlyabout...這篇文章主要是關(guān)于……(3)Inthepassage，thewriter/authormainlytellsus...在這篇文章中作者主要告知我們……(4)Anewstudyfound...一個新的探討發(fā)覺……(5)Thepurposeofthereportistoshow...這一報告的目的是表明……閱讀下面短文，依據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。ThefamiliaryellowschoolbusisthelargestsystemofmasstransportationintheUSandeveryschooldaytransportsroughly25millionyoungpeopletoschoolandhomeagainaftertheschooldayends.Meanwhile，theyarethesafestmethodforgettingkidstoandfromschool，accordingtotheNationalHighwayTrafficSafetyAdministration(NHTSA).Childrenare70timesmorelikelytoarriveatschoolsafelyontheschoolbusthaniftheyhadtravelledtoschooldrivingthemselvesorridingwithfriends.Theseschoolbusesmeetmoreofthenation'smotorvehiclesafetystandardsthananyothervehiclesontheroad.Also，severalnewtechnologiesavailabletodayaremakingschoolbusesevensafer，suchasvideocamerasontheinsideandoutside，stoparmcameras，GPStrackingandcollisionlesseningsystems.Anothersafetytoolonschoolbusesishighseatbacks，closely-spacedseatsandenergy-absorbingseating.Buteventhesafenessofschoolbuseswouldnotcompletelysumupwhychildrenaresaferwhenridingthebig，yellowbus.Thebusisonlyassafeastheprofessionalmenandwomenwhodrivethem.AlldriversmustobtainaClassBorCCommercialDriver'sLicense(CDL).Theyarerandomlytestedforalcoholanddrugs，usuallyhavetheirdrivingrecordchecked，andaregiventhesamereviewforcriminalhistoryasteachersandotheremployeeswhohavecontactwithstudents.Inordertoserveasaschoolbusdriver，mostapplicantsarerequiredtosuccessfullycompleteatrainingcourse，alongwithinstructionintheclassroomandbehindthewheel.Schoolbusesaresafefortheenvironment，notonlybecauseeachbusreplaces36-passengercarsthatwould，butforthebuses，beontheroadtakingandpickingupschoolchildren.Additionally，schoolbusesusealternativegreenfuelslikenaturalgas，andelectricpower.ToddMonteferrario，PresidentoftheNationalSchoolTransportationAssociation，saidparentsshouldrememberthatthesafestandsmartestchoiceistoputtheirchildrenonthebigyellowbuswhentheycan.[學(xué)生習(xí)作]Thefamiliaryellowschoolbusisthelargestsystemofmasstransportationandtheyarethesafestmethodforgettingkidstoandfromschool.(要點1)Theseschoolbusesmeetmoreofthenation'smotorvehiclesafetystandardsandseveralnewtechnologiesavailabletodayaremakingschoolbusesevensafer.(要點2)Anothersafetytoolonschoolbusesishighseatbacks，closely-spacedseatsandenergy-absorbingseating.(要點3)名師點評：1．能夠找出主題句，但是存在原文照搬現(xiàn)象，未能總結(jié)歸納；2．文中的要點不夠齊全，文章未能讀透徹；3．主題句的連接過于簡潔。[升格作文]TheschoolbusisthesafestandwisestchoicetoschoolintheUSforthefollowingreasons.(要點1)Firstly，schoolbusesnotonlymeethighvehiclesafetystandardsbutalsoaretechnologicallyequipped.(要點2)Secondly，thebusdrivershavetopassstrictqualificationtestsandsafetydrivingtrainings.(要點3)Thirdly，schoolbuses，poweredbygreenfuels，areenvironmentallysafebyreducingthenumberofprivatecarshittingtheroads.(要點4)Therefore，childrenareencouragedtogotoschoolbyschoolbus.(要點5)閱讀下面短文，依據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。Environmentalproblemsarebecomingmoreandmoreseriousallovertheworld.Forexample，carshavemadetheairunhealthyforpeopletobreatheandpoisonousgasesaregivenoffbyfactories.Treesonthehillshavebeencutdownandwastewaterisbeingpouredcontinuouslyintorivers.Furthermore，whereverwegotoday，wecanfindrubbishcarelesslydisposed(處理).Therearedifferentkindsofpollutants，eachofwhichcomesfromdifferentsources.Itisnecessarytoidentifythesourceofpollution，inordertomakeapolicytogetridofthem.Differentproducts，processesandactivitiesofourindustrializedworldtogetherformthemajorsourceofpollution.Theformsofpollutioncanbemainlydividedintothreekinds—solids，liquidandgas.Thesepollutantshavegreatlydamagedourplanetandcontinuetodoso.Infact，pollutionisthreateningourexistence.Thewholeecologicalbalanceoftheearthischanging.Massivedestructionofenvironmenthasbroughtaboutnegativeeffectsandevenposedagreatthreattoman'sexistence.Wemustfacethesituationthatexistsandtakeactiontosolveourenvironmentalproblems.Forinstance，newlawsmustbepassedtoplacestrictcontroloverindustrialpollution;thepublicmustreceivetheeducationaboutthedangerofpollutionandraisetheirawarenessofprotectingtheenvironmentandsoon.Theearthisourhomeandwehavethedutytotakecareofitforourselvesandourlatergenerations.Fortunately，moreandmorepeoplehaverealizedtheseproblems.Measureshavebeentakentodealwiththesesituationsbythegovernment.Andlawshavebeenpassedtostoppollution，Ihopetheproblemswillbesolvedinthenearfutureandourhomewillbecomebetterandbetter.__________________________________________________________