六年級英語下冊Unit 8單元話題寫作“夢想”譯林版三起

Unit8單元話題寫作“幻想”第一篇【話題分析】教室里，同學(xué)們正在談?wù)撍麄兊牟煌孟?。請你以“Ourdreams'”為題，寫一篇英語短文。作文結(jié)構(gòu)呈現(xiàn)可能用到的詞匯和句子開頭：引出主題“dreams”。句子：Thestudentsaretalkingabouttheirdreams...中間：分別介紹每個(gè)人的幻想。可以補(bǔ)充擁有該幻想的緣由、為了實(shí)現(xiàn)幻想應(yīng)當(dāng)做什么。句子：wanttobe.../begoodat...policeman/writer/doctor/dentist/nursefarmer/driver/teacher/scientist/astronaut/dancer/player/pianist/artist...結(jié)尾：總結(jié)并賜予奇特的期望。句子：Wewanttoseeourdreamscometrue!Weshouldworkhardtomakeourdreamscometrue.【句型熱身】1.我的幻想是將來當(dāng)一名老師。2.為了實(shí)現(xiàn)我的幻想，我應(yīng)當(dāng)努力學(xué)習(xí)。3.我將去上音樂學(xué)校，由于我想成為一名鋼琴家。4.我寵愛繪畫，所以我將上一些繪畫課?！緟⒖挤段摹縊urdreamsThestudentsaretalkingabouttheirdreamsinclass.Joeisgoodatwriting.Hewantstobeawriter.Hewantstowritestoriesforchildren.Amywantstobeadentist.Becausemanychildrendon'tcareabouttheirteeth.Shewantstohelpthem.Lucywantstobeadancer.Becausedancingmakespeoplehealthyandbeautiful.Janelikesplayingthepiano.Shewantstobeapianist.Shethinksmusicmakespeoplehappy.Benlikessport.HewantstobeafootballplayerandplayintheWorldCuponeday.Wewanttoseeourdreamscometrue!【寫作練習(xí)】博比想成為一名科學(xué)家。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)他的愿望，他將要做些什么呢？請你寫一篇短文說一說你的觀點(diǎn)和建議?！緟⒖即鸢浮烤湫蜔嵘鞰ydreamistobeateacherinthefuture.Tomakemydreamcometrue,Ishouldstudyhard.I’llgotomusicschool,becauseIwanttobeapianist.Ilikepainting,soI’llhavesomepaintinglessons.寫作練習(xí)Bobbyisinterestedinscience.Hewantstobeascientistinthefuture.Thisishisdream.Heshouldstudyhard.Heshouldreadmorebooks.Heshouldkeephealthytoo.Thenhecanmakehisdreamcometrue.其次篇假如你是王兵，請以“Mydream”為題，告知同學(xué)們你寵愛旅游，幻想長大后能成為一名旅行家，詞數(shù)50左右。【思路點(diǎn)撥】【思路點(diǎn)撥】寫法：這一寫作訓(xùn)練要求同學(xué)們依據(jù)本單元所學(xué)的內(nèi)容介紹自己的喜好、幻想等狀況，可以先總說，然后分說，把自己的喜好、幻想及為之努力的行動(dòng)等一一表達(dá)出來，最終再用一句話進(jìn)行概括，起到，點(diǎn)題的作用。時(shí)態(tài)：這篇習(xí)作可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)及一般將來時(shí)。詞匯：liketravelling,travelaroundtheworld,healthyandhappy,cometrue句型：Ilike..Iwantto.Iwill...留意：敘事要有條理性，運(yùn)用“總一分一總”結(jié)構(gòu)，并留意一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)與一般將來時(shí)的交替運(yùn)用?！緟⒖挤段摹縈ydreamHello,I'mWangBing.Iliketravelling.Somydreamistobeatravellerinthefuture.Iwanttotravelaroundtheworld.Travellingmakespeoplehealthyandhappy.Atravellershouldbebraveandstrong.SoIwilldomoresport.Ihopemydreamwillcometruesomeday.【寫作練習(xí)】每個(gè)人都有一個(gè)幻想，你的幻想是什么呢？你將為實(shí)現(xiàn)幻想做哪些努力呢？跟大家一起共享一下吧！要求：語句通順，語法規(guī)范，書寫認(rèn)真，詞數(shù)40左右?！痉段挠^賞】MydreamistobeanartistinthefuturebecauseIlikepaintingverymuch.Ithinkartistsaregreat.Tomakemydr