六年級英語下冊Unit 8單元話題寫作“夢想”譯林版三起

Unit8單元話題寫作“幻想”第一篇【話題分析】教室里，同學們正在談論他們的不同幻想。請你以“Ourdreams'”為題，寫一篇英語短文。作文結構呈現(xiàn)可能用到的詞匯和句子開頭：引出主題“dreams”。句子：Thestudentsaretalkingabouttheirdreams...中間：分別介紹每個人的幻想。可以補充擁有該幻想的緣由、為了實現(xiàn)幻想應當做什么。句子：wanttobe.../begoodat...policeman/writer/doctor/dentist/nursefarmer/driver/teacher/scientist/astronaut/dancer/player/pianist/artist...結尾：總結并賜予奇特的期望。句子：Wewanttoseeourdreamscometrue!Weshouldworkhardtomakeourdreamscometrue.【句型熱身】1.我的幻想是將來當一名老師。2.為了實現(xiàn)我的幻想，我應當努力學習。3.我將去上音樂學校，由于我想成為一名鋼琴家。4.我寵愛繪畫，所以我將上一些繪畫課?！緟⒖挤段摹縊urdreamsThestudentsaretalkingabouttheirdreamsinclass.Joeisgoodatwriting.Hewantstobeawriter.Hewantstowritestoriesforchildren.Amywantstobeadentist.Becausemanychildrendon'tcareabouttheirteeth.Shewantstohelpthem.Lucywantstobeadancer.Becausedancingmakespeoplehealthyandbeautiful.Janelikesplayingthepiano.Shewantstobeapianist.Shethinksmusicmakespeoplehappy.Benlikessport.HewantstobeafootballplayerandplayintheWorldCuponeday.Wewanttoseeourdreamscometrue!【寫作練習】博比想成為一名科學家。為了實現(xiàn)他的愿望，他將要做些什么呢？請你寫一篇短文說一說你的觀點和建議?！緟⒖即鸢浮烤湫蜔嵘鞰ydreamistobeateacherinthefuture.Tomakemydreamcometrue,Ishouldstudyhard.I’llgotomusicschool,becauseIwanttobeapianist.Ilikepainting,soI’llhavesomepaintinglessons.寫作練習Bobbyisinterestedinscience.Hewantstobeascientistinthefuture.Thisishisdream.Heshouldstudyhard.Heshouldreadmorebooks.Heshouldkeephealthytoo.Thenhecanmakehisdreamcometrue.其次篇假如你是王兵，請以“Mydream”為題，告知同學們你寵愛旅游，幻想長大后能成為一名旅行家，詞數(shù)50左右?！舅悸伏c撥】【思路點撥】寫法：這一寫作訓練要求同學們依據本單元所學的內容介紹自己的喜好、幻想等狀況，可以先總說，然后分說，把自己的喜好、幻想及為之努力的行動等一一表達出來，最終再用一句話進行概括，起到，點題的作用。時態(tài)：這篇習作可以使用一般現(xiàn)在時及一般將來時。詞匯：liketravelling,travelaroundtheworld,healthyandhappy,cometrue句型：Ilike..Iwantto.Iwill...留意：敘事要有條理性，運用“總一分一總”結構，并留意一般現(xiàn)在時與一般將來時的交替運用?！緟⒖挤段摹縈ydreamHello,I'mWangBing.Iliketravelling.Somydreamistobeatravellerinthefuture.Iwanttotravelaroundtheworld.Travellingmakespeoplehealthyandhappy.Atravellershouldbebraveandstrong.SoIwilldomoresport.Ihopemydreamwillcometruesomeday.【寫作練習】每個人都有一個幻想，你的幻想是什么呢？你將為實現(xiàn)幻想做哪些努力呢？跟大家一起共享一下吧！要求：語句通順，語法規(guī)范，書寫認真，詞數(shù)40左右?！痉段挠^賞】MydreamistobeanartistinthefuturebecauseIlikepaintingverymuch.Ithinkartistsaregreat.Tomakemydr