高考英語經(jīng)典專練13短文改錯語法填空書面表達（教師版）

短文改錯短文改錯+語法填空+書面表達經(jīng)典專練十三一、(一、(2018屆東北三省三校高三第一次聯(lián)考)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。Afewyearsbefore,myfamilywenttoaseafoodfestivalinFlorida.Thefoodwasdelicious,theweatherwaslovely,buttheboatridewasgreat.Thelastthingwastogoonhelicopterride.Mylittlesisterwassoyoungtogobyherself,soIvolunteeredtoacpanywithherontheride.WhenIgotintothehelicopter,Iattempttoclosethedoor.Airplaneshavedoors.Sodoahelicopter.Wrong!Thepilottoldmethattherewasnodoorastheywentskywards100,000feetintotheair.Ihadneverbeenmorefrighteninginmylife.It’sagoodthingwhichtheridelastedforonly15minutes.Nomoreairridesforme,Iswear!【答案】Afewyearsbefore,myfamilywenttoaseafoodfestivalinFlorida.Thefoodwasdelicious,theweatherwaslovely,agobuttheboatridewasgreat.Thelastthingwastogoon∧helicopterride.Mylittlesisterwassoyoungtogobyherself,andasoIvolunteeredtoacpanywithherontheride.WhenIgotintothehelicopter,Iattempttoclosethedoor.Airplanestooattemptedhavedoors.Sodoahelicopter.Wrong!Thepilottoldmethattherewasnodoorastheywentskywards100,000feetintodoeswetheair.Ihadneverbeenmorefrighteninginmylife.It’sagoodthingwhichtheridelastedforonly15minutes.Nomorefrightenedthatairridesforme,Iswear!【解析】1.習(xí)慣用法：afewdaysago幾天前。故把beforeago。2.句意：食物很美味，天氣很好，乘船也很好。此處表示遞進的并列關(guān)系，故把butand。3.句意：最后一件事是乘坐直升飛機。根據(jù)句意可知在helicopter前加a。4.句意：我的小妹妹太小而不能獨自去。故把sotoo。5.句意：我自愿陪她一起去兜風(fēng)。acpany陪伴，是及物動詞，故把后面的the去掉。6.句意：當(dāng)我進入直升機的時候，我試圖關(guān)上門。根據(jù)句意可知主句用一般過去時態(tài)，故把attemptattempted。7.句意：直升飛機也是這樣。句子用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是ahelicopter，單數(shù)第三人稱，故把dodoes。8.句意：當(dāng)我們向空中飛了10萬英尺的時候，飛行員告訴我，沒有門。根據(jù)句意可知把theywe。9.句意：在我的生活中，我從未如此害怕過。此處是“感到害怕”，故把frighteningfrightened。10.句意：這段旅程只持續(xù)了15分鐘是件好事。此處it是形式主語，that引導(dǎo)的主語從句是真正的主語。故把whichthat。二二、（2018屆河南省高三三階段測評四）閱讀下面材料，在空白處填入適當(dāng)?shù)膬?nèi)容（1個單詞）或括號內(nèi)單詞的正確形式。Sincelastwinter,smog_____1_____(occur)severaltimes,whichhasdonegreatharmtous.Tosolvetheproblem,theChineseleadersinBeijinghaveattachedgreatimportance____2____protectingtheenvironment.Theyaretakingbigstepstodealwithclimatechangeandpollution,_____3_____someofChina’scitiesareactingtoo.Nanjing,thecapitalofChina’seasternJiangsuProvince,likemanymajorcitiesinChina,istryingtoimprovetheesituationby____4____(get)aVerticalForest,asetoftwogreenresidentialtowersthatwillmakethecitymore___5___(appeal)andwillprovideresidentsandvisitorswithfreshair.Thisbrilliantidea_____6_____(put)forwardbyStefanoBoeriArchitetti.______7______architectbasedinMilan,Italy.Andin2014thefirstVerticalForest____8____(build)inAsia,anditwillhostatotalof1,100treesfrom23localspeciesand2,500shrubswiththecapabilitiesofprovidingaround25tonsofCO?absorptioneachyearand____9____(possible)producing132poundsofoxygeneachday.OtherChinesemajorcities,likeChongqingandShanghai,arereportedtobeplanningtobuildupsimilargreen___10___(structure).【答案】1.hasoccurred 2.to 3.and 4.getting5.appealing6.wasput 7.an 8.built 9.possibly 10.structures【解析】

霧霾對我們造成傷害，中國政府非常重視保護環(huán)境，他們正在采取重大措施來應(yīng)對氣候變化和污染，并且中國的一些大城市也行動起來。1.根據(jù)Sincelastwinter可知句子用現(xiàn)在完成時態(tài)，主語是smog，單數(shù)第三人稱，故答案為hasoccurred。occur發(fā)生，是不及物動詞，無被動語態(tài)。2.固定搭配：attachedgreatimportanceto非常重視,其中to是介詞，后面用sth./doing做賓語。故答案為to。3.句意：他們正在采取重大措施來應(yīng)對氣候變化和污染，并且中國的一些大城市也在實施。此處是表示遞進關(guān)系的并列句，故答案為and。4.固定搭配：bydoingsth.通過做某事，故答案為getting。5.句意：一套能使城市更有吸引力的綠色住宅塔樓。make+賓語+形容詞（賓語補語），根據(jù)句意可知答案為appealing。6.句意：這個絕妙的主意是StefanoBoeriArchitetti提出的。句子用一般過去時態(tài)的被動語態(tài)，答案為wasput。7.句意：總部設(shè)在意大利米蘭的一名建筑師。architect建筑師，以元音開頭，故答案為an。8.此處是過去分詞做后置定語，答案為built。9.副詞修飾動詞，答案為possibly。10.句意：計劃建相似的綠色建筑物。根據(jù)句意可知此處用名詞復(fù)數(shù)，故答案為structures。三、（三、（2018屆安徽省六校教育研究會高三第二次聯(lián)考）網(wǎng)絡(luò)時代，許多年輕的父母沉溺于玩或電腦，而忽視了與孩子的溝通。某英文報社現(xiàn)以Howtodevelopabetterparentchildrelationship為題向你征稿。請你分析產(chǎn)生這種現(xiàn)象的原因并提出合理化建議。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.短文開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。HowtodevelopabetterparentchildrelationshipNowadaysmanyyoungparentsareaddictedtotheirelectricdeviceslikesmartphonesorputers,payinglessornoattentiontotheirkids.【答案】HowtodevelopabetterparentchildrelationshipNowadaysmanyyoungparentsareaddictedtotheirelectricdeviceslikesmartphonesorputers,payinglessornoattentiontotheirkids.Thenhowdoesiteabout?Admittedly,thesmartphoneindeeddramaticallychangesourlife.Withit,peoplecandonearlyeverythingtheywant,suchassurfingtheInternetforinformation,watchingfilmsorvideos,doingsomeonlineshoppingandplayinggamesaswell.Thus,asmartphoneservesasaplatformforthemtogetfuninafortableandconvenientway.Asaresult,moreandmoreyoungparentsarebeingattracted.However,nothingcanreplacefacetofacemunicationbetweenparentsandkids,whichrequiresparentstothinkabouttherealmeaningoflife,spendmoretimewiththechildrenan