讀后續(xù)寫+愛心破殼-我的存錢罐故事+講義- 高二上學期月考英語試題

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。Onedaymygrandfathergavemeagift—apiggybank.Ithadanopeningthroughwhichonecouldputmoneyin,buttheopeningwasnotbigenoughtoreachinandgetthemoneyout.Theonlywaytogetatthemoneywastobreakthepiggybankopen.Mygrandfatherexplainedthatwasthewholeidea;thepiggybankwouldhelpsavemymoneysothat,attheendoftheyear,ImighthaveenoughforthatbikeIdreamtabout.HeaskedifIwouldputsomeofthemoneyhegavemeintothepiggybank.IagreedimmediatelyandpromisedthatIwouldn'tbreakitopenuntilIcouldaffordmydreambike.Wheneverhegavemealittlebitofmoney,hewouldsay,"Thisisforspending.Butyoucansavesomeandputitinthepiggybankifyouwanttosaveitup."Whenhegavemelargeramounts,itwasclearlyforsavinginthepiggybank.Forsometime,thisworkedfine.Ilovedshakingthepiggybankandhearingthesoundofthecoins.Asitbecameheavier,Igrewmoreexcited,dreamingaboutbuyingmynewbike,andalltheadventuresIcouldhaveonitWheneverIwantedtotakesomemoneyfromthepiggybanktobuydeliciousice-creamsorbeautifulpens,Iwouldimagineridingmybikeonthestreet,andthinkingofthat,mythoughtsaboutice-creamsorpenswentaway.Soforalmostsixmonths,Ionlyputmoneyintothepiggybankwithouttakinganyout.IthoughtIwouldn'tbreakmypiggybankforanything.Butonedaysomethingunexpectedhappened.Isawapieceofnewsonthetelevisionthataseriousearthquakehadhappenedinanearbyprovince.Asmanyhousesweredestroyed,alotofchildrenbecamehomeless.Seeingtheirshabbyclothesandcryingfaces,Iwassleeplessthatnight.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；Paragraph1:IknewIshoulddosomething.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Mygrandfatherwassurprisedbymybehavior.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意這篇文章講述了作者的祖父送給他一個存錢罐，目的是幫助他為夢想中的自行車存錢。作者被告知只能通過打破存錢罐來取錢，這激勵他堅持存錢。盡管有時他想用里面的錢買冰淇淋或漂亮的筆，但他總是通過想象自己騎新自行車的情景來抵制誘惑。然而，當作者在電視上看到附近省份發(fā)生嚴重地震，許多孩子無家可歸的新聞后，他的想法開始改變。伏筆以及在續(xù)寫中的回應1.伏筆：祖父給作者存錢罐，并解釋其用途?；貞鹤髡邲Q定用存錢罐里的錢幫助地震中的孩子們。2.伏筆：祖父給的錢有時是用于花費，有時是用于存入存錢罐?；貞鹤髡哌x擇將大部分錢存入存錢罐，體現(xiàn)了他對存錢罐用途的理解。3.伏筆：作者喜歡搖動存錢罐，聽硬幣的聲音，夢想著買自行車?；貞捍驽X罐變重讓作者興奮，但他最終決定用這筆錢幫助更需要幫助的人。4.伏筆：作者抵制住了用存錢罐里的錢買冰淇淋或筆的誘惑。回應：作者的自制力在面對更大的需求時經(jīng)受了考驗。5.伏筆：電視上關于地震的新聞讓作者感到不安?；貞鹤髡邲Q定打破存錢罐，用里面的錢幫助地震中的受害者。續(xù)寫要點（分兩段）第一段：1.描述作者在看到電視新聞后的情感反應和內(nèi)心沖突，即他夢想中的自行車與現(xiàn)實中需要幫助的孩子們之間的抉擇。2.敘述作者如何下定決心，決定犧牲個人的愿望來幫助那些受災的孩子。3.描述作者打破存錢罐的決定以及實施這一決定的情感體驗。第二段：1.描述祖父對作者決定的反應，包括他的感受和評價。2.敘述作者和祖父一起將存錢罐里的錢捐給慈善機構的過程。3.強調(diào)作者通過這次經(jīng)歷的成長，以及他如何重新定義了存錢罐的意義和價值。主旨升華句1.Theoncecherishedsymbolofpersonalambitionhadtransformedintoavesselofaltruism,teachingmethatsometimes,themostvaluablethingswecansavearenotmaterialpossessions,butthehopesofothers.2.Inshatteringtheconfinesofmypiggybank,Idiscoveredthetruemeaningofgenerosity—it'snotjustaboutgivingwhatwecanspare,butgivingwhatweholddear.3.Thejourneyfromsavingforadreamtogivingforacausewasaprofoundlessoninempathyandthepowerofselflessactions.4.TheweightofthecoinsinmypiggybankpaledincomparisontotheweightofcompassionthatIfeltforthoseinneed,remindingmethattruewealthismeasuredinkindnessandgenerosity.5.Asthepiggybanklayinpieces,Irealizedthatthebikewasjustameanstoanend,butthejoyofhelpingotherswasanendinitself,markingthebeginningofalifelongcommitmenttomakingadifference.續(xù)寫答案IknewIshoulddosomething.IwenttomypiggybankandwasabouttobreakitandwithdrawmoneywhenmymindcamebacktothebikeIwantedtobuy,andIhesitated.Thinkingofthelookintheeyesofthechildrenhopingforhelpintheearthquake,Igrabbedthepiggybankandthrewittotheground.

Suddenly,thecoinsrolledalloverthefloor.

"Yes,thosechildrenneedhelpandneedthemoneymore."

Isaidtomyself.Mygrandfatherwassurprisedbymybehavior.Whenherealizedwhathadhappened,hefondlytouchedmyheadandsaid,"Goodboy,youdidtherightthing.Grandpaisproudofyou."Hecontinued,"Mydeargrandson,youdeservethatbicycle.

Asabonus,let'sbuythatbiketogethernow.

Then,goforaspringoutingbybike.

“Thankyou,Grandpa.”Iwasoverwhelmedwithhappiness參考范文一Paragraph1:IknewIshoulddosomething.Thenextmorning,Imadeupmymindtobreakthepiggybank.ThemoneyIhadsavedwasmeantforabike,butitcouldmeanahome,food,orhopeforthosechildrenaffectedbytheearthquake.Icarefullysmashedthepiggybank,collectingeverycoinandbillthatrepresentedmychildhooddreams.Inthatmoment,theytransformedintosomethingmuchmoresignificant—agestureofcompassionandsupport.Paragraph2:Mygrandfatherwassurprisedbymybehavior.WhenIshowedhimthebrokenpiggybankandexplainedmydecision,hesmiledwithamixofprideandsurprise.Hepraisedmymaturityandempathy,sayingthatthetruevalueofmoneywasnotinthepossessionsitcouldbuybutinthegooditcoulddo.Together,wetookthemoneytoalocalcharitythatwascollectingdonationsfortheearthquakevictims.Aswewalkedaway,Ifeltasenseoffulfillmentthatnobicyclecouldevergiveme.參考范文二Paragraph1:IknewIshoulddosomething.Theimagesofthesufferingchildrenhauntedme,andIrealizedthatmysmallsavingscouldmakeadifferenceintheirlives.Itwasatoughdecision,butIdecidedtobreakthepiggybankopen.Icarefully