01.選擇性Unit5Revealingnature觀察日記

Unit5Nurturingnature單元寫作深度指導觀察日記單元話題考題展示觀察日記【新高考模擬試題】你校英語報開設了“LearningtoObserve”欄目。請用英語寫一篇黃豆芽（soybeansprouts)生長觀察日記，并向該欄目投稿，內容包括：觀察過程你的體會注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。本單元寫作項目是描寫植物生長過程的觀察日記。觀察日記多是親身經歷和耳聞目睹的事情，所以要用第一人稱來寫;日記多是記述發(fā)生過的事情，因此常使用一般過去時,但使用時必須靈活掌握。日記應條理清楚,寫出真實感。此外,應注意日記的格式，包括日期、星期和天氣的書寫位置。觀察日記篇章結構一般采用三段式結構:第一段:表明寫作目的;第二段:為主體部分,記錄植物的成長過程;第三段:記錄作者的感受。考向分析與應對策略近幾年高考對日記的考查較少，但日記也是應用文中比較實用的一種文體。日記書寫的注意事項入局如下：(1)日期、星期一般頂格寫在正文之前?？梢韵葘懶瞧?，后寫年月日，也可以先寫年月日，后寫星期幾。(2)天氣情況應寫在日期和星期的同一行稍靠右之處。表示天氣情況常用fine,cloudy,rainy,snowy,windy,stormy,sunny等形容詞來表示。(3)正文的內容應該思想健康，積極向上。文章可長可短，開頭語應簡潔，結尾可適當發(fā)表感想。（4）日記或周記的題材廣泛，一般來說要求記錄一次意義非凡的事件，例如：宣傳節(jié)約用水活動、幫助父母做家務、現場或在電視上觀看一場比賽、畢業(yè)前夕制作畢業(yè)紀念視頻的過程、一次有意義的旅行、一次有意義的志愿者活動或助人為樂的事件等等。(5)日記和周記的寫作思路：第一部分，交代事件及發(fā)生的時間和場所；第二部分，描寫事件的經過及具體細節(jié)；第三部分，自己的感受及感想。話題詞匯

1.growthconditionsoftheplant植物的生長條件2.aholelargeenough足夠大的洞3.puttheearthbackinthehole把土放回洞里4.upto20feetinlength長達20英尺5.selectproperseeds選擇合適的種子6.alightapplicationoffertilizer輕施肥料7.species物種8.observation觀察9.process過程10.growth生長11.conditions條件，環(huán)境12.environment環(huán)境13.suitable適合的14.container容器15.sprout發(fā)芽話題句式1.Onthefirstday,Iputsomeseedsintoabasin.第一天,我把一些種子放進一個花盆。2.ThenIpouredsomewaterintothebasin,forthisplant..y然后我把一些水倒入花盆，因為這種植物……3.Iplacedthebasinunderthesun.我把花盆放在陽光下。4.Severaldayslater,theyoungplantsbeganogrowoutofthesoftsoil.幾天后,幼苗開始從松軟的土壤中長出來。5.Iputthebasinintheroomtoavoidthehotsun.我把花盆放到房間里來避開烈日。6.Theseyoungplantsbegantogrowrapidly...這些幼苗開始快速地生長……7.Nowtheyhavegrownintotallplants.現在它們已經長成了高高的植物。8.I'msurprisedat...我對……感到驚訝。III.模版框架觀察日記篇章結構一般采用三段式結構:第一段:表明寫作目的;第二段:為主體部分,記錄植物的成長過程;第三段:記錄作者的感受。假設你是李華,英語老師讓你觀察某種植物的生長過程。請根據你所拍攝的圖片寫一篇觀察日記,記述苗的生長過程,以便在英語課上跟大家分享。內容包括:1.播種方式;2.生長過程;3.生長結果。注意:1.詞數80左右;2.可以適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:蒜瓣garlicclove;嫩芽tendershoot;蒜苗garlicsprout________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫作分析】[總體布局]觀察日記主題觀察植物生長體裁應用文布局第一段播種方式第二段生長過程第三段生長結果人稱以第一、三人稱為主時態(tài)以一般現在和過去時態(tài)為主I.用本單元所學單詞或短語填空1.________________________肩并肩地,并排地2.________________________出來3._________________________n.根4.________________________n.厘米答案1.sidebyside2.getoutof3.root4.centimetreⅡI.本單元語塊、語法運用1.完成句子第一部分:播種方式(1)Icarefullydividedthegarlicbulbsintoclovesandplantedthem________________________(并排地)inaroundplasticbowl,andthepointedends________________________(朝上).第二部分:生長過程(2)Withthegarlic_________________________(生長),therootsgrow________________________(越來越 長). Theroots_________________________(看起來像)thewhitebeardofGrandpa.第三部分:生長結果(4)Thegarlicsproutsaregrowinghigherandhigherdaybyday,andthey________________________(已經長到20厘米左右了).答案(1)sidebyside;facedup(2)growing;longerandlonger(3)looklike(4)havegrowntoabout20centimetres2.句式升級(5)用with的復合結構改寫句(1)6)用定語從句合并句(2)和句(3)答案Icarefullydividedthegarlicbulbsintoclovesandplantedthemsidebysideinaroundplasticbowl,withthepointedendsfacingup.Withthegarlicgrowing,therootsgrowlongerandlonger,whichlooklikethewhitebeardofGrandpa.連句成篇January8Icarefullydividedthegarlicbulbsintoclovesandplantedthemsidebysideinaroundplasticbowl,withthepointedendsfacingup.ThenIpouredenoughwaterintothebowlandputitinasunnyplace.Everyday,Iwaterthemontime.January16Manylightgreentendershootsaregettingoutofthecloves.Withthegarlicgrowing,therootsgrowlongerandlonger,whichlooklikethewhitebeardofGrandpa.January24Thegarlicsproutsaregrowinghigherandhigherdaybyday,andtheyhavegrowntoabout20centimetres.Allofthemlookverybeautiful,andarenotlessbeautifulthandaffodils.寫作積累實戰(zhàn)演練2一、單句翻譯1.讓我告訴你如何種樹。2.以下是我對它們生長的觀察。3.給樹挖一個足夠大的坑，但坑不應該太深。4.在土壤中種植兩周后，幼苗的葉子逐漸生長成較大的傘形葉子。5.這朵粉紅色的花吸引了幾只蜜蜂，它們圍著花兒飛舞。6.觀看它們的生長過程就像欣賞花朵一樣有趣。7.通過觀察，我發(fā)現親自觀察草莓的生長過長很有趣。Letmetellyouhowtoplantatree.Hereismyobservationoftheirgrowth.Digaholelargeenoughforthetree,buttheholeshouldnotbetoodeep.Theleavesoftheseedlingsgraduallygrowintolargerumbrellashapedleavesaftertheyhavebeenplantedinthesoilfortwoweeks.Thepinkflowerattractsseveralbees,whicharedancingaroundit.Watchingtheirgrowthprocessisasinterestingasenjoyingtheflowers.Throughtheobservation,Ifinditinterestingtowatchthegrowthprocessofstrawberriesinperson.二、語篇翻譯Inordertolearnhowsoybeansgrowintosoybeansprouts,Igrewsomebymyself.Andhereismyobservation.Whenhighqualitysoybeanshavebeenkeptincleanwaterfortenhours,theybegintobeesoftandtheircolourbeeslighter.Then,whentheyareputinacontainerandkeptinaplacewherethereisnosunlightforoneday,softsmallbudsstarttoappear.Duringthefollowingthreedays,thebudsgraduallybeelongerandlonger.Onthefourthday,thebudspletelygrowintomaturesoybeansprouts.Watchingthegrowthofsoybeansproutsisapleasure·andIenjoythisprocessofobservation.書面表達假如你是李華,你想研究一下向日葵從種子到植株的生長過程,請根據下面的提示寫一篇觀察日記:1.你把向日葵種子埋進一個花盆里,澆了些水;2.幾天后,盆中長出了幼苗;你把花盆放在屋里,避免陽光暴曬;3.幼苗在茁壯地成長,幾天后就長得很高了;4.你對于它的生長很是驚訝。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OnedayIburiedsomeseedsofsunflowersintoabasin,wheretherewassomerichsoil.Afterpouringsomewaterintothebasin,Ibegantoobserveitwithgreatpatience.Severaldayslater,somegreenshootsgrewoutofthesoil,whichweresolovely.Seeingthatthesoilwasalittledry,Iaddedsomewatertoitagain.Afterseveraldays,theseyoungplantsgrewintosometallplants,whichwereverystrong.IwassurprisedatwhatIsawthatday!Howamazingitistowatchaseedbeeatallplant!【新高考模擬試題】你校英語報開設了“LearningtoObserve”欄目。請用英語寫一篇黃豆芽（soybeansprouts)生長觀察日記，并向該欄目投稿，內容包括：觀察過程你的體會注意：1.詞數100左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inordertolearnhowsoybeansgrowintosoybeansprouts,Igrewsomebymyself.Andhereismyobservation.Whenhighqualitysoybeanshavebeenkeptincleanwaterfortenhours,theybegintobeesoftandtheircolourbeeslighter.Then,whentheyareputinacontainerandkeptinaplacewherethereisnosunlightforoneday,softsmallbudsstarttoappear.Duringthefollowingthreedays,thebudsgraduallybeelongerandlonger.Onthefourthday,thebudspletelygrowintomaturesoybeansprouts.Watchingthegrowthofsoybeansproutsisapleasure·andIenjoythisprocessofobservation.下午數學考試，你成績不好，心情郁悶。晚上幾個好朋友邀你去歌廳(KTV)唱歌，你們一晚上唱得很盡興。你用日記的形式記錄下你今天的活動及感受。日記須包括以下幾個要點：(1)你因數學成績不佳，心情一直不好。(2)晚上朋友們邀請你去KTV唱歌，這是你第一次去KTV。(3)大家唱得很高興，而你一直當聽眾，你覺得你的歌唱得不好，不敢去唱。(4)在大家的鼓勵下，你終于拿起麥克風(microphone),唱了一首英文歌曲IBelieveICanFly(5)現在你心情舒暢了，更重要的是你找回了自信。(6)你在日記中對自己說了這樣一句話：“……”注意：1.詞數：100左右。開頭已寫好，不計入總詞數日記必須包括所有要點，但可以用不同的句式表達。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________