讀后續(xù)寫專題第8章如何寫出銜接順暢的文章

讀后續(xù)寫連接詞八大類.時空轉(zhuǎn)換●銜接流暢讀后續(xù)寫連接詞合集1.時間連接詞:(時空轉(zhuǎn)換/場景轉(zhuǎn)換)同時:..While/When/As/themomentsb1dosth,sb2dosth.接續(xù):Shortly/Swiftly/Soonafterwards,.../Subsequently/notlongbefore當下:Atthatvery/criticalmoment,sb.../Foroneagonizingmoment...最后:Eventually/Atlength/Ultimately2、邏輯連接詞:(銜接流暢)強調(diào):Actually/Indeed/Truly.../Obviouly.../Particularly...轉(zhuǎn)折:Instead/Nevertheless/Unfortunately/Alternatively,..結(jié)果:Consequently/Accordingly/turnout/prove/endupdoing推測:Itisverylikelytha.../Itishighlypossiblethat...perhaps/probably解析連接詞1:時間連接詞(同時/接續(xù)/當下/最后/過去)同時:(同時空人/物,分工/互動;豐富畫面/場景)①While/When/As/themomentsb/sth...sb2dosth.(當..時/那刻,某人做某事)②Meanwhile,../Inthemeantime,...(同...)◆連接思路1:主語賓語.畫面分離(動作/地點)句式:原sbdosth->改Whensth...sbdosth[例子1]:原句:“登直升機”:Wegotontothehelicopterquickly.改寫:“當直升機降落時，我們登直升機，既興奮又松了一口氣”->Oncethehelicopterlanded,wegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved.【例子2】:原句:“登直升機->我發(fā)現(xiàn)..”:Wegotontothehelicopterquickly.Ifoundthat....改寫:“登直升機->當我們在空中安全乘坐直升機時,我發(fā)現(xiàn)熊...”->Wegotontothehelicopterquickly.Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospotthatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.場景轉(zhuǎn)換:主語/賓語分鏡頭我們登直升機’->當直升機..時，我們登直升機.(登直升機)“我發(fā)現(xiàn)熊沖向食物”->當我們在空中安全乘坐直升機時，我發(fā)現(xiàn)熊沖向食物◆連接思路2:加五感，句式:原sbdosth->改Whensbsaw/thought....sbdosth[例子1]:原句:“我們登直升機”:Wegotontothehelicopterquickly.改寫:“當我們看到直升機降落時，我們馬上沖過去登機”->Aswesawthehelicopterlanding,wedashedtoitandgotonboardfast.[例子2]:原句:“登直升機->我發(fā)現(xiàn)熊..”.:Wegotontothehelicopterquickly.Ifoundthat...改寫:“登直升機->當我俯瞰營地時，我發(fā)現(xiàn)..->Wegotontothehelicopterquickly.When(Iwas)lookingdownatthecampsite,Iwasamazedtospotthatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.◆可用句式，創(chuàng)造性模仿:(片段練習(xí),中間可加其他句子)*While/When/Assbwasthinking,sbcaughtsightofsth...(在思考時,突然看到)*Whensbsawsth,sbdosth...(看到.時,某人做某事)*Sbgotdowntodoingsthwhen/as/whilesthcameintosb'seyes.(正要..時,sth映入眼簾)◆連接思路3:加情緒句式:原sbdosth->改情緒/無靈主語句子+as/themomentsbdosth[例子]:原句:“我得知壞消息”:Iheardthebadnews...改寫:“得知壞消息，我很懊悔↓..”:Remorsewashedovermethemoment/asIheardthebadnews.小結(jié)連接詞1:時間連接詞(同時/接續(xù)/當下/最后/過去)時空轉(zhuǎn)換連接思路1:主賓.分離(動作/地點):Whensth....sbdosth.連接思路2:加五感:Whensbsaw/though...,.sbdosth連接思路3:加情緒:情緒/無靈主語句子+as/themomentsbdosth◆可組合(常組“思路1+思路2”)(2021某測試)P2:Maryopenedtheenvelopandfoundaletter.P1結(jié)尾句思路:Mary發(fā)現(xiàn)/看到/拿到信封(原句:Suddenly,Maryfoundanenvelop)WhileMarywasthinking,shecaughtsightofanitemonthetable.Shewalkedtowardsitandfoundanenvelope.瑪麗在思考時，突然看到桌子上有件物品。她走過去，找到一個信封。Shegotdowntotidyingupthesofawhenanenveloplyingonitcameintohereyes.她正準備收拾沙發(fā)時，沙發(fā)上的一個信封映入了她的眼簾。連接詞1:時間連接詞(同時/接續(xù)/當下/最后/過去)同時:(同時空人/物,分工/互動;豐富畫面/場景)①While/When/As/themomentsb/t...sb2dosth.(...時/那刻，某人做某事)②Meanwhile.../Inthemeantime,...（同時...）◆寫法&句式(可創(chuàng)造性模仿):●連接思路1:主語賓語.畫面分離(動作/地點):Whensth....sbdosth●連接思路2:加五感:Whensbsaw/thought/found/heard....sbdosthWhile/When/Assbwasthinking,sbcaughtsightofsth...(在思考時,突然看到)Sbgotdowntodoingsthwhen/as/whilesthcameintosb'seyes.(...時,sth映入眼簾)●連接思路3:加情緒:情緒/無靈主語句子+as/themomentsbdosth連接詞1:時間連接詞(同時/接續(xù)/當下/最后/過去)接續(xù):(“很快/接著...”:引出下個動作/情節(jié)/畫面;使得節(jié)奏緊湊/緊張)Shortly/Swiftly/Soonafterwards,...Seconds/Minutes/Hourslater,...(前可加Afew/several)Followingthat,...(“在那之后”)Subsequently,...(“隨后”)Gradually.../Stepbystep,...(逐漸地)Afterashorttim...ometimelate.r.../Onthefollowingday,..[句式]:否定搭配:Itwasnotlongbefor..../Itdidn'ttakelongforsbtodo...(不久后..）獨立主格:Afewminutespassing(goingby;slippingaway),sb...(過了一會,某人..）獨句/比喻:Acoupleofminutespassedswiftlylikeflowingwater.(如流水般飛快地過去)連接詞1:時間連接詞(同時/接續(xù)/當下/最后/過去）當下:(在某一刻)①Atthatvery/criticalmoment,sb...(在那關(guān)鍵時刻)②Foroneagonizingmoment,..(在令人忐忑不安的瞬間)③presently/currently/forthemoment(暫時/目前)例句:Myheartracedwildly,notknowingwhattodo.Atthiscriticalmoment,Eligrabbedandthrewthegarlicbreadoverthefence.小結(jié)連接詞1:時間連接詞匯總(同時/接續(xù)/當下/最后)同時:①...While/When/As/themomentsb1dosth,sb2dosth.②Meanwhile/Inthemeantime,...Atthatvery/criticalmoment,sb....接續(xù):1Shortly/Swiftly/Soonafterwards,...2Seconds/Minutes/Hourslater,...3Followingthat,...(在那之后)4Subsequently,...(隨后)5Itwasnotlongbefore.../Itdidn'ttakelongforsbtodo...(不久...）當下：1Atthatvery/criticalmoment,sb...(在那關(guān)鍵時刻)2Foroneagonizingmoment,...(在令人忐忑不安的瞬間)3presently/currently/forthemoment(暫時/目前)最后：Eventually/Atlength(最后)/Ultimately/Atlast/Lastly/Finally其他時間連接詞總結(jié)Oneday某一天Earlyinthemorning一大早OneFridaynight某個星期五下午theotherday=afewdaysago幾天前Fromthenon/Sincethen,..從那以后Itwasthenthatsb....在那時...Foronefrozenmoment,...有一瞬間Onarrivingatschool,..一回到學(xué)校Thenext/followingday第二天Justthen正在那時Afterthat/Lateron然后Afterashortwhile一會兒以后Roughlyanhourlater.,..大約1小時后Afterseveralattempts,...經(jīng)過幾次嘗試Afterseeminglyalongtime,似乎很久后Afterwhatseemedages，過了似乎幾年連接詞1:時間連接詞(寫法模仿)思維:畫面/場景/時空轉(zhuǎn)換①2020年1月浙江卷Afewweekslater,theboyarrivedhomefromtheuniversity.Hehadbeenmissinghisparentsandthedogsinceitwasthefirsttimethathehadbeenawayfromhomeforsuchalongtime.WhentheboycaughtsightofPoppy,hewentrushingtowardthedogandbentdowntogiveherabighug.Suddenly,theboynoticedthelittledog.“Ohmygod,whoisthis?”Hisparentslaughedatthelookofsurpriseonhisface.“It'sPoppysnewcompanion.”saidMom..◆時間連接詞、創(chuàng)造性模仿:(片段練習(xí)，中間可加其他句子)Acoupleofweeks/days/hours/minuteslater,sb...(“接續(xù)”)When/While/As/Onc....sb...(“同時”)Suddenly/Allofasudden,sbnoticed/notedsth...(突然注意到/發(fā)現(xiàn)sth)②2016年g月浙江卷:(造“當...時”，)她開始擔(dān)心如何能...WhenJanecaughtsightofthedarkskyandfelttherowlingwind,shestartedtoworryabouthowshecouldgothroughthenightwithoutfoodandshelter.ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.She...andthen...,hopingto...Shewalkedandwalked,.Suddenly,shespottedahugeflatrock.Shemanagedtoclimbontoitandwaitedwithpatience.Themomentthehelicopterappearedagain,theneareritgot,themoreshewavedtheyellowblouse.Tohergreatjoy,thehelicopterdidn'tmissJanethistime.Asitlandednearthebigrockslowly,...時間連接詞、創(chuàng)造性模仿:(片段練習(xí)，中間可加其他句子)1Itwasatthatverymomentthatsbrealizedsth...2sbdidsthandthendidsth,hopingto...3Suddenly,sbspotted/noticed/notedsth/that...4Themoment/Assth..,sbdidsth①直到那一刻sb才意識到;②sb做了某事和某事，希望...③sb突然發(fā)現(xiàn);④當某事物...時,sb...連接詞2:邏輯連接詞(強調(diào)/轉(zhuǎn)折/因果/遞進/條件/推測)強調(diào):(適合:含關(guān)鍵動作/情節(jié)、結(jié)尾升華的句子)連接詞2:邏輯連接詞(強調(diào))強調(diào):(適合:含關(guān)鍵動作/情節(jié)、結(jié)尾升華的句子)Afterall,..(畢竟)(注:解釋和支持前一句話)Infact/Actually/Indeed,...(實際上)(While)Thetruthisthat.../Truly,..(然而)事實是/實際是/確實Obviously/Apparently,..(顯然地/顯而易見地/明顯地)Undoubtedly/Withoutdoubts/Withnodoubts,...(毫無疑問地)Inparticular/Particularly/(most)Notably/Especilly,..(尤其是)Aboveall,..(最重要的是;尤其是)Significantly,.(值得注意的是.../意味深長的是..)Afterall,lifeischokedwithchores,andthatiswhysettingprioritiesmatter.[2022廣州一模:畢竟,生活充滿了雜務(wù)和令人分心的事,這就是為什么設(shè)定優(yōu)先事項很重要]Infact/Actually/Indeed,whatIhadbeendoinginthepastweekwaslessurgentandcouldbepostponed.[2022廣州-模:實,過去一周我一直在做的事情并不緊急，可以推遲]Obviously/Apparently/Undoubtedly,ifIhadarrangedmyscheduleinamorereasonablemanner,Iwouldnothavebeentrappedinsuchadilemma.[2022廣州一模:顯然，如果我更合理地安排日程，就不會陷入這種困境]Particularly/Notably,thelaterIacted,themoreanxiousIfelt.[2022廣州-模:特別的是/值得注意的是，我越遲開始行動，就會越焦慮]轉(zhuǎn)折:Whereas/Instead/Nevertheless/Conversely/Alternatively,...(然而/取而代之)(And)still/yet(然而)despite/inspiteof(盡管)(But)evenso,...(即便如此,...）Unfortunately,..(然而)不幸的是...bycontrast/incontrast(to)/onthecontrary(相反)Alternatively...Instead,...(取而代之)Differingfrom...(與....不同)結(jié)果:句首:Consequently/Accordingly/Asaresult(ofsth)...(因此/作為某事的結(jié)果,..）Underthesecircumstances/Undertheseconditions,...(在這些情況下，...)句中:turnout(tobe)+形容詞/turnoutthat:“(結(jié)果)是怎樣的”(可取代be動詞)prove(tobe)+形容詞/名詞:“證明是”(有時可取代be動詞)endupdoing:“最終..”ItturnedoutthatIgainedthelowestscoreIhadeverreceived.Thebreakfastproved(tobe)asweetsurprise,judgingfrommother'sresponse.從母親的反應(yīng)來看，這早餐被證明是-個甜蜜的驚喜Distractedbytheentertainments,Iendedupcompletingtheprojectinarush.被那些娛樂分散了注意力，我最終匆忙完成了這個項目并列/遞進:Equallyimportant,