Unit10ConnectionsWritingWorkshop課件高中英語北師大版選擇性

Unit10Writingworkshop

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Toreadandtalkaboutanewsreport

TounderstandthestructureofanewsreportToidentifythewritingskillsusedinthenewsreport.TowriteanewsreportaboutaschoolorcommunityeventHowtowriteanewsreport?Whatisanewsreport?Anewsreportsisaboutsomethingthatishappeningnoworthatjustrecentlyhappened.Currentissues,events,crimes,andinvestigationsaregoodsubjectsfornewsreports.TipsonWritingaNewsReportWhenwritinganewsreport,it'simportanttoconcentrateonfourelements:facts,context,impact,andemotion.Howyoucombinethesefourelementswilldeterminethesuccessofyournewsstory.Thefactsanswerthe5WsandH:who,what,where,when,why,andhow.It’simportanttomakesurethefactsareaccurateandreasonablycomplete.Ifyouhavetowriteareportbeforeyougetallthefacts,thensaysointhereport.Contextprovidesthecircumstancessurroundingthefactsofthenewsstory.FactsContextImpactkeepsreadersintunebeyondtheheadlineandthelead,oropeningsentence.Whataretheramificationsorpotentialconsequencesofthisnewsstory?Howwillthisseriesofeventsaffectmeandmylovedones?ImpactEvokingemotionisthemagicofnewsreporting.Writersmustwalkthefinelinebetweencold,hardfactsandatugonemotionalheartstrings.Butwemustletthereadersdecideforthemselves.Forexample,theAmericanPressInstitutepointsoutwemustnotdictatetheaudience'sfeelingsbywriting,“Inashocking,newdevelopment…”Rather,weshouldletthemchoosetobeshockedontheirown.EmotionPairWork.Youaregoingtowriteanewsreportonaschoolorcommunityevent.Discusswithyourpartner.11.Whateventwouldyouliketowriteabout?2.Whataspectsareyougoingtoinclude?3.Howisanewsreportnormallyorganised?2Readthenewsreport.

StreetFestivalBuildsCommunitySpirit

On21September,

thefirstCommunity

StreetFestivalinourcitywasheldon

RedwoodStreet.

Thefestivalwashighly

successful,

attractingover10,000people

fromover20communities.

Theweather

wasgood,

althoughitrainedheavilyin

themorning.

Theperformerswererather

goodandwellreceivedbythepublic.

Peopleattendingtheeventweremainly

families.

Therewerepeopleofallages.Mostofthemcamefromsevennearby

communities.

Therewereawidevarietyof

acts,

mostofwhichweresingingand

dancing.Theactsappealingtochildren

wereparticularlypopular.

Thehighlightof

thefestivalwasthemusicanddancebya

groupofchildren.1.Whateventisthereportabout?2.Whenandwheredidtheeventhappen?3.Whoattendedtheevent?4.Whatdidtheydo?

Thefestivalwaswellorganised.

Almost

alloftheperformersstartedandfinishedtheiractsontime.Theaudienceenjoyedtheperformances.Therewerealsomanyoutletsservingfoodanddrink.Thefestivalgavegreatpleasuretoalargenumberofpeopleanditbroughttogetherthedifferentcommunitieswithinourcity.Somepeoplesaid,“weareeagertoparticipateinnextyear’sfestival.”5.Whatdidtheeventbringtothecommunity?ReadandlocateBriefintroductionabouttheevent.Peopleattendingtheeventandtheactsduringtheevent.Thebenefitsoftheeventtothepeople.Para.1Para.4Para.2&33Thenewsreporthasfourparagraphs.Labeleachparagraphwithafunction.

StreetFestivalBuildsCommunitySpirit

On21September,

thefirstCommunity

StreetFestivalinourcitywasheldon

RedwoodStreet.

Thefestivalwashighly

successful,

attractingover10,000people

fromover20communities.

Theweather

wasgood,

althoughitrainedheavilyin

themorning.

Theperformerswererather

goodandwellreceivedbythepublic.

Peopleattendingtheeventweremainly

families.

Therewerepeopleofallages.Mostofthemcamefromsevennearby

communities.

Therewereawidevarietyof

acts,

mostofwhichweresingingand

dancing.Theactsappealingtochildren

wereparticularlypopular.

Thehighlightof

thefestivalwasthemusicanddancebya

groupofchildren.

Thefestivalwaswellorganised.

Almost

alloftheperformersstartedandfinishedtheiractsontime.Theaudienceenjoyedtheperformances.Therewerealsomanyoutletsservingfoodanddrink.Thefestivalgavegreatpleasuretoalargenumberofpeopleanditbroughttogetherthedifferentcommunitieswithinourcity.Somepeoplesaid,“weareeagertoparticipateinnextyear’sfestival.”1.Lead3.Body2.Body4.Round-upUnderlinetheusefulsentencesforanewsreport.

StreetFestivalBuildsCommunitySpirit

On21September,

thefirstCommunity

StreetFestivalinourcitywasheldon

RedwoodStreet.

Thefestivalwashighly

successful,

attractingover10,000people

fromover20communities.

Theweather

wasgood,

althoughitrainedheavilyin

themorning.

Theperformerswererather

goodandwellreceivedbythepublic.

Peopleattendingtheeventweremainly

families.

Therewerepeopleofallages.

Mostofthemcamefromsevennearby

communities.

Therewereawidevarietyof

acts,

mostofwhichweresingingand

dancing.Theactsappealingtochildren

wereparticularlypopular.

Thehighlightof

thefestivalwasthemusicanddancebya

groupofchildren.

Thefestivalwaswellorganised.

Almost

alloftheperformersstartedandfinishedtheiractsontime.Theaudienceenjoyedtheperformances.Therewerealsomanyoutletsservingfoodanddrink.Thefestivalgavegreatpleasuretoalargenumberofpeopleanditbroughttogetherthedifferentcommunitieswithinourcity.Somepeoplesaid,“weareeagertoparticipateinnextyear’sfestival.”Circlealltheexpressionsthatconveythefactthattheeventwasasuccess.4

StreetFestivalBuildsCommunitySpirit

On21September,

thefirstCommunity

StreetFestivalinourcitywasheldon

RedwoodStreet.

Thefestivalwashighly

successful,

attractingover10,000people

fromover20communities.

Theweather

wasgood,

althoughitrainedheavilyin

themorning.

Theperformerswererather

goodandwellreceivedbythepublic.

Peopleattendingtheeventweremainly

families.

Therewerepeopleofallages.

Mostofthemcamefromsevennearby

communities.

Therewereawidevarietyof

acts,

mostofwhichweresingingand

dancing.Theactsappealingtochildren

wereparticularlypopular.

Thehighlightof

thefestivalwasthemusicanddancebya

groupofchildren.

Thefestivalwaswellorganised.

Almost

alloftheperformersstartedandfinishedtheiractsontime.Theaudienceenjoyedtheperformances.Therewerealsomanyoutletsservingfoodanddrink.Thefestivalgavegreatpleasuretoalargenumberofpeopleanditbroughttogetherthedifferentcommunitieswithinourcity.Somepeoplesaid,“weareeagertoparticipateinnextyear’sfestival.”Whatelsecanyoufindout?5Write2-3sentencesabouttheeventyouaregoingtoreport.UsetheSentenceBuildertohelpyou.AdverbsofDegreehighlyThefestivalwashighlysuccessful…ratherTheperformerswererathergood…mainlyPeopleattendingtheeventweremainlyfamilies.particularlyTheactsappealingtochildrenwereparticularpopular.SentenceBuilderAdverbsofdegreemakesomethingwereportstrongorweakandshowwhatwefeelaboutsomething.Nowwrite2-3sentencesabouttheeventyouaregoingtoreport.①

Eventually,allthecontestantssparednoefforttofinishtherace.②

Moreimportantly,wecometoknowitisourresponsibilitytochallengeourselvestoavarietyofhardships.

假定你是李華，上周日你校舉辦了5公里越野賽跑活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為校英文報(bào)寫一篇報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：1.參加人員；2.跑步路線：從校門口到南山腳下；3.活動(dòng)反響。

注意：寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。Writingtask6Outlining.

CompletetheoutlineofyournewsreportbasedonActivity3.Reviewthestructureofanewsreport;Copythestructureinyournotebooks;Writesomenotesonwhateachparagraphwillcontain.體裁話題時(shí)態(tài)人稱文章架構(gòu)核心要點(diǎn)記敘文；關(guān)于越野賽跑的報(bào)道一般過去時(shí)為主；第一、第三人稱首段：活動(dòng)的時(shí)間和內(nèi)容中段：活動(dòng)的過程尾段：對(duì)活動(dòng)的認(rèn)識(shí)1.上周日舉辦5公里越野賽跑活動(dòng)2.跑步路線：從校門口到南山腳下3.活動(dòng)認(rèn)識(shí)：強(qiáng)身健體、挑戰(zhàn)自己Outline7Drafting.

UseyouroutlineandtheWritingHelptowriteyourfistdraft.

WritingaNewsReportIt’simportantto:haveanattractivetitleandabrieflead;includethewho,when,where,what,whyandhowoftheevent;useformalandclearlanguage.WritingHelp8Editing.Edityourreportinpairs.Thensharewhatyouhavewritteninclass.Beforeyournewsreportwouldbepublished,you’dhavetoeditittomakesureyourfactsareclearandyoursentencesarecomplete.Exchangeyourwritingwithyourpartnerandoffersuggestionstoimprovedrafts.Afterediting,writerswillmakechangestodraftsandeitherrewriteorprintacleancopyofthework.Prepareafinaldraftofyourworktosubmit.EditingSheetDoesthereporthaveacleartitleandabrieflead?Doesthe