專題08高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題講解課件6月浙江卷

讀后續(xù)寫真題2017年6月浙江卷1試題再現(xiàn)2試題分析3寫作思路4范文賞析目錄CONTENTS2021試題再現(xiàn)歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析01Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(騎行)

alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that’sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatall,buta

wolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac’sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac’srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac’sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase(追趕).Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoslowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he’dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf’steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.Atthismoment,PaulandBeckyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn’tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.__________________________________________________________________________Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.___________________________________________________________________

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。2021試題分析歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析02 Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(騎行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.原文分析時間：7月的下午事件：Mac的同伴要修自行車，Mac一個人獨自騎車回家。 ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that'sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn'tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim. Mac'sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac'srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac'sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase（追趕）。原文分析故事的發(fā)生：騎行途中遇到了狼。情緒描寫，環(huán)境描寫以及后面的董總描寫都突出了Mac害怕以及和狼勇敢地作斗爭的情形。環(huán)境描寫 Macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoshowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he'dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf'steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh. Atthismoment,PaulandBeekyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoAlaska.Theydidn'tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.Abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.Astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.原文分析Mac繼續(xù)和狼作斗爭。故事的轉(zhuǎn)折：Mac能否成功逃脫？Q1:WhowasMaccyclingwith?Q4:WhodidMacrecallwhenhewascyclingalone?Q3:Whathappenedatthecriticalmoment?Q5:WhatdidMacdotostopthewolffromchasing?Q2:WhydidMacseparatefromhisfriends?Twoofhisfriends.Oneofhisfriends’bicyclewasbroken.Theystoppedtorepairit.Hiswifeandtwoyoungdaughters.Hefiredthebearspray.PaulandBeckydrovebyandnoticedMac.根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容，回答下列問題。閱讀完材料，試著完成下面的故事山吧！Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim…1.

OpeningMaccycledtoAlaskawithhisfriendsonawarmJulyafternoon.Maccarriedonwithhisroadtripwhilehistwofriendsstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair.Macfiredsprayatthechasingwolfbutdidn’tstopit.Atthecriticalmomentheheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived…2.

Build-up3.

Climax4.

Resolution5.

Ending?MacwascyclingfromhometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Macfoughtagainstthewolftwicebutoflittlehelp.Macheardalargevehiclebehindhimandhepulledinfrontofit.Macsensedhewaschasedbyawolf.PaulandBeckydrovebyandwitnessedMac’sdesperatesituation.?Mactriedtoescape,onlytomeetasteepuphillclimb.Macpedaledalongalone,enjoyingthebreath-takingscenery.2021寫作思路歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析03Para1:Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.

Para2：Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.

Q1:Whatmighthappenassoonasthecarstopped?DidMacrushtogetintothecar?Didhemakeiteasily?Ordidsomeonegetoutofthecar?Q3:WhatdidMacdoonseeinghisfriends(theothertwocyclists)?Whatcameinsightofhisfriendsaftertheyarrived?原文畫線單詞可用于回答上述哪個問題？其中動詞適用于哪一段情節(jié)？人物會產(chǎn)生怎樣的互動？Q2:Howdidthewolfreacttowhatjusthappened?Diditgiveupandrunaway?Q4:WhatwereMac’sfeelingsaftertheincident?Didheandhisfriendscontinuetheircyclingtrip?Whatcanbeaproperending?研讀兩段給出句，想想它們給我們提供了哪些續(xù)寫線索？Paragraph1：

Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim._______________________________________________________________________Paragraph2：

Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived._______________________________________________________________________原文分析本段應(yīng)該是Mac跳上車逃脫狼的追捕的過程。表明上一段落狼可能沒有離開，這一段應(yīng)該續(xù)寫兩個男孩加入一起對抗狼。Paragraph1Paragraph1：

Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbicycle.Hewenttothecar.Thewolfcaughtup.Macusedsprayandrantothecarandclimbedin.Paragraph2Paragraph2：

Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Theywereshocked.Theythrowmeattothewolf.Thewolfranintothewoods.Theyeventuallygetridofthewolf.句子潤色1.麥克跳下自行車，沖向車門。Macjumpedoffhisbicycleandrushedtothedoorofthecar.rushedtothedoorofthecar句子潤色2.但麥克還沒來得及開門，狼就追上了，撲了上去。ButbeforeMaccouldopenthedoor,thewolfhadcaughtupandjumpedtoattack.Catchupjumpedtoattack句子潤色3.幸運的是，魔法噴霧第三次救了麥克。Luckily,themagicspraysavedMacathirdtime.句子潤色4.看到狼退后，保羅迅速打開車門，受驚的人很快爬上車，重重地關(guān)上身后的車門。Seeingthewolfbackoff,Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmanclimbedintothecarinnotime,shuttingthedoorbehindhimheavily.unlockedthedoorclimbedintothecarinnotime句子潤色5.貝西從后窗往外看，看見狼站在麥克的自行車上，好像那是一場殺戮。BechylookedoutofthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbicycleasifitwereakill.lookedoutofthebackwindowasifitwereakill句子潤色6.不久，那只動物跑了。Soonafter,theanimalranoff.Soonafter句子潤色7.他們對所見的感到震驚，于是加入保羅的行列。TheywereshockedatwhattheysawandjoinedPaul.Beshockedat句子潤色8.麥家的一個朋友挑出一些生肉扔給了狼。OneofMacsfriendspickedoutsomerawmeatandthrewittothewolf.Pick

out句子潤色9.狼對得到的東西很滿意，就跑進了樹林。Thewolfwassatisfiedwithwhathegot,andheranintothewoods.Satisfiedwithwhathegot,thewolfranintothewoods.句式升級句子潤色10.麥克感謝保羅和貝基，“你停下來救我，我真是太感謝你了，我還活著，這都歸功于你?！盡acthankedPaulandBecky,“HowgratefulIamthatyoustoppedtosavemeandIoweittoyouthatI’mstillalive.”O(jiān)wnto句子潤色11.由于麥克受傷，這三個人不得不放棄剩下的旅程回家。BecauseMacwasinjured,thethreemenhadtogiveuptherestoftheirjourneyandreturnedhome.AsMacgotinjured,thethreemenhadtogiveuptherestoftheirjourneyandreturnedhome.therestoftheirjourney詞匯升級2017范文賞析歷年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫真題分析04Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Mac

（跳下）hisbikeand

（沖向）thebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.He

（繞到）tothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,too,sohebeganto

（爬進）theopenwindow.Paulquickly

（鎖上）thedoor,andthefrightenedman

（跳進去）,

（狠狠關(guān)上）thedoorbehindhim.BeckylookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimal

（跑掉）.

Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Mac

（下車）thecarand

（擁抱）hisfriends.“Awolfchasedme.IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Mactoldthem.“IthoughtIwouldneverseemywifeandmylovelydaughtersagain.”After

（告別）toPaulandBecky,Mac

（撿起）hisbicycle,andthethreemen

（繼續(xù)）theirroadtrip,agreeingtokeepinoneanother’ssightline.Afewmiles’

（踩踏板）downtheroad,Mac

（靠邊停車）andcried.“Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtoletthatemotionout.”根據(jù)漢語提示補充范文中的動詞或短語動詞，使情節(jié)連貫，銜接合理。Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.

Macjumpedoffhisbikeanddashedforthebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.Heranaroundtothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,too,sohebegantoclimbthroughtheopenwindow.Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmandivedin,slammingthedoorbehindhim.BeckylookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimalranoff.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.

Macemergedfromthecarandhuggedhisfriends.“Awolfchasedme.IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Mactoldthem.“IthoughtIwouldneverseemywifeandmylovelydaughtersagain.”AftersayinggoodbyetoPaulandBecky,Macretrievedhisbicycle,andthethreemenresumedtheirroadtrip,agreeingtokeepinoneanother’ssightline.Afewmiles’pedalingdowntheroad,Macpulledoverandcried.“Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtoletthatemotionout.”找出回答“首句精研”中問題的句子，注意題目中畫線單詞出現(xiàn)的語境。范文賞析——生動的語言

Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbikeanddashedforthebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.Heranaroundtothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,too,sohebegantoclimbthroughtheopenwindow.Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmandivedin,slammingthedoorbehindhim.BeckylookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimalranoff.

Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macemergedfromthecarandhuggedhisfriends.“Awolfchasedme.IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Mactoldthem.“IthoughtIwouldneverseemywifeandmylovelydaughtersagain.”AftersayinggoodbyetoPaulandBecky,Macretrievedhisbicycle,andthethreemenresumedtheirroadtrip,agreeingtokeepinoneanother’ssightline.Afewmiles’pedalingdowntheroad,Macpulledoverandcried.“Therestofthetripwasamazing,butIhadtoletthatemotionout.”與前文內(nèi)容呼應(yīng)范文賞析——生動的語言Thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.Macjumpedoffhisbikeanddashedforthebackdoorofthecar.Itwaslocked.Heranaroundtothepassengerdoor,butitwaslocked,too,sohebegantoclimbthroughtheopenwindow.Paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmandivedin,slammingthedoorbehindhim.BeckylookedoutthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingoverMac’sbikeasifitwereakill.Shortlyafter,theanimalranoff.Afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.Macemergedfromthecarandhuggedhisfriends.“Awolfchasedme.IthoughtIwasgoingtodie,”Mactoldthem.“IthoughtIwouldneverseemywifeandmylovelydaughtersagain.”AftersayinggoodbyetoPaulandBecky,M