高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作表達(dá)微技能（全國）07祝賀信

07祝賀信(2008年，全國卷I）假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓（panda）,一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動(dòng)物園工作人員寫一封信：自我介紹；祝賀蘇琳生日；感謝工作人員；索取蘇琳三歲生日照。注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右；2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3、開頭語已為你寫好。DearSir/Madam,GreetingsfromChina!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHua【參考范文】DearSir/Madam,GreetingsfromChian!I’mLiHua,astudentinSichuan.I’vebeenapandaloversinceIwasachild.AboutthreeyearsagoIwasdelightedtolearnthatBaiyungavebirthtoherdaughterSulinandI’vebeenwatchinghergrowonyourwebsite.Nowshe’sgoingtobethere.I’dliketowishherahappybirthdayandtoexpressmythankstoyouforyourhardwork,becauseofwhichSulinandherparentsarelivingahappyandhealthylifeintheUS.Bytheway,couldIhaveaphotoofSulintakenonherthirdbirthday?Thankyouverymuchinadvance.Yourstruly,LiHua【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.自我介紹；2.信息來源；3.祝賀生日；4.感謝照顧；5.索取照片；6.合適的結(jié)尾。這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語均表達(dá)到位。文章行文要活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準(zhǔn)確，注意結(jié)合簡單句和復(fù)合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡。亮點(diǎn)詞匯：.delightedadj.欣喜的，快樂的2.expressv.表達(dá)3.givebirthtov.產(chǎn)生，生育亮點(diǎn)句式：I’dliketowishherahaybirthdayandtoexpressmythankstoyouforyourhardwork,becauseofwhichSulinandherparentsarelivingahayandhealthylifeintheUS.我祝福它生日快樂并且對(duì)你們的辛勤工作表達(dá)我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國過著幸福和健康的生活。評(píng)析：定語從句的使用。開頭常用句式Itwasexcitingnewsformetolearnof…Pleaseacceptmysincere/hearty/warmcongratulationson…Itwasagreatpleasuretosendyoumycongratulationson…Iwasdelightedtolearnofyoursuccess/achievementsin…Iamreallyhappytolearnthatyouhavebeenelected…結(jié)尾常用句式Wishyougoodluck!Wewishtoshareyourhonorandjoy.Iwishyousuccessandfulfillmentintheyearsahead.Mayallgowonderfullyinyournewpost!Mayeveryhappinessbeyours!Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture/successfulcareer!Mayeachsucceedingyearbringyougreathappinessandprosperity.Everygoodwishtoyouformuchhealth,happiness,andprosperity!模板①Dear______,Ihavelearnedwithdelightthatyou______（祝賀事由）.Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson______.Youmustbe______.AndIfeelveryhappyforyou.______（所取得的成績）isquiteexcitingnews!Iknowthisissurelyowingto______（被祝賀人過去的努力）.Itisarewardyourichlydeserveforyour______（被祝賀人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)）.Kindlyletmeknowwhenyou______（咨詢對(duì)方何時(shí)有空）.Ihope______（表達(dá)自己的愿望）.Mybestwishesforyourfurthersuccess.Yourssincerely,LiHua模板②Dear_____________,Goodnewstravelsfast!Itwasdelightfulformetohearthat______________.Pleaseacceptmysincerecongratulationstoyour___________.Ihavebeenwatchingyourprogresswithadmirationalltheyears,andIknowmorethananyoneelsehowmucheffortyouhaveputin.Nowyouprovetomeamaturedandwell-rounded________ineveryrespect.Judgingfromyourcurrentsuccess/achievement,Iamconfidentthatinthefuture___________.Mayalltheyearsaheadfulfillyourdreams!Yourssincerely,LiHua模板③Dear_____________,Congratulationsonyour_______.IknowhowhardyouhavebeenworkingandIamveryproudofyouforyourachievement.Iunderstandforsurethatitisyourhardwork/yourexcellentabilitythatleadsyoutothecurrentsuccess.Thisnewposition,ontheotherhand,addsanewdimensiontoyourlifeandisboundto________.What’smore,Ialsobelievethat.Mayallgoesbeautifullyinyournewpost!Yourssincerely,LiHua日常生活中，無論是親朋好友畢業(yè)、晉升、獲獎(jiǎng)、開業(yè)，還是訂婚、結(jié)婚、生日，都需要寫上一封信向?qū)Ψ奖硎咀ＹR。信中應(yīng)表示為對(duì)方而高興。祝賀信應(yīng)當(dāng)充滿真誠和熱情，收信人讀后會(huì)感到喜悅和振奮。祝賀信既可以正式寫，也可以隨便寫，具體視場合而定。對(duì)不太熟悉的朋友適合正式寫，以表示禮貌和尊重；對(duì)熟悉的朋友則可以隨便一些。但無論采用哪種方式，祝祝賀信是社交中的一種禮儀性信函。祝賀信通常包括以下幾個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容：說明祝賀事由，表達(dá)熱烈、誠摯的祝賀；圍繞祝賀事件表述賀喜內(nèi)容；表達(dá)美好祝福。祝賀信寫作分三步走:說明事由并表達(dá)自己衷心的祝賀->展開評(píng)論事件、贊揚(yáng)收信人->再次表達(dá)良好祝愿。在寫作主要內(nèi)容的時(shí)候，可以重點(diǎn)贊揚(yáng)一下當(dāng)事人的優(yōu)秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他將來的美好發(fā)展前景等。賀信必須表達(dá)由衷的感情，而且寫信要及時(shí)。Dear_______,(1)Ihavelearnedwithdelightthatyou______.(2)Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson____.(3)Youmustbeveryproudofyour______.(4)AndIfeelveryhappyforyou.(5)_____isquiteexcitingnews!(6)Youarereally__.(7)Iknowthisissurelyowingto___.(8)Itisarewardyoudeserveforyour__.(9)Withyour_____,Iamsurethatyouwillbeasuccessinwhateveryouundertake.(10)Kindlyletmeknowwhenyou____.(11)Ihope.(12)Mybestwishesforyourfurthersuccess.SincerelyYours,LiHua(1)獲悉值得祝賀的消息，說出祝賀事由(2)表達(dá)祝賀(3)描述對(duì)方的心情(4)表達(dá)自己的心情(5)被祝賀人所取得的成績(6)對(duì)對(duì)方的贊美(7)對(duì)方取得成績的原因(8)對(duì)對(duì)方取得成績的肯定，說出被祝賀人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)(9)被祝賀人的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)，表達(dá)對(duì)對(duì)方的祝福(10)咨詢對(duì)方的情況和時(shí)間(11)表達(dá)愿望(12)表達(dá)自己真誠的祝福1．假定你是李華，你的外國朋友Mary來信告訴你，她已經(jīng)被她的理想大學(xué)錄取。請(qǐng)你給她寫一封回信表示祝賀，并就自己在學(xué)習(xí)生活中的困惑向她尋求幫助。內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.尋求幫助。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearMary,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua2．假定你是學(xué)校音樂俱樂部的負(fù)責(zé)人李華，上周俱樂部舉行了一場留學(xué)生（internationalstudents）樂器比賽，請(qǐng)為本周三的頒獎(jiǎng)儀式寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿。內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.回顧比賽；3.你的期望。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．假定你是高三學(xué)生李華，最近收到了你的英國朋友Peter的來信，得知他從劍橋大學(xué)（theUniversityofCambridge）順利畢業(yè)。請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.向Peter表示祝賀；2.談?wù)勀阍诖髮W(xué)專業(yè)選擇上的困惑；3.向?qū)Ψ秸髑笠庖娀蚪ㄗh。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua4．假定你是李華，你從網(wǎng)上得知你的英國好友Allen在家鄉(xiāng)舉辦的歌唱比賽中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信，對(duì)他表示祝賀。內(nèi)容包括：1.祝賀獲獎(jiǎng)2.肯定其付出的努力3.祝愿其取得更大的成功。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearAllen,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua5．假定你是李華，得知你的英國朋友John剛被北京大學(xué)中文系錄取。請(qǐng)你寫封郵件表示祝賀，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.詢問有效學(xué)習(xí)外語的方法。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJohn,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua6．假定你是李華，你校舉辦了一場有關(guān)建黨102周年的英語演講比賽，你的朋友Amy獲得了第一名，請(qǐng)你給她寫一封祝賀信。內(nèi)容包括：1.表達(dá)祝賀；2.肯定她的演講；3.希望她能夠分享提高英語口語的方法。參考詞匯：建黨102周年the102ndanniversaryceremonyoftheCommunistPartyofChina注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearAmy,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua7．假如你是晨光中學(xué)的李華，你在英國游學(xué)期間曾寄宿在英國學(xué)生Chris家，他母親Nancy通過電子郵件祝賀你順利完成高中學(xué)業(yè)，并詢問你將如何安排高中最后一個(gè)假期。請(qǐng)你用英語回復(fù)，內(nèi)容包括：1．表示感謝并問候;2．計(jì)劃與家人一起做的事情;3．你決定選擇哪個(gè)專業(yè)，為學(xué)好該專業(yè)做何準(zhǔn)備。注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于80;2．可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假定你是高中生李華。為了慶祝國慶七十二周年、你市舉辦了“中華之美”中文演講比賽，你校交換生Ryan在本次大賽中獲得了第一名。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.評(píng)論與贊賞；3.表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．假定你是李華，你的好友Mary在我校最近舉辦的英語單詞大賽(EnglishVocabularyCompetition)中獲得了第一名的好成績，給了你重要的人生啟迪。請(qǐng)寫信向她表示祝賀。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMary,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua10．假如你是李華，你的外國朋友Peter不僅學(xué)業(yè)成績優(yōu)秀，而且擔(dān)任國際部學(xué)生會(huì)主席一職。本學(xué)期他榮獲“校園卓越獎(jiǎng)”(SchoolExcellenceAward)。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件，向他表示祝賀。要點(diǎn)如下：1.表示祝賀；2.贊揚(yáng)對(duì)方的優(yōu)秀表現(xiàn)（學(xué)業(yè)、履職等）。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．假定你是李華，你的美國朋友Peter最近在某電視臺(tái)舉辦的漢語演講比賽中獲得第一名，請(qǐng)你寫一封英文郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1、向他表示祝賀；2、你認(rèn)為他獲獎(jiǎng)原因；3、請(qǐng)教參賽經(jīng)驗(yàn)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearPeter,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua12．假定你是李華，你的留學(xué)生好友Peter在你市舉辦的“中國傳統(tǒng)文化知識(shí)競賽(ChineseTraditionalCultureContest)”中獲得外國選手組一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封信,內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.回顧他的付出和努力；3.期待他為弘揚(yáng)中國文化做出貢獻(xiàn)。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearPeter,_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua13．假定你是李華。你的英國留學(xué)生朋友Mike寫信告訴你，他被邀請(qǐng)參加由CCTV舉辦的中國詩詞大會(huì)比賽，希望你就賽前準(zhǔn)備給他提供一些建議。請(qǐng)你給他寫一封回信，內(nèi)容包括：1、祝賀他受到邀請(qǐng)；2、提出賽前準(zhǔn)備建議；3、愿意提供幫助并表達(dá)祝愿。注意：1、100詞左右；2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearMike,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua14．假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，你的英國好友Jim來信說他收到理想大學(xué)的面試通知，他有些緊張。請(qǐng)你給他回復(fù)一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.

表示祝賀并給予安慰；2.

提供建議并說明理由。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________15．假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)的高三學(xué)生李津。高中畢業(yè)在即，你的英國朋友Jenny通過電子郵件和你分享了她的高中生活感受。現(xiàn)在請(qǐng)你給她回信，介紹以下內(nèi)容：(1)祝賀Jenny順利畢業(yè)；(2)分享自己高中三年最大的收獲，以及最想感謝的人和原因；(3)簡單談?wù)勛约簩淼睦硐?。注意?1)詞數(shù)不少于100；(2)可適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫；(3)開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearJenny,I’msogladtohearfromyou._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiJin參考答案1．DearMary,Knowingthatyouhavebeenadmittedtoyourdreamuniversity,I’msohappythatIcan’twaittoofferyoumyheartfeltcongratulations.Meanwhile,Iwouldliketoaskyouforhelp.First,Ihavetroublegettingalongwithmyclassmates.Forexample,whentheyarechatting,Iwanttojointhembutfinditdifficulttotrulyunderstandtheirjokes.Moreover,Ifindmyschoollifehereisnotaseasyasthatinmyoldschool.WehavealotofhomeworkandmostofthemareinEnglish,soIhavetolookupnewwordsindictionaryallthetime.Ifeelupsetaboutmylifehere.Canyouhelpmeout?Congratulationsagainandbestwishesforyourbrightfuture.Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文寫作中的信件。要求考生給外國朋友Mary回信，祝賀她考上了理想大學(xué)同時(shí)就自己在學(xué)習(xí)中遇到的問題向其求助。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累高興的：happy→delighted/joyful與此同時(shí)：meanwhile→atthesametime做某事有困難：havetroubledoing→havedifficultydoing沮喪：upset→depressed/blue2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：First,Ihavetroublegettingalongwithmyclassmates.拓展句：WhatcomesfirstisthatIhavetroublegettingalongwithmyclassmates.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Knowingthatyouhavebeenadmittedtoyourdreamuniversity,I’msohappythatIcan’twaittoofferyoumyheartfeltcongratulations.（運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和tha引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句）【高分句型2】Forexample,whentheyarechatting,Iwanttojointhembutfinditdifficulttotrulyunderstandtheirjokes.（運(yùn)用了when引導(dǎo)的狀語從句和it做形式賓語）2．Dearfriends,

I’mLiHua.I’mhonoredtobeheretoextendawarmwelcometoyouonbehalfofourMusioClub.

Firstofall,let’scongratulatetheinternationalstudentinstrumentcompetitiononitssuccessfulconclusionandwarmlycongratulatetheaward-winningcontestants.Duringtheoneweekcompetition,internationalstudentsactivelysigneduptoparticipateanddemonstratedahighlevelofmusicproficiency.Inaddition,notonlydidtheparticipatingstudentsbroadentheirhorizonsbutalsotheymademanylike-mindedfriends.

Ihopethatinthefuture,theschoolcanholdmoresuchactivitiestoenrichourcampuslife.Wishyouanunforgettabletimehere!Thankyou.

Yours

LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生為本周三的留學(xué)生樂器比賽頒獎(jiǎng)儀式寫一篇英文發(fā)言稿。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累榮幸的：honored→privileged表示：extend→express難忘的：unforgettable→memorable另外：inaddition→what’smore2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Firstofall,let’scongratulatetheinternationalstudentinstrumentcompetitiononitssuccessfulconclusionandwarmlycongratulatetheaward-winningcontestants.拓展句：Firstofall,let’scongratulatetheinternationalstudentinstrumentcompetitiononitssuccessfulconclusionandwarmlycongratulatethecontestantswhohaswonawards.【典型句式】[高分句型1]Inaddition,notonlydidtheparticipatingstudentsbroadentheirhorizonsbutalsotheymademanylike-mindedfriends.(運(yùn)用了部分倒裝句)[高分句型2]Ihopethatinthefuture,theschoolcanholdmoresuchactivitiestoenrichourcampuslife.(運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句)3．DearPeter,Howiseverythinggoing?I’mgladtoreceiveyourletterandknowyou’vegraduatedfromtheUniversityofCambridge.I’mwritingtooffermywarmestcongratulations.Iamnowintheprocessofuniversityapplication,strugglingwithwhichmajortochoose.I’masciencestudentnow,soIamsupposedtochooseamajorrelatedtoscienceandengineering.ButtheproblemiswhetherIshouldpursuemyinterestorjustensuremeagoodfuturejob.Doyouhaveanysuggestionsonthechoiceofamajor?Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.YourssincerelyLiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本文是應(yīng)用文。要求考生給英國朋友Peter寫一封，對(duì)他從劍橋大學(xué)順利畢業(yè)表示祝賀，并詢問關(guān)于大學(xué)專業(yè)選擇上的建議?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累高興的：glad→happy收到你的來信：receiveyourletter→hearfromyou在做某事上有困難：strugglewith→havetroubleindoingsth.和…有關(guān)：relatedto→relevantto2.句式拓展并列句變復(fù)合句原句：I’masciencestudentnow,soIamsupposedtochooseamajorrelatedtoscienceandengineering.拓展句：I’masciencestudentnow,soIamsupposedtochooseamajorthatisrelatedtoscienceandengineering.【典型句式】【高分句型1】I’mgladtoreceiveyourletterandknowyou’vegraduatedfromtheUniversityofCambridge.（由省略連詞that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）【高分句型2】ButtheproblemiswhetherIshouldpursuemyinterestorjustensuremeagoodfuturejob.（由whether引導(dǎo)的表語從句）4．DearAllen,I’velearnedfromtheInternetwithdelightthatyouwonthefirstprizeinthesingingcompetitionheldinyourhometown.I’mwritingtoexpressmywarmestcongratulations.AsfarasIknow,youhavethetalentformusic.Inyoursparetimeyoupracticedalotandalwayslearnedfromothersmodestly.Inmyopinion,itwastheeffortsthatyoumadethatledtoyourachievement.Soitisarewardthatyoudeserveforyourperseveranceandindustry.Pleaseacceptmyheartycongratulationsagainandwishyoufurthersuccessinthefuther.Yoursincerely,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。由于英國好友Allen在家鄉(xiāng)舉辦的歌唱比賽中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)，因此要求考生給英國朋友Allen寫一封祝賀信。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累比賽：competition→match我認(rèn)為：inmyopinion→asfarasIamconcerned成就：achievement→accomplishment真摯的：hearty→sincere2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：I’mwritingtoexpressmywarmestcongratulations.拓展句：I’mwritingtoexpressmywarmestcongratulationsonwhatyouhavegained.【典型句式】【高分句型1】I’velearnedfromtheInternetwithdelightthatyouwonthefirstprizeinthesingingcompetitionheldinyourhometown.（運(yùn)用了that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）【高分句型2】Soitisarewardthatyoudeserveforyourperseveranceandindustry.（運(yùn)用了強(qiáng)調(diào)句的結(jié)構(gòu)）5．Onepossibleversion:DearJohn,IamwritingtoconveymyheartfeltcongratulationsonyouradmissiontoPekingUniversity.KnowingthatyouhavebeenstudyingChineseforyears,weconsideritarewardyoureallydeserve.Thisisanewstartandagoodchanceforyoutolearnfromthegreatminds.Besides,witnessingyourterrificachievement,IwouldliketoaskyouforyouradviceonhowtostudyEnglisheffectively.Wouldyoubesokindastoshareitwithme?Congratulateyouagainonyoursuccess.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。題目要求考生給被北京大學(xué)中文系錄取的英國朋友John寫祝賀的郵件，需表示祝賀，并詢問有效學(xué)習(xí)外語的方法。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累表達(dá)：convey→express,voice誠摯的：heartfelt→sincere,genuine機(jī)會(huì)：chance→opportunity此外：besides→inaddition,additionally,moreover了不起的：terrific→wonderful,marvelous,superb有效地：effectively→effectually,efficaciously2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Thisisanewstartandagoodchanceforyoutolearnfromthegreatminds.拓展句：Thisisanewstart,whichisagoodchanceforyoutolearnfromthegreatminds.【典型句式】[高分句型1]KnowingthatyouhavebeenstudyingChineseforyears,weconsideritarewardyoureallydeserve.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語Knowing…作狀語、連接詞that引導(dǎo)賓語從句、關(guān)系代詞that/which引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句修飾先行詞reward并被省略)[高分句型2]Besides,witnessingyourterrificachievement,IwouldliketoaskyouforyouradviceonhowtostudyEnglisheffectively.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞短語witnessing…作狀語)6．DearAmy,I’mLiHua.I’mwritingthislettertoexpressmycongratulationstoyouforwinningthefirstprizeintheEnglishContestofthe102ndanniversaryceremonyoftheCommunistPartyofChina.Yourperformancewasperfect,especiallyyourexcellentspokenEnglish,whichhasleftadeepimpressiononalltheteachersandstudentspresent.Besides,whatsurprisedusmostwasthatyouweresoconfidentandbraveonthestagewhenfacingplentyofaudience.Tobehonest,youareaheroinmyheart,andIwouldliketotakethischancetolearnfromyou.IwouldappreciateitifyoucouldsharewithmesomemethodsofimprovingoralEnglish.Allinall,nowordscanexpressmycongratulations.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文。假定你是李華，你校舉辦了一場有關(guān)建黨102周年的英語演講比賽，你的朋友Amy獲得了第一名，請(qǐng)你給她寫一封祝賀信。【寫作分析】1.詞匯積累表達(dá)：express→convey說實(shí)話：Tobehonest→Honestly此外：besides→inaddition勇敢的：brave→courageous2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Tobehonest,youareaheroinmyheart,andIwouldliketotakethischancetolearnfromyou.拓展句：Tobehonest,youareaheroinmyheart,whomIwouldliketotakethischancetolearnfrom.【典型句式】[高分句型1]I’mwritingthislettertoexpressmycongratulationstoyouforwinningthefirstprizeintheEnglishContestofthe102ndanniversaryceremonyoftheCommunistPartyofChina.(運(yùn)用了動(dòng)名詞作賓語)[高分句型2]Besides,whatsurprisedusmostwasthatyouweresoconfidentandbraveonthestagewhenfacingplentyofaudience.(運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)主語從句)7．DearNancy,IamverygladtoreceiveyourE-mail.IamverygratefultoyouandyourfamilyfortakingcareofmeduringmystudytourintheUK.Andwishyouallthebest.NowthatIhavefinishedmyhighschoolstudies,myparentsandIaregoingtotraveltoBeijing.I’mgoingtoTian’anmentoseetheflagraisingandclimbtheGreatWall.Inaddition,IwanttogotoOinghuaGardentoenjoytheelegantdemeanoroffamousuniversities.Ihavedecidedtoregisterforthecomputermajor.WiththerapiddevelopmentoftheInternetindustry,thehigh-payingemploymentinITindustryattractsmoreandmorepeopletojointheInternettide.Beforechoosing,Iplantoconsultpeopleengagedinthismajororgototraininginstitutionsforconsultation.Onlywithaclearlearninggoal,canIstudyinatargetedway,whichwillbemoreefficient.Yours,【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封郵件，感謝游學(xué)期間你的住宿家庭Chris的媽媽，回復(fù)她祝賀你順利高中畢業(yè)的郵件，并告知她你將如何安排高中最后一個(gè)假期。內(nèi)容包括：1．表示感謝并問候；2．計(jì)劃與家人一起做的事情；3．你決定選擇哪個(gè)專業(yè)，為學(xué)好該專業(yè)做何準(zhǔn)備?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累感恩的：grateful→thankful除此以外：inaddition→what’smore加入，參加：join→involveoneselfin游北京：traveltoBeijing→payavisittoBeijing2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：Beforechoosing,Iplantoconsultpeopleengagedinthismajororgototraininginstitutionsforconsultation.拓展句：BeforeIchoose,Iplantoconsultpeopleengagedinthismajororgototraininginstitutionsforconsultation.【典型句式】【高分句型1】NowthatIhavefinishedmyhighschoolstudies,myparentsandIaregoingtotraveltoBeijing.（運(yùn)用了nowthat引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句）【高分句型2】Onlywithaclearlearninggoal,canIstudyinatargetedway,whichwillbemoreefficient.（運(yùn)用了only+狀語置于句首，部分倒裝句型，運(yùn)用了which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句）8．DearRyan,Howiseverythinggoing?I’mwritingtoexpressmycongratulationstoyouforwinningthefirstprizeintheChinesespeechcontestofthe72ndanniversaryofNationalDay.Yourperformanceisperfect,especiallyyourexcellentspokenChinese,whichgivesalltheteachersandstudentsadeepimpression.Besides,whatsurprisesusmostisthatyouareconfidentandbraveonthestagewhenfacingplentyofaudience.Tobehonest,youareasuperstarinmyheart,andIwouldliketotakethischancetolearnfromyou.Lookingforwardtoyourearliestreply.Bestwishes!Yourstruly,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生給交換生Ryan寫一封郵件，祝賀其在國慶七十二周年“中華之美”中文演講比賽中獲得了第一名，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示祝賀；2.評(píng)論與贊賞；3.表達(dá)祝愿?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累表達(dá)：express→convey勇敢的：brave→courageous說實(shí)話：tobehonest→honestlyspeaking機(jī)會(huì)：chance→opportunity2.句式拓展同義句轉(zhuǎn)換原句：Besides,whatsurprisesusmostisthatyouareconfidentandbraveonthestagewhenfacingplentyofaudience.拓展句：Besides,itsurprisesusmostthatyouareconfidentandbraveonthestagewhenfacingplentyofaudience.【典型句式】[高分句型1]Yourperformanceisperfect,especiallyyourexcellentspokenChinese,whichgivesalltheteachersandstudentsadeepimpression.（運(yùn)用了關(guān)系代詞which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語從句）[高分句型2]Besides,whatsurprisesusmostisthatyouareconfidentandbraveonthestagewhenfacingplentyofaudience.（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的主語從句和that引導(dǎo)的表語從句以及when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句的省略句）9．DearPeter,CongratulationsonyourwinningfirstplaceintheEnglishWordContestheldbyourschoolrecently.Youdeservethehonor.ThepastyearshaveseenyourrapidprogressinEnglishlearningthroughyourgreatefforts.Tobehonest,whatIadmiremostisyourdiligenceanddetermination.It’sfromyouthatIhavelearnedsomethingvaluable,thatis,“Nopains,nogains.”Therefore,Iwouldliketoexpressmysincerethankstoyouforwhatyouhavetaughtme.Wishyougreaterachievementsinyourstudies!Yours,LiHua【寫作指導(dǎo)】本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫信向在英語單詞大賽中獲得第一名的好友表示祝賀?！緦懽鞣治觥?.詞匯積累最近：recently→lately寶貴的：valuable→precious真誠的：sincere→genuine迅速的：rapid→fast/quick/swift2.句式拓展簡單句變復(fù)合句原句：CongratulationsonyourwinningfirstplaceintheEnglishWordContestheldbyourschoolrecently.Youdeservethehonor.拓展句：CongratulationsonyourwinningfirstplacewhichyoudeserveintheEnglishWordContestheldbyourschoolrecently.【典型句式】【高分句型1】Tobehonest,whatIadmiremostisyourdiligenceanddetermination.（運(yùn)用了what引導(dǎo)的主語從句）【高分句型2】It’sfromyouthatIhavelearnedsomethingvaluable,thatis,“Nopains,nogains.”（運(yùn)用了Itis…that結(jié)