2025屆高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)讀后續(xù)寫之動(dòng)作鏈

ActionChains

動(dòng)作鏈讀后續(xù)寫—構(gòu)造動(dòng)作鏈讓動(dòng)作描寫更生動(dòng)“讀后續(xù)寫作為記敘文，其核心只有一個(gè)，那就是“人”。因此一切的筆墨，都是為了塑造人物形象，使人物更加飽滿。其中，動(dòng)詞是英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言的主角，很多句子肯定都包含動(dòng)作描寫。但是我們?cè)诿鑼憚?dòng)作的時(shí)候往往會(huì)犯一個(gè)毛病，那就是太過(guò)于單薄。那么該如何將動(dòng)作構(gòu)建得飽滿?要想把動(dòng)作寫得生動(dòng)有畫面感，其中的一個(gè)思路:構(gòu)造“___________”。動(dòng)作鏈Buildactionchains動(dòng)作鏈1.將結(jié)果性的動(dòng)作，分解成更細(xì)致的連貫性的微動(dòng)作，使動(dòng)作結(jié)果過(guò)程化resultingactionsmoredetailedandcoherentmicro-actionsBuildactionchains動(dòng)作鏈1.將結(jié)果性的動(dòng)作，分解成更細(xì)致的連貫性的微動(dòng)作，使動(dòng)作結(jié)果過(guò)程化resultingactionsmoredetailedandcoherentmicro-actionsHowto

writeastoryvividly?想像你是一個(gè)編劇，在寫的電影劇本。結(jié)果性的動(dòng)作分解成連貫性的微動(dòng)作動(dòng)作過(guò)程化畫面感更強(qiáng)Warmingup擁抱微笑跳起來(lái)hugsmilegrinwalktowardsjumpup走向拿出深呼吸takeouttakeadeepbreath轉(zhuǎn)身蹲下?lián)炱餻ickupcrouchdownturnaround沖向朝…犬吠barkatdashtowardsWarmingup轉(zhuǎn)身動(dòng)作7動(dòng)作8動(dòng)作9動(dòng)作10動(dòng)作11蹲下?lián)炱餻ickupcrouchdownturnaround沖向朝…犬吠barkatdashtowardsWarmingup擁抱微笑跳起來(lái)hugsmilegrinwalktowardsjumpup走向拿出深呼吸takeouttakeadeepbreath轉(zhuǎn)身蹲下?lián)炱餻ickupcrouchdownturnaround沖向朝…犬吠barkatdashtowardsHekissedher.

Hewalkedtowardsher,huggedhertightlyandkissedher.Keyaction:親吻他親了她。他走向她，緊緊地抱著她，親了她。一個(gè)畫面變?nèi)齻€(gè)_____,_______andkissedher.PresentationHekissedher.

Hehuggedhertightly,kissedherandsmiledsweetly.Keyaction:親吻他親了她。他緊緊地抱著她，親了她，然后甜美地笑了。一個(gè)畫面變?nèi)齻€(gè)_____,kissedherand______.PresentationPresentation句型結(jié)構(gòu)主語(yǔ)+didA,

didBanddidC.He

huggedhertightly,kissedherandsmiledsweetly.He

walkedtowardsher,huggedhertightlyandkissedher.憨豆先生試圖考試作弊。Mr.Beanattemptedtocheatintheexam.思考：作弊前有哪些動(dòng)作環(huán)顧四周靠近同桌試圖瞥一眼答案lookedaroundmovedtowardshisdeskmateattemptedtoglanceathisanswers動(dòng)作鏈ActionchainsDuringtheexam,Mr.beanlookedaround,

slowlymovedtowardshisdeskmate,andattemptedtoglanceathisanswers.女孩沖向他，跳起來(lái)，緊緊抱住了他。Thegirlhuggedtheboy.Keyaction:擁抱女孩抱住男孩。Thegirldashedtowardshim,jumpedupandhuggedhimtightly._____,_______andhuggedhimtightly.Practice1Keyaction：犬吠小狗對(duì)女孩叫。

Thedogdashedtowardsthegirl,putdowntheflowerandbarkedatherwithdelight.Thedogbarkedatthegirl.腦補(bǔ)小狗沖向女孩，放下花，開(kāi)心地對(duì)女孩叫了一聲。Practice2Keyaction：撿花女孩撿起了花。Thegirlturnedaround,croucheddownandpickeduptheflower.Thegirlpickeduptheflower.Practice3_____,_______andpickeduptheflower.2.Myfatherpattedmeontheshoulderandencouragedmenevertogiveupmydreams.Myfather

patted

meontheshoulder,encouragingmenevertogiveupmydreams.1.Marysawtheringonthetableandfeltalittlebitshock.Seeing

theringonthetable,Maryfeltalittlebitshock.3.Thechildwasmovedbythestoryandbegantocry.Movedbythestory,thechildbegantocry.Sentencepattern2:非謂語(yǔ)DoingA(+doingB)，sbdidsth...Sentencepattern3:

非謂語(yǔ)Done，sbdidsth...Polish(用非謂語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ))同一對(duì)象同時(shí)發(fā)出不同動(dòng)作動(dòng)作鏈+情感、環(huán)境、心理、語(yǔ)言emotionsdialoguesActionscenesurroundingsinnerthoughts①Deeplymoved,Motherhuggedthetwins,saying“itwasthebestbreakfastIhadhad.”心理肢體語(yǔ)言把動(dòng)作和心理，語(yǔ)言等結(jié)合，形成動(dòng)作面Example1動(dòng)作鏈+情感、環(huán)境、心理、語(yǔ)言Mary驚恐大叫。面部肢體語(yǔ)言/心理Example2Wideninghereyesinextreme

horror,Maryfledaway,screaming,“Help!”widenhereyesinextremehorrorfleeawayscream睜大眼睛驚恐萬(wàn)分逃走大喊救命2.動(dòng)作+情感、環(huán)境、心理、語(yǔ)言

用動(dòng)作鏈完成句子：1231.David看到路邊的乞丐，他會(huì)怎么做呢？2.一位母親看到了自己走失的孩子被警察叔叔帶到面前時(shí)，她會(huì)有什么表現(xiàn)呢？3.夫妻二人森林里迷路，看到救援直升機(jī)時(shí)，會(huì)有什么表現(xiàn)？把手伸進(jìn)口袋掏出零錢遞給可憐的乞丐++

=reacheddeepintothepocketpulledoutahandfulofchangegaveittothepoorbeggar

Hereacheddeep

intothepocket,pulledoutahandfulofchangeandgaveittothepoorbeggar.1.

David看到路邊的乞丐，他會(huì)怎么做呢？2.一位母親看到了自己走失的孩子被警察叔叔帶到面前時(shí)，她會(huì)有什么表現(xiàn)呢？（對(duì)孩子）急促地沖過(guò)去：dashforwardinahurry跪下：kneeldown一把抱?。篽oldsbinone’sarmsShedashedforwardinahurry,kneltdownandheldhersonintoherarmstightly.2.一位母親看到了自己走失的孩子被警察叔叔帶到面前時(shí)，她會(huì)有什么表現(xiàn)呢？(對(duì)警察)情緒：

動(dòng)作：語(yǔ)言：holdthepolicemen'shandstightlyherhandsshakeandtearsofgratituderolldownfromhischeekssob“Ican'timaginewhatwouldhavehappenedwithoutyou”Herhandsshakingandtearsofgratituderollingdownfromhischeeks,sheheldthepolicemen'shandstightly,sobbing"sob“Ican'timaginewhatwouldhavehappenedwithoutyou"Feelingthrilled,sheflaggedheryellowblouse,yelling“Iamhere”,tryingtoattractothers’attention.情緒：feelthrilled動(dòng)作：flagheryellowblouse語(yǔ)言：yell“Iamhere”3.夫妻二人森林里迷路，看到救援直升機(jī)時(shí)，會(huì)有什么