感謝信：外教輔導(dǎo)獲得作文比賽一等獎(jiǎng) 講義 高一下學(xué)期3月月考英語試題

感謝信：外教輔導(dǎo)獲得作文比賽一等獎(jiǎng)（河北省保定部分高中2023-2024學(xué)年高一下學(xué)期3月月考）假定你是李華，你在剛剛結(jié)束的校英語作文比賽中榮獲一等獎(jiǎng)。請給幫助你的外教George寫一封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.告知比賽結(jié)果；2.回顧他的幫助；3.表達(dá)感謝。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearGeorge,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua寫作注意要點(diǎn)1.基本時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí)。2.寫作思路：三段論。第一段告知比賽結(jié)果（要點(diǎn)1）；第二段回顧外教的幫助（要點(diǎn)2）；第三段表達(dá)感謝（要點(diǎn)3）。寫作提綱：標(biāo)題：感謝信給外教George引言：向George問好并直接告知自己在校英語作文比賽中獲得一等獎(jiǎng)的喜訊。正文第一段：回顧幫助描述George在比賽準(zhǔn)備過程中提供的具體幫助，如寫作技巧指導(dǎo)、詞匯建議等。強(qiáng)調(diào)這些幫助對自己的影響和重要性。正文第二段：表達(dá)感謝表達(dá)對George的感激之情，感謝他的時(shí)間、耐心和專業(yè)指導(dǎo)。說明George的支持如何增強(qiáng)了自己的信心和能力。正文第三段：展望未來表達(dá)對未來繼續(xù)合作的期待，展望在George的幫助下取得更多進(jìn)步。結(jié)束語再次感謝George，并期待他的回復(fù)或進(jìn)一步的交流。結(jié)尾：以誠摯的問候結(jié)束信件，并署名“李華”。參考范文：DearGeorge,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell!Iamgladto

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(113words)Yours,LiHua中文翻譯親愛的喬治老師：見信好！我很高興地告訴您，在剛剛結(jié)束的校英語作文比賽中，我榮獲了一等獎(jiǎng)！我始終記得您不僅糾正了我語法上的錯(cuò)誤，還耐心地指導(dǎo)我如何更好地組織和展開論述，使我的文章結(jié)構(gòu)更加清晰、論點(diǎn)更加突出。您的專業(yè)知識和嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)慕虒W(xué)態(tài)度讓我受益匪淺。沒有您的幫助，我就不會取得如此巨大的進(jìn)步。再次感謝您給予我的幫助和支持。您的幫助不僅提高了我的寫作水平，更激發(fā)了我對英語學(xué)習(xí)的熱情和信心。李華本文的亮點(diǎn)：（1）Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell運(yùn)用無靈主語結(jié)構(gòu)；（2）keepsbinformed告知某人；（3）Istillrememberthedayswhen...其中when引導(dǎo)定語從句；（4）withgreatpatience耐心地；（5）Itis...that...運(yùn)用強(qiáng)調(diào)句型；（6）Withoutyourhelp,Iwouldnothave...運(yùn)用含蓄虛擬條件句；（7）Wordsfailtoexpressmygratitudefor...言語難以表達(dá)我的感激之情。下水文1DearGeorge,IamwritingwithgreatjoytosharethefantasticnewsthatIhavesecuredthefirstprizeintheschool'sEnglishessaycompetition.Yourpatientcoachingandinsightfulfeedbackweregreatlyimportantinrefiningmywritingskillsandshapingmyessaytoperfection.Reflectingonthejourney,IamdeeplygratefulforthetimeandeffortyouinvestedinguidingmethroughtheintricaciesofEnglishcomposition.YourencouragementandexpertisehavenotonlyhelpedmesucceedinthiscompetitionbutalsoignitedapassionfortheEnglishlanguagewithinme.Thankyouonceagainforyourinvaluablesupport.Ilookforwardtoourcontinuedcollaborationinthefuture.Warmregards,LiHua下水文2DearGeorge,IamelatedtoinformyouthatIhavewonthefirstprizeintheschool'sEnglishessaycontest.Yourassistancewaspivotaltomysuccess.Younotonlyprovidedmewithconstructivecriticismbutalsoinspiredmetothinkmorecreatively.Lookingback,thecountlesshourswespentdiscussingvariouswritingtechniquesandyourpatientcorrectionofmydraftswerewhattrulysetmeapart.YourdedicationtomyprogressissomethingIwillalwaysappreciate.Iwanttoexpressmyheartfeltgratitudeforyourunwaveringsupport.Itwasyourbeliefinmyabilitiesthatgavemetheconfidencetoexcel.Thankyouforeverything.Yourssincerely,LiHua下水文3DearGeorge,IamoverthemoontosharewithyouthatIhavewonthefirstprizeinourschool'sEnglishcompositioncompetition.Thisachievementwouldnothavebeenpossiblewithoutyourexpertguidanceandencouragement.Yourkeeneyefordetailandyourabilitytodrawoutthebestinmywritingweretrulyinvaluable.Thetimeyouspentwithme,refiningmyargumentsandenhancingmyvocabulary,hasmadeallthedifference.Iamprofoundlythankfulforyoursupportandment