2025屆高考英語(yǔ)精準(zhǔn)沖刺復(fù)習(xí) 讀后續(xù)寫如何進(jìn)行情緒描寫

2025屆高考英語(yǔ)精準(zhǔn)沖刺復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫如何進(jìn)行情緒描寫Step1Lead-inWatchamovieclipandanswerquestions.1.Whatisthemainactor'semotion?2.Howdoyouknowthat?

What’shisemotion?Heisangry.Step2Competition詞匯大比拼靚句大挑戰(zhàn)文段險(xiǎn)提速

Task：Emotionalwords

Pleasewritedownemotionalwordsofthesamekindasmanyaspossiblein1minute.詞匯大比拼emotionalwords:adj./n.emotionalwords:adj./n.emotionalwords:adj./n.emotionalwords:adj./n.靚句大挑戰(zhàn)

GamerulesPleaseorganizesentencesbyusingsomesentencepatternsintroducedbyteachers.1、無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)（用無(wú)生命的事物作主語(yǔ)）例："我開(kāi)心?！?/p>

I'mhappy.

Delight

seizedme.

Awaveofdelightseizedme.2)(加短語(yǔ)）“一股開(kāi)心（的情緒）抓住了我?！?)(換主語(yǔ)）“開(kāi)心（的情緒）抓住了我?！?、無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)（用無(wú)生命的事物作主語(yǔ)）

Instantly,asurgeofdelightseizedme.

Instantly,asurgeofdelightseizedmewhenIheardthegoodnews.4)(加時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）“聽(tīng)到那個(gè)好消息，一股開(kāi)心（的情緒）抓住了我。”3)(加副詞）“立刻，一股開(kāi)心（的情緒）抓住了我。”無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)：情緒名詞+固定動(dòng)詞+sb+when/assbdosth“當(dāng)某人做某事時(shí)，一股...情緒涌上心頭?！眅g:聽(tīng)到這個(gè)壞消息時(shí)，一股悔恨的情緒無(wú)法控制地涌上我心頭。Uncontrollably,awaveofregretwashedovermeasIheardthebadnews.Practice:[2022全國(guó)1卷]1.當(dāng)意識(shí)到大衛(wèi)的情況可能會(huì)變得更糟，我感到擔(dān)憂和焦慮。2.當(dāng)大衛(wèi)終于下定決心繼續(xù)賽跑時(shí)，我感到欣慰和開(kāi)心。WorryandanxietyseizedmeasIrealizedDavid'ssituationmightgetworse.AwaveofreliefanddelightsweptovermewhenDavidfinallybecamedeterminedtocontinuetherace.2、非謂語(yǔ)：情緒形容詞1+情緒形容詞2，sbdosth,doingsth“感到...和...,某人做某事1，并做某事2?！眅g:(感到)緊張和害怕，彼得設(shè)法走上舞臺(tái)，開(kāi)始發(fā)表演講。Nervousandscared,Petermanagedtostepontothestage,startingtodeliverhisspeech.

Practice:[2022全國(guó)1卷]1.感到堅(jiān)定和受到鼓舞，大衛(wèi)抬起頭，感激地看著我。2.（感到）放松的和快樂(lè)的，大衛(wèi)在越過(guò)終點(diǎn)線后立刻向我揮手，表達(dá)他的快樂(lè)和感激。Determinedandencouraged，Davidraisedhishead，lookingatmewithgratitude.Relievedanddelighted,Davidwavedatmeimmediatelyaftercrossingthefinishline,conveyinghishappinessandgratitude.情緒形容詞非謂語(yǔ)擴(kuò)寫疊加大衛(wèi)繼續(xù)跑步。

Davidkeptonrunning.1)(前加情緒形容詞）大衛(wèi)充滿信心和決心，繼續(xù)奔跑。Confidentanddetermined,Davidkeptonrunning.2)(后加非謂語(yǔ)/分動(dòng)作)大衛(wèi)充滿信心和決心，繼續(xù)奔跑，奮力沖向終點(diǎn)線。Confidentanddetermined,Davidkeptonrunning,struggling/managingtoreachthefinishline.3)(后加獨(dú)立主格/五官)大衛(wèi)自信而堅(jiān)定，繼續(xù)奔跑，汗水順著他的臉流下來(lái)。Confidentanddetermined,Davidkeptonrunning,sweatstreamingdownhisface.3.讓步狀語(yǔ)從句：情緒形容詞+assb+be動(dòng)詞，sb(still)dosth.盡管某人（感到）...，某人仍做某事e.g.盡管很緊張，彼得仍鼓起勇氣走上舞臺(tái)。Nervousashewas，Peterpluckedupthecouragetostepontothestage.Practice:

[2022全國(guó)1卷]盡管還有一絲緊張，David決心完成賽跑。Slightlynervousashewas,Davidbecamedeterminedtofinishtherace.4.獨(dú)立主格結(jié)構(gòu)：身體部位+動(dòng)詞非謂語(yǔ)，sbdosthe.g.眼淚順著他的臉頰流下來(lái)，大衛(wèi)感謝我及時(shí)的鼓勵(lì)。Tearsstreamingdownhischeeks,Davidthankedmeforthetimelyencouragement.e.g.他熱淚盈眶，用顫抖的聲音感謝警察。Tears

wellingupinhiseyes,hethankedthepolicemanwith/inatremblingvoice.(眼里閃著...)(臉上洋溢著...)(某人的心因...而怦怦直跳)Eyes

glitteringwith

relief/joy,sb.dosth.Face

shining

with

delight,sb.dosth.Heart

beating

with

nervousness,hefailedtoutteraword.其他部位：Arms/legs/musclesachingandknees

shaking/trembling,sb.didsth.(胳膊/腿/肌肉酸痛，膝蓋發(fā)抖/顫抖，某人...)

Practice:[2022全國(guó)1卷]讓我們欣喜若狂的是，大衛(wèi)順利越過(guò)終點(diǎn)線，臉上洋溢著滿足的喜悅。Toourjoy,Davidcrossedthefinishinglinesmoothly,hisface

shiningwithsatisfieddelight.總結(jié)①無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)（“情緒名詞+固定動(dòng)詞+sb”+as/whensbdosth）②非謂語(yǔ)（情緒形容詞1+情緒形容詞2,sbdosth,doingsth.）③讓步狀從（情緒形容詞+assb+be動(dòng)詞，sb(still)dosth.）④獨(dú)立主格（身體部位+動(dòng)詞非謂語(yǔ)，sbdosth.）①無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)+④獨(dú)立主格NervousnessenvelopingPeter,hewalkedtothestage,hishands

shakingslightly.eg:緊張籠罩在彼得心頭，他走向舞臺(tái)，雙手微微顫抖。③讓步狀語(yǔ)從句+④獨(dú)立主格:Nervous

ashewas,Peterwalkedtothestage,hishands

shakingslightly.Peter雖然緊張，但還是走上舞臺(tái)，他的手微微顫抖。②非謂語(yǔ)+④獨(dú)立主格:Nervousandslightlyscared,Peterwalkedtothestage,hishandsshakingslightly.

既緊張有點(diǎn)害怕，彼得走上舞臺(tái)，手微微顫抖。文段險(xiǎn)提速Trytowriteasmallpassageabout50wordsinthreeminutesaccordingtothescene,andthendiscussalltheworkswithyourgroupmembersinordertochoosethebestonetopresent.Finally,astudentwillcommentonitandgiveapoint.

Scene1:Hearingthebadnewsthatherbeloveddogwashitbyacar,________________________________________.

Scene2:Lastweekend,whenIwasaddictedtoplayingthegameGloryofKings,myfathercameinwithfury,_______________________________________

Scene3:OnMother'sDay,Icarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwokemotherup.She____________.

Pleaseusetheproperemotionaldescriptionsaccordingtothescenes.Tips:1.useadvancedemotionalwords2.useadvancedsentencepatterns1）無(wú)靈主語(yǔ)2）非謂語(yǔ)3)讓步狀從4）獨(dú)立主格Scene1:Hearingthebadnewsthatherbeloveddogwashitbyacar,____________________________.Scene2:Lastweekend,whenIwasaddictedtoplayingthegameGloryofKings,myfathercameinwithfury,_____________________________.Scene3:OnMother'sDay,Icarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwokemotherup.She____________________.Shebursti