應(yīng)用文練習(xí)寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練-2024屆高三英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作復(fù)習(xí)備考

應(yīng)用文練習(xí)寫(xiě)作訓(xùn)練：發(fā)帖-消防演習(xí)假定你是李華，上周你參加了學(xué)校組織的消防安全演習(xí)，請(qǐng)你在校英文論壇發(fā)表一篇帖子，分享此次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：1.

活動(dòng)過(guò)程；2.

個(gè)人感悟?！咀⒁狻?.

詞數(shù)80左右；2.

可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：消防安全演習(xí)firesafetydrill這一類(lèi)演習(xí)/演練類(lèi)的文章，可以等同為“活動(dòng)內(nèi)容”不一樣的活動(dòng)文章，主要側(cè)重還是要在演習(xí)/演練的過(guò)程描寫(xiě)，因?yàn)榇祟?lèi)話題范圍比較小，所以積累這篇消防安全演習(xí)以及去年浙江金華二模的急救演練基本上就ok本篇文章雖然是帖子，但是其實(shí)就是報(bào)道類(lèi)。第一段：帖子開(kāi)頭=報(bào)道開(kāi)頭（引出活動(dòng)）Lastweek,Ihadtheopportunitytoparticipateinafiresafetydrillorganizedbyourschool,

which

provedtobe

aneye-openingand

educational

experienceforme.【最美結(jié)構(gòu)，細(xì)節(jié)補(bǔ)充】【大眾句式】Lastweekwitnessedmyparticipationin....

第二段：活動(dòng)過(guò)程+個(gè)人感悟（也可以放P3）#

過(guò)程部分也有兩種寫(xiě)法：①用我們之前講過(guò)的活動(dòng)類(lèi)活動(dòng)套句：講座+演習(xí)；②純演習(xí)的過(guò)程，這個(gè)寫(xiě)法更突出細(xì)節(jié)描寫(xiě)的能力。

【寫(xiě)法2】演習(xí)以一聲突如其來(lái)的火警開(kāi)始，標(biāo)志著演練的開(kāi)始。隨后，我們被指示迅速而有序地疏散大樓，使用指定的逃生路線。最重要的是要盡量貼近地面行動(dòng)，以避免吸入煙霧。Thedrillbeganwithanunexpectedfirealarm,signalingthestartoftheexercise.Weweretheninstructedtoevacuatethebuildingquicklyandorderly,usingthedesignatedescaperoutes.Themostimportantpartwastostaylowtothegroundtoavoidinhalingthesmoke.

【寫(xiě)法1】演習(xí)以一場(chǎng)關(guān)于消防安全重要性和火災(zāi)期間應(yīng)遵循的正確程序的信息性講座開(kāi)始。接著我們將分組，每個(gè)小組被指派了特定任務(wù)，如疏散大樓、滅火或提供急救。Thedrillcommencedwithaninformativelectureontheimportanceoffiresafetyandtheproperprocedurestofollowduringafire.Wewerethendividedintogroups,eachofwhichwasassignedaspecifictasksuchasevacuatingthebuilding,extinguishingafire,oradministeringfirstaid.

第三段：個(gè)人感悟（注意“個(gè)人”）【暗連接】Personally,//Onapersonallevel,Thisexperiencetaughtmetheimportanceofbeingpreparedandawareofpotentialdangersandalsoemphasizedthesignificanceofteamworkandcalmnessduringemergencies.throughthisexperience,Irealizedthatfiresafetyisnotjustaboutknowingwhattododuringafire,butalsoabouttakingpreventivemeasurestoavoidone.【24屆江西萍鄉(xiāng)二?！磕阈Ｗ罱_(kāi)展了一次消防演練活動(dòng)。請(qǐng)你為校英文報(bào)寫(xiě)一份主題為“FocusonFireSafety,CherishLife”的新聞報(bào)道，內(nèi)容包括：1.活動(dòng)目的；2.

活動(dòng)過(guò)程和感受?！咀⒁狻?.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；2.參考詞匯：滅火器

fireextinguishers;

消防栓

firehydrants【不錯(cuò)范文】Inordertoenhancethefiresafety

awareness

andemergencyresponse

capabilities

ofthestudents,

afiredrillthemed

“FocusonFireSafety,CherishLife”

wassuccessfullyconducted

inourschool.Initially,professionalfirefighterswereinvitedtodeliveron-siteexplanations

and

demonstratethecorrectusage

offireextinguishersandfirehydrants.Then,duringthedrill,themomentthealarmsounded,allstudentscoveredtheirmouthsandnoseswithwettowelsbentdownlow,andpromptlyevacuatedtoasafeareainanorderlymanneraccordingtothepredeterminedescaperoute.Throughthisfiredrill,notonlydidweacquireessential

fireprevention

knowledgeandskills

butourfiresafety

awarenesswasfurtherstrengthened.假定你是某國(guó)際學(xué)校的學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，你校即將組織急救演練，請(qǐng)你用英文寫(xiě)一則通知，內(nèi)容包括：1.

時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)及參與人員；2.

具體內(nèi)容；3.

注意事項(xiàng)。注意：1.

寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答?！鞠滤魑摹緼nnouncementforMedicalEmergencyDrillInordertopreparestudentsforanyunforeseenmedicalemergenciesthatmayoccurinourdailylives,amedicalemergencydrillwillkickoffnextMondayafternooninthehall.AllGradeOnestudentsarerequiredtoattend.Duringthedrill,variousmedicalemergencyscenarioswillbesimulated,includingheartattacksandinjuries.Inaddition,studentsmaygetthehangofbasicfirstaidskillslikeCPR,stitchingwoundsandbandaging,whichwillequipthemwithessentiallife-savingtechniques.Thesafetyofeveryoneinvolvedisofgreatsignificance.Pleaseremaincalmandfocusedthroughouttheexerciseandfollowtheinstructionsprovidedbythedesignatedpersonnel.TheStudentUnion【參考范文】AnnouncementforMedicalEmergencyDrillAimedatpreparingstudentsformedicalemergenciesthatmayarise,amedicalemergencydrillisscheduledtobeconductedontheschoolplaygroundthisFridayfrom3p.m.to4p.m.Allstudentsandstaffmembersarerequiredtoparticipate.Duringthedrill,amedicalemergencysituationwillbesimulated,wheretheparticipantswillacteitherasfirstaidersorvictims.Thefocuswillbeonprovidingbasicfirstaidforvictimsbeforeemergencyservicesarrive,suchasCPRandHeimlichmaneuver,whichcanmeanthedifferencebetweenlifeanddeath.Pleasenotethatalltheparticipantsmustfollowtheinstructionsoftheemergencypersonnel.Thankyouforyourcooperation.你校英文報(bào)將增設(shè)主題為“講好中國(guó)故事”的欄目，你是欄目負(fù)責(zé)人李華，請(qǐng)你給外教Kate寫(xiě)郵件咨詢她對(duì)欄目的建議。內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹設(shè)想；2.咨詢建議?！咀⒁狻?.寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右；2.請(qǐng)按照如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。比較常規(guī)的題目套了新的說(shuō)法而已。話題還是文化類(lèi)，要點(diǎn)1：介紹設(shè)想→欄目介紹（目的啊內(nèi)容啊皆可，這不是很常見(jiàn)么）；要點(diǎn)2：咨詢建議（既然你問(wèn)外教建議，所以一定是跟跨文化有關(guān)，所以可以咨詢什么話題的故事外國(guó)學(xué)生會(huì)跟興趣或者如何尋找好的資源網(wǎng)站，或者語(yǔ)言翻譯上的一些求助?？傮w來(lái)說(shuō)比較簡(jiǎn)單，但是站在學(xué)生的角度，限時(shí)的情況下，客觀題的摧殘下，還是有點(diǎn)小難度，所以朋友們淡定。）第一段：（自我介紹）+背景+寫(xiě)信目的#自我介紹（題干信息利用）I'mLiHua,inchargeofthenewlyestablishedcolumn"TellingChineseStories"inourschool'sEnglishnewspaper.#寫(xiě)信目的I'mreachingouttoyouforsomeadviceandinsightstomakethiscolumnexceptional.第二段：介紹設(shè)想+咨詢建議#介紹設(shè)想≈欄目介紹（內(nèi)容/目的等等）--用上SSS的介紹套句介【欄目?jī)?nèi)容】Thenewcolumnisdedicatedtoexploringawidearrayofaspectsof+細(xì)節(jié)細(xì)節(jié)1：Chineseculture,history,andcurrentevents.細(xì)節(jié)2：Chinesetraditionalfestivals,historicalfigures,literatureandarts,technologicalinnovations【目的】我們?cè)O(shè)想這個(gè)欄目不僅是向讀者介紹中國(guó)的橋梁，還能夠促進(jìn)對(duì)中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化和當(dāng)代生活的更深入理解和欣賞。WeenvisionitasabridgethatnotonlyeducatesourreadersaboutChinabutalsofostersadeeperunderstandingandappreciationforthecountry'sheritageandcontemporarylife.#咨詢建議：句式+內(nèi)容(注意暗連接不一樣主干主語(yǔ)也要不一樣！)【V1】Asanexpertincross-culturalcommunication,couldyouofferussomesuggestions....?【V2】Tomakeitengagingandeducational,weareseekingyoursuggestions....【具體建議內(nèi)容2選1或者都選】△1...如何選擇和呈現(xiàn)能夠引起我們廣泛讀者共鳴的故事。....onhowtoselectandpresentstoriesthatwillresonatewithourdiver