Unit1Whatsthematter？八年級英語下冊單元寫作深度指導(dǎo)（人教版）（學(xué)生版）

Unit1What’sthematter？單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練近三年考情分析話題考查熱度“健康和急救”描述某人存在的健康問題及給出合理建議本單元的寫作任務(wù)是會寫針對健康問題提出合理化建議的短文。在寫作過程中，要求同學(xué)們熟悉人體部位的表述，掌握描述人體的不適等健康問題。要注意關(guān)鍵詞語的正確使用，并能夠針對健康問題運(yùn)用情態(tài)動詞should和shouldn’t提出更加正確、具體和深入的合理化建議。寫作目標(biāo)能表達(dá)生活中存在的健康問題，并就這些提出建議；能描述意外傷害事故，并給出合理的應(yīng)對措施。1.1.能用＂have...＂表達(dá)健康問題及意外事故。2.能描述健康問題的狀況或意外事故發(fā)生的過程及病情或受傷的程度。3.能用＂should/shouldn’t＂提建議。4.寫作微技能：不同句式的表達(dá)。寫作步驟◆步驟一：1.描述問題；◆步驟二：給出合理化的建議；◆步驟三：表達(dá)祝愿，希望對方走出困境。真題感知（2023·遼寧鞍山·統(tǒng)考中考真題）眼睛是心靈的窗戶。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近為近視感到困擾。請你根據(jù)下面表格的提示信息給他寫一封電子郵件，說明他近視的原因并提出建議。要求：（1）不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息。（2）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（3）內(nèi)容完整、意思連貫、符合邏輯、書寫整齊。（4）詞數(shù)：80~100詞。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。近視原因長時(shí)間使用電子產(chǎn)品；讀書時(shí)間過長。建議控制使用電子產(chǎn)品時(shí)間；養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣（如飲食、做眼保健操）……希望……參考詞匯：視力eyesight；近視myopia；電子產(chǎn)品electronicdeviceDearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing【答案】例文：DearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?I’msorrytolearnthatyoureyesightisgettingweaker.Ithinkyoumayuseelectronicproductsforalongtime,whichisbadforyoureyesight.Andreadingbooksfortoolongmaycausemyopia.Butdon’tworry.I’dliketosharewithyousomewaysofprotectingeyesight.Atfirst,youshouldcontrolthetimeyouspendonelectronicproducts.Youcandomoreoutdooractivities.What’smore,youshoulddevelopsomegoodhabits.Youshouldeatmorevegetablesandfruit.Theyaregoodforyourhealth.Besides,doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingyourtiredeyes.Lastly,youshouldhaveyoureyesexaminedeverytermtomakesureyoureyesstayhealthy.Ihopeyou’llfindmywayshelpful.Yours,LiPing[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：根據(jù)提示信息給對方一些建議，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出話題，介紹對方近視的原因；第二步，針對朋友的問題給出相應(yīng)的建議；第三步，表達(dá)自己的希望。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①wouldliketodosth.想要做某事②begoodfor對……有好處③playanimportantrolein在……中起重要作用[高分句型]①Ithinkyoumayuseelectronicproductsforalongtime,whichisbadforyoureyesight.(which引導(dǎo)的定語從句)②doingeyeexercisesplaysanimportantroleinrelaxingyourtiredeyes.(動名詞作主語)【詞匯積累】1.牙痛haveatoothache 2感到惡心feelsick3.肚子痛haveastomachache 4.流鼻血haveanosebleed5.感冒haveacold 6.摔倒falldown 7.膝蓋受傷hurtone’sknee8.割傷cutoneself9.撞到頭gethitonthehead 10.躺下來休息liedownandrest 11.喝熱的蜂蜜水drinkhotteawithhoney12.看牙醫(yī)gotothedentist 10.休息幾天restforafewdays11.去看醫(yī)生gotoadoctor 12.量體溫takeone’stemperature 13.在……敷藥putsomemedicineon.....14.用綁帶包扎putabandageon... 15.在水下沖rununderthewater16.去醫(yī)院gotothehospital 【句式積累】1.Asisknowntoall，health/playingsports/eatinghealthily/havingenoughsleep/washinghandsbeforemealsisofgreatimportancetous.2.It'simportantforustoliveahealthylife/drinkplentyofwater/haveahealthydiet.3.Firstly,earlytobedandearlytorise/goingtobedearlyandgettingupearly/gettingenoughsleepcanmakeusfeelfullofenergy.4.Secondly,eatinghabitsalsoplayanimportantpartinourlife.Weshouldeatasmanykindsoffoodaspossible/eatmorefruitandvegetables/eatlessfastfood/drinkwaterinsteadofsoftdrinks.5.Lastbutnotleast,sportshelpmaketeenagershealthierandstronger.Throughtheseactivities,wecanimproveoursleepandgetagoodrest.6.Inaword,ifwestickto/followtheadvice(given)above，wewillhave/live/leadahealthylife.7.Followtheadvice,andwewillbehealthy.8.Doingeyeexercisesatbreakwillsurelybenefitusalot.Ireallyhopeourschoolcanorganizemoresuchactivities.【俗語諺語】①Healthisnotvaluedtillsicknesses.病時(shí)方知健康可貴。②Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway.一天一蘋果，醫(yī)生遠(yuǎn)離我。③Earlytobedandearlytorisemakesamanhealthy,wealthyandwise.早睡早起讓人健康、富有和明智。（一）健康問題類短語1.牙痛___________________ 2.頭痛___________________3.肚子痛___________________ 4.背痛___________________5.喉嚨痛___________________ 6.流鼻血___________________7.感冒___________________ 8.發(fā)燒___________________9.咳嗽___________________ 10.感到惡心___________________（二）意外事故短語1.摔倒_____________________ 2.割傷_____________________3.撞到頭_____________________ 4.膝蓋受傷_____________________5.背受傷_____________________ 6.手臂受傷_____________________（三）措施短語1.躺下來休息_____________________ 2.喝熱的蜂蜜水_____________________3.看牙醫(yī)_____________________ 4.拍X光_____________________5.量體溫_____________________ 6.在……敷藥_____________________7.用綁帶包扎_____________________ 8.在水下沖_____________________9.去醫(yī)院_____________________ 10.休息幾天_____________________11.去看醫(yī)生_____________________ 12.切除_____________________（四）其他短語1.怎么了_____________________ 2.下車_____________________3.使……驚訝_____________________ 4.同意做某事_____________________5.造成麻煩_____________________ 6.習(xí)慣于……_____________________7.冒險(xiǎn)_____________________ 8.用盡；耗盡_____________________9.離開，從……出來_____________________10.掌管；管理_____________________11.堅(jiān)持做某事_____________________ 12.放棄_____________________13.做決定_____________________ 14.考慮做某事_____________________二、句子積累（一）佳句欣賞與模仿1.Isatinthesamewayfortoolongwithoutmoving.Thebusdriverstoppedthebuswithoutthinkingtwice.（withoutdoingsth沒有做某事）我一直在做作業(yè)沒有休息。___________________________________________________________________________________2.Buttohissurprise,theyallagreedtogowithhim.（toone’ssurprise使……驚訝；出乎……意料）讓我感到驚訝的是，他能獨(dú)自穿越這片森林。___________________________________________________________________________________3.ThankstoMr.Wangandthepassengers,thedoctorssavedthemanintime.（thanksto多虧；由于；intime及時(shí)）多虧了黃老師，快速送我到醫(yī)院，我才及時(shí)得到治療(receivetreatment)。___________________________________________________________________________________4.Hebandagedhimselfsothathewouldnotlosetoomuchblood.（sothat因此）我早起是為了趕上早班車。___________________________________________________________________________________5.Hisloveformountainclimbingissogreatthathekeptonclimbingmountainsevenafterhisexperience.（so...that...如此……以至于……）這蛋糕是如此美味，以至于我吃了好多，肚子痛了。___________________________________________________________________________________6.Aronisusedtotakingrisks.（beusedtodoingsth習(xí)慣于做某事）我習(xí)慣于早上喝一杯水。___________________________________________________________________________________（二）根據(jù)健康問題或生活中的傷害事故，提出建議。（提建議的句式有should，shouldn’t，Whynot...?Whydon’tyou...?What/Howabout...?等）1.Tinafelldownfromherbikeandhurtherknee.___________________________________________________________________________________2.Steveatetoomuchatthepartysothathehadastomachache.___________________________________________________________________________________3.MrSmithgothitbyaballwhenhewaswalking.___________________________________________________________________________________（一）眼睛是心靈的窗戶。假如你是李平，你的朋友Mike最近為近視感到困擾。請你根據(jù)下面表格的提示信息給他寫一封電子郵件，說明他近視的原因并提出建議。要求：（1）不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、人名等相關(guān)信息。（2）根據(jù)中文和英文提示，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。（3）內(nèi)容完整、意思連貫、符合邏輯、書寫整齊。（4）詞數(shù)：80~100詞。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。近視原因長時(shí)間使用電子產(chǎn)品；讀書時(shí)間過長。建議控制使用電子產(chǎn)品時(shí)間；養(yǎng)成好習(xí)慣（如飲食、做眼保健操）……希望……參考詞匯：視力eyesight；近視myopia；電子產(chǎn)品electronicdeviceDearMike,Howisitgoingwithyou?_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing（二）你的朋友Jim非常喜歡玩游戲。由于長時(shí)間玩電腦游戲，現(xiàn)在頭痛、眼睛不舒服、腰酸背痛，并且晚上睡不好覺。請你寫一篇英語短文，介紹一下他的情況，并指出你對他的建議。具體要求：1.內(nèi)容包含上述所提供的信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.書寫認(rèn)真，句子通順，語法正確；3.詞數(shù)：80詞左右。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（三）假如你是李華，你的網(wǎng)友Peter打籃球時(shí)意外受傷，請根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容是示，用英語給Peter寫一封電子郵件。提示：1.詢問病情并提出建議；2.介紹一下你學(xué)校的近期活動；3.表達(dá)祝愿。要求：80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearPeter,I’msorrytohearthatyougotinjuredwhileplayingbasketball.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyou’llgetbetter，andbebacktoyourschoolassoonaspossible.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua（四）許多孩子喜歡吃零食，這是導(dǎo)致他們肥胖的主要原因之一。英語課上，老師引導(dǎo)學(xué)生就吃零食這一問題展開討論。請你參考以下提示寫一篇英語短文，簡要談?wù)勀愕目捶?。提示?.吃零食是一種壞習(xí)慣；2.科學(xué)家們說有些零食含有大量的脂肪和糖，人們攝取的脂肪和糖越多，越容易發(fā)胖。要求：1.80詞左右；2.可適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：snackn.零食takein攝取overweightadj.肥胖的；超重的___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（五）暑假中，Leo喜歡玩游戲，最近他的脖子有點(diǎn)難受。假如你是Leo的朋友Denny，請你寫一封信，幫Leo分析一下他的問題，并就此提出幾點(diǎn)建議。提示：（1）久坐不動有害健康；（2）注意休息；（3）適當(dāng)增加鍛煉。詞數(shù)：不少于80；開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。要求：語句通順，不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。DearLeo,Iamsorrytohearaboutyourproblems._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ifyoufollowallthesetips,you’llbebettersoon!Yourstruly,Denny（六）英國作家薩克雷曾說：“播種習(xí)慣收獲性格，播種性格收獲命運(yùn)?！痹谏钪?，一定有好的習(xí)慣伴隨你的成長。請你以“Goodhabitsmakeme________”為題寫一篇短文（詞數(shù)80—100）。要求：1.補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題（參考詞匯：better,happier,healthier,stronger等）；2.字跡工整，內(nèi)容完整連貫，語言準(zhǔn)確規(guī)范；3.鼓勵(lì)寫出真情實(shí)感，對緊扣主題的適當(dāng)發(fā)揮不予扣分。短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。Goodhabitsmakeme________Goodhabitsareimportantinourlives.Theyinfluence(影響)usalotinmanyways.Ithink______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________假如你是李大明，你昨天騎自行車時(shí)遇到一位疲勞駕駛的司機(jī)，發(fā)生了一場交通事故。請根據(jù)圖片提示寫一篇英語短文，介紹事故發(fā)生的經(jīng)過及吸取的教訓(xùn)，并呼吁大家遵守交通規(guī)則、注意交通安全。要求：1）包含圖片信息，語句通順、流暢，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2）100詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名。I’mLiDaming.Yesterday,anaccidenthappenedtomenearmyhome.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（八）每年的8月8日是“全民健身日”，為了讓這項(xiàng)活動更加深入人心，某英文雜志的“運(yùn)動與健康”欄目正在以Let’sDoExerciseTogether為題，向廣大中學(xué)生征文。運(yùn)動的重要性運(yùn)動的時(shí)間與方式●保持健康●培養(yǎng)個(gè)人的性格●……●上學(xué)時(shí)步行或騎自行車●上體育課時(shí)做各種鍛煉（跑步、打籃球……）●周末與朋友去爬山、游泳等●……Let’sDoExerciseTogether

It’sveryimportantforustodoexercise.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（九）健康是高質(zhì)量生活的根本，是人類一個(gè)永恒的話題。如何在高度緊張的學(xué)習(xí)生活中保持健康的體魄尤其重要。請根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示以“HealthyLifestyle”為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的作文。短文的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。1.擁有良好的健康可以更好地工作和學(xué)習(xí)，迎接更多挑戰(zhàn)（challenge）；2.保持健康有很多種方式，如健康均衡的飲食習(xí)慣，多吃蔬菜水果；多鍛煉，擺脫不良生活習(xí)慣；保持快樂積極的心情，緩解來自學(xué)習(xí)和工作的壓力等。HealthyLifestyleLivingahealthylifestylecanhaveaneffectonbothourworkandlife.Wecanhavemoreenergytofacechallenges.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·江蘇淮安·統(tǒng)考中考真題）假如你是李華，你們學(xué)校的英語社團(tuán)將開展以“體育鍛煉，健康你我”為主題的英語演講比賽。請以“BetterExercise,BetterLife”為題，根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)，寫一篇英語演講稿。我的日常鍛煉1.最喜歡的鍛煉方式2.鍛煉時(shí)長3.帶來益處（不少于兩點(diǎn))給同學(xué)的建議1.校內(nèi)鍛煉方式（不少于兩點(diǎn)）2.校外鍛煉方式（不少于兩點(diǎn)）號召1.希望大家多鍛煉2.…參考詞匯：做早操domorningexercises上體育課havePElessons壓力減輕feellessstressed合理鍛煉exerciseproperly注意：1.詞數(shù)在80—100之間，已給出的文字不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫通順；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名和地名。BetterExercise,BetterLifeDearclassmates,I’mgladtobeheretogiveaspeech.Mytopicis“BetterExercise,BetterLife”._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sallformyspeech.Thankyouforlistening.（2023·湖南邵陽·統(tǒng)考中考真題）當(dāng)前，全國兒童青少年近視率居高不下，習(xí)近平總書記對此高度重視并作出重要批示，教育部也于2023年3月30日印發(fā)了《2023年全國綜合防控兒童青少年近視重點(diǎn)工作計(jì)劃》。對于兒童青少年近視問題，你有何看法和建議。請你根據(jù)下面的提示，寫一篇短文，告訴大家如何保護(hù)視力。要求：1.包含提示中的所有要點(diǎn)，語言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確，語句通順，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.請勿在文中出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名、校名及地名。Asweallknow,eyesareveryimportanttous.However,manystudentshavepooreyesight.Inordertoprotectoureyesight,weshouldfollowthesesuggestions.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,let’stakeactiontosaygoodbyetothickglasses.（2023·湖北恩施·中考真題）自教育部等十七部門聯(lián)合印發(fā)《全面加強(qiáng)和改進(jìn)新時(shí)代學(xué)生心理健康工作專項(xiàng)行動計(jì)劃（2023—2025）》以來，越來越多的人開始關(guān)注青少年的健康。某英語網(wǎng)站擬舉辦一次以“HowtoLiveaHealthyLife”為題的征文比賽。作為青少年，我們該如何健康生活？請根據(jù)下表要點(diǎn)提示，從如何保持身體健康和心理健康兩方面寫一篇英語短文投稿。身體健康心理健康堅(jiān)持鍛煉擁有自信保證睡眠保持好心情…………寫作要求：（1）文中必須包含表格中所給的要點(diǎn)，另對任意一方面補(bǔ)充一條你自己的觀點(diǎn)；（2）條理清晰，字跡工整，詞數(shù)不少于80。開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；（3）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名和地名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯：physicalhealth身體健康

psychologicalhealth心理健康HowtoLiveaHealthyLifeNowadays,moreandmorepeoplehaveetofocusonteenagers’health.Thefollowingsaremyopinionsabouthowweteenagersliveahealthylife.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________（2023·內(nèi)蒙古包頭·統(tǒng)考中考真題）你校英文報(bào)正在征稿，主題是“Formhealthyeatinghabits”。請根據(jù)以下征稿啟事，寫一篇短文投稿。ARTICLESWANTED!TheWorldWideFundForNature(WWF)suggests:Eatmoreplants:havemorevegetablesandwholegrains(全谷類);Eatavarietyoffoods:don’tbepicky(挑剔的)andhaveacolorfulplate;Eatfewerfoodshighinfat,saltandsugar;…Writeanarticleansweringthefollowingtwoquestions.Wewillpublishthebestoneinournewspaper.1.Whyisitimportanttoformhealthyeatinghabits?2.Howcanyouformhealthyeatinghabits?注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右，題目已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)反映考生信息的真實(shí)人名、地名等內(nèi)容。Formhealthyeatinghabits___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________