應用文：求助信

求助信【試題探究】假定你是李華,你和同學根據(jù)英語課文改編了一個短劇。請你給外教MissEvans寫一封郵件,請她幫忙指導。郵件內(nèi)容包括:1.劇情簡介;2.指導內(nèi)容;3.商定時間、地點。注意:寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右。Step1:精準審題謀篇布局人稱第一人稱、第二人稱時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時和現(xiàn)在完成時要點1.寫郵件的目的2.說明求助事項Step2:字斟句酌巧飾亮點要點1:我寫郵件是想就我們改編自課本的一個劇本征求您的意見。①高級詞匯:I’mwritingtoaskyouforadviceregardingaplayadaptedfromourtextbook.②高級句式(利用定語從句升級):I’mwritingtoaskyouforadviceregardingaplaythatwehaveadaptedfromourtextbook.要點2:我們不確定情節(jié)是否完整,我們也想知道如何使用適當?shù)恼Z氣來完美地說臺詞。①高級詞匯和句式(賓語從句):Weareuncertainwhethertheplotiscomplete.Wearealsowonderinghowtousepropertonestospeakthelinesperfectly.②高級句式(利用notonly...butalso合并兩個句子):Wearenotonlyuncertainwhethertheplotiscomplete,butalsowearewonderinghowtousepropertonestospeakthelinesperfectly.③高級句式(利用倒裝句升級):Notonlyareweuncertainwhethertheplotiscomplete,butalsowearewonderinghowtousepropertonestospeakthelinesperfectly.Step3:銜接過渡斐然成篇DearMissEvans,Howiseverythinggoing?I’mwritingtoaskyouforadviceregardingaplaythatwehaveadaptedfromourtextbook.Theplayisabouthowmoneyinfluencestheattitudeofpeopletreatingothers.However,notonlyareweuncertainwhethertheplotiscomplete,butalsowearewonderinghowtousepropertonestospeakthelinesperfectly.Hopefully,youwouldbesokindastogiveussomeguidance.Ifit’sconvenientforyou,let’smeetat8:30a.m.tomorrowintheschooltheater.We’dappreciateitifyoucoulddousafavor.Yours,LiHua【句式儲備】1.篇頭——開篇表意,請求幫助①Iwonderifyoucoulddomeafavortopickupmyuncleattheairport.我想知道你是否能幫我一個忙,到機場接我叔叔。②Wouldyouliketodomeafavortohavemydraftpolished?你愿意幫我潤色草稿嗎?2.篇中——詳細描述,講清困難①Facedwiththeaboveproblems,Iamanxioustogetyourhelp.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomeadviceonmathslearning?面對上述問題,我渴望得到你的幫助。你能給我一些數(shù)學學習建議嗎?②Now,Istrugglealotinmystudy.I’vefoundthathardlydoItakesportsduetotoomuchhomework.現(xiàn)在,我在學習上很痛苦。我發(fā)現(xiàn)由于作業(yè)太多,我?guī)缀鯖]時間運動。3.結(jié)尾——盼回復,希望得到幫助①Iwonderifyoucanhelpmewiththesedifficulties.Iwouldreallyappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.我想知道你能不能幫我解決這些困難。如果你能幫助我,我真的很感激。②Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldoffermesomenecessary/timelyhelp(give/lendmesomepractical/valuableadvice).如果你能給我一些必要的幫助/及時的幫助(給我一些實用的/有價值的建議)我會很感激?！就卣箖洹考俣闶抢钊A。最近你校英語俱樂部將舉辦主題為“魅力中國”的演講比賽,請給你的外教Cheslie寫一封電子郵件,請她幫助潤色你的演講稿并給予你有關演講技巧的指導。內(nèi)容包括:1.寫信原因;2.你的困惑;3.請求幫助。注意:1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右;2.可適當增加細節(jié),以使行文連貫。DearCheslie,Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【參考范文】DearCheslie,Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.I’llparticipateinanEnglishspeechcontestwiththetitle“CharmingChina”.I’vefinishedmyspeechdraft,butIfinditfarfromsatisfactory.Firstly,I’mnotsureofsomeproperexpressionsinEnglishandnotawareofthemistakesingrammarandsentencestructures.Wouldyoupleasegothroughtheattachmenttothisemailandthenhelpmecorrectthemistakesandpolishthespeechdraft?Besides,Iamprettynervousaboutthespeech,soI’dlikeyoutooffermesomepresentationskills,whichcanimprovemyperformance.I’dappreciateitifyoucouldgivemeyourguidance.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!Yourssincerely,LiHua【要點精練】1．假定你是李華，你的英語聽力存在一些問題，你想讓你的英國筆友Wesley給你推薦幾個提高英語聽力水平的網(wǎng)站。請你給他發(fā)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.你的英語聽力情況介紹；2.提出請求；3.期待回復。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearWesley,Howareyoudoing?___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua2．假設你是李華，去紐約旅游，從機場乘一輛黃色的出租車去假日飯店(HolidayInn)，到達酒店后發(fā)現(xiàn)遺失了一件行李箱。在失物招領處，工作人員要求你用英文寫一份書面材料。內(nèi)容包括：●行李遺失的過程；●行李箱的概況；●聯(lián)系電話:1-703-3543269。注意：1.字數(shù)80左右。2.文章中不能出現(xiàn)個人真實信息。DearSir/Madam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua3．假定你是學生李華，你寫了一篇介紹剪紙藝術的英文博客（blog），希望請外籍教師Bob潤色一下。請你給他寫一封電子郵件。內(nèi)容包括：1.寫信的事由：2.表達感激。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80個左右：2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearBob._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely.LiHua4．假定你是李華。自進入高中以來你媽媽不允許你使用智能手機，她認為這會影響學習和視力，而你認為智能手機能解決學習中的困惑且方便與同學交流。你們之間的沖突讓你感到很苦惱。請你用英語給某英語報社編輯Mr.Advice寫一封信尋求幫助。注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．假定你是李華，你的英國朋友Jenny這學期作為交換生第一次離開父母來到中國學習，常常感覺孤獨，來信向你求助。請你給Jenny回信，要點包括：1、表示理解;

2、你的建議及理由;

3、表示祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右;2.可適當增添細節(jié)，以使行文連貫;3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJenny,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua6．假定你是學校音樂俱樂部的負責人李華，在做戶外音樂會的準備工作時遇到了一些問題。請給有組織經(jīng)驗的美國筆友Jack寫一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.介紹準備情況；2.征求建議。DearJack,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,sincerelyLiHua7．假設你是李華，是一名高三學生，你面臨著畢業(yè)也面臨著職業(yè)的選擇，但是你很迷茫，不知道如何選擇和判斷自己未來適合從事哪種工作，為此你寫信給已是大學一年級的美國朋友Lily，希望她能給你一些建議。信的內(nèi)容如下：①你面臨職業(yè)選擇的迷茫；②希望對方給出一些建議；③感謝和祝福對方。注意事項：①詞數(shù)在80左右；②可以適當增加細節(jié)使行文流暢。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假定你是校英語戲劇社社長李華，在排練課本劇《百萬英鎊》TheMillionPoundNote中AtTheTailors這一幕時遇到一些困難，希望得到同樣酷愛戲劇表演的外教Betty老師的指導。你發(fā)郵件邀請她來排練現(xiàn)場，并請求她的幫助。內(nèi)容包括：(1)發(fā)出誠摯邀請；(2)說明排練難處；(3)請求現(xiàn)場指導。注意：(1)寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右；(2)請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。參考詞匯：排練v.rehearse

n.rehearsalDearBetty,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua參考答案1．DearWesley,Howareyoudoing?Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.Asyouknow,myEnglishlisteningskillsarenotasstrongasI’dlikethemtobe.Despitemyeffortstoimprove,IstillfinditchallengingtounderstandspokenEnglish,especiallywhenitcomestoaccentsorfast-pacedconversations.ConsideringyourproficiencyinEnglishandyourfamiliaritywithonlineresources,IwaswonderingifyoucouldrecommendsomewebsitesoronlineplatformsthatarespecificallydesignedtoenhanceEnglishlisteningskills.I’dgreatlyappreciateyourassistanceandlookforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。題目要求學生以李華的身份，給英國筆友Wesley發(fā)一封電子郵件，請求他給聽力存在一些問題的自己推薦幾個提高英語聽力水平的網(wǎng)站?！疽c分析】1.詞匯積累盡管：despite→inspiteof英語口語：spokenEnglish→oralEnglish考慮到：considering→given/inviewof提高：enhance→elevate2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Iamwritingtoaskyoutodomeafavor.拓展句：Iamwritingtoaskifyoucandomeafavor.[高分句型1]Despitemyeffortstoimprove,IstillfinditchallengingtounderstandspokenEnglish,especiallywhenitcomestoaccentsorfast-pacedconversations.(運用了when引導時間狀語從句)[高分句型2]ConsideringyourproficiencyinEnglishandyourfamiliaritywithonlineresources,IwaswonderingifyoucouldrecommendsomewebsitesoronlineplatformsthatarespecificallydesignedtoenhanceEnglishlisteningskills.(運用了if引導賓語從句、that引導限制性定語從句)2．DearSir/Madam,I’mLiHua,atouristfromChina.Thismorning,IarrivedatNewYorkairportandtookayellowtaxitoHolidayInn.Unfortunately,onreachingthehotel,Idiscoveredoneofmysuitcaseslostinthetaxi.Whatwasworse,Itooknonoticeoftheplatenumber.Thesuitcaseisablackplasticone,about60cmby40cmby16cm.Thereisavideocamera,twopairsofpantsandsomebooksforchildreninit.Thecamerahasrecordedallmyexperienceinthiscountry,whichmeansalottome.WhenyouhavegotANYinformationofmysuitcase,pleasecontactmeat1-703-3543269.Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作解析】這是一封求助信。要求考生以李華的身份，就你去紐約旅游，從機場乘一輛黃色的出租車去假日飯店(HolidayInn)，到達酒店后發(fā)現(xiàn)遺失了一件行李箱，在失物招領處，工作人員要求你用英文寫一份書面材料一事，寫一封求助信?！疽c分析】1.詞匯積累到達：arriveat→attainthedestinationof注意：takenoticeof→bemindfulof大約：about→approximately得到：get→obtain2.句式拓展同義句改寫原句：Thismorning,IarrivedatNewYorkairportandtookayellowtaxitoHolidayInn.拓展句：Thismorning,uponmyarrivalatNewYorkairport,Iembarkedonajourneyinayellowtaxi,whichconveyedmetoHolidayInn.【高分句型1】Unfortunately,onreachingthehotel,Idiscoveredoneofmysuitcaseslostinthetaxi.（使用了介詞短語作狀語）【高分句型2】Thecamerahasrecordedallmyexperienceinthiscountry,whichmeansalottome.（使用了關系代詞which引導的非限制性定語從句，先行詞為前面一整句話表示的內(nèi)容）3．DearBob,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.Iamwritingtorequestyourexpertguidanceonmyrecentblogpost,“AJourneyThroughtheIntricateLabyrinthsofChinesePaper-CuttingArt,”whereIdelveintothebeautyandculturallegacyofthisage-oldcraft.Givenyourlinguisticprowessanddeepculturalunderstanding,Ibelieveyourinputwouldsignificantlyenhanceitsclarityandappeal.Ikindlyaskforyourassistanceinreviewingmydraft,seekinganygrammaticalcorrections,refiningsentencestructures,andofferinginsightstobetterarticulatethedistinctivetechniquesandrichhistoryofpaper-cutting.Yourfeedbackwillnotonlyrefinemywritingbutalsodeepenthereaders’appreciationofthisfascinatingtradition.Thankyouinanticipationofyoursupport.Yourssincerely,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。要求考生請外教Bob寫信潤色一篇介紹剪紙藝術的英文博客。【要點分析】1.詞匯積累幫助：assistance→help提高：enhance→increase提供：offering→providing迷人的：fascinating→charming2.句式拓展同義句替換原句：Thankyouinanticipationofyoursupport.同義句：Ieagerlyanticipateyourvaluablesupport,knowingitwillsignificantlycontributetotheexcellenceofmyblogpost.【高分句型1】Iamwritingtorequestyourexpertguidanceonmyrecentblogpost,“AJourneyThroughtheIntricateLabyrinthsofChinesePaper-CuttingArt,”whereIdelveintothebeautyandculturallegacyofthisage-oldcraft.(運用了where引導的非限制性定語從句)【高分句型2】Yourfeedbackwillnotonlyrefinemywritingbutalsodeepenthereaders’appreciationofthisfascinatingtradition.(運用了not…only…but…also…連接的并列句)4．DearMr.Advice,IamLiHua,aSeniorHighstudent.Ihavebeentroubledbyaproblemandhavetoaskyouafavorwiththehopethatyouwillbekindenoughtohelpmeout.Mymotherhasnotallowedmetousemysmartphonesincethebeginningofthenewterm.Inheropinion,smartphoneswillhaveanegativeeffectonmystudiesandeyesight.However,Idon’tagreewithher.Withthephone,Icaneasilyfindanswerstosomedifficultquestions.Meanwhile,Icansharemyworriesandjoyswithmyfriendsonline,whichcanhelptoreducemystress.WhatdoyouthinkIshoulddo?I’dappreciateitifyoucanoffermesomepracticalsuggestions.Yours,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文?？忌赃M入高中以來，媽媽不允許考生使用智能手機，她認為這會影響學習和視力，而考生認為智能手機能解決學習中的困惑且方便與同學交流。和媽媽之間的沖突讓考生感到很苦惱，要求考生按照要求用英語給某英語報社編輯Mr.Advice寫一封信尋求幫助?！疽c分析】1.詞匯積累幫助某人：helpsb.out→givesb.ahand允許：allow→permit意見，看法：opinion→view消極的：negative→passive2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：IamLiHua,aSeniorHighstudent.拓展句：IamLiHua,whoisaSeniorHighstudent.【高分句型1】Ihavebeentroubledbyaproblemandhavetoaskyouafavorwiththehopethatyouwillbekindenoughtohelpmeout.(運用了that引導的同位語從句)【高分句型2】Meanwhile,Icansharemyworriesandjoyswithmyfriendsonline,whichcanhelptoreducemystress.(運用了which引導的非限制性定語從句)5．DearJenny,Youwrotethatyoualwaysfeellonelybecauseit’sthefirsttimethatyouhavebeenawayfromyourparentsandstudiedinChinaasanexchangedstudent.Iunderstandyouquitewellandperhapsthefollowingsuggestionsmaybehelpful.Firstofall,Irecommendthatyoumakevideocallswithyourparentsfromtimetotime,whichwillhelptoreduceyourloneliness.Besides,itwouldbeagoodideatotakepartinsomeextra-curricularactivities.Inthisway,youcanmakemorefriendsandleadamorecolorfullife.Idohopethatmyadvicewillbeofsomeusetoyouandthatyouwilladapttothenewlifesoon.

Yours,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。你的英國朋友Jenny作為交換生感覺孤獨，來信向你求助，現(xiàn)要求考生給他回信。其內(nèi)容包括：表示理解、你的建議及理由和表示祝愿?！疽c分析】1.詞匯積累建議：suggestion→advice首先：firstofall→tobeginwith而且：besides→moreover適應：adaptto→fitinwith2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：Besides,itwouldbeagoodideatotakepartinsomeextra-curricularactivities.Inthisway,youcanmakemorefriendsandleadamorecolorfullife.拓展句：Besides,itwouldbeagoodideatotakepartinsomeextra-curricularactivities,throughwhichyoucanmakemorefriendsandleadamorecolorfullife.【高分句型1】Firstofall,Irecommendthatyoumakevideocallswithyourparentsfromtimetotime,whichwillhelptoreduceyourloneliness.（運用了虛擬語氣和which引導的非限制性定語從句）【高分句型2】Idohopethatmyadvicewillbeofsomeusetoyouandthatyouwilladapttothenewlifesoon.（運用了that引導的賓語從句）6．DearJack,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?Iaminchargeofourschoolconcertclub.NowIcomeacrosssomeproblemswhenpreparingforanoutdoorconcert.Knowingthatyouhaverichexperienceinorganizingsuchkindofevent,I’mwritingtoaskforyoursuggestions.Ihavealreadymadesomepreparationsforit.Forexample,thetimeandplaceaswellasthethemeoftheconcerthavebeenannouncedpubliclytousstudents.ButthedifficultiesthatI’mfacedwithduringarrangement(安排、籌備)upset(使苦惱)mesomuch.Tobeginwith,I’mnotsureabouthowtoarrangethevenue(布置場地)toleaveagoodimpressionontheaudience.WhatmakesmemorefrustratedisthatIdon’tknowhowtohosttheconcert.Bytheway,isitnecessaryfortheperformerstoputonmake-up?I’mveryanxioustogetyoursuggestionsabouttheproblemsmentionedabove.I’mconvincedthatyourpreciousadvicewillmakeagreatdifferencetomypreparingfortheconcert.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreplyatyourmostconvenience.Yours,sincerelyLiHua【寫作解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文。你是學校音樂俱樂部的負責人李華，在做戶外音樂會的準備工作時遇到了一些問題。要求考生給有組織經(jīng)驗的美國筆友Jack寫一封電子郵件介紹準備情況和征求建議。【要點分析】1.詞匯積累負責：beinchargeof→takechargeof活動：event→activity沮喪的：frustrated→depressed焦慮的：anxious→worried/nervous2.句式拓展簡單句變復合句原句：I’mveryanxioustogetyoursuggestionsabouttheproblemsmentionedabove.拓展句：I’mveryanxioustogetyoursuggestionsabouttheproblemswhicharementionedabove.【高分句型1】Knowingthatyouhaverichexperienceinorganizingsuchkindofevent,I’mwritingtoaskforyoursuggestions.（運用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語和that引導的賓語從句結(jié)構）【高分句型2】WhatmakesmemorefrustratedisthatIdon’tknowhowtohosttheconcert.（運用了what引導的主語從句和that引導的表語從句）7．DearLily,Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.Iamwritingtosharewithyoumyconfusionaboutmyfuturecareerchoice.Asahighschoolsenior,Iamatacrossroads,uncertainaboutwhichpathtotake.Withgraduationlooming,Ifindmyselfoverwhelmedwithpossibilities,yetcluelessastowhichonewouldbethemostsuitableforme.Iknowyouwentthroughthisphasenottoolongago,andIwaswonderingifyoucouldoffersomeinsightoradvicebasedonyourexperience.Perhapsyoucouldsharehowyounarroweddownyouroptionsorwhatfactorsyouconsideredwhenmakingyourdecision.Anyguidancewouldbegreatlyappreciated.Thankyouinadvanceforyourhelp.Iwishyouallthebestinyourstudiesandhopetoseeyousoon.Sincerely,LiHua【寫作解析】本篇是應用文寫作。你是一名高三學生，你面臨著畢業(yè)也面臨著職業(yè)的選擇，但是你很迷茫，不知道如何選擇和判斷自己未來適合從事哪種工作，要求考生為此寫信給已是大學一年級的美國朋友Lily，希望她能給你一些建議。【要點分析】1.詞匯積累不確定：uncertain→unsure迫近的：looming→approaching合適的：suitable→fit/appropr