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讀后續(xù)寫：拯救小貓（教師版）

一,＞原文

Myteenageson,Jordan,alwayscomplainedabouthavingtobehomeearlierthanallhis

friends.Hewouldtellmethathewasalreadyseventeen,butstillhadacurfew（宵禁）.He

believedhewaspracticallyanadult.Ipointedoutthathewasnotanadultashewasstillin

highschool.

“Youdon'ttrustme!"heyelled.BeforeIcontinued,herolledhiseyes,slammedthe

doorandwalkedaway.Isighed.HowcouldImakeJordanseethatIonlywantedtokeephim

safe?

Idecidedtogoforawalk,hopingtheDecemberairwouldclearmyhead.Iopenedthefront

doorandnearlysteppedonher:asmallblackcat,justlikeameatball."Hi,Meatball,“Isaid,

bringingherintomyarms.Iwalkedbackin,touchingherneckgently.Meatbailseemedhappy

enoughtocomeinthehouse,butafteranhourortwo,shesatbythedoor,meowingtogoback

outside.

“Whywon'tshejuststayinwithusalltheNathan,myyoungestsonasked.

Iexplainedtohimthatshewashappyherebutshelikedbeingabletocomeandgoas

shepleased.

“Thatmustbenice,^^Jordanmutteredfromtheotherroom,complainingwhythecat,

nothim,couldcomeandgo.HeevenaskedmetogiveMeatbailacurfew.

Meatballbecamearegular.

Onenight,temperatureswereunusuallylow.Meatballstoodatthedoor,meowingtogooutside.I

shookmyheadather,afraidthatshemightfreezetodeath.Shestaredatmeandmeowedagain.I

pattedherhead,"Iknowyou'renothappy,butit*sforyourowngood.”

“Mom'snotbeingmeantoyou,“Nathantoldthecat."She'sjusttryingtokeepyoufrom

turningintoafrozenmeatball.^^Webothlaughedathisjoke.

Thenextmorning,Icouldn'tfindMeatbail.Iaskedthekidsifanyonehadseenher.

Paragraph1:Jordannodded,'〕letheroutlastnight.”

Paragraph2;As/drovetotheanimalhospital,JoYdcmsatintheback,holdingMeatball

insidehiscoat.

二、分句練習

Paral:Jordannodded,（iIletheroutlastnight.

(1)我?guī)缀跤妙澏兜穆曇艉鹆似饋怼！八龝鏊赖摹３鋈フ宜?！?/p>

①用顫抖的聲音inatremblingvoiceIalmostroaredinatremblingvoice."She

②凍死freezetodeathwillfreezetodeath.Gooutandfindher!”

(2)我們毫不遲疑地沖了出去，試圖尋找戶球的蹤跡。

①①沖沖出出去去ttrrottouttsiideeWetrottedoutsidewithoutdelay,

②毫不遲疑withoutdelayattemptingtosearchforthetracefor

③…的蹤跡thetracefbr...Meatball.

(3)“她在這里'吶森叫道，臉上帶著絕望的恐懼和焦慮的表情。

①帶著……的表情withanexpressionof...“Heresheis!”Nathanexclaimed,withan

onone'sfaceexpressionofdesperatefearandanxietyon

②絕望的恐懼desperatefearhisface.

(4)那可憐的東西被發(fā)現(xiàn)躺在外面的花園里，發(fā)抖且渾身濕透。

①被發(fā)現(xiàn)正在做某事befounddoingsthThepoorthingwasfoundlyingoutinthe

②渾身allovergarden,shakyandwetallover.

(5)蹲下來，我檢查了她的情況，歇斯底里地喊道:“我們應該開車送她去動物醫(yī)院?，F(xiàn)

在！”

①蹲下來crouchdownCrouchingdown,Icheckedherconditionand

②歇斯底里地hystericallyyelledhysterically,uWeshoulddrivehertothe

/hi'stenkli/animalhospital.Now!”

Para2:AsIdrovetotheanimalhospital,Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinsidehis

coat.

(1)我們靜靜地坐著，偶爾，內森痹鼻子的聲音會穿透寂靜的空氣。

①靜靜地insilence

Wesatinsilenceandoccasionally,thesoundof

②偶爾occasionally

Nathanblowinghisnosewouldpiercethrough

③痹鼻涕blowone'snose

thesilentair.

④刺穿pierce/pios/

(2)從后視鏡里，我看到喬丹的眼睛里充滿了悔恨的淚水。

①后視鏡therear-viewmirrorFromtherear-viewmirror,Icouldsee

②含滿〔淚水〕brimJordan'seyesbrimmedwithregretful

/'moIstforalz/tears.

(3)“對不起，我只是想讓她自由。我不是有意的……”后面?zhèn)鱽韱痰さ牡驼Z。

①讓某人自由setsbfree“Sorry,Ijustwanttosetherfree.Ididn't

②有意做某事meantodosthmeanto??."fromthebackcameJordan's

③低語whisperwhisper.

(4)顯然，他完全意識到了自己行為的嚴重后果。

①意識到某事beawokentosthObviously,hewasfullyawokentothe

②某人行為的后果theconsequenceofseriousconsequencesofhisact.

one'sact

(5)幸運的是，獸醫(yī)成功地把肉球從死亡的邊緣拉了回來。

①獸醫(yī)vetFortunately,thevetmanagedtopull

②把某人從死亡邊緣拉回來pullsbfromtheMeatbailfromthebrinkofdeath.

brinkofdeath

(6)她剛蘇醒過來，喬丹就誠懇地向我道目炎。

①蘇醒comebacktolifeScarcelyhadshecomebacktolifewhen

②一…就…ScarcelyhadsbdoneJordanapologizedtomesincerely.

whensbdid

(7)他不再抱怨宵禁了，他知道這是為了，也好。

①為了某人好forone'sowngoodHedidn'tcomplainaboutthecurfew

anymore,which,heknewwasforhisown

good.

三、最終自測

Jordannodded,(tIletheroutlastnight.我?guī)缀跤妙澏兜穆曇艉鹆似饋??！八龝鏊?/p>

的。出去找她！”我們毫不遲疑地沖了出去，試圖尋找肉球的蹤跡?！八谶@里”內森叫

道，臉上帶著絕望的恐懼和焦慮的表情。那可憐的東西被發(fā)現(xiàn)躺在外面的花園里，發(fā)抖

且渾身濕透。蹲下來，我檢查了她的情況，歇斯底里地喊道:“我們應該開車送她去動物

醫(yī)院。現(xiàn)在！“

AsIdrovetotheanimalhospital,Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinsidehis

co點.我們靜靜地坐著，偶爾，內森探鼻子的聲音會穿透寂靜的空氣。從后視鏡里，我看

到喬丹的眼睛里充滿了悔恨的淚水。“對不起，我只是想讓她自由。我不是故意的……”

后面?zhèn)鱽韱痰さ牡驼Z。顯然，他完全意識到了自己行為的嚴重后果。幸運的是，獸醫(yī)成

功地把肉球從死亡的邊緣拉了回來。她剛蘇醒過來，喬丹就誠懇地向我道歉。他不再抱

怨宵禁了，他知道這是為了他好。

四、最終范文

Paral:Jordannodded,'7letheroutlastnight."Ialmostroaredinatremblingvoice.

“Shewillfreezetodeath.Gooutandfindher!,9Wetrottedoutsidewithoutdelay,attempting

tosearchforthetraceforMeatbail."Heresheis!”Nathanexclaimed,withanexpressionof

desperatefearandanxietyonhisface.Thepoorthingwasfoundlyingoutinthegarden,

shakyandwetallover.Crouchingdown,Icheckedherconditionandyelledhysterically,C6We

shoulddrivehertotheanimalhospital.Now!”

Para2:AsIdrovetotheanimalhospital,Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinside

hiscoat.Wesatinsilenceandoccasionally,thesoundofNathanblowinghisnosewould

piercethroughthesilentair.Fromtherear-viewmirror,IcouldseeJordan'seyes

moisturizingwithregretfultears."Sorry,Ijustwanttosetherfree.Ididn'tmeanfrom

thebackcameJordan'swhisper.Obviously,hewasfullyawokentotheseriousconsequences

ofhisact.Fortunately,thevetmanagedtopullMeatbailfromthebrinkofdeath.Scarcelyhad

shecomebacktolifewhenJordanapologizedtomesincerely.Hedidn'tcomplainaboutthe

curfewanymore,which,heknewwasforhisowngood.

讀后續(xù)寫：拯救小貓（學生版）

一,＞原文

Myteenageson,Jordan,alwayscomplainedabouthavingtobehomeearlierthanallhis

friends.Hewouldtellmethathewasalreadyseventeen,butstillhadacurfew（宵禁）.He

believedhewaspracticallyanadult.Ipointedoutthathewasnotanadultashewasstillin

highschool.

“Youdon'ttrustme!”heyelled.BeforeIcontinued,herolledhiseyes,slammedthe

doorandwalkedaway.Isighed.HowcouldImakeJordanseethatIonlywantedtokeephim

safe?

Idecidedtogoforawalk,hopingtheDecemberairwouldclearmyhead.Iopenedthefront

doorandnearlysteppedonher:asmallblackcat,justlikeameatbail."Hi,Meatball,“Isaid,

bringingherintomyarms.Iwalkedbackin,touchingherneckgently.Meatbailseemedhappy

enoughtocomeinthehouse,butafteranhourortwo,shesatbythedoor,meowingtogoback

outside.

“Whywon'tshejuststayinwithusalltheNathan,myyoungestsonasked.

Iexplainedtohimthatshewashappyherebutshelikedbeingabletocomeandgoas

shepleased.

“Thatmustbenice,^^Jordanmutteredfromtheotherroom,complainingwhythecat,

nothim,couldcomeandgo.HeevenaskedmetogiveMeatbailacurfew.

Meatballbecamearegular.

Onenight,temperatureswereunusuallylow.Meatbailstoodatthedoor,meowingtogooutside.I

shookmyheadather,afraidthatshemightfreezetodeath.Shestaredatmeandmeowedagain.I

pattedherhead,"Iknowyou'renothappy,butit*sforyourowngood.”

“Mom'snotbeingmeantoyou,“Nathantoldthecat."She'sjusttryingtokeepyoufrom

turningintoafrozenmeatball.^^Webothlaughedathisjoke.

Thenextmorning,Icouldn'tfindMeatbail.Iaskedthekidsifanyonehadseenher.

Paragraph1:Jordannodded,“Iletheroutlastnight.”

Paragraph2;As/drovetotheanimalhospital,Jovdcmsatintheback,holdingMeatball

insidehiscoat.

二、分句練習

Paral:Jordannodded,<(Iletheroutlastnight.

(1)我?guī)缀跤妙澏兜穆曇艉鹆似饋?。“她會凍死的。出去找她！?/p>

①用顫抖的聲音inatremblingvoice

②凍死freezetodeath

(2)我們毫不遲疑地沖了出去，試圖尋找肉球的蹤跡。

①沖出去trotoutside

②毫不遲疑withoutdelay

③…的蹤跡thetracefbr...

(3)“她在這里''內森叫道，臉上帶著絕望的恐懼和焦慮的表情。

①帶著……的表情withanexpressionof...

onone'sface

②絕望的恐懼desperatefear

(4)那可憐的東西被發(fā)現(xiàn)躺在外面的花園里，發(fā)抖且渾身濕透。

①被發(fā)現(xiàn)正在做某事befounddoingsth

②渾身allover

(5)蹲下來，我檢查了她的情況，歇斯底里地喊道:“我們應該開車送她去動物醫(yī)院?，F(xiàn)

在！”

①蹲下來crouchdown

②歇斯底里地hysterically

/hi'stenkli/

Para2:AsIdrovetotheanimalhospital,Jordansatintheback,holdingMeatballinsidehis

coat.

(1)我們靜靜地坐著，偶爾，內森痹鼻子的聲音會穿透寂靜的空氣。

①靜靜地insilence

②偶爾occasionally

③攥鼻涕blowone'snose

④刺穿pierce/pios/

(2)從后視鏡里，我看到喬丹的眼睛里充滿了悔恨的淚水。

①后視鏡therear-viewmirror