高考英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)之作文提分要訣 02 詞匯使用出彩（含解析）-人教版高三英語試題

詞匯使用出彩滿分攻略滿分攻略攻略---詞匯妙用的黃金法則1切忌“人云亦云”寫作時，恰當(dāng)?shù)皿w地使用別人可能想不到的詞匯或表達，會給閱卷老師耳目一新的感覺。①tell→inform/share告訴·(2019·全國卷Ⅱ滿分作文)I'mwritingtoinformyouthatwewillhaveavolleyballmatchnextmonth.我寫信告訴你我們下個月有一場排球賽。②proper→appropriate合適的·(2018·全國卷Ⅰ滿分作文)Inmyview,you'dbetterbringanappropriategifttoyourChinesefriend.我認為，你最好給你的中國朋友帶一份合適的禮物。③chance→opportunity機會·(2019·全國卷Ⅰ滿分作文)Ifofferedtheopportunitytobeavolunteer,Iwilldoitwellandliveuptoyourexpectations.如果提供給我這個做志愿者的機會，我會努力做好以不辜負你的期望。④besureto→beboundto一定·(2018·全國卷Ⅱ滿分作文)Youareboundtohaveagoodknowledgeofthehistoryofourschool.你一定會了解我們學(xué)校的歷史。2.提倡短語優(yōu)先在寫作中，要想吸引閱卷老師，就要多使用短語來代替一些單詞，這樣會使表達更生動。①should→besupposedto應(yīng)該·(2018·全國卷Ⅰ滿分作文)Youaresupposedtoarriveontimeoralittleearlier.你應(yīng)該按時或早點兒到達。②believe→beconvinced(of)相信·(2018·天津高考滿分作文)Iamconvincedyourparticipationwillsurelycontributetoourwinningthecompetition.我相信你的參與肯定會助我們贏得比賽。③master→haveagoodcommand/knowledgeof精通·(2019·全國卷Ⅰ滿分作文)IhaveagoodcommandofspokenEnglish，thusmakingiteasyformetocommunicatewithvisitors.我精通英語口語，因此我很容易與游客交流。④about→concerning/regarding/relatedto關(guān)于·(2018·全國卷Ⅰ滿分作文)I'dliketosharewithyousomedetailsconcerning/regarding/relatedtoChinesetablemanners.我想向你講述一些與中國餐桌禮儀相關(guān)的細節(jié)。⑤therefore→asaresult/consequence因此·(2018·全國卷Ⅱ滿分作文)Therearenotenoughseatsavailable,asaresult/consequence,justarrivealittleearlier.因為座位不多，因此，早點到場。3.表達手法多樣在表達相近或相同意思時，要盡量避免重復(fù)使用相同的詞匯，而是靈活運用其他恰當(dāng)?shù)耐x詞、近義詞或利用構(gòu)詞法進行詞形轉(zhuǎn)換，從而給閱卷老師耳目一新之感?！?2018·北京高考滿分作文)Whatameaningful/rewardingexperienceitistopromotetraditionalChineseculture!傳播中國傳統(tǒng)文化是多么有意義的經(jīng)歷??！·(2018·天津高考)Wehavebeenoccupied/engaged/buriedinmakingpreparationsforthecompetition.我們一直忙于準(zhǔn)備比賽。4.用詞準(zhǔn)確恰當(dāng)佳句展示在寫作時，不能為了一味追求高級詞匯而堆砌高級詞匯或使用難詞和生僻詞匯，應(yīng)根據(jù)寫作要求選用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯，以完成規(guī)定的寫作任務(wù)。佳句展示高級詞匯升級句子表述。1.Besides,youmayhavethechancetoplaywithoutstandingplayers.In_addition;_opportunity2.I'llbegladifyoucanconsidermyrecommendation.delighted3.Developingagoodhabitisalsoimportant.of_importance4.Weallhavethesameopportunity.possess5.Theansweriscertainlythelatter.definitely6.IhavedecidedtobeateacherwhenIgrowup.determined/made_up_my_mind7.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldconsidermyadvice.take_my_advice_into_account/consideration8.Finally,Ifoundthebookreallyinterestingandthatitwaswellworthreading.Eventually;_absorbing/striking/appealing真題演練真題演練(2020年，全國卷I）你校正在組織英語作文比賽。請以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽，內(nèi)容包括:1.人物簡介；2.尊敬和愛戴的原因。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.短文題目和首句已為你寫好。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【參考范文】ThepersonIrespectWehavealotofrespectablepeoplearoundus.Theymaybeourteachers,parentsoroneofourelders.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmost.Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.WhenIcomeacrosstheproblemsoflearninginmystudy,myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.Heachievedalotinhiswork,respectedbyhisstudents.So,inmymindmyfatheristhepersonIrespectmostandIlovehimdeeply.【寫作解析】本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文。要求學(xué)生以身邊值得尊敬和愛戴的人為題，寫一篇短文參賽。第一步：審題體裁：應(yīng)用文。時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法。要求：1.人物簡介：2.尊敬和愛戴的原因。第二步：列提綱（重點短語）Asforme；sparesometime；listentomepatiently;第三步：連詞成句1.Asforme,myfatheristhepersonIrespectmostly.2.Heworksveryhardeverydaybuthewillalsosparesometimetoaccompanymeandsharemanyfunnythingswithmeabouthiswork.3.Myfatherwilllistentomepatientlyandencouragemetoovercomethedifficultiesbravely.根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇1.表示文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：介紹人物；闡述原因2.表示并列補充關(guān)系：Asfor;and;but;So第五步：潤色修改【范文點評】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)，上下文意思連貫。復(fù)合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中使用了較多的高端句式，如定語從句：Myfatherisateacherwholoveshisworkandhisstudentsverymuch；非謂語動詞：Heachievedalotinh