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自負(fù)導(dǎo)致比賽失?。ń處煱妫?/p>
一、原文
Havingheldtheinterschoolstorytellingchampionshipforthepasttwoyears,Iwas
theshiningstarofmyschool.Whenitcametochoosingtherightcandidatetoparticipatein
suchcompetitions,Iwasalwaysthefirstchoice.Naturally,Iwasonceagainselectedto
representmyschoolintheapproachingcontestthisyear.
UponhearingthefactthatIwaschosenagain,myclassmatesandfriendsacknowledged
thatIwouldundoubtedlyemergeasthechampionagain.Consequently,Ibecameconceited.I
wassoproudthatIneglectedtheimportanceofpracticingforthecontest.
Aweekbeforethecontest,myteacherMs.Saraasked,“Selena,wouldyouliketostand
infrontoftheclasstorehearseforthecontest?,,Shehadtutoredmeinthepasttwo
competitionsandknewhowimportantpracticewas."Justimagineyouareonthestageinthe
,
presenceoftheaudience9,sheadded.
'Tmsorry,Ms.Sara,“Ireplied.UIhaveabitofasorethroat.^^
ThiswasusuallythelieIwouldtellwhenevermyteacherrequestedmetopracticein
frontoftheclass.IalwaysfoundexcusestoavoiddoingitbecauseIbelievedthatIwasthe
bestandthereforethepracticewasunnecessary.Ononeoccasion,IeventoldMs.Saranotto
worrytoomuchasIwaswellpreparedforthecontest.Infact,Idideverythingbutpractice
myscript.Ionlymanagedtoglancebrieflythroughthestorythedaybeforethecontest.As
thebeststorytelleramongthestudentsofthelocalsecondaryschools,Iwastoovainto
practiceandexpectedeverythingtobefine.
Thecontestwasbeingheldinthelocalcommunityhall.Onthedayofthecontest,the
hallwaspacked.Myschoolteachersandprincipalweretherealongwithmanyofmy
classmatesandschoolmates.Iwastheeighthcontestantoutoftwentyintotal.Thosewho
spokebeforemedidextremelywell.Onseeingtheirfascinatingandoutstandingperformance,
Ibegantoloseconfidenceinmyself.MypalmssweatedheavilyandIstartedtofeelnervous.
Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.
Finally,resultswewannouncedafterthecontest.
二、分句練習(xí)
Paragraph1:Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.
(1)我鼓起了一些勇氣,走上舞臺(tái),試圖掩蓋我已經(jīng)失去信心的事實(shí)?!厩昂蠖际欠侵^語(yǔ)】
①鼓起勇氣pluckupHavingpluckedupsomecourage,Isteppedontothe
somecouragestage,attemptingtoconcealthefactthatconfidencehad
②隱藏、掩蓋concealdesertedme.
(2)當(dāng)我看到觀眾時(shí),我聽到我的聲音在顫抖,我的腿也在顫抖。【with結(jié)構(gòu),so表示
也】
看至one9sglancemeetWithmyglancemeetingtheaudience,Iheardmyvoicewas
sbtremblingandsoweremylegs.
(3)由于不夠熟練,我甚至在演講的過(guò)程中出現(xiàn)了幾次結(jié)巴,當(dāng)我捕捉到老師、同學(xué)和
校長(zhǎng)驚訝、困惑和失望的表情時(shí),情況變得更糟了?!痉窍薅ㄐ远ㄕZ(yǔ)從句】
①缺乏lackof...Owingtolackofproficiency,Ievenstammereda
②熟練proficiencyfewtimesinthecourseofspeech,whichworsened
③結(jié)巴stammerwhenIcapturedtheastonished,puzzledand
④在…的過(guò)程中inthecourseofdisappointedlookofmyteachers,classmatesand
⑤捕捉captureprincipal.
(4)我想不起是怎么結(jié)束的,只記得我說(shuō)完最后一句話后逃離了舞臺(tái)。當(dāng)然,沒(méi)有任何
掌聲。【exceptfor]
Icouldn,trecallhowitended,exceptformydesperateescapefromthestagewhenI
finishedmylastword.Ofcourse,withoutanyapplause.
Paragraph2:Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.
(1)聽到我沒(méi)有被列入獲獎(jiǎng)名單后,我垂下眼睛,努力躲避周圍人的注視?!痉侵^語(yǔ)】
①將…列入名單list...
HavingheardthatIwasnotlistedamongthewinners,I
②努力做某事
droopedmyeyesandendeavoredtoavoidthegaze
endeavortodo
aroundme.
③注視n.gaze
(2)突然,我感到一只手放到了我的肩膀上。是薩拉老師。
Suddenly,Ifeltahandonmyshoulder.ItwasMs.Sara.
(3)我回頭,看到一雙關(guān)心的眼睛?!皼](méi)關(guān)系”,她用溫柔的聲音安慰我。
①回頭look
backIlookedbackandapairofconcernedeyescameintomysight.
②安慰“It'sOK”,shecomfortedmeinasoftvoice.
comfort
(4)當(dāng)幾個(gè)同學(xué)也圍過(guò)來(lái)安慰我時(shí),我再也抑制不住自己的情緒,淚水奪眶而出,羞愧
和悔恨交織在一起?!綼s從句,with結(jié)構(gòu)】
①聚集在一起gather
Asseveralclassmatesalsogatheredaroundtoconsole
around
②安慰consoleme,Icouldn'tcontainmyemotionsanymoreandmy
③抑制containtearsbrimmedover,withamixtureofshameand
④淚水奪眶而出one'stearsremorseoverwhelmingme.
brimmedover
⑤悔恨r(nóng)emorse
(5)“驕者必?cái)?。愿你永遠(yuǎn)不要再讓自負(fù)阻礙你的成功。”聽到薩拉女士的話,我認(rèn)真地
點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭,決心明年再戰(zhàn)。
①驕兵必?cái)ridegoes
beforeafall.
②愿may+sb+do(原形)
③自負(fù)arrogance,conceit,“Pridegoesbeforeafall.Mayyouneverletarrogance
vanitystandinthewayofyoursuccessagain."hearingwhat
④阻礙standinthewayMs.Sarasaid,Inoddedearnestlywithastrongwillto
of...fightnextyear.
⑤誰(shuí)的話whatsbsaid
④帶著…的決心witha
strongwilltodo...
三、最終自測(cè)
Soon,itwasmytamtotalk.敘鼓起了一■些勇氣,走上舞臺(tái),試圖掩蓋我已經(jīng)失去信心
的事實(shí)。當(dāng)我看到觀眾時(shí),我聽到我的聲音在顫抖,我的腿也在顫抖。由于不夠熟練,
我甚至在演講的過(guò)程中出現(xiàn)了幾次結(jié)巴,當(dāng)我捕捉到老師、同學(xué)和校長(zhǎng)驚訝、困惑和失
望的表情時(shí),情況變得更糟了。我想不起是怎么結(jié)束的,只記得我說(shuō)完最后一句話后逃
離了舞臺(tái)。當(dāng)然,沒(méi)有任何掌聲。
Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.聽到我沒(méi)有被列入獲獎(jiǎng)名單后,我垂
下眼睛,努力躲避周圍人的注視。突然,我感到一只手放到了我的肩膀上。是薩拉老師。
我回頭,看到一雙關(guān)心的眼睛,“沒(méi)關(guān)系”,她用溫柔的聲音安慰我。當(dāng)幾個(gè)同學(xué)也圍過(guò)
來(lái)安慰我時(shí),我再也抑制不住自己的情緒,淚水奪眶而出,羞愧和悔恨交織在一起?!膀?/p>
者必?cái) T改阌肋h(yuǎn)不要再讓自負(fù)阻礙你的成功?!甭牭剿_拉女士的話,我認(rèn)真地點(diǎn)點(diǎn)頭,
決心明年再戰(zhàn)。
四、最終范文
Paragraph1:Soon,itwasturntotalk.Havingpluckedupsomecourage,Istepped
ontothestage,attemptingtoconcealthefactthatconfidencehaddesertedme.Withmy
glancemeetingtheaudience,Iheardmyvoicewastremblingandsoweremylegs.Dueto
lackofproficiency,Ievenstammeredafewtimesinthecourseofspeech,whichworsened
whenIcapturedtheastonished,puzzledanddisappointedlookofmyteachers,classmatesand
principal.Icouldn'trecallhowitended,exceptformydesperateescapefromthestagewhen
Ifinishedmylastword.Ofcourse,withoutanyapplause.
Paragraph2;Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.HavingheardthatIwas
notlistedamongthewinners,Idroppedmyeyesandendeavoredtoavoidthegazearoundme.
Suddenly,Ifeltahandonmyshoulder.ItwasMs.Sara.Ilookedbackandapairofconcerned
eyescameintomysight."It'sOK”,shecomfortedmeinasoftvoice.Asseveralclassmates
alsogatheredaroundtoconsoleme,Icouldn'tcontainmyemotionsanymoreandmytears
brimmedover,withamixtureofshameandremorseoverwhelmingme."Pridegoesbeforea
fall.Mayyouneverletarrogancestandinthewayofyoursuccessagain.^^hearingwhatMs.
Sarasaid,Inoddedearnestlywithastrongwilltofightnextyear.
自負(fù)導(dǎo)致比賽失敗(學(xué)生版)
一、原文
Havingheldtheinterschoolstorytellingchampionshipforthepasttwoyears,Iwas
theshiningstarofmyschool.Whenitcametochoosingtherightcandidatetoparticipatein
suchcompetitions,Iwasalwaysthefirstchoice.Naturally,Iwasonceagainselectedto
representmyschoolintheapproachingcontestthisyear.
UponhearingthefactthatIwaschosenagain,myclassmatesandfriendsacknowledged
thatIwouldundoubtedlyemergeasthechampionagain.Consequently,Ibecameconceited.I
wassoproudthatIneglectedtheimportanceofpracticingforthecontest.
Aweekbeforethecontest,myteacherMs.Saraasked,“Selena,wouldyouliketostand
infrontoftheclasstorehearseforthecontest?,,Shehadtutoredmeinthepasttwo
competitionsandknewhowimportantpracticewas."Justimagineyouareonthestageinthe
,
presenceoftheaudience9,sheadded.
'Tmsorry,Ms.Sara,“Ireplied.UIhaveabitofasorethroat.^^
ThiswasusuallythelieIwouldtellwhenevermyteacherrequestedmetopracticein
frontoftheclass.IalwaysfoundexcusestoavoiddoingitbecauseIbelievedthatIwasthe
bestandthereforethepracticewasunnecessary.Ononeoccasion,IeventoldMs.Saranotto
worrytoomuchasIwaswellpreparedforthecontest.Infact,Idideverythingbutpractice
myscript.Ionlymanagedtoglancebrieflythroughthestorythedaybeforethecontest.As
thebeststorytelleramongthestudentsofthelocalsecondaryschools,Iwastoovainto
practiceandexpectedeverythingtobefine.
Thecontestwasbeingheldinthelocalcommunityhall.Onthedayofthecontest,the
hallwaspacked.Myschoolteachersandprincipalweretherealongwithmanyofmy
classmatesandschoolmates.Iwastheeighthcontestantoutoftwentyintotal.Thosewho
spokebeforemedidextremelywell.Onseeingtheirfascinatingandoutstandingperformance,
Ibegantoloseconfidenceinmyself.MypalmssweatedheavilyandIstartedtofeelnervous.
Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.
Finally,resultsvve-eannouncedafterthecontest.
二、分句練習(xí)
Paragraph1:Soon,itwasmyturntotalk.
(1)我鼓起了一些勇氣,走上舞臺(tái),試圖掩蓋我已經(jīng)失去信心的事實(shí)?!厩昂蠖际欠侵^語(yǔ)】
①鼓起勇氣pluckupsomecourage
②隱藏、掩蓋conceal
(2)當(dāng)我看到觀眾時(shí),我聽到我的聲音在顫抖,我的腿也在顫抖?!緒ith結(jié)構(gòu),so表示
也】
看至Uone'sglancemeetsb
(3)由于不夠熟練,我甚至在演講的過(guò)程中出現(xiàn)了幾次結(jié)巴,當(dāng)我捕捉到老師、同學(xué)和
校長(zhǎng)驚訝、困惑和失望的表情時(shí),情況變得更糟了。【非限定性定語(yǔ)從句】
①缺乏lackof...
②熟練proficiency
③結(jié)巴stammer
④在…的過(guò)程中inthecourseof
⑤捕捉capture
(4)我想不起是怎么結(jié)束的,只記得我說(shuō)完最后一句話后逃離了舞臺(tái)。當(dāng)然,沒(méi)有任何
掌聲。【exceptfor】
Paragraph2:Finally,resultswereannouncedafterthecontest.
(1)聽到我沒(méi)有被列入獲獎(jiǎng)名單后,我垂下眼睛,努力躲避周圍人的注視?!痉侵^語(yǔ)】
①將…列入名單list...
②努力做某事endeavor
todo
③注視n.gaze
(2)突然,我感到一只手放到了我的肩膀上。是薩拉老師。
(4)我回頭,看到一雙關(guān)心的眼睛?!皼](méi)關(guān)系”,她用溫柔的聲音安慰我。
①回頭
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