高二下學(xué)期期中考試讀后續(xù)寫幫老人清掃院子（情節(jié)構(gòu)思過程）學(xué)案

2024年4月高二期中考試讀后續(xù)寫Leo幫老人清掃院子后續(xù)(學(xué)案)第二節(jié)(滿分25分)閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Duringwinter,Leonoticedthatofallthehousesontheblock,therewasonewithamessy,dirtyyardthatlookedunattended.Oneday,afterallthesnowhadmeltedandthetreeswerestartingtobloom(開花)justintimeforspring,Leocouldn'thelpbutstareathisneighbor'smessyyardalittlelonger.Themeltedsnowshowedalltheburiedleavesandothertrash.Hewentbackhomeandbroughtthetoolsheneeded.IttookLeotheentireafternoontocleartheyard.Hemovedthemeltingsnowoutofthepathwayandswepttheleavesfromtheground.Healsotrimmed(修剪)thebushesandleftthemasneatashecould.Thefollowingmorning,theoldwoman,Abigail,openedherdoorwithjoy.Shehadquietlywatchedtheyoungmancleanuptheyardthedaybefore,muchtoherrelief.Abigailhadnotleftherhouseinmonths.Shereliedtotallyonhercaregiverforherbasicneedsandwaseagertogetfreshair.Aftersittinginherwheelchairinherfrontyardforacoupleofminutes,herneighborsstartedtonoticeher.Theywalkedtowardhertosayhi,andsoon,thecrowdgrew."It'ssolovelytoseeyououtdoors,Abigail!Howhaveyoubeen?"oneofthemasked."I'msohappytobebreathingsomefreshairforachange.Icouldn'tleavethehouseformonthsbecauseofthesnow.Itwastoodeep,andIcouldn'taffordtohiresomeonetohelpmewithit,"Abigailadmitted."Butyesterday,Isawakindyoungmancleaningmyyardtheentireafternoon.Iwantedtothankhim,butIhadnofoodtoofferhimbecausemycaregiverhadnotarrivedyet,"sheshared."Heissuchablessing.Icouldn'tbelievemyeyeswhenIsawhim!"WhenAbigailpraisedthe"kindyoungman"whohelpedher,theyimmediatelyknewitwasLeo.Theneighborslookedateachother,withguiltyallovertheirfaces.TheyrealizedtheyhadbeensoblindtoAbigail'sproblemsthatnoonethoughttohelpherbycleaningheryard.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。TheydecidedtothankLeobyvisitinghishouse.Whenheopenedhisfrontdoor,Leowassurprisedtoseehisneighborsbearinggifts.NO.01梳理原文故事情節(jié):通過_______________________進(jìn)行梳理

Leo:Leonoticedtherewasonewithamessy,dirtyyard.↓Leocouldn'thelpbut_______________________alittlelonger.↓He________________and________________.↓IttookLeo_____________________to___________________.↓Healso_______________________andleftthemasneatashecould.Abigail:Shehadquietlywatchedtheyoungmancleanuptheyard.↓Thefollowingmorning,she____________________withjoy.↓Shewassitting___________________inherfrontyardfor________________________.↓Abigail_________the"kindyoungman"who______herwithherneighbors.Neighbors:AfterAbigailwassittinginherwheelchairinherfrontyardforacoupleofminutes,herneighborsstartedto________________.↓WhenAbigailpraisedthe"kindyoungman"whohelpedher,theyimmediately________________________.↓Theylookedateachother,with__________.↓They_________theyhadbeenso________toAbigail'sproblems.NO.02構(gòu)思續(xù)寫情節(jié):通過___________和________原則續(xù)寫TheydecidedtothankLeobyvisitinghishouse.Whenheopenedhisfrontdoor,Leowassurprisedtoseehisneighborsbearinggifts.Para1：①根據(jù)第一段首句推斷：鄰居們帶______去Leo家______他。②根據(jù)第二段首句（surprised）推斷：沒有____________。③根據(jù)兩句中的人稱代詞判斷，第一段末，由鄰居去visit轉(zhuǎn)到描寫______(誰？),以及Leo去開門。Para2：鄰居去Leo家后________場(chǎng)面及故事_____+就人間溫情____主題NO.03續(xù)寫情節(jié)細(xì)化添加合適的細(xì)節(jié)，使故事更加________，表達(dá)更加________。Para1：①根據(jù)第一段首句推斷：鄰居們帶禮物去Leo家感謝他。②根據(jù)第二段首句（surprised）推斷：沒有提前聯(lián)系↓↓↓↓↓TheydecidedtothankLeobyvisitinghishouse.Aftera________________________,they____________and________forLeo'shousedirectlywithout___________________inadvance.（去感謝）③根據(jù)兩句中的人稱代詞判斷，第一段末，由鄰居去visit轉(zhuǎn)到描寫Leo?！降讓扅c(diǎn)Leo的什么呢？好人定有好報(bào)，先鋪墊一點(diǎn)情節(jié)吧。↓↓↓↓↓Infact,Leohimselfwasanorphan.Leo去開門：He_______________thejobadsontheputer_______thedoorbellrang.Whomightitbe?Para2：鄰居去Leo家后溫暖的的場(chǎng)面及故事收尾+升華主題↓↓↓↓↓Whenheopenedhisfrontdoor,Leowassurprisedtoseehisneighborsbearinggifts.溫暖的場(chǎng)面:Hearingtheirwordsofthanks,hisheart_____________________andtears_____________inhiseyes.收尾:Finally,withneighbors'help,Leo__________________asagardenerand_______________________.升華：Obviously,itis_____that________________________________.NO.04成文TheydecidedtothankLeobyvisitinghishouse.簡(jiǎn)單討論了一下后，他們買了許多禮物，沒有提前告訴利奧，就徑直前往利奧家。事實(shí)上，里奧自己也是個(gè)孤兒，因?yàn)樗母改冈谒?7歲的時(shí)候死于一場(chǎng)交通事故。沒有人可以依靠，他艱難地生活，學(xué)習(xí)。此時(shí)，他正在電腦上看招聘廣告，想找機(jī)會(huì)賺點(diǎn)錢，這時(shí)門鈴響