2024屆山西省一模英語讀后續(xù)寫題目：一次跳傘經(jīng)歷體驗(yàn)自由墜落課件

山西省一模讀后續(xù)寫題目I

recently

went

SKYDIVING!

It's

something

I've

been

talking

about

doing

since

last

year,

but

to

be

honest,

it

was

planned

super

last

minute…

like

within

a

matter

of

a

few

weeks.It

all

started

when

I

ran

into

a

friend

of

mine

walking

home

from

a

local

festival

earlier

this

summer.

We

started

chatting

about

what

we'd

both

been

up

to

this

summer

and

somehow

got

on

the

subject

of

both

being

interested

in

going

skydiving

someday.

My

friend,

Denny,

said

he'd

be

on

board

if

I

really

wanted

to

schedule

a

jump

and

I

was

so

excited

to

finally

have

someone

to

go

with!Later

that

night,

we

texted

back

and

forth

and

decided

on

our

jump

date

a

few

weeks

in

the

future.

When

the

very

Sunday

came,

we

were

both

FULL

of

excitement

for

our

first

skydiving

experience.

He

had

been

bungee

jumping

before

and

I'd

done

my

fair

share

of

zip-lining,

but

neither

of

us

figured

that

either

of

those

of

experiences

would

prepare

us

for

what

we

had

in

store.The

drive

there

didn't

happen

without

a

slight

delay.

As

soon

as

we

got

off

the

through-way

on

to

the

exit

towards

the

small

town

where

the

skydiving

facility

was,

Denny's

car

started

tomake

a

strange

noise,

forcing

us

to

pull

over

on

a

busy

interstate(州際公路).Only

20

minutes

away

from

WNY

Skydiving

(the

place

where

we

were

going),

we

discovered

we

had

a

flat

tyre

(輪胎).

At

that

point,

I

felt

pretty

defeated.

Our

scheduled

time

was

4

pm

—

the

last

appointment

time

of

the

day

—

so

I

figured

they

wouldn't

be

able

to

wait

for

or

delay

the

operations

for

us

since

we

were

racing

against

the

light.Para

1:

We

called

American

Automobile

Association

(AAA)

and

hoped

for

the

best.

Para

2:

We

were

informed

we

were

the

final

hump

of

the

night…the

"sunset

jump".文本分析：講述了兩個(gè)孩子第一次跳傘的經(jīng)歷，跳傘前的謀劃，前往目的地路途中所發(fā)生的波折，求助AAA幫忙修車，最終趕上了所謂的“落日”跳傘的機(jī)會(huì)。本篇讀后續(xù)寫對(duì)學(xué)生而言較難的原因在于，在敘述故事背景時(shí)鋪墊了太長(zhǎng)的文本，導(dǎo)致主體事件在一番費(fèi)力后才浮出水面。此外，陌生詞匯陌生的經(jīng)歷尤其是跳傘這種極限運(yùn)動(dòng)，讓很多孩子望而卻步。有所見有所為才會(huì)有所寫，因此難度還是有的。續(xù)寫情節(jié)發(fā)展：Para

1:

We

called

American

Automobile

Association

(AAA)

and

hoped

forthe

best.等待

AAA的焦急心理/AAA的援助(修車的過程)修好車，直奔目的地。Para

2:We

were

informed

we

were

the

final

hump

of

the

night…thesunset

jump".第一次跳傘的緊張，興奮/跳傘過程中欣賞到的美景/難忘的經(jīng)歷續(xù)寫下水Paragraph

1:

We

called

American

Automobile

Association

(AAA)

and

hoped

for

the

best.

With

every

passing,

excruciating

minute,

disappointment

threatened

to

drown

the

day's

bubbling

excitement.

The

possibility

of

us

missing

the

jump

after

coming

so

close

was

almost

unbearable.

Then,

suddenly,

the

rumble

a

tow

truck

sliced

through

the

tension.

With

practiced

efficiency,

the

driver

swiftly

changed

our

tyre,

reigniting

a

silver

of

hope.

After

paying

for

his

service,

we

dashed

into

the

ablaze

sunset.

The

moment

we

parked

the

car

at

the

WNY,

Denny

and

I

exchanged

a

look.

I

saw,

in

his

eyes,

our

initial

disappointment

had

morphed

into

wild

anticipation.

(91

words)Paragraph

2:

We

were

informed

we

were

the

final

jump

of

the

night…the

“sunset

jump”.As

we

soared

skyward

in

the

small

plane,

the

anticipation

only

grew

higher

and

higher

until

finally,

taking

a

deep

breath,

we

leapt

out

and

plunged

towards

the

earth.

The

adrenaline

rush

was

unlike

anything

I

had

ever

experienced.

After

the

initial

free

fall,

we

were

suspended,

weightless,

in

an

impossible

sky,

the

world

a

breathtaking

panorama

of

pinks,

oranges,

and

purples

bleeding

into

the

approaching

night.

We

were

hurtling

towards

the

ground,

yes,

but

we

were

also

flying.

And

for

a

brief,

glorious

moment,

everything

felt

possible.

(87

words)One

Possible

Version:We

called

American

Automobile

Association(AAA)and

hoped

for

the

best.

The

operator

informed

us

that

they

would

arrange

for

a

car

mechanic

to

arrive

at

the

scene

as

soon

as

possible

to

assist

us.

As

I

watched

the

hands

of

the

clock

ticking

away,

I

was

as

anxious

as

an

ant

on

a

hot

pan.

Suddenly,

a

vehicle

with

the

AAA

logo

appeared

in

our

view,

At

that

moment,

a

spark

of

hope

ignited

in

my

eyes.

After

a

quick

repair,

we

continued

on

our

way

to

our

desired

destination.

Finally,

with

the

help

of

the

car's

acceleration,

we

arrived

at

the

skydiving

facility

waiting

area

on

time.We

were

informed

we

were

the

final

hump

of

the

night…the

"sunset

jump".Grasping

at

our

last

chance,

we

were

overjoyed,

but

the

thought

of

the

extreme

sport

of

skydiving

-

something

we

had

never

experienced

before

-

had

our

hearts

in

our

throats.

After

a

round

of

equipment

adjustments

and

safety

checks,

we

finally

set

off

on

our

adventure.

The

view

before

us

completely

took

our

breath

away.

The

afterglow

of

the

setting

sun,

the

vast

horizon,

and

the

liberating

air

instantly

offset

the

trials

and

hardships

we

had

experienced

along

the

way.

If

I

could,

I

would

still

do

it

again,

and

even

more.

After

all,

life

is