Unit3FamilymattersWriting寫作課件高中英語((1))

WritingUnit3FamilyMatters

Thisisanoldpicture:Whatdoyouseeinthepicture?Canyoupredictwhytheylooksohappy?Thepictureisfromajournalentry.(P46)Readthejournalentryandanswerthequestionsbelow.(P46)1.Whatisthemainideaofthisjournal?2.Whatbroughtbacktheauthor’slovelymemory?3.Whathappenedintheauthor’smemory?4.Whyisitalovelymemory?Importantwordsandphrases_______________________________tidyvhome-madescrambledeggscopyvsomehowindeed整理，收拾自制的；在家里制作的炒蛋復制；模仿；抄寫不知怎么地；不知為什么的確___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Importantwordsandphrases_____________________________surprisesbwithsthtomysurprisetip-toedtothekitchenendupburnt/laughingbeabouttodosthwhen...amagicalingredient_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________用某物給某人驚喜讓我驚訝的是踮腳走到廚房結(jié)果炒糊了/笑了起來正要做某事突然……有魔力的成分Whatisthemainideaofthisjournal?It’sabouttheauthor’smemoryofmakingscrambledeggsforhermotheronherbirthdaytenyearsago.Whatbroughtbacktheauthor’slovelymemory?Para1：Whathappenedintheauthor’smemory?Para2&3：Whyisitalovelymemory?Becauseitshowsthelovebetweentheauthorandhermother.Para3：SummaryBasicelementsofanarrativeAFamilyMemoryWhoWhenWhereWhatWhyHowI,mymothertenyearsagointhekitchenImadescrambledeggsformymotheronherbirthday.Itshowsthelovebetweentheauthorandhermother.Howdidithappen?Howdidtheauthorfeel?記敘文Summary—plotline(verbsandnouns)Howdidthenarrativedevelop?

IMymotherdecidedtosurprise...withbirthdayBeginning

IMymotherwokeup...tip-toedto...

nevercookedtriedtocopy

wasabouttothrowaway...cameinDevelopment

MymotherIshowed...explainedtasted...said

endeduplaughing,ate

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Summary—plotline(verbsandnouns)Howdidthenarrativedevelop?Howdidtheauthorfeel?Summary—emotionline(adjandadv)ExcitedandexpectantSadSurprisedHappyPre-writing:SummaryThethemeofthisjournalImadescrambledeggsformymotheronherbirthdayMymothertastedtheburnteggsandsaidtheyweren’tbad.Theauthor’sloveThemother’sloveFamilyLoveWhatcanwelearnfromthisjournal?SummaryFamilylovemakeslifehappy,andweshouldtreasureitandshowgratitudetoourfamilymembers.Writeaboutaspecialfamilymemory.outlineintroductionconclusionLastsummer,…/In2015,.../Manyyearsago,...Iwasat…Itmademefeelso…Irememberthisbecause…Ilearntthat...Usefulexpressions:Writeaboutaspecialfamilymemory.Linkingwordsforcoherence(連貫性):tobeginwith/tostartwith/first/inthebeginning（起初、一開始......,常與后來事情做對比）/atthebeginningof+時間段（在開始的時候......、在......之初）then/later/afterthat/afewminuteslaternotonly...butalso.../aswellas/but/still/for/becausebesides/moreover/furthermore/inaddition/additionally此外gradually逐漸地/intheend/finally/eventuallyShareyourstorywiththeclass.PresentationAsamplestoryIntroductionThereisasmallbikelyingquietlyinourgarage.ltisquiteoldandlcannolongerrideit,butlstillkeepitthere,asitbringsbackasweetmemory.Manyyearsago,itwasaSundaymorningonmysixthbirthday.Myfatherboughtmeanewbike.lcouldnotwaittogetonitandlearnhowtoride,solbeggedmyfathertoteachmeinthegarden.BeginningWhenWhoDevelopmentAfterlsatonthenewbike,myfatherhelpedmeputmytwohandsonthehandlebarsandmyfeetonthepedals.Then,hepushedthebikesothatthepedalsstartedtomove.lwasscared!Butmyfatherkeptencouragingme.lcouldcyclearoundthegardenshortlyaftermyfirsttry.Itwasamazing.WhatButunluckily,IwassobusywavingathimthatIdidn’tseeasmalltreeinfrontofme.Ihititandfelloffthebike.IthurtalotandIstartedtocry.Myfatherencouragedmetostandup,bebraveandtryagain.Gradually,Iwasabletoridethebikemoreskillfully.climaxIkeptridingthebikeuntilitwastoo